改错书信练习题

（1）

Dear sir,

Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would

you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thanks you very much.

Customer

Li Ming

Dear sir,

Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like∧ shape of the bought the

refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it

But

∧turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter

is(或去it) becomes

worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask

disappointed

for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will ∧ at home this weekend.Please

man/ person be/stay

call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very

Thank

much.

Customer

Li Ming

（2）

Dear Susan,

I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every

30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.

Yours,

Zhang Ming Dear Susan,

I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able glad

to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find∧difficult to get

because/as it

to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the

minutes right

Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you

and

together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner.

about

Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.

Have Yours,

Zhang Ming

（3）

Dear Mary,

I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you

have lost interests. I’m afraid I couldn’t agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I’ m looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Mary,

I receive ( received)your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the laB．But to my greatly(great)surprise you say you will give up learn(learning) English. The reason is because (that)you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests( interest). I’m afraid I couldn’t (can’t)agree with you . I know it is difficulty(difficult) to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be（加an ）important tool in our future work. Beside( Besides), it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be (去be)succeed. Do remember that where there is a will there is a way. I’ am looking forward to hearing good new s from you.

（4）

Dear Ralph,

I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last

one to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?

Dear Ralph,

I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent,

a

but now I ∧changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one

have

to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find

We happily

they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve

become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I

colder times

felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this

left

sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?

can’t

（5）

Dear Lily,

I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job interview at a grocery store. I know you want to get a job at the TV station, and you’ve been looking for several week now and haven’t found something. The job at the grocery store

does n’t sound badly. If I am you, I’d take it. If you worked there for some time, you could earn some money. Its your decision, of course, but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you can think about get a bike later.

1. pleased前面加was

2. and→but

3. something--anything

4.week→weeks

5.badly→bad

6.am→were

7.Its→It’s

8.去掉to

9.decided→decide 10.get→getting

（6）

Dear Peter,

I’d like to tell you that our school has been worked out a

new program.

The purposes of the program is to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresh, and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in. According to program, we will plant different kind of trees, flowers and grass in and around our school. A botanical garden will be building. Besides, we are to build a small garden in it, we can do any reading and take a rest. What’s more, some

statues of famous people will be set up encourage us to work harder. Don’t you t hink the program wonderfully?

1.去掉been

2.is---are

3.fresh--fresher

4.to ∧the

5.kind---kinds

6.building--built

7.∧so we can

8.any--some

9.∧to encourage10.wonderfully--wonderful

7

Dear Sir / Madame,

My family are planning a visit of Hong Kong Disneyland this summer vacation. I’ve got some information about the ticket price and now I’m writing for some detail information.

I wonder that children under

3 need to pay for a ticket and how is the difference between a Peak Day Ticket and a Special Day Ticket. Is that possible for us to get a discount if we purchase as a group? Can we book ticket through the Internet? In addition to, I’d like to know if we allowed canceling our ticket booking if we can not make the tour for our personal reasons.

Looking forward to get your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua 答案：

Line 1 families 或者is

Line 2: of 改为to

Line 3: detail 改为detailed

Line 4: that 改为whether/ if ; how 改为what

Line 5: that 改为it

Line 6: ticket 改为tickets ; 去掉.to ; allowed 前加are

Line 8: get 改为getting

8

Music is one of the arts. It is like the speaking language, but it uses sounds. Who invented music? Who sing the first song? No one knows exactly the answers of these questions. But we know that music play an important part in almost everyone’s life. Baby and young

children love to hear people singing to them. When they are a little old, they like to sing the songs they have heard. When children go to the school, their world of music grows. In the middle grades students take music lessons. When they reach high school, we become interested in listening pop music. Music has meaning for everyone. It can make people happy but it can make them sad.

答案：

1．speaking→spoken

2．sing→sang

3．of→to

4．play→plays

5．Baby→Babies

6．old→older

7．去掉school前的the 8．we→they

9．在pop前加to 10．but→or