英语作文

大学英语四级考试作文预测（2012.12）

恩波教育

预测作文（一）

My view on online promotion

1．网络促销形式多种多样

2．你对此有什么看法

【范文】

Nowadays, online shopping is very popular, and sellers on theInternet grasp every opportunity to promote their products. For example, theyoften launch group purchasing activities in every festival to attract buyers. Somesellers persuade buyers to become the membership of their brands and providesome discount products for their members regularly.

In my opinion, it is advisable to buy products online when in promotionbecause the price is really reasonable. But some points we must pay attentionto. First, if the price is very low, the qualities of products can’t beguaranteed. Second, some sellers have promoted the price before making adiscount, so you need to compare whether the discount is true or not.

In conclusion, we should treat online promotion carefully andwisely, and not buy something that we don’t need just because of the lowerprice.

【点评】

本篇为现象解释型作文。首段描述现象网络促销形式的多样化，接下来阐释该现象中可能出现的问题，并给出作者自己的观点。词汇：grasp every opportunity to promote their products意为“抓住一切机会促销商品”；launch grouppurchasing activities意为“开展团购活动”。

预测作文（二）

On College Students’ Face-lifting

1．有些大学生为求职花巨资整容

2．有人赞成，有人反对

3．你的观点

【范文】

Nowadays, some college students invest a huge sum of money in face-liftingin order to find a good job. Not only girls but some boys make this kind ofsurgery. They think beautiful faces can improve their self-confidence, help tomake a good impression on interviewers, thus secure a good job. While someothers hold a different opinion—they think personal qualities not beautifulfaces play a decisive role in an interview.

In my opinion, it is not advisable for students to make this kind ofsurgery. First, beauty is only skin-deep, and v irtue is more important thanappearance. Second, continued success relies on one's abilities but notappearance. Third, face-lifting usually needs a lot of money, while people haveto bear the risks of an unsuccessful surgery which will be a lifelong pain.

In a word, we can get what we want by improving our inner qualities,and there is no need to endure the pains and economic loss of face-lifting.

【点评】

本篇为利弊选择型作文。首段描述大学生花巨资整容这种现象，并给出两种不同的观点。第二段作者通过分析原因论证了自己的观点。最后作者再次强调了自己的观点—大学生花巨资整容不可取。词汇：face-lifting意为“整容”；help to make a good impression on interviewers意为“有助于给面试官留下一个好的印象”；secure a goodjob意为“得到一份好工作”；skin-deep意为“表面的”；bear the risks of an unsuccessfulsurgery意为“承担手术失败的风险”。

预测作文（三）

Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?

1.现在年轻人流行在网上看电子书籍

2.有人认为电子书籍会取代传统书籍

3.你的看法

【范文】

With the mass production of electronic devices and application ofnew technologies, mankind has entered an “e” age. We hav e e-mails, e-tickets,e-tests, and e-books, and consequently, paper-based materials gradually vanish.Nowadays, e-books become extremely popular among youngsters, while traditionalones seem suffer a great loss of their readers.

For some people, electronic and internet based books are convenientand accessible. Environmentalists even advocate the benefit of e-books on theground of forest protection. E-books lovers even assert that traditional bookswill disappear in the near future.

I have been a book worm for along time. For me, reading experience is unique and rewarding. Nothing can bemore thought-provoking than thumbing through a book bought years ago under atable lamp in a dark night. As to note-taking, scanning and skimming, andportability, traditional books have advantages. Just as the invention of cameradidn’t put an end to the history of painting, traditional books are, and willstill be, an intimate friend of readers.

【点评】

本篇是观点论证型作文。前半部分描述了电子书籍的普遍以及有人认为电子书籍会取代传统书籍这一观点，后面从作者自己的角度分析了对这一观点的不认可，作者认为传统书籍有自己的优势，不会被电子书籍取代。词汇：entered an “e” age意为“进入了一个电子时代”；suffer a great loss of their readers意为“损失了大量的读者群”；thumbing through a book意为“翻阅一本书”；an intimate friend of readers意为“读者最亲密的朋友”。

预测作文（四）

Wealth Flaunt on Internet

1.有些年轻人喜欢在网上炫富。

2. 你的看法？

【范文】

Nowadays, some newly rich young people prefer to flaunt their wealthwith posting pictures of their luxury products or making some comments abouttheir extravagant life on the Internet, which on one hand reflects someone’svanity, on the other hand may arouse someone’s desire, especially bad desire.

In my eyes, thereare many complicated internal and external factors behind this phenomenon, butas youngsters, we should build up the correct values and views on life and don’tpublish that kind of bogs. Obviously, such behaviorwill be an obstacle to the ultimate establishment of a harmonious andsustainable society, so it is not advisable

to support youngsters to do like this. Some regularscan be made to help network administrators to censor blogs morestrictly.

【点评】

本篇是现象解释型作文。首段描述了年轻人网上炫富这一现象，然后接下来对这种现象产生的原因进行了简单分析，并结合年轻人自己和网站的管理两方面提出了对策。词汇：flaunt their wealth with posting pictures of their luxury products意为“通过在网上贴出奢

侈品的图片的方式来炫富”；reflectssomeone’s vanity意为“反映了一些人的虚荣”；build up the correct values and views on life意为“竖立正确的人生观和价值观”。

预测作文（五）

My Approach to PersonalSuccess

1.何为成功人士；

2.你的成功经验；

3.你认为如何达到个人的成功。

【范文】

It is generally acknowledged that a successful person should makegreater contributions to social progress and the well-being of others. However,a successful person also means his personal happiness in return, at least, inmost cases.

Though I am inexperienced in fighting for future as a young man, Iknow I must first of all study and work hard, which means overcomingdifficulties and learning to be more creative and original in achieving whatthe others can’t do or fail to.

In myeyes, firstly, I think we should have a definite goal in life. Secondly, wemust always check our plans and work steadfast towards the goal. Thirdly,accumulate knowledge and skills to make ourselves competent in our workingposts. And, the last of all is to have a teamwork spirit in getting along withour colleagues, which is surely the key to our future success in life.

【点评】

本篇属于途径方法型作文。首段介绍一般来讲何谓成功人士，提到个人幸福也是成功人士的一部分。第二段讲的是自己的成功经验。第三段从个人角度分点讲了如何达到个人的成功。词汇：well-being意为“幸福、安康”；in my eyes意为“在我看来”；work steadfast towards the goal意为“朝着目标坚定地前进”。

大学英语六级考试作文预测（2012.12）

恩波教育

预测作文（一）

Poor physical condition ofuniversity students

1.大学生身体素质越来越差，每年军训中都有不少学生因体力不支晕倒

2.分析下原因

3.谈谈对策

【范文】

Every year, many university students faint in military training,which has aroused public attention. There’re some reasons for this.

First, the lifestyle of university students is unhealthy. They usuallywould like to stay at home or dormitory rather than to take exercises or joinin social activ ities, which will do harm to their physical conditions to some extent. Second, universitiesdon’t pay attention to the PE classes. Freshmen and sophomores hav e two classesper week, while juniors and seniors have not any at all.

In my opinion, joined efforts are needed to improve students’physical condition. As to universities, they should hold the idea “health comesfirst” and arrange more PE classes and hold more sports activities for students.Parents should also cooperate with universities by creating comfortable atmosphere at home.Most importantly, university students themselves should form good habits and healthy interests, take extracurricularactivities positively and do exercises regularly.

【点评】

本篇是现象解释型作文。开头指出大学生身体素质越来越差这一现象，紧接着分析了原因--大学生生活方式不健康以及大学不重视体育课，最后作者结合多方面的因素提出了解决办法。词汇：military training意为“军训”；health comes first意为“健康第一”；form good habits意为“养成好习惯”；take extracurricular activities positively意为“积极参加课外活动”。

预测作文（二）

Should Retirement Age BePostponed?

1. 近年来，推迟退休年龄引发人们热议

2. 推迟退休年龄有利也有弊

3. 我的看法

【范文】

Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individualsadmit that aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Alongwith the trend of longevity, it has become a trend for people to debate whetherit is wise to postpone retirement age.

Some people favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, itis this policy that enables the aging society to build up enough work-force. Asa matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize this problemin an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view that postponingretirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, butcannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirementpension.

I am convinced that we should balance old people’s interest againstthis aging society. Thus, if those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we shouldeducate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks. If we tryour utmost to do so, the future of old people’s life will be promising, hopefuland rosy.

【点评】

这是一篇利弊选择型作文，第一段开门见山，引出话题—推迟退休年龄。第二段谈到对推迟退休年龄的两种不同的观点，即有人支持，有人反对。第三段陈述自己的观点，解释理由，并加以总结。词汇：along with the trend of longevity意为“随着长寿成为一种趋势”；carries some risks意为“带有一些风险”；arouse their enthusiasm for work意为“激起他们工作的兴趣”；balance old people’s interest again st this aging society意为“平衡好老龄化社会中老年人的利益”。

预测作文（三）

Should college students fightagainst the criminality?

1.大学生应该打击犯罪行为吗？

2.说说你的看法。

【范文】

Nowadays, more and more college students are becoming enthusiasticabout the healthy development of the society. They even actively participate inthe fight against the criminality at the risk of their lives, which has causeda lot of debate among the media. So far as I am concerned, the college studentsshould be very careful in their combat against the criminality for severalreasons.

On the one hand, the college students should take their studies asthe priority in the four-year campus life. Since they are the very prime oftheir life and time is so precious, they need to concentrate on theirdevelopment and improvement of the skills for a bright future career. Besides,the society has placed too much expectation on them. On the other hand, thecollege students should deal with the criminality with more strategies. Inother words, when they meet the criminals in the real life, they can appeal tothe authorities like

the police for help. Only in this way can they fighteffectively and protect themselves in the mean time.

In conclusion, the collegestudents are supposed to fight against the criminality in an effective but safemanner instead of risking their lives.

【点评】

本篇属于观点论证型作文。首段描述了大学生打击犯罪这种行为，并给出作者自己的观点—大学生在打击犯罪行为时应深思熟虑，理智并机智得应对罪犯。后面一段具体分析了原因，展开论证。最后总结自己的观点。词汇：at the risk of their lives意为“冒着生命危险”；the very prime of their life意为“他们的黄金时代”。

预测作文（四）

Flat Marriage

1. 有人赞成裸婚

2. 有人则反对

3. 我的看法

【范文】

Nowadays, a new trend has emerged among new couples called flatmarriage, which means marrying without buying house, car, and wedding ring oreven without holding a ceremony. Some people are in favor of flat marriage.They say, considering the high living costs today, it is not a bad idea tosimplify dispensable procedures and to be economical. After all, happiness isnot something that can be bought with money.

However, some people hold a different view. In their opinion,marriage is a big affair in one’s life and should be treated seriously. It isnot a nice fashion to cut down on wedding spends, for that will be the proofthat one is not liv ing a good life. If you can’t even be happy when marrying,then how can you be happy in your future life?

In my view, whether to adopt flat marriage or not should depend onthe couple’s financial condition. If they can afford a big wedding and iswilling to spend money on it, then there is no problem. However, if a couple isnot so well-off, they should make careful consideration concerning theirmarriage.

【点评】

本篇是利弊选择型作文。前两段分别从正反两个角度论述了人们对裸婚的看法，即有人支持，有人反对。最后一段阐述了作者自己的看法—每对夫妻情况不同，需根据自己的实际

情况做出选择。词汇：flat marriage意为“裸婚”；cut down on wedding spends意为“削减结婚开支”；well-off意为“经济条件好的”。

预测作文（五）

A letter of invitation

说明：假如你是英语系助理，请写信给著名教授Smith，邀请他来你校给英语系学生做讲座。注意写清邀请目的和讲座时间。

【范文】

Dear Professor Smith,

Haven’t seen you for long. We heard that recently you would have alecturing tour in Chinese universities covering a lot of cities including ours.We are writing this letter to inquire the possibility of inviting you todeliver a lecture on “Contemporary Pop Culture in America” for our postgraduatestudents on December 18. If this topic does not suit you, we are glad to acceptany similar topic.

It is well acknowledged that you are a celebrated scholar in thisparticular field, as seen in your classical academic papers and books. Specially,our students have been using your books as textbooks for a couple of years. Sowe all believe that we can benefit from your knowledge and wisdom.

Whether you can or can’t make it, please let us know.

We are looking forward to your coming.

Yours truly,

Sara

【点评】

本篇是应用文写作作文。写这类作文时我们要了解各类应用文的具体特点、格式和写法。这篇是一封邀请函。邀请函一般分为正式的请柬和非正式的信函两种。请柬格式固定，习惯用第三人称，必须写明事由、时间、地址、邀请人和被邀请人。邀请信函和普通书信格式相同，不如请柬正规和庄重，但措辞要委婉诚恳。首段说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图；主体段说明邀请别人来做什么，并交代具体时间和地点；结尾段表示期待回复。词汇：have a lecturing tour意为“巡回讲座”；benefit from意为“从……受益”。