专题强化训练 6 短文改错 写作
(六)写作专练
(限时：30分钟)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply.
Being a capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of place of interest. Among them the West Lake is the best-known attraction, where water seem to melt into the sky by the distance. Besides, there are several museums locating in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of deliciously local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, but they are working hard make the city more beautiful.
What attractive and inviting Hangzhou is!
答案与解析：did and did 时态一致 1.动词时态问题 2.冠词
3. 名词（可数名词）places of interest 景点
4. 主谓一致water 不可数名词+ V s
5. 介词in the distance in a long distance, in a short distance
6. 非谓语museums located 被坐落于（状态）绝多数
7. 形容词1+形容词2 +名词delicious local food
8. 逻辑连词and
9. 非谓语to do 表示目的working hard to make…
10. 特殊句式what+a+adj. +n！How adj+ n+be!
What a funny dude! = How funny the dude is!
Funny Mud Pee
West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce 西湖醋鱼
This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey impressed
me deeply.
Being a
②the
capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the
southeast of China. There are a lot of place
③places
of interest. Among them
the West Lake is the best-known attraction, where water seem
④seems
to
melt into the sky by
⑤in
the distance. Besides, there are several museums
locating
⑥located
in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of deliciously local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and
kind, but
⑧and they are working hard ∧
⑨to
make the city more beautiful.
What
⑩How
attractive and inviting Hangzhou is!
①删除had考查动词的时态。had done为过去完成时，表示“过去的过去”；但在此句中，visited先发生，impressed后发生，因此用一般过去时，had多余，故删除。
②a→the考查冠词。杭州为浙江省的省会，此处表示特指，故把a改为the。
③place→places考查名词的单复数。place为可数名词，且根据该句中的“a lot of”可知，此处应用其复数形式。
④seem→seems考查时态和主谓一致。根据该句中的“is”可知，此处叙述一般的情况，应用一般现在时；且该从句的主语是water，是不可数名词，故填seems。
⑤by→in考查介词。此处考查固定用法in the distance，意为“在远处，在远方”。故把by改为in。
⑥locating→located考查非谓语动词。be located in意为“位于……”，为固定用法，此处省略了be动词，故用过去分词短语作后置定语。
⑦deliciously→delicious考查形容词。根据语境及该句中的“local food”，可知此处应用形容词delicious。
⑧but→and考查连词。此处前面意为“这里的人友好、善良”，此处后面意为“他们正在努力工作以使这座城市更美丽”，根据句意可知，前后句之间为并列关系，而不是转折关系，因此把but改为and。
⑨hard后加to考查动词不定式。参见上题解析。此处应用动词不定式作目的状语。故在hard后加to。
⑩What→How考查感叹句。根据该句中的“attractive and inviting”以及“How＋adj.＋主语＋谓语”结构可知，此处应用How 来引导该感叹句。
第二节书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Robert最近给你发了一封内容如下的电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容和写作要点用英语给他回复一封邮件。
写作要点：
1．对他的处境表示理解；
2．为他提供合理的建议；
3．表示愿意为他继续提供帮助。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Robert，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua 参考范文：
Dear Robert，
I'm sorry to hear you have some trouble getting along with your friends. Here are some suggestions for you.
Firstly, you'd better find out what got you into such a mess, and then turn to your teachers or parents for advice. Secondly, why not open your mind to communicate with your friends frankly? It shows that you really cherish the friendship and value their viewpoints. Besides, in your daily life, it's wise to be ready to help your friends and people around you. In this way, you can not only win back your old friends but also make some new ones.
I hope my suggestions can make a difference. I will continue to offer help if you need.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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高一英语短文改错专项练习（一） 命题人：右臂审题人：左膀2016.11.8 高老师的左膀右臂祝大家期中考顺利~ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改． 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 A Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! B It is three years now since I graduate from Xinhua High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places. C I'm an Australian boy aging 17 and I'm crazy about music. It is one of the most important thing in my life. I listen music whenever I can. I have a minidisk player, with it I can have access to music whether walking in the street or ride on the bus. At home, there has a CD player in my room, and the music is on all the time. I like rock music best of all. My favorite band is Rolling Stones, which had produced 40 albums since 1966. It so happened that there was a living concert of Rolling Stones last Sunday. I decided to go. It was a great fun. I am also fond of classical music. I especially enjoy playing Beethoven once I am doing my homework. D In my view,the Internet is helpful.It is known to all,the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life.On the Internet,we can read news home and abroad and got as much information as we can,we can also attend to the net school and read many books.We can even do shopping online.Beside,our ability to operate the computer can be improved great.So we should not be addicted to the Internet,or we will get our life and study destroying.In addition,we should keep off the harmful website.Anyhow,this doesn't prevent the Internet from becoming our friend E Time fly like an arrow. I'm already in the second half of Senior Grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more than three months before I graduate middle school.At the present, I'm busy review my lessons in order to take the College Entrance Examination. I hope to go to Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best turn my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize their dreams. I do wish everyone will be able to enter an university or college. F In order to promote participation in outdoor exercise, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain on April 10. The moment we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we set out for the top in high spirit. We supported each other to pass the rocky areas on the course of the climb. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, there we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was extremely beautiful This event was very benefit, for not only we take a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned what to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!