专题强化训练 12 短文改错 写作

专题强化训练 12 短文改错  写作
专题强化训练 12 短文改错  写作

(十二)写作专练

(限时:30分钟)

第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jack,

How are you?

A well-known play, Tea House, will put on in the newly-built Grand Theater in our city at 7:00 p.m. in February 5th. I knew you are fond of Chinese culture, but I sincerely invite you to go with me. It is said that it is performed quite well by some famous actors and actress. If you are interesting in this play, I will book tickets in advance and we can appreciate it together. I think it is really a good chance for us to learn more about Chinese tradition plays.

Besides, there is a provincial museum near a theater, which is worth visiting it after the play.

How do you think of my advice?

Looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua 答案与解析:

Dear Jack,

How are you?

A well-known play, Tea House, will ∧

①be或者put→be

put on in the

newly-built Grand Theater in our city at 7:00 p.m. in

②on

February 5th.

I knew

③know you are fond of Chinese culture, but

④and/so

I sincerely

invite you to go with me. It is said that it is performed quite well by some

famous actors and actress

⑤actresses . If you are interesting

⑥interested

in this play, I

will book tickets in advance and we can appreciate it together. I think it is really a good chance for us to learn more about Chinese tradition

⑦traditional plays.

Besides, there is a provincial museum near a

⑧the

theater, which is worth visiting after the play.

How

⑩What

do you think of my advice?

Looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

①在will后加be或者put→be句子主语A well-known play,Tea House和put on是被动关系,应用被动语态。故在will后加be或者将put改为be。

②in→on表示在具体的某一天通常用介词on。故将in改为on。

③knew→know本文是一封书信,其主体时态是现在时,故此处应用一般现在时。故将knew改为know。

④but→and/so分析句子结构可知,前后为顺承或因果关系,而不是转折关系,故将but改为and或so。

⑤actress→actresses连词and连接了两个并列名词,根据actors 可知,actress也应用复数形式。故将actress改为actresses。

⑥interesting→interested be interested in...为固定搭配,意为“对……感兴趣”。故将interesting改为interested。

⑦tradition→traditional此处作定语修饰复数名词plays,应用形容词形式。故将tradition改为traditional。

⑧a→the上文提到the newly-built Grand Theater,此处应用定冠词the表特指。故将a改为the。

⑨删除it sth. be worth doing“某事值得做”,visiting后无需宾语。删除it。

⑩How→What根据固定句型What do you think of...?可知,此处应将How改为What。与how相关的同义句型为How do you like...?

第二节书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tim想在寒假时到中国旅游,于是发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复一封邮件,内容包括:

1.推荐一个旅游城市;

2.给出推荐理由。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Tim,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua 参考范文:

Dear Tim,

Knowing that you'll visit China in the coming winter holiday, I'm writing to give you some suggestions on your trip.

I recommend the capital city, Beijing, to you, for it is an amazing city with a long history and a variety of places of interest. You may first go to Tiananmen Square, where many tourists admire the national flag being raised every early morning. The next place that you can't miss is the

Great Wall, which is one of the great wonders in the world. The Palace Museum and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting, too. Besides, the local snacks will surely be appealing to you.

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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