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专题二十九记叙文型短文改错

A【2015·东北三校第一次联考】

Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch.As I was waiting my order to come, I noticed the old man in a wheel chair roll himself over to a table.No one and me seemed to notice him.I got up and go over to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink.He smiled and said, “Thank you.You are generously.I’d like any orange juice,please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old man’s table to saying goodbye.He thanked me again and told me I had made his days, coming over and helping him out.I gave him a hug and told him he had made my day, either.

【答案】

Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch.As I was waiting∧my order to come, I noticed the old man in a

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wheel chair roll himself over to a table.No one and me seemed to notice him.I got up and go over to his table and

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asked if that I could get him something to drink.He smiled and said, “Thank you.You are generously.I’d like any

generous some

orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old man’s table to saying goodbye.He

say

thanked me again and told me I had made his days, coming over and helping him out.I gave him a hug and told

day

him he had made my day, either.

too

B【浙江省重点中学协作体2015届高三第二次适应性测试】

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited.I have been looking forward at

relaxing myself.I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie.I think I can play

the basketball with my classmates.How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday!

However, my parents think different.They don’t want me go out.They are afraid I’ll be knocked

down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way.I

hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage.To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.

【答案】

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited.I have been looking forward at

makes to relaxing myself.I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie.I think I can play

movies

the basketball with my classmates.How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday!

What

However, my parents think different.They don’t want me/\ go out.They are afraid I’ll be knocked

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down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way.I

Fall Besides

hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage.To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.

kept

C【山西省大同一中、同煤一中2015届高三联考】

This morning, I go to the store near my home to do some shopping.

I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough.The woman standing next to me was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil.For that very moment, a girl was walking by.She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke glass and hit her head on the floor.After a while ,there were blood pour down her face.I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest hospital without the delay.The doctor examined her wound carefully.To my relief, it was not serious.The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed wound.

【答案】

This morning, I go to the store near my home to do some shopping.

went

I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough.The woman standing next to me

when

was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil.For that very moment, a girl was shocked At

walking by.She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke glass and hit her head on the floor.After a

broken

while ,there were blood pour down her face.I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest was pouring

hospital without the delay.The doctor examined her wound carefully.To my relief, it was not serious.The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed ∧wound.

after the/her

D【辽宁省锦州市2015届高三上学期期末考试英语】Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every https://www.360docs.net/doc/354699978.html,st Saturday,as usual, she went to several class.In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively.On the Sunday morning, she wasabout to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break.Soon they came up a good idea.We decided to go cycling in the countryside.Mary

enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air.On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.

【答案】

Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every https://www.360docs.net/doc/354699978.html,st Saturday,as

devotes

usual, she went to several class.In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She

classes deep

was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively.On the Sunday morning, she was about

so

to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break.Soon they came up∧ a

when

with

good idea.We decided to go cycling in the countryside.Mary enjoyed herself, competing and They

chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air.On Monday, Mary was energetic but

relaxed and active in class.

E【黑龙江省双鸭山市第一中学2015届高三上学期期末】One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down.It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night.I decided to walk around a little after accepting that I’d have to spend the night in the car.Maybe I can find a telephone.Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room.I knocked the door was delighted when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully.He said he had no telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.

【答案】

One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down.It was

complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night.I decided

completely on

to walk around a little after accepting that I’d have to spend the night in the car.Maybe I can

before

could

find a telephone.Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small house standing

a

in a field with a light shone from the sitting room.I knocked∧the door and was delighted when a

shining at/on

pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my story carefully.He said he had no

and

telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go

there

to repair my car.

专题三十议论文型短文改错

A【四川省宜宾市2015届高三第一次诊】

Having a dream is of great importance.Your dreams are ordinary and realistic.I hope I will

admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university.I

hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer.I hope those whom love me and those whom I love

will be healthy and live happy every day.To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build

up my body.I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study.I must work hard at my

lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam.

【答案】

Having a dream is of great importance.Your dreams are ordinary and realistic.I hope I will ∧

My

be

admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university.I

hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer.I hope those whom love me and those whom I love

hope who/that

will be healthy and live happy every day.To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build

happily exercise

up my body.I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study.I must work hard at my

on

lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam.

and prepared

B【2015·宁夏回族自治区银川一中高三第一次模拟】With the development of people’s living condition, more and more people possess their own cars. Some of us think it is good to own a car. For instance, it’s convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation. Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made relative businesses and industries develop faster.

However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gases and pollute the environment around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lack parking lots is another big problem.

As far as I’m concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. As if we have cars, we may use it less.

【答案】

With the development of people’s living condition, more and more people possess their

own cars. Some of us

conditions

think it is good to own a car. For instance, it’s ∧convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation.

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Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made

makes

relative businesses and industries develop faster.

However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gases and pollute the environment

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around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lack

many

lacking

parking lots is another big problem.

As far as I’m concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. As if we have cars, we may use it less.

carefully Even them

C【2015·黑龙江省绥化市重点中学高三下学期联考】Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often looked into our school bags or read our diary. I fully understand that why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are che cking our bags or diaries make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. You have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around—they are bound to read it.

【答案】

Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often looked into our school bags or read our diary. I fully

look

diaries

understand that why we are not comfort able about it, but there’s no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking

sad

our bags or diaries ∧make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. You have probably heard some horrible stories

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about other kids and thought we might do ∧same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all

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but

wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think

much

you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around—they are bound to read it.

lying

专题三十一说明文型短文改错

A【山东省潍坊市重点中学2015届高三12月阶段性教学质量检测.

Patience is of great importance in our daily life.Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.Thirty minutes past, but no bus came.Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet.But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it.If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes.Only then do I realize my problem.Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have pu t it in.Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

【答案】

Patience is of great importance in our daily life.Once I waited∧a bus to come at a stop.Thirty

for

minutes past, but no bus came.Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet.But no sooner

pasted foot

had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught

than

it.If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes.Only then do I realize

the another did

my problem.Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in.Now

possibly

whenever I am close to lose my patie nce, I’ll think of this experience.

losing

专题三十二应用文型短文改错

A【山东省实验中学第三次诊断考试】

Dear schoolmates，

In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest．A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31 st．Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student．The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline．

Please pay more attention to the relate information of the contest and take an active part in them on time．

Students’ Union 【答案】

Dear schoolmates，

In order to get high school students to attach importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an

interestingly

interesting

knowledge contest．A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31 st．Remember, you can

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take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school

which

student．The answer sheet must ∧cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline.

students be before

Please pay more attention to the relate information of the contest and take an active part in them on time.

related

it

Students’ Union B【河北省邯郸市2015届高三上学期1月份教学质量检测】

Dear Mike,

How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney

last summer vacation.You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take us to do a lot of sightseeing.It’s really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a better impression.I have a great time here and learned a lot about Sydney.Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you visit China.I’ll act like a guide

to show you around the places of interests in my hometown.

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】

How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney

last summer vacation.You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take

kind

us to do a lot of sightseeing.It’s really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery and

me whose

delicious food gave me a better impression.I have a great time here and learned a lot about

good had there

Sydney.Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you ∧visit China.I’ll act like a

to as guide

to show you around the places of interests in my hometown.

interest Yours,

Li Hua

C【辽宁省丹东五校协作体2015届高三期末考试】

Dear Andy,

I’m glad to hear from you.You ask about my health in your last email.So I’m going to tell you about diet.I’m a very health person.That’s why we live near the sea and we often have fish.I don’t know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and vegetables.And of course there will also be some rices.If you come to visit me in China on one day, you won’t eat many sweets.So I hope you don’t have sweet tooth.

I’m going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I’ll email them to you.I think you’ll like our team’s clothes.

【答案】

Dear Andy,

I’m glad to hear from you.You ask about my health in your last email.So I’m going to tell

asked

you about ∧diet.I’m a very health person.That’s why we live near the sea and we often have

fish.

my healthy because

I don’t know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and

But probably vegetables.And of course there will also be some rices.If you come to visit me in China on one

rice

day, you won’t eat many sweets.So I hope you don’t have∧ sweet tooth.

a

I’m going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I’ll email them

of

to you.I think you’ll like our team’s clothes.