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初学作文时，有的同学虽然学会了分段。但读起来总感到段与段之间前后脱节，“分段”变成了“分家”，使一篇作文变得前后不连贯，气不通，意不顺。这又是怎么回事呢?
问题就出在段落与段落之间缺少了必要的过渡。原来文章从这一段读到另一段，好比隔着一条河，河上必须有桥，两段才能连在一块。这个“桥”就是过渡。
一般的过渡方法，说起来比较简单，无非是三种：
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二、句子过渡法。就是在两个段落之间，安排一个句子来承上启下。如《颐和园》中的“从万寿山下来，就是昆明湖”，自然地从写万寿山过渡到写昆明湖。
三、段落过渡法。就是在文章上下两层意思间，用一个简短的自然段过渡，使文章前后连贯。如《伟大的友谊》第四自然段：“在生活上，恩格斯热忱地帮助马克思，更重要的是在共产主义事业上，他们互相关怀，互相帮助，亲密地合作。”这短短的一段文字既总结了上文，又提示了下文，起到了很好的“桥梁”作用。
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