高考短文改错专题练
短文改错专题练1
1（吉林省五校高考高端命题研究协作体2015-2016学年第一次联合命题英语试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good morning, everyone! Today, I’d like to talk about culture shock. Perhaps you think studying in the different country is something that sound very exciting. It is a new experience, where brings the opportunity of discovering amazed things. It also brings a feeling of free. Despite of these advantages, therefore, there are also some challenges you will face. You may have difficulty adjust to quite different things. To be exact, culture shock is a feeling of anxiety, uncertainty and confusion felt by people when you first arrive another country.
短文改错
1.the改成a
2. sound 改成sounds
3. where 改成which
4.amazed 改成amazing
5. free 改成freedom
6. despite of的of去掉
7.therefore 改成however 8. adjust 改成adjusting 9. you 改成they
10. arrive后加in
2（衡水中学2015-2016学年度小学期一调考试）短文中共有10处语言错误，每行中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词;
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;[来源学*科*网]
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.
Much love,
Fiona Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend,
had of
Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the [来源学科网ZXXK]
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highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a
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service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked
until there
over a s∧car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents'
a We
and made our own way to home.
Much love,
Fiona 3（2013~2016届襄阳五中、宜昌一中、龙泉中学高三上学期九月联考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are many advantage of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile to life, life will smile to us on return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possibly.
First, I would like to smile to my parents because you have given me life and taken the trouble to bringing me up. They arrange almost everything for me. I love my parents, with their help I have made a great progress. I will like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, but for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my difficulties away and lived a better life.
短文改错：
1.advantage 改为advantages
2.on return on改为in
3.wherever possibly 改为possible
4.because you have you 改为they
5.to bringing me bringing改为bring
6.with their help their 改为whose
7. a great progress 去掉a
8.will like to will改为would
9.but for 去掉but
10. and lived a better lived改为live
4（孝感高中2016届高三9月调考）文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jack,
I am pleasing to hear from you and know that you had a greatly time working part-time in
a fast-food restaurant. Now I would like to share your working experiences with you during the past summer.
In the beginning of the summer vacation, I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket.
I stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I have met. Sometimes I was laughed at, and most of the time, I was praised for my wonderful works by many people. Half a month passed quickly after I knew it, and I learned how to deal with different people.
Above all, I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem.
Best wishes,
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
Dear Jack,
I am pleasing to hear from you and know that you had a greatly time working part-time in a
Pleased great
fast-food restaurant. Now I would like to share your working experiences with you during the past summer.
my
In the beginning of the summer vacation, I was hired as∧shopping guide in a big supermarket.
At a
I stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I have met. Sometimes I was laughed at, and
but most of the time, I was praised for my wonderful works by many people. Half a month passed
work
quickly after I knew it, and I learned how to deal with different people.
before
Above all, I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem.
solving
Best wishes,
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming 5（衡阳市八中2016届高三第二次月考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
To everyone in the world, money was a sensitive topic. It is true that no one should live without money in modern society. People have different opinions of money. Some people think one should live to make money, and others, make money to live.
In my opinion, the latter view may be reasonably. We should not be slave of money. No doubt money plays an important role in our daily life, but it does not mean nothing. We cannot exchange money into friendship or love. Money indeed can make a person enjoy his life for a while but all his life. In a word, money is something but not only everything. People can’t live just for money.
短文改错[来源学科网]
To everyone in the world, money was a sensitive topic. It is true that no one should live without money
is can
in modern society. People have different opinions of money. Some people think one should live to make
about/on
money, and others, make money to live.
while/but
In my opinion, the latter view may be reasonably. We should not be slave of money. No doubt money
reasonable slaves
plays an important role in our daily life, but it does not mean nothing. We cannot exchange money into
everything
for
friendship or love. Money indeed can make a person enjoy his life for a while but ∧all his life. In a word,
not
money is something but not only everything. People can’t live just for money.
6（浏阳一中2015年下学期高三年级第一次月考英语试卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文字共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删减：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the orally English of some junior students was better than mine. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spe nd one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time go by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.
答案：Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the orally English of some junior students was better than mine. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned f r om many useful words and expressions. With time go by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.
1.some改为one
2.there改为where
3.surprised改为surprise
4.orally改
为oral
5.advices改成advice
6.but 改为so
7.practise改为practising
8.去掉from
9.go改为going 10.在communicate和some之间加上with
7（麓山国际实验学校2016届高三一轮复习检测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处
语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改1 0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was excited when I hear that our community was to have its own McDonald’s restaurant. I thought about all those young people whom would not have to go to the next town to buy its favorite burgers and chips. McDonald’s cares about health eating too and works with scientists to provide food that is high quality, safe and healthy. They often provide salads as good as burgers and chops. You can also choose between cola with milk shakes. Of course it also means more work for our a rea that need jobs badly. McDonald’s says they are interested in doing what is right for the community and being good neighbor. So I think they will be concerned about provide parking for the cars in our main street.
答案：I was excited when I hear that our community was to have its own McDonald’s restaurant. I heard
thought about all those young people whom would not have to go to the next town to buy its
who/that their favor ite burgers and chips. McDonald’s cares about health eating too and works with scientists to
healthy
provide food that is ∧high quality, safe and healthy. They often provide salads as good as burgers of well
and chops. You can also choose between cola with milk shakes. Of course it also means more
and
work for our area that need jobs badly. McDonald’s says the y are interested in doing what is right needs
for the community and being∧good neighbor. So I think they will be concerned about provide
a providing parking for the cars in our main street.
8（江西省南昌市2016届高三上学期摸底测试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处
语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（n），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删减：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：I．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our life today has many problems. One of the biggest problems are pollution.
Water pollution has made our rivers and lakes dirty．It killed our fish and pollutes
our drinking water. Noise pollution makes us to talk louder and become angry more
easy. Air pollution is the most serious kind of pollution，what is bad to living things
in the world. We need to do a lot of thing to fight pollution．Factories must clean
our waste water before it thrown away. We can't throw waste things on the ground.
We can go to work by bus and with our friends in a same car. Everybody must help
to fight pollution.
答案：Our life today has many problems. One of the biggest problems are pollution.
is
Water pollution has made our rivers and lakes dirty. It killed our fish and pollutes
kills
our drinking water. Noise pollution makes us to talk louder and become angry more
easy. Air pollution is the most serious kind of pollution, what is bad to living things
easily which
in the world. We need to do a lot of thing to fight pollution. Factories must clean
things
our waste water before it ∧thrown away. We can’t throw waste things on the ground.
their/the is
We can go to work by bus and with our friends in a same car. Everybody must help
or the
to fight pollution.
9（江西省2016 届重点中学赣中南五校高三第一次联合适应性考试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a year ago that Joshua got a bike for Christmas, but he rode it every day. One morning, he suddenly found the bike gone. Ran to his front yard, he saw a man loading it into his car. He shouted, but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief. What's more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. So the next day, he posted the message on a poster-board and put it in the front yard. "To the person which stole my bike: You hurt my feelings. But I am a Christian and I forgive him!" When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike was back with new brake.
答案：It was a year ago that Joshua got a bike for Christmas, but he rode it every day. One
and
morning, he suddenly found the bike gone. Ran to his front yard, he saw a man loading it into
Running
his car. He shouted, but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he
real
drove really
forgave the thief. What’s more, he wanted the thief∧ know he was forgiven. So the next day, he
to
posted the message on a poster-board and put it in the front yard. “To the person which stole my
a who
bike: You hurt my feelings .But I am a Christian and I forgive him!” When he left for home the you next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike was back with new brake.
brakes.
10（河南省濮阳市油田教育中心2016届高三上学期第一次市统考摸底考试）假定英语课
上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today is World AIDS Day, and our school organized an activity calling “Take care
of our lives, hand in hand with AIDS children”. At 8:30 am, we the volunteers gathered at
the school gates and started our bike trip. It took us about one hour and a half to getting to
the Red Cross Hospital, what most AIDS children are staying. Soon after we arrived, we
began to chat pleasant with them. Having got to know us well, we presented our gifts and
took lots of photos. Before leaving, we have lunch together. I felt very pleasing to see that
the AIDS children are not ignored and taken good care.
答案;Today is World AIDS Day, and our school organized an activity calling “Take care of our
called
lives, hand in hand with AIDS children”. At 8:30 am, we the volunteers gathered at the school
去掉
gates and started our bike trip. It took us about one hour and a half to getting to the Red Cross gate get
Hospital, what most AIDS children are staying. Soon after we arrived, we began to chat pleasant where pleasantly with them. Having got to know us well, we presented our gifts and took lots of photos. Before
them
leaving, we have lunch together. I felt very pleasing to see that the AIDS children are not had pleased
ignored and taken good care ∧.
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