托福写作之对比类型考题

智课网TOEFL备考资料

托福写作之对比类型考题

摘要：托福写作之对比类型考题！下面为大家介绍托福写作之对比类型考题。大家是否对对比类型的考题熟悉呢?这种类型的考题在写作中也是经常会遇到的，希望同学们能够重视起来，把能掌握到的考点不要放过。下面就一起来看看。

下面为大家介绍托福写作之对比类型考题。大家是否对对比类型的考题熟悉呢?这种类型的考题在写作中也是经常会遇到的，希望同学们能够重视起来，把能掌握到的考点不要放过。下面就一起来看看。

一、对比考题何其多

对比类型考题在历年托福独立写作考题中，会占到相当大的比重，此类例题比比皆是。例如，从 2015年1月份第一场托福考试起到最近的4月12日的9场考试10道考题(3月7日的考试有两道考题)中就有5道考题就是对比型考题(2015.1.25，2015.2.1，2015.3.7(1)，2015.3.7 (2)，2015.3.28)大家先来简单回顾几个托福真题：

2015.1.10

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study.

2015.1.11

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important characteristic of a successful politician or leader is good communication skills.

2015.1.25

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates and partner can communicate with each other face to face to finish the project better than by sending e-mail.

2015.1.31

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that the whole societies today expect to young people to follow and obey are too strict.

2015.2.1

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

二、对比类考题的分类

按比较对象分类可以分为以下三类：

1)A or B

这类对比在题目中会有非常明显对两个对比对象，在选择观点时，只选其一(骑墙式写法在托福写作中不受欢

迎)。

例如：Classmates and partner can communicate with each other face to face to finish the project better than by sending e-mail. (2015.1.25)

在选择观点时要么选择face to face communication 要么选择send e-mail.

2)A or (B)

这类考题比较含蓄，比较对象往往在考题中只出现一个，而另一个则可以由推断得出。

例如： People will spend less time on cooking food in twenty years.(2015.3.7)

这道考题表面上是在问“在未来20年人们是否会更少花时间在做饭上”，实在是在将未来20年与现在进行对比，而它们之间的差异就是人们做饭时间差异的原因。

其它隐性对比考题还有：The professional athletes such as the football player and basket-ball player deserved high salaries to be paid?(2010.7.10)

这道考题表面上是在问职业运动员的高薪酬是否合理，实质上是将职业运动员的career与其它普通的career

进行对比，职业运动员之所以能有高薪酬，原因在于他们的career有异于其它career 的地方，如他们的职业生

涯比较短，非常容易受伤，需要承受经常比赛带来的巨大压力，需要参加严酷的训练等等。

3)A or B or C

这类考题中比较对象有三者，选择观点时选其一。此类考题不常见，但从2012年开始几乎每年都会考到几次。

例如：During time of economy crisis, government should reduce budgets in: (1)education, (2) health care; (3) support for unemployed. (2013.2.2)

Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends: (1) joininga sports team; (2) participate in community activities; (3) traveling (2014.3.15)

此类题目在对比时可以三者一一对比，如A与B对比，A与C对比，也可以转换成两者对比，如A与BC对比。

三、对比类型考题解题常犯错误：

小伙伴们在写对比类型题目时经常会犯这样一个错误：忽略对比。

例如：让在A跟 B之间做选择，假设选择了A, 错误的写法是只写A的好处，而决口不提B,也就是在写作过程中忽略了对比，这样的论证其实是不完整的。完整但论证应该是继写A的好处，同时要提B没有这方面的好处

或提B的坏处。下面给一篇对比类型文章的范文：

In order to celebrate important events such as graduation or a special birthday, some of them prefer a large party, while others prefer a small party that only close friends and relatives are invited.

Delightfully, our everyday life is rife with various kinds of celebrations. When celebrating major events, I prefer to

hold a small party with only close friends and relatives invited for the following reasons.

Firstly, a small party is less costly. A small party does not require vast place or abundant supply of food and drink, thus helping to save money. For instance, when celebrating my 18th birthday, I chose to hold a small party at home, inviting merely my close friends and relatives. Instead of purchasing a tremendous amount of fast food as well as snacks, I prepared the food and the drink by myself with the assistance of my mother, which significantly lowered my expense. While the party was not held on some grand location, everybody was having a good time, chatting at my cozy home and eating my hand-made deserts. By contrast, had I threw a big party, I would have needed to rent a more spacious place, buy more foods and even have needed to temporarily employ some people to help organize the party, which would be quite costly.

Secondly, it is more convenient to organize a small party. Hosting a large party entails a wealth of time and numerous people during the process of preparation before the party and cleaning up after the party. In other words, to organize a large party, one need to invest considerable time and even needs to resort to others’ assistance, which has the potential to disrupt his/her life, thus leading to inconvenience. On the other hand, because there are only a few individuals invited, a small party requires far less time in setting up the place and preparing for food and cleaning up trashes. Considerably less time-consuming and energy consuming, a small party causes far less inconvenience.

Thirdly, a small party is more instrumental in promoting close relationship. In a small party in which only a few people are involved, each one can have more time and opportunities to talk with others. Also, since only intimate friends and relatives are invited, both host and guests can feel more comfortable, thus behaving and talking more naturally. All of these advantages of small party help to boost joy and promote relationship. A large party, however, is highly inferior in this aspect. To illustrate, in my high-school graduation celebration party, which was a huge one, I invited approximately 60 people. Theconsequence was that I was so busy introducing people to each other and busy controlling the party so that it would not descend into a mess that I barely had time to talk with my close friends. In the end of the party, I was exhausted and a little disappointed. After that, I realized a small party was, in reality, a more advisable choice.

As illustrated above, a small party has more merits of saving money, time and upgrading relationship. Hence, it is a more judicious option than a large party in celebrating major events.

上面是一篇典型的对比类型考题的文章，从中可以看出在写此类文章时：

1.body paragraph的主题句就要体现对比，例如范文中每一个body 的主题句都有more 或者less这样的比较级词;

2.body paragraph的论证部分也要出现对比，例如范文的观点是认为small party 比较好，但在论证时不仅论证small party的好处，同时也提到了big party在相关方面的弊端，两相对比凸显出small party是更好的选择。

四、对比类型考题可以采用的论证方式

1)a. A有好处1，B没有

b. A有好处2，B没有

c. A 有好处3，B没有

例如，上面的small party，big party就是按照这种论证方式来写的。

2)a. B有好处1或2

b. A也有好处1或2

c. A 还有好处3

3)a. A有好处1

b. A有好处2

c. B 有好处1，但B有坏处1或2

托福写作之对比类型考题就为大家介绍到这里。在15年接下来的考题中，预计对比类型考题的热度依然不减，同学们一定要重视对这类考题的准备。如有问题可以咨询小马考试组老师，最近小马推出托福保分班，单科保25分，5980元，不过退，全科保100+，2万元，不过退。欢迎同学们报名!

托福写作新试题库-188试题库

托福独立写作新题库—188题库一、教育类 1.Teachers are appreciated and valued nowadays not as much as they were before.(Students nowadays do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past.)难度4考频4 2.University should spend more money supporting social activities rather than improving the food students eat.难度4考频3 3.When you are assigned an important presentation for work or school, you prefer to work on it right away so that you can work on it a little bit every day, or wait until you have a good idea about the presentation?难度5考频3 4.Some students prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas others prefer to have their final grades determined by only a few large ones. Which do you prefer and why?4/2 5. In order to attract good students, many universities spend a lot of money in society activities.3/3 6The student should be required to take history courses in the university no matter what their field of study is.5/3 7Students can get as much benefits from participating student organizations or club activities as from their academic studies. 4/3 8Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the Internet or listen to the music while studying.3/4

托福写作冲刺托福高分作文赏析

托福写作冲刺托福高分作文赏析正值暑假，许多学生都会选择在此期间来给自己充电或者准备、规划接下来的学习。而对于绝大多数准备去美国的学生而言，托福考试是逃不过的宿命。听说读写四门课程可以说包含了整个准备的过程，会让人应接不暇，无从下手。对大多数中国的考生而言，听力和阅读并不陌生，但是对于口语和写作这样的“输出”科目，可能会成为多数学生比较伤脑筋的事情。就拿托福的写作而言，第一篇综合写作，看阅读、听听力，总结文章的内容;第二篇独立写作，这个是真正意义上的写作，完全考察考生个人的写作能力，没有阅读，没有听力，那么怎么才能写好独立写作呢?今天，Joy就节选了一个高分学员的文章，来讲讲关于独立写作高分的那点事。几乎所有拿高分作文的学生，对于独立写作最基础部分的把握可以说是天衣无缝的。何为最基础的部分?打字。托福写作较于其他三个科目不同，对于打字有着比较高的要求。尤其是独立写作，30分钟的时间需要至少写到300字以上，何况，在考场，环境和平时练习又是不一样的状况，想要在写作中拿到不错的分数，打字这个基本功是绝对不能拖后腿的。一方面，打字的速度要快，通俗说就是手速，需要考生充分熟悉键盘。另一方面，打字的准确性也是需要保证的，换言之，打出的单词要保证基本是无误的才可以，只有速度没有准确性也是不行的。和手写的习惯不同，这要求学生要学会在电脑上迅速反应出自己文章的中是否有错的单词。所以建议一些对打字不熟练或者经常打错单词的同学，平时可以多练习一下打字练习，勤能补拙。说完基础，接下来我们就从W同学的文章来看一下，她之所以能够拿高分的原因。 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend money helping more people access the Internet instead of improving public transportation. Although, in recent decades, there has been a growing need for Internet access and the government has been strongly advised to increase its budget in this area, I personally think that it is more essential for the government to spend money on the improvement of public transportation than on more access to Internet. 首先，原题中有提到一个非常关键的词instead of，这其实就要求学生在写作时两边进行比较论证。我们可以很清楚的看到W同学对题目的正解，it is more essential…。大家都清楚，对于独立写作，ETS 评分标准第一个就是address the topic and task。那么高分的作文就是effectively address the topic and task。无一例外，高分文章处理的最漂亮的不是单词用的多么生僻，句子写的多么冗长，而是对文章题目的把握。题目理解错或不到位都会直接影响到接下来的论证，无疑就是“上梁不正下梁歪”。 For one thing, public transportation influences our life in a deeper and wider aspect than it is assumed. In fact, the great impact on the Internet is still not as comparable as public transportation. What is easily recognized is people’s need to commute back and forth between their homes and workplaces, or to travel from one city to another. Convenient public transportation shortens the distance between different locations, makes our traveling experience more acceptable and even enjoyable, and saves us plenty of time for a tasty meal or a good rest instead of wasting a large amount of time on a long tedious journey. What most people may not be easily aware of, on the other hand, is that public transportation also influences the quality of consumer goods

作文范文之托福作文185题

托福作文185题【篇一：托福官方作文185题库范文【全】】目录 toefl.ibt 高分作文思路＋范文完美重排版 (3) 本部分填补了目前网络ibt 备考资料的空白。根据李笑来老师提供的作文思路与《ibt 高分作文》原书范文重排。本部分对ibt 考试的独立写作部分与口语部分均具有重要的参考作用。范文中加粗部分均依为原书所有。附录一 185 题库按关键词分类 (184) 照录原书附录附录二李笑来作文笔记（独立部分） (185) 根据本人新东方听课详尽笔记整理而成附录三句法多样性专题 (193) 附录四例证表达法 (199) 时间匆忙，欢迎指出错误，将在后面的版本中修正。感谢笑来老师给我们提供了如此之好的备考材料，一切版权归笑来老师所有。仅供广大ibt 考生备考参考，建议购买原版以更好使用。 lost lawyer 2006 年11 月10 日 page 2 of 201 toefl.ibt 高分作文思路＋范文完美重排版 1. why people attend college? people attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). why do you think people attend college or university? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』

托福写作的高分表达方法

托福写作的高分表达方法很多学生会选择，那么托福写作考试的高分技巧有哪些呢?跟着出guo一起来看看吧!下面是收集的有关托福考试写作技巧的资讯，欢迎阅读。除了在句式上长短句相结合准确表达外，朗阁海外考试研究中心建议新托福考生要使用一些特殊的句式，以使句型多样化。句型多样化也是作文得到高分的条件之一。除了我们之前经常提到的高分句式，如倒装句、强调句、状语前置、插入语等，笔者还提出另外一个句式的多样变化，即主语多样化。下面笔者将列举几个句子概括介绍前面四种句型，而重点分析主语多样化。正常句： Luck only works in extreme cases. 倒装句： Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词位于句首的倒装。) 正常句： The inter provides people aess to the latest information. 强调句： It is the inter that provides people aess to the latest information. (强调the inter) 正常句： The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry. 状语前置句： Along with the aelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.

正常句： However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a fortable amount of space. 插入语： New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a fortable amount of space. (连词however做插入语) 主语多样 1. 她突然想到了一个主意。 She suddenly had an idea. 通常情况下，考生会马上对这句话进行翻译，基本不会动句子结构。但是以人作为主语的英语句子总是不能够很吸引人，所以这个句子如果稍微做下修改，以后面的宾语“主意”做主语，这个句子会发生一些变化。 An idea suddenly ourred to her. 2. 他开车心不在焉，几乎闯祸。 He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an aident. 这句话依然是拿人做主语，稍微改一下，把心不在焉这个形容词的名词形式做主语，会大不相同。 His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an aident. 3. 美利坚合众国创立于1789年。

托福综合写作答案详细解析

080105CNW1【08 年1 月5 日大陆托福机经写作第1 题-综合写作】 The reading passage explains the negative effects of introducing foreign species into a local ecosystem. The lecture, on the other hand, offers counterarguments to prove that introduced species many not necessarily be harmful. First, according to the reading, imported species may destroy the existing balance within an ecosystem. However, the lecturer argues that these species don’t always do harm to the local ecosystem. Instead they may bring benefits to local agriculture. Second, the reading states that imported species may destroy the useful aspects of local species. Yet the lecturer points out that this is not always the case. He points out that it depends on local circumstances. For example, the cane toads introduced into the state of Florida have helped to exterminate pests that have infested local harvest. Finally, the reading contends that imported species may add to the local economic burden. Again, the lecturer refutes this point by saying that the impact on local economy varies from place to place. He/She uses the example of mesquite to illustrate this point. This plant imported into Africa has been used as food and firewood by the local people, a useful contribution to the local economy. 080427CNW1 The reading passage provides three pieces of evidence to support author Gavin Menzies’s claim that it was Chinese who first visited the Americas. However, the lecturer dismisses this claim as unfounded. First, as to the markings resembling Chinese characters discovered on a rock on Bimini Road, the lecturer argues that these markings are natural formation rather than human engraving. It looks as if they were carved by humans but a closer examination by geologists would immediately reveal that they are formed by natural forces. Second, regarding the donut-like anchor found off the Coast of Bimini, which seems to be made by Chinese, the speaker suggests that this does not necessarily mean Chinese had been there first, because similar anchors had long been used in navigation by many other countries. Finally, the lecture refuses to view the stone towers on Bimini Island as evidence of the arrival of Chinese sailors earlier than others. He points out that although these towers look like a Chinese lighthouse from a distance, they are in fact built in an English architectural style. Furthermore, carbon dating technique has indicated that the construction by Chinese sailors took place much later than the 15th century.

2015.12.12新托福写作考题回顾

新托福写作考题回顾朗阁海外考试研究中心丁仡然考试日期：2015.12.12 Task 1 INTEGRATED 综合写作讲述的是现在犀牛的数量锐减，频临灭绝，科学家将它们关进笼子里养，但也造成了一些问题。阅读文章要点：提出三种数量减少的原因 1. 关在笼子里，造成母犀牛不孕； 2. 犀牛经常在硬地(hard surface)上走，造成腿部产生疾病(foot disease)； 3. 一些犀牛的大脑开始混乱(brain disorder)；听力逐一提出解决方案： 1. 不孕是因为激素的不平衡，缺少两种激素，只要在食物里补充这两种激素，就可以恢复生育； 2. 有先进的radio graphic image设备，可以照骨骼和组织的照片，早发现早治疗可以增加治愈的概率； 3. 小犀牛会得这种病，是因为生它的母犀牛年龄太大了，老犀牛身体里有toxic chemical elements, 从而导致疾病，只要控制产龄就可以解决了。 Task 2 INDEPENDENT 独立写作话题类别环保类考题文字：Some companies provide important products or service, but also damage the environment. Some people believe that government should require more penalties of these companies, such as higher tax or larger fine, while others believe there are better ways to deal with the problem. Which do you prefer? 本次写作考试点评：本次新托福独立写作有一定的难度，综合写作又是常考的动物学话题。生物学或者动物学话题可以说是整个2015年都在重点考察的话题之一。

托福培训丨托福独立写作主体段的论证方式

托福培训丨托福独立写作主体段的论证方式朗阁托福培训中心丁仡然在托福独立写作当中主体段的写作水平往往是决定一篇文章高分与否的关键所在，可以说一篇文章70-80%的分数是取决于主体段写作的好坏的。而托福独立写作主体段对于写作的层次和论证方式又有着一定的讲究和固定的要求。本文中，朗阁托福培训中心的老师就给广大考生介绍一下托福写作主体段有哪些主要的论证方式以及范例的讲解。首先，我们先说一下托福写作主体段的一般写作层次和论证方式：主体段一般由四句话组成：第一句：topic sentence（主题句）第二句：supporting sentences（1-2句支持句），使用具体的因果论证或者假设论证、并列关系等来具体的解释说明主题句。第三句：举例子（写出一个长长的例子用于举例论证）第四句：这一段的小结（可以使用对比论证或者因果论证等小结这一段）知道了每段主体段的写作结构后，现在我们就来谈谈具体的每个主体段的论证方式：第一种：举例论证可以这么说，举例论证是所有论证方法里，尤其是托福写作里面最重要也是必须要用的一种论证方式，因为根据评分标准，在托福4-5分的标准里都明确提出了： 5分：using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details

4分：using appropriate and sufficient explanations, exemplifications, and/or details 而无论是托福，雅思还是SAT考试都是严格的按照评分标准来批改的，所以根据这个标准学生必须要重视和用出举例论证，否则托福写作无法拿到高分。接下来问题来了，究竟老美喜欢的举例论证有几种形式呢？接下来笔者就为考生们一一回答。第一种：以for example, for instance, such as等词组引出的句子，这种也是最普遍或者用的最多的一种。下面为大家举一个例子：题目：It is sometimes said borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? 在这篇文章的第二和第三主体段里，考官的高分范文分别用了：For example, a friend borrowed some money from his or her friend and did not return it. 下面一段用了：for example , when my friend asks me to baby-sit her child while she is taking her classes I agree because i know that she desperately needs my help in order to finish her degree and save some money. 分析：高手在写文章的时候很喜欢说打个比方之类的话，这样的论证方法既满足了高评分的需要，也形象生动地说明了你前面主题句的论点，而且段落字数也得到了增加，可以说是高分文章必不可少的要点之一。还有一种举例论证方式：以according to my personal experience or other people’s experience为开头引出举例论证。分析：各位同学要记住美国人做事情很喜欢DIY, 因为在美国，个体的劳动力很贵，很多美国人做事情都喜欢自己亲自实践或者采取他人做事情的经验，如果你得出的结论或者论点是基于亲身的经历或者他人的实战经验，那美国人是很相信你所说的话的。记住这是美

TPO40-48全部分托福独立写作文本题目汇总

TPO40-48全部分托福独立写作文本题目汇总对于托福考试，相信大家对于TPO托福模考软件都不陌生，现在市面上可以下载到免费的TPO模考软件。虽然TPO模考软件里的题目是不会出现在考试中，但是考生可能通过它了解托福考试的题型以、考试模式及题目的难易度掌握，所以TPO托福模考软件对考生十分的重要。最近TPO托福模考软件更新了40-48套题，这也是ETS为了考生适应未来考试而放出的题目，所以练习这几套题十分重要。这里小编为大家整理了TPO40-48全部托福独立写作文本题目，希望对大家托福写作备考有帮助，快来看看吧。 TPO40独立写作题目文本 Independent Writing Directions Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. Question: Essay Topic Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. TPO41独立写作题目文本 Independent Writing Directions Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. Question: Essay Topic Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

托福综合写作7范文托福作文的综合写作应该写

托福综合写作7范文托福作文的综合写作应该写托福作文写作应该分为三个层次，也就是我们确定中心思想后应该找三个理由来支持。托福写作还有一个五段论，第一段为中心思想，二三四为支持段落，第五段总结观点。这个就是所谓的八股文。但是形式不能太明显，在表达中多加入自己的思想，八股文的形式会隐晦一些。一般这种写作可以助你在托福作文中取得高分。构建综合写作整体，你可以从以下这几个方面入手：第一，将听力及阅读中的核心观点提炼出来，并指明对应的两个观点是支持还是对立；第二，分为几个段落，分别从不同角度总结出两个观点的论据。最后，重申主要论证观点并注意切忌掺加个人观点。听力结束后，考生还会有时间回看阅读文章，所以不用完整记忆阅读文章的论点和论据，记下核心即可。有问题，可以再问我。我觉得 ___老师讲的不太对，我自己本身也在 ___培训过，感觉他们讲的方法都是很过时的方法，不太适用于新托福的考试。下面是我自己考了四次托福的感想： 2、其实考试的时候，观点找错的情况似乎不太会发生。。。因为阅读里面都有提示了啊。。。一般不会弄错的，所以不用担心，

重点是细节不要搞错，要挺清楚细节说了那几点，尽量不要落下那个点，细节齐全 3、写得时候模板适当用用，但是表全部都用，那样文章就有点僵硬了，你自己读着通顺就好啊。 4、文章内部用词要有多样性，要适当地用一些高级的词汇，如重要的这个意思，你不要只用important, 这样显得你不认识多少单词，可以用significant, vital, essential, of great importance, core, 这种意思相近的单词或者是意群来表达，这样他们就认为你词汇量大了。 5、写综合写作最能体现你的词汇量和句型的多边性，所以不要直接照抄听力或者是阅读的内容，这样就表现不出你自己了，多看看新概念4里面的表达方法，哪些句型神马的都很好，对考试很有用！！！ 6、模板没有对错之分，你自己需要好一个模板，然后自己用自己弄出来的，这样比较好，不过这种东西都差不多，重点还是看个人的表达神马的，还有词汇量什么的。

12月10日托福写作答案解析

12月10日托福写作答案解析综合写作】关于加拿大一种当地语言的保护。阅读说了几个影响语言消失的factor，听力反驳。阅读文章： 1. 根据一个survey,当地十六岁以下才有百分之二十的人说当地话，而且在减少。 2. 当地渔业为了实现国际化，只说international话，比如说像English这种语言。因此，父母不鼓励孩子学当地话。 3. 电视和电台大部分都是用English和French播的，这对年轻人影响比较大的。所以也造成这种语言的后继无人。听力文章： 1. 阅读中survey的数据不准确，实际收据比这个要多。因为survey 只是针对traditional的当地话，而年轻人说的也是当地话，只不过比较modern。 2. 听力说及时发展渔业也还是需要和local交易的。而local人只说当地话，所以在工作中说当地话也很重要，父母们也意识到了，开始让孩子们学。

3. 听力说确实电视和电台是这样的，但是网络媒体并不这样，人家大部分还是用native language的，而且听众也挺多的。【独立写作】 Which option do you prefer? Travel to foreign countries when you are young than when you are older. Give specific reasons or examples to support your decision. 题目解析：这道题算是一道老题，和今年5月29日那场考试的题目(It is better to take risks and explore new things when you are older than when you are young.)极其类似。并且，也呼应了2015年北美考场的真题。所以，部分同学对此可能并不陌生。写作思路解析：选择年轻时旅行 1. 丰富生活列出细节(the Golden Gate Bridge ，The Pyramids and The Louvre)具体描绘世界之五彩缤纷。拿书本所学和实际经历对比，感叹纸上得来终觉浅。拿年轻实现旅行梦想和年老后悔对比，鼓励年轻人尽早行动。

1月23日托福写作考试真题解析

1月23日托福写作考试真题解析正在备战托福写作的考生们，不知道你们准备的怎么样了呢?为了给正在备考的同学们带来一定的帮助，在今天的文章中，天道小编为各位准备了2016年托福作文真题解析，一起来看!更多托福写作机经，还请继续关注我们的频道! 备考托福的小伙伴们注意了，托福真题是你不可缺少的备考利器。因此，本文天道小编给大家整理了刚刚过去的1月23日托福作文真题。正在备战托福写作的考生们还等什么，赶快收藏吧!2016年1月23日托福写作机经如下：综合写作：鼠兔灭绝的原因阅读： 1. 鼠兔有一种能防御寒冷的外衣，在温度升高的时候会因过热而死亡; 2. 夏天温度太高，难以储存过冬的食物，导致冬天因缺乏食物而饿死; 3. 冬天鼠兔要靠雪层来保温，但是因为全球变暖，雪融化得过快，导致它们暴露在寒冷的环境中。听力反驳： 1. 每个地方的温度不一样，如果鼠兔生活在阴凉的地区，它们就不会因为温度过高而死亡; 2. 因为温度高，鼠兔吃得不多，可以把食物留下来为冬天做准备; 3. 雪化得快，冬天结束得早;这些动物就可以很快熬过冬天，在春天的时候恢复体力。独立写作： Some people think that some lessons for young students (age5-8) including video games are effective ways and interesting, other people think this way is distracting and a waste of time. What’s your opinion? 是否新题：是题材：教育类观点： Lessons for young students (age5-8) including video games are effective ways and interesting. 写作思路： 1. 含有视频游戏的课程可以活跃课堂气氛，激发学生的学习兴趣;

托福写作技巧(总结)

把教授如何反驳文章中三个分论点挺清楚，例子都是阅读文章里的所以不用记，听力里主要是在讲阅读文章中的例子有哪些缺陷或不严谨的地方，从而无法成为有效的论据，甚至成为别的观点的论据。有自己的写作模式、写作套路。先不限时写几篇，写完一篇就立刻打印出来逐字逐句修改（电脑上改容易偷懒），把过于简单的词和句子一一替换，注意别用太难的词和没把握的词，能用到6级词汇就差不多了，心情好了再拽两个托福词汇上去也就足够了。我觉得最好用的就是形容词和副词，可以记几个托福水平的精彩形容词和副词，选择自己看着顺眼的，在平凡的名词前加好看的形容词，在平淡的句子里随处放置抢眼的副词，这样文章一下子就丰富起来了。插入语，句式变换，每段第一句试着倒装、或用被动语态多用具体的详细的例子，别停留在就事论事上，可以试着延伸到生活的其他方面注意线性思维，“总分总” 托福作文写五段，第一段是中心思想段，二三四是支持段落，最后是总结段落无论是综合写作还是独立写作，考生追求的基本目标是把想说的意思用书面英语表达清楚，让阅卷人读懂和明白。从语言角度来说，有两大标准，即准确性和多样化。能够达到词词准确，又使用到不同的词句来表达相同、相似的意思，从语言角度来说已经符合托福考试的高分要求。仿写。只看不写，永远不能将输入语言化成输出语言。尽量仿写整句，保持原句结构，替换内容！ In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that.........+观点：In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers。用一句话说，简单地认为父母是最好的老师是相当肤浅的。综合写作部分的评分标准： 1、内容的完整性和准确性。简单地说，就是文章是否有将讲座中的关键信息点完整、准确地提取出来，并和阅读材料中的相关内容有效地一一对应。如果讲座中的信息点有缺失，那么会有一定程度的扣分；如果只写了有关阅读材料的观点，得1分。文章的组织机构，词汇和语法的正确性和准确性。高分的作文需要做到条理清晰，结构连贯，用词恰当，能够准确地表达讲座中的观点与阅读材料中的观点是如何相互联系的，只要作文中的错误不至于使内容表述出现误解，一些偶尔出现的语言错误，如单词拼写、单复数问题等，不会对作文成绩产生很大影响，当然，错误肯定是越少越好的。独立写作部分的评分标准： 1、有效回应题目，阐明文章主题。一般来说，独立写作完全跑题的情况很少，但是很多考生在展开讨论时所采用的论据，比较容易出现跟主题关联性不大的情况，即局部答非所问的现象，从而影响了得分。2、逻辑条理清楚，论证充分展开。这一点的关键在于文章论证的展开，是否提供了大量的细节和例子来支持观点，而非泛泛而谈地说理。3、内容连贯一致，衔接自然流畅。达到内容连贯一致的文章通常全文围绕中心论点展开，而不会论据自相矛盾，也不会重复论证，有时候通过一些表示因果、先后、递进的关系连词可以起到粘合剂的作用。4、遣词造句地道，语言驾驭娴熟。托福考试终究是语言考试，最终还是要考查考生的语言运用能力，但是要注意的是，并不是要求考生通篇都用难词偏语长句，而是要会变化着用一些美国人常用的语句把自己的想法表达清楚，所以建议考生尽量多阅读和模仿英文原版材料，这样写出来的文章才能够原汁原味。

托福写作实现表达方式的多样性

托福写作实现表达方式的多样性托福写作对语言表达的多样性有一定的要求。不仅如此，就一般的英文写作而言，能够用不重复的词汇和句式表达相同的意思也是非常有必要的。如何才能实现表达方式的多样性呢?在这里给大家介绍几种常用的方法。一.词汇与词组要想在英文写作中避免多次使用同一个词，可以采用以下的方式： 1) 词性转换通过转换词性来避免重复不失为一个好方法。常见的有把动词变为名词，把名词变为形容词等。例：A. Making money is important for the youth to lead a decent life. B. Making money is of importance for the youth to lead a decent life. A. A country’s prosperity has much to do with its education. B. A prosperous country has much to do with its education. 2) 近义词和同义词的转换另一种避免用词重复的方法是使用近义词或同义词进行替换，确保用词的多样性。例：It is necessary/essential/important/significant/ vital/ crucial/critical/ momentous/paramount to develop education in a country. A. The government decides to develop local economy by means ofthe policy to build more factories. B. The government decides to develop local economy byadopting / applying/ using/ employing/ embracing the policy to build more factories. 3)词汇和词组的替换第三种方法就是将词汇与相同意义的词组进行替换，来避免文章啰嗦重复。例：A. Some people approve my standpoint. B. Some people are in favor of my standpoint. A. The man owned large amounts of fortune. B. The man was in possession of large amounts of fortune. 4)词组与词组的替换不仅是词汇和词组能够相互替换，词组与词组之间也是可以的。例：A. As far as I am concerned, I do agree with this opinion. B.To my way of thinking, I do agree with this opinion. A. Some people are against this standpoint. B. Some people are opposed to this standpoint. 二.句式变换 1. It 作形式主语 It is universally acknowledged that… It is widely recognized that… It is unavoidable that… It is an undeniable truth that… 例题：Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country It is widely acknowledged that education has played a significant role in

托福写作TPO7综合写作详细解析

智课网TOEFL备考资料

托福写作TPO7综合写作详细解析阅读材料： In an effort to encourage ecologically sustainable forestry practices, an international organization started issuing certifications to wood companies that meet high ecological standards by conserving resources and recycling materials. Companies that receive this certification can attract customers by advertising their product as ecocertified. Around the world, many wood companies have adopted new, ecologically friendly practices in order to receive ecocertification. However, it is unlikely that wood companies in the United Stated will do the same, for several reasons. 为了能过促进林业的可持续发展，有个国际组织开始着手给那些达到了环保和再生利用要求的木材公司颁发认证。获得认证的公司可以在广告商宣传自己是环保的，进而吸引消费者。在全球范围内来看，为了能得到环保认证，很多木材公司已经开始采用了环保策略。然而，就美国的公司来讲不太会采取同样的措施，原因如下。 First, American consumers are exposed to so much advertising that they would not value or even pay attention to the ecocertification label. Because so many mediocre products are labeled “new” or “improved,” American consumers do not place much trust in advertising claims in general. 首先，由于每天接受大量广告的轰炸，美国消费者对于环保标签并不是很在意。由于很多的普通产品都标榜“创新”或者“升级”，美国消费者对于广告上生成的东西基本上不怎么信任。 Second, ecocertified wood will be more expensive than uncertified wood because in order to earn ecocertification, a wood company must pay to have its business examined by a certification agency. This additional cost gets passed on to consumers – American consumers tend to be strongly motivated by price, and therefore they are likely to choose cheaper uncertified wood products. Accordingly, American wood companies will prefer to keep their prices low rather than obtain ecocertification.