话题作文之六---观点对立型

话题作文之六---观点对立型
话题作文之六---观点对立型

话题作文之六---观点对立型

Useful words :

have advantages-- benefit from -- do good to

be of help / use / importance ---

be helpful /useful / important / good ---

介绍正方(supporting opinion)观点:

1) On the one hand ,some students are for the idea. ---

2) some students think it necessary to -

3) They are of the opinion that -----

4) What’s more --- Besides --- In addition, --- Furthermore ,------ What’s worse ,---

写作模式1

总起:

.Different people hold different opinions.

.Opinions are divided.

.People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards …

.People have different opinions on this problem.

.People take different views on this question.

表达观点一:

Some of us think/ hold the view /are in favor of the idea that…The reason is that….Besides, …

(Some are against the view that….)

表达观点二:

(However/On the other hand), others have just the opposite opinion. They think that…What’s more,…However, each coin has two sides.

本人观点:

As far as I am concerned, …(In my opinion,…; It’s my opinion that…) For one reason,…For another reason…

In a word,…Only through…can we have a bright future.

写作模式2

We had a heated discussion about/on ... Students’ views/ideas/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person. Some students say / think / believe that… However, others hold the view that…

As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the first/second view./ I would like to ….The reasons are as follows. First, …Secondly,…

In conclusion / In a word ,…

写作模式3

There is a widespread concern over the issue that (作文题目).But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.

A majority of people think that 观点一. In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,原因一.Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二. So it goes without saying不用说that观点一.

People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that观点二. In their point of view, on the one hand,原因一. On the other hand,原因二. Therefore, there is no doubt that观点二.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that观点一或二.It is not only because ____, but also because ____. The more___, the more___.

基础写作一:

【写作内容】

我们学校将聘请一位美籍老师,同学们在英语角讨论了这个问题,并对此持有不同的看法。观点如下:

赞成反对

1.可以学到真正的英语;

2.尤其可以提高口语;

3.激发学生学习英语的兴趣。1.考虑外教不了解中国的教育情况,故担心他们不知道如何教中国学生;

2.学生不能很好地理解他们所说的话。

最后用一句话谈谈你对此的看法

It is said that our school is going to employ an American teacher. We discussed it at English Corner…

【写作要求】1.只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总句数。

【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

基础写作二:

第一节:基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)

[写作内容]

作为中学生,你肯定经过很多次考试,体验过成功,也遭遇过失败。请你根据提示内容,简要概述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度,并结合自身实际,说明你的

观点。

态度一:当考试结果不尽人意时,情绪低落,丧失信心,不再继续努力。

态度二:当考试失败时,分析并找出失败的原因,鼓励自己,增强信心,避免再犯同样的错误。

你的观点:失败乃成功之母……

(写作要求)

用5句话写出,注意行文连贯。

基础写作三:

当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影,有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题,按照下列要点写一篇英语短文:

。看电影:省时、有趣、易懂

。读原著:细节更多、语言优美

。我的看法及理由

注意:1、词数:100字左右。文章题目和开头已给出(不计入词数)。

2、参考词汇:original work 或book in the original (原著)

Film or book, which do you prefer?

Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. _________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________ In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it

任务型写作:

阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文.

Growing Pains

Teenagers are caught between a desire for independence and an sctual need for parnting, protection and their proper guidance.

Some are willing to rely on their parents, because they believe in their parents and regard them as good teachers both in life and study. While other teens feel angry about dependence because they think it is an admission of weakness. They are developing the ability to be independent.

It is not unuaual for teens to react with anger or rebellion(叛逆) at seemingly innocent suggestions or comments from parents. This anger is often expressed in comments such as, “My parents won’t let me grow up,” or “They treat me like a child.”

Teenagers question their parnts’s ideas. They no longer think their parents have all the answers. Sometimes teenagers are too proud of themselves. They complain that their parents are old fashioned, or don’t know what’s going on and can’t keep up with times.

写作内容:

1.请用30 个词概括短文的要点;

2.然后以约120个词就“青少年的独立观”这个主题发表你的看法, 至少包含以下内容要点:

1)有人认为不能独立, 要依靠父母的保护;

2)有人认为要脱离父母的保护, 尽早独立;

3)你的看法.

写作要求: 1. 可以用实例或分项目论述的方法支持你的论点, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文的句子.

_______________________________________________________________________

基础写作一:

【范文欣赏】

It is said that our school is going to employ an American teacher. We discussed it at English Corner. Most of us are for it, because with his or her help we can learn real English. Especially we can improve our spoken English and we will be more and more interested in learning English. But some of us think that an American teacher doesn’t know Chinese school education very well and may not know how to teach Chinese students. And they are also worried that some students can’t understand him or her well. In my opinion, it will be of great help to have an American teacher, though we may meet some difficulties at first.

基础写作二:

We middle school students have had many tests or exams. We have both achieved success and suffered from failure. Different students may take different attitudes to failure.

Some students fall in low spirits when they don't do well in the exams. They usually lose heart and no longer study hard as before. However, most students take an active attitude towards failure. They encourage themselves to be self-confident. They find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes. I agree with those with active attitudes. As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Even great men had failed many times before they succeeded. So we must deal with our failure correctly.

基础写作三:

Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story; moreover, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.

Some others have just the opposite opinion, considering that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.

Personally, I agree with the second view and actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what’s more, I am able to better understand the author’s ideas. In a word, to read the original work is bett er than to see the film based on it

任务型写作:

To Be Dependent or Independent

The passage mainly tells us the pains of teenagers during their growth. Some seek to be independent from their parnts as early as possible, while others hold the opposite opinion.

Some teenagers think independence is a good way to gain living skills to survive by themselves, so they wouldn’t like to form the habit to ask their parnts when coming across any problems but want to be encouraged to solve problems individually and independently.

Others think they are still young, and they are the only child in the family. They needn’t worry too much about their future because they believe in their parents that eveything could be well disigned.

I’m in favor of the first question, parents should try to let their children think about their own affaires and make their own decissins so that their creativity could be developed and give some proper guidance when needed.

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