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我在今年2月16号考的IBT成绩：阅读28 听力27 口语28 写作30 总分113
看到成绩的时候呆了一下，大脑一阵空白之后就是狂喜。说实话考完后的感觉不是很好，因为阅读的状态不如平时，在好几个题目上出现了较长时间的停顿和犹豫不决，而写作的时候更是有点疲倦和不支的感觉，匆匆忙忙在最后一分钟才把结尾写完。因此这个成绩对我就像梦幻一般。平静下来觉得我的准备之路有一些东西是可以和大家分享的，于是动笔。
阅读：
我进去的时候比较早，于是阅读的时候受到了进出的人的干扰。一阵时间后才得以完全集中起来进入状态，但是代价就是我第一篇文章在做的时候对很多题目都不确定，也有点影响了我下面的心情。结果果然阅读不是太好。在开始保持稳定的心情和集中的注意是很重要的，因为这将对下面的做题的心情产生影响。
听力：
听力的难度是和OG差不多，记笔记的时间也很充裕。听完之后能够对内容有框价的理解。但是不得不说有些题目的答案设置有迷惑性，让人难以抉择，尤其是语气和问话的目的。我碰到了听力加试(ID卡和神经冲动的传递和浪漫主义发展)考完后觉得听力应该是最好的但是却恰恰相反。看来听懂了也不一定会全对。关于听力有几个网站我认为很有用，一个就是scientific american ( http;//https://www.360docs.net/doc/6a13845098.html,/podcast)除了坛子里大家都在听的60 seconds science,还有science talk很有听力价值，ST每个episode有30分钟，有2-3个对话组成，每个对话10-20分钟不等。对话的内容是主要科学研究方面的进展，与toefl的学术演讲接近。ST在时间的长度和越快于toefl的语速很利于提高学术演讲的适应和理解。当时我一般听2个ST，也就是将近1小时，然后休息一下再听一个ST。与之类似的听力还有science magzine 的science podcast,( https://www.360docs.net/doc/6a13845098.html,/multimedia/podcast)也是一个episode 30分钟。坚持每天连听1-2小时同时作笔记能根本听高听lecture的能力。那时就会觉得toefl学术部分不难了。还有普特英语听力网站也有很多材料可以做为听腻了学术听力的调剂。
口语：
口语分我绝对没想过能拿28分。回想起来觉得可能我的高分与以下几点有关。
口语基础：语音语调是英语的外表，人靠衣装，口语靠语音装。清晰而舒服的发音能给考官留下很好的第一印象。这一点不是一朝一夕所能成而是靠日基月累。我的语音基础算是不错，大学校英语演讲比赛拿过一等奖。在准备toefl的时间内我几乎每天在学校英语角拿着mp3在跟读，模仿语音，每天大概一小时，每段模仿跟读至能听上句说下去为止。当然，这并不是说语音的重要性是压倒性的或者一定要多么地道优美，但发音清晰是值得我们去努力追求的。这里推荐大家充分利用每次的toefl听力中的校园对话部分，因为速度适宜又生活化，很适合跟读来提高发音和语调。还有就是reader's digest 网站的podcast(,也是题材喜闻乐见，速度适宜，用词用句也很生活化。
备考准备：
Part1的准备题料的转化在很多帖子里已经详尽地讨论过了，在此我也不多说了。这里只介绍一个准备段子的小tip.很多人或许对段子的准备很苦恼，觉得自己写得不好而且要花很多时间写。我当时就是本着懒人的心理用乾坤大挪移法准备的。这个网站是我几乎全部的地点题，文化活动题的来源。这个介绍香港的网站上有很多短小但撰写优美的介绍性文章，包括风土人情，传统节日与文化，观光景点，饮食等等，均可以稍加修改就用来应付口语第一题了。
Part2这一部分的准备很无心插柳，但颇有成果。当时有一个要考雅思的学姐找我来练口语，于是我们每天见面一个多小时进行口语对话。后来我把OG的作文题库的题目带来用于口语的讨论，这样就很模拟了part2的考察方式。通过20多天的连续训练，明显能感觉到对part2的回答思路的提高。更重要的是培养并维持了语感。因此我建议大家有条件的找口语搭档就用作文题库进行训练，而不是泛泛得谈天气爱好什么的，那样一点针对性也没有无法对症下药。没办法找到的就用新浪UC的口语聊天室来找一个排挡。
Part3-6提高复述能力毫无疑问有助于这部分的高分。当时我是尽可能地练完听力就地取材就对听力材料进行附属。Scientific american 60 seconds science个人认为用于训练复述的
价值是大于听力的。其次就是上面提到的rd read out-loud podcast.再有每次做综合写作的听力也可以用来复述。一物多用嘛。
写作：
满分很惊人，我很无语。
我是在参加过GRE作文后进行的托福，所以写作能力在GRE后有了很大提高，思路的打开也不成问题。
但是我当天考试到作文的时候已经没什么力气了，写独立写作的时候把GRE的套路什么的全部抛到脑后了，写的结构有点unconventional.就是开头加两支持观点加结尾，无让步段，只是在开头有一句让步。写第一个支持观点的段落是递进的推理直到段尾才点出中心句。而且全文无例子而是全部在说理。因此考完后还很担心不知道会怎样。事实证明模版不是不可或缺的，只要条理清楚连贯有理就可以了。
结尾了，无他，努力不一定能收获回报，但回报一定来自努力。
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