高考英语满分书信作文模板：建议信

高考英语满分书信作文模板：建议信常用表示建议的句式

段首：

’m writing to express my views

on/concerning…

2. You have asked for some advice

concerning… and I will try to give

you my suggestions.

3. I would like to suggest that…

4. I am writing in reply to…

5. In my opinion, I would say

提出建议中：

think/believe it would be

better/very helpful / beneficial if

you ……

is desirable that …是可取的….

would like to suggest/ recommend

that …… Why not ……

would help to ……. This would

there could be …..

段尾：hope that you may consider doing …… 2 I would be ready to further discuss this decision. trust

you will take my suggestions into account.

高中英语满分书信作文模板——建议信

Dear ______,

①You have asked me for my advice with regard to

______ , and I will try to make

some practical suggestions here. ②In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______.

③I hope you will find these

proposals useful, and I

would be ready to discuss this

matter with you to further details. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

模板：

Dear …,

I am writing to make some

suggestions as to……/ I am writing to express my views concerning…./ You have asked me for my advice with regard to …, and I will try to make some constructive suggestions here.

In my opinion, you would be

wise to ……/ I would like to suggest first that ……. With the help of …, you can ……

Besides/In addition/What’s

more/ Furthermore, if you ……, you would be able to …….

Finally/ Last but not least/, you

may consider……. This way …….

I sincerely hope that you will

take my suggestions into

consideration, and your prompt迅速的attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated./ I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

例文：

建议信写作

一、基础写作的内容分类

1.应用文

2. 人物写照

3. 地方介绍

4. 调查报告

5. 事物介绍

6. 新闻采访

7. 看图写作

8. 图表说明

二、实例分析

在紧张的高三备考阶段，各校为了确保教学质量，除了早读和晚自习以外，每天至少要上9节课，甚至周末都要上课，学生们有大量的作业要完成，感到非常疲倦。为此，校学生会根据学生的实际情况，给校长写了封信，表达你们的需求和建议。

a)适当减少课时，留出思考时间 b)反复训练重要、易错知识点，培养能力 c)减少作业量以保证质量 d)少些批评，多些鼓励

注意：短文开头已给出。

No. 42 Zhongshan Road,

Shenzhen City, Guangdong

China

June 8,XX

1）In order to guarantee the teaching quality in the course of the general revision, we senior three students at least have 9 periods each day apart from morning and evening classes. 2）Besides, we have got a lot of homework to do, which makes us exhausted. 3）According to the real situation of us students, we think

that it is necessary to reduce the amount of periods and leave us time to think by ourselves. 4）Meanwhile, give us more practice on those important and confusing points to cultivate our ability to deal with problems. 5）Furthermore, reduce daily homework to assure the quality and give us less criticism but more encouragement, which we think will be beneficial to us all. Yours

Students’ Union

讨论：

1. 建议信的内容安排

信头___________________________________________________ _________________ 称呼___________________________________________________ _________________ 第1,2句 __________________ 第3，4,5句 __________________

结束语___________________________________________________ _______________ 签名___________________________________________________ _________________

2. 时态__________________

3. 人称__________________

4. 语言特征 __________________

技巧点拨

1. 概念：建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。

2. 分类：

1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；

2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。

3. 内容安排：1）开门见山地写出写信的原因、背景；2）建议的内容及提出建议的理由

4. 语言特征：

1）建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。

2）提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。

5. 注意事项

1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、

文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。

3）符合英文信件的基本格式

4）语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。

三、常用写作句型

1. 表对对方的情况表示理解，并乐意帮忙：

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to …

I’m very glad to hear that you want to… and give you some suggestions on how to…

It is my pleasure to do… I’m willing to give a hand to you.

After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that …

I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter

I am writing to you for the purpose of -----

I am writing to share some advice with you.

I am writing to express my views concerning…

You have asked me for my advice on…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions.

Thanks for trusting me. Regarding…, I’d like to make some suggestions.

2. 提建议的句式

It is useful / helpful / important / necessary…for you to do…

It should be a good idea for you to do…

It will certainly help a lot to do sth / It also helps to do sth

It does harm to sb / sth = It is harmful to…

…benefits … = … be beneficial to …= …do good to…

I think it would be more beneficial if you could …

In my opinion, it would be better if you do…

As far as I’m concerned/As for me, it would be wise to take the following action.

I would like to suggest/recommend that…

If I were you, I would…

I wonder if you have considered the following tips.

I feel that it would be more beneficial if you could …

When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should…

You may consider doing…

3. 表意见并列的连词

表先后次序：

First, second, third….Finally

Firstly, secondly，…eventually

to begin with/ to start with, at last

递进关系：

furthermore; moreover; besides; meanwhile; in other words;

at the same time；

4.建议信结尾常用句式

I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.

I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations

practical/useful/helpful.

I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.

I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.

I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.

In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.

I would be ready to discuss this matter in further details.

I will be more than happy to see improvements in this matter.

If you have any more problem, please feel free to contact me at any time.

I’m willing to discuss this matter with you whenever you need.

四、写作模板

广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观

众的英语节目, 新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。现在, John就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。

假如你是学生李华, 建议开办“广州全接触”(All-round Guangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给John 写信：

Dear John，

I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program —“All-round Guangzhou”.

...

I hope you can take my suggestion into

consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

①节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人。

②建议每周六、日举办，方便学生周末观看。

③建议邀请中学生参加节目, 激发学生的收看兴趣。

④这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化, 还有助于提高中学生的英语水平, 这样他们就能向外国游客介绍广州。

⑤我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎。

词语翻译翻译或完成下列词或短语。

句1：

cover / include (1)包括……(节目) _____________

(2)历史，教育，景点，饮食，名人

History, education, scenic spots / tourist attractions, food, famous people / celebrities ___________________________________________________ _________

句3：

(3) 激发某人的兴趣 spark / stimulate / arouse one’s interest ____________________________________

句4： improve one’s English (4)提高英语水平______________________

句5：

(5)受到欢迎be popular among/with sb. / be well-received by/be welcomed by ______________________________________

3、难句翻译。翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。

句2：(1) (这个节目将于)每周六、日(播放)。

(1) It would be better to broadcast it on weekends. / I suggest that the program be broadcast on weekends. / It is a good idea to broadcast it on weekends.

2)方便学生周末观看。

(2)We students can have the chance to watch it. /It will be convenient for us students to watch it. 合并：It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.(因果关系, 可以使用so... that...句型)

句3：(3) (你也可以)邀请中学生参加节目。

(3)You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in / take part in the program.

(4) (这个节目可以)提高学生的收看兴趣。

(4) It will surely arouse /spark /stimulate other

students’ interest in it.

合并：You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in / take part in the program, which will surely arouse / spark / stimulate other students’ interest in it.(补充说明关系, 可以使用which非限制性定语从句)

句4：(5)(这个节目帮助)中学生可以更多地了解广州文化。

(5) This program can get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou.

(6) (中学生可以)向外国游客介绍广州。

(6) The students can introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.

(7) (这个节目)有助于提高中学生的英语水平。

(7) This program helps students improve their English.

并：Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.(第5个句子和第7个句子是并列关系, 因此我们可以用not only...but also...这组连词把它们连接起来, 并且注意统一主语,第6句是作者提出建议的原因,

可以用so as to 引导出目的状语。)

4、连句成篇。把句子合并成篇章的时候, 需要注意建议信常用的一些句型结构。如在建议信开头表示来信的目的, 如：You have asked me for my advice on...and I will try to make suggestions./ Thanks for trusting me. /Regarding..., I’d like to make some suggestions等句型。在表示建议的时候, 很多同学习惯使用祈使句或者You should的句型表示建议, 这样比较生硬，因此可以转换不同的句型使语言丰富, 如可以使用I feel that it would be beneficial if.../ I would like to suggest that...等句型。另外, 若是使用虚拟语气的句子If I were you, I would..., 也会让文章增色不少。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候, 可以用简明扼要的句型, 如wish you good luck / wish you success / may you succeed, 使文章长短句结合得当。

Dear John，

I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program —“All-round Guangzhou”. This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Guangzhou. It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.

Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse other students’ interest in it. Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors. I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

5、检查修改：词，句，篇

六、能力提高

To Whom It May Concern

Dear Peter, Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You

can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try writing to me in Chinese next time.

写作注意问题

? 一是单词拼写要正确，大小写等。开头结尾部分的语法要正确。 ? 二是选择多种表达方式，例如给出的不同的提建议的句式。 ? 三是结构要清晰，三段式，有过渡词。

? 四是卷面要整洁。

? 五是字数要够，答题卡上划得横线部分尽量写满，最多剩一行

建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：

1. 菜价昂贵，菜市单一；

2. 排队时间长，浪费午休时间；

3. 味道不佳，浪费现象严重。

注意：1. 词数不少于120； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇: 食堂 canteen Dear Principal,

Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. ___________________________________________________

___________________________________________________ ____________________________________________ I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!

Yours, Li Hua

作文范文： Dear Principal,

Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste. the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的词汇、表达：

1. delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)

price 价格

2. lower /bring down the price 降低价格

3. at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格

4. varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品

5. For one thing,……. For another,……

6. make sb (not)do sth

7. wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time

8. The kinds of food are . 表达食堂出现的问题：

9. The prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them.

10. There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy our needs.

11. It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon. 12. The food in the canteen doesn’t taste .

The taste of food in the canteen isn’t

13. The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14. It’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.

15. The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16. In the long run, it’s bad for our health and study.

17. It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议：

18. Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19. I think it’s necessary to provide more kinds of food. 20. It’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems.

So it’s high time for us to take measures

21. To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the present condition to satisfy the students’ needs.

22. We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23. The canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long.

24. As far as I’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. What’s more, different kinds of food should be provided.

25. Measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.

建议模板： Dear ….,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…….(引出话题). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.

建议句型积累：

1. Many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but I think the following may be the most

effective ones.

2. I’d like to make some suggestions on …….

3. It’s of great importance for sb to do sth.

It’s necessary for sb to do sth

4. It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / It would be a better idea if…….

5. It contributes /helps a lot if ………

6. I suggest that …../ My suggestion is that …

It’s suggested / advised / recommended that……

7. You’d better do sth./ We’d better do sth

It’s better to do sth

8. Measures are supposed to be taken to do sth

We are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9. It’s high time that sb sth. / It’s high time for sb to do sth

建议信(2)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Sad Mother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. Recently I have found that my daughter told lies to me. The other day she told me that she did well in the final exam.