专题强化训练 9 短文改错 写作
(九)写作专练
(限时：30分钟)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Amanda，
Hearing that you are going to study in Shanghai University as an exchange student the day after tomorrow, I am very sorry that I can't pick you at the Pudong Airport. It is at that time when I will have to participate in a spoken English competition holding in Nanjing University, for I was champion in our university competition. However, I have no choice but to change my plan and cannot make my present on your arrival. In the way, you can take a taxi to your university directly.
Once again, I sincere hope that you could receive my apology. Wish you a good luck on your journey!
Faithfully yours，
Li Hua 答案与解析：
Dear Amanda，
Hearing that you are going to study in Shanghai University as an exchange student the day after tomorrow, I am very sorry that I can't pick
you ∧
①up at the Pudong Airport. It is at that time when
②that
I will have
to participate in a spoken English competition holding
③held
in Nanjing University, for I was champion in our university competition.
However
④Therefore
, I have no choice but to change my plan and cannot make
my present
⑤presence on your arrival. In
⑥By
the way, you can take a taxi to
your
⑦our/my
university directly.
Once again, I sincere
⑧sincerely hope that you could receive
⑨accept
my
apology. Wish you good luck on your journey!
Receive 接收实物accept 接受心意，邀请
Faithfully yours，
Li Hua
①在you后加up pick sb. up意为“接载某人”，为固定搭配。故在you后加up。
②when→that这是一个强调句型，强调句的结构为“It is＋被强调部分＋that/who＋其他”，此处被强调部分是at that time。故将when改为that。
③holding→held a spoken English competition与hold之间是逻辑上的动宾关系，故应用hold的过去分词作competition的后置定语。故将holding改为held。
④However→Therefore“我别无选择不得不改变计划”与“不能亲自迎接你的到来”是因果关系而不是转折关系。故将However 改为Therefore。
⑤present→presence my为形容词性物主代词，后面应该跟名词，此处make presence意为“出现”。故将present改为presence。
⑥In→By by the way为固定搭配，意为“顺便说一下”，在此处为插入语。故将In改为By。
⑦your→our/my根据逻辑可知，此处应是指“到我们的大学”或者“到我的大学”。故将your改为our/my。
⑧sincere→sincerely hope是动词，应用副词修饰。故将sincere 改为sincerely。
⑨receive→accept receive意为“收到”，多指被动地接收；accept意为“接受”，多指主动地接受。此处表示接受道歉，应用accept。故将receive改为accept。
⑩删除a句意：祝你旅途好运。luck是不可数名词，不可用不定冠词修饰。故删除a。
第二节书面表达(满分25分) 求助信（学习成语的方法）
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack学习中文已有六年，能够正常交流，读懂报纸。他想阅读中国文学作品，但总是遇到困惑不解的成语。于是，他发邮件向你询问成语学习的方法。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
Chinese Idioms/ The Chinese Idioms / Chinese Slangs
理解=understand= I have been there before 我之前也有过类似的经历
1.表明理解成语学习的困难；
2.介绍学习成语的方法。
学习成语有啥方法和技巧？2-3 个
—了解成语背后的故事和历史
Get familiar with the story or history behind the idiom —和中国人/中国学生练习成语对话，成语接龙游戏
Play word/idiomgames with Chinese students
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack，
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua 参考范文：
Dear Jack，
I fully understand your difficulties in learning Chinese idioms. It's even common for Chinese people to be troubled by idioms when they read literary works, let alone for foreigners. I would be happy to share with you strategies we Chinese use to learn idioms.
The best way of learning idioms is through reading. Only by reading more and accumulating more can you master idioms to the greatest extent. Meanwhile, having a Chinese Idiom Dictionary can also be a good choice, so that you can refer to it when you come across idioms that you can't understand in reading.
I hope you will find my advice helpful. Please feel free to write back if you have anything more to discuss.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
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高一英语短文改错专项练习（一） 命题人：右臂审题人：左膀2016.11.8 高老师的左膀右臂祝大家期中考顺利~ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改． 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 A Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! B It is three years now since I graduate from Xinhua High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places. C I'm an Australian boy aging 17 and I'm crazy about music. It is one of the most important thing in my life. I listen music whenever I can. I have a minidisk player, with it I can have access to music whether walking in the street or ride on the bus. At home, there has a CD player in my room, and the music is on all the time. I like rock music best of all. My favorite band is Rolling Stones, which had produced 40 albums since 1966. It so happened that there was a living concert of Rolling Stones last Sunday. I decided to go. It was a great fun. I am also fond of classical music. I especially enjoy playing Beethoven once I am doing my homework. D In my view,the Internet is helpful.It is known to all,the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life.On the Internet,we can read news home and abroad and got as much information as we can,we can also attend to the net school and read many books.We can even do shopping online.Beside,our ability to operate the computer can be improved great.So we should not be addicted to the Internet,or we will get our life and study destroying.In addition,we should keep off the harmful website.Anyhow,this doesn't prevent the Internet from becoming our friend E Time fly like an arrow. I'm already in the second half of Senior Grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more than three months before I graduate middle school.At the present, I'm busy review my lessons in order to take the College Entrance Examination. I hope to go to Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best turn my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize their dreams. I do wish everyone will be able to enter an university or college. F In order to promote participation in outdoor exercise, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain on April 10. The moment we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we set out for the top in high spirit. We supported each other to pass the rocky areas on the course of the climb. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, there we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was extremely beautiful This event was very benefit, for not only we take a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned what to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!
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高考英语短文改错专项训练（含答案） 1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错（10 分） My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. 2.【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分） The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 3.【2016·全国新课标III】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. 4.【2016·四川】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now. Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.