英语专业八级汉译英高分特训100篇(文学作品类(Practice 44～71))【圣才出品】

文学作品类（Practice44～71）

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Practice44

烧山芋和热茶的香味，便一下子扑入你的鼻子。抬头看，四周闪着微笑的眼睛，欢迎着，丝毫没有怪你唐突的神情。你刚开口说由哪儿来的时候，一杯很热的浓茶，就递在你的下巴边上。老太婆吩咐她的孙女，快把火拨大些，多添点子柴，说是客人要烘暖他的身子；你暖和了，还不觉得疲倦的话，你可以摸摸小孩子的下巴，拧拧他们的脸蛋，做一点奇怪的样子，给他们嬉笑。

参考译文

Immediately your nose is filled with the aroma of hot tea and roast sweet potatoes.When you look around you see friendly faces smiling at you;there is no hint of anything like blame for what elsewhere might be considered as brusqueness. Scarcely have you begun to tell them where you come from when a cup of hot and strong tea is handed over to you.Grandma will tell her granddaughter to make the fire bigger and feed it with more wood because the guest needs more heat to warm up.When you are recovered from coldness and fatigue,you may play with children, stroking them on the chin,giving them gentle pinches on the cheek or making a face to provoke them to gurgle.

翻译要点

本题中“火拨大些”和“多添点子柴”在动作上有先后之分，“说是客人要烘暖他的身子”对为什么要“拨火”和“添柴”起到解释作用，所以不妨加上连词because，显示其内在的逻辑关系。最后一句中由于动词较多，可以留一个动词作谓语动词，其余作表示伴随

状况的分词，使句子结构更紧凑，更具粘着性。全段运用Immediately，When，Scarcely 等词将各句衔接起来，译文段落的组织环环相扣，紧密和谐，反映了原文的脉络和意境。

Practice45

那是动乱的第二年吧，我被划进了“黑帮”队伍里。我在那长长的“黑帮”队伍里倒不害怕，最怕的就是游斗汽车开到自己家门口，这一招太损了。嗨，越害怕还越有鬼，有一次汽车就真的开到了家门口。那八旬的老母亲看见了汽车上的我，嘴抖了几抖，闭了眼睛，扶着墙，身子像泥一样瘫了下去。妻子竟忘了去扶持母亲，站在那儿，眼睛都直了，跟个傻子一般。

参考译文

In the second of those tumultuous years.I was labeled one of the“reactionary gang”.What I feared most was not being forced to queue up among this gang of so many,but the vicious practice of being publicly denounced on a truck in front of my own house.Well,fear or no fear,the lot fell on me soon enough.When the truck drove to the gate of my house,my mother,who was already in her eighties,spotted me on the truck.With lips trembling and eyes shut,she first leaned against the wall, then collapsed,weak and limp,like soft mud on the ground.Meanwhile,my wife just stood there dumbfounded like a blockhead,forgetting even to help my mother up.

翻译要点

该段落分两个句群。第一个句群是前两句，描述自己害怕被游斗的心理。第二个句群叙述自己的游斗经历对母亲和妻子的伤害。连接这两部分内容的语句“嗨，越怕还越有鬼”是

一个承上启下的重要环节，在整个段落中起沟通过渡作用。译文也相应地将其作为叙述的重点，但没有拘泥于词句形式上的对应，而是突出了the lot fell on me soon enough的信息，将前后内容自然衔接起来，使译文取得了较好的连贯效果。

Practice46

是不是还要问问我家里有没有一些财产?请等一下，让我想一想，啊，记起来了，有的有的，但不算多。去年暑天我穿的几套旧的汗褂裤，与几双缝上底的线袜，已交给我的妻放在深山坞里保藏着——怕国民党军进攻时，被人抢了去，准备今年暑天拿出来再穿；那些就算是我唯一的财产了。但我说出那几件“传世宝”来，岂不要叫那些富翁们齿冷三天。参考译文

Dear readers,maybe you wish to know if I have any private property at home. Just a minute!Let me see…Ah,here it is,but nothing much though.I have left with my wife for safekeeping a few changes of used underwear and a few pairs of socks with mended soles,all of which I used to wear last summer.She has now put them away in a remote mountain valley to prevent them from being stolen in case of Kuomintang attack,so that I may wear them again this summer.These are all the property I have to my name.But wouldn’t the declaration of my family treasures make myself an object of lively ridicule to the rich?

翻译要点

原文的“是不是…”，“啊”，“岂不要…”等词句具有很强的人际功能和表情功能，译文采用dear readers字眼缩短读者和作者的距离，并用Ah以及设问句But wouldn’t the declaration of my family treasures make myself an object of lively ridicule to the

rich?实现原文的表情功能，突出了对“富人”的蔑视和革命者那种“重于九鼎，清于漱玉”而长留天地的精神，再现了原文段落的功能和意义。

Practice47

今年四月，我到广东从化温泉小住了几天。四周是山，环抱着一潭春水，那又浓又翠的景色，简直是一幅清绿山水画。刚去的当晚，是个阴天，偶尔倚着楼窗一望：奇怪啊，怎么楼前凭空涌起那么多黑黝黝的小山，一重一重的，起伏不断。记得楼前是一片比较平坦的园林，不是山。这到底是什么幻景呢?赶到天明一看，忍不住笑了。原来是满野的荔枝树，一棵连一棵，每棵的叶子都密得不透缝，黑夜看去，可不就像小山似的。

参考译文

The spring was encircled by hills,thick with greenery,a regular painting of blur hills and green waters.It was a cloudy evening when I arrived.I happened to look out of the window and was surprised by the sight of dark little mounds outside the window.One after another,crowding together,they turned the grounds outside, which I remembered as level,into hilly land.What was this mysterious scene?I wondered.The next day I took a quick look and broke out laughing.What I had seen were lychee trees that grew so close together and with such thick leaves that they looked like mounds in the evening.

翻译要点

汉译英时对汉语中省略的主语常常采取加名词、代词等词汇补充手段或用被动句、从句（包括非限定性从句）等句法手段，以达到英语句法上的要求。将英语句群和汉语句群相对照，不难看出本题英语译文是怎样补充主语，重建英语句型的：第二句中“环抱着…清绿山

水画”用被动句型（The spring was encircled by hills）；第三、四、五句则加主语I和代词they；最后一句用主语从句what they had seen及they分别作主语和从句主语。

Practice48

自从我们搬到郊外以来，天气渐渐清凉了。那短篱边牵延着的毛豆叶子，已露出枯黄的颜色来。白色的小野菊，一丛丛由草堆里钻出头来。还有小朵的黄花在凉劲的秋风中抖颤，这一些景象，最容易勾起人们的秋思，况且身在异国呢!低声吟着帘卷西风，人比黄花瘦之句，这个小小的灵宫是弥漫了怅惘的情绪。

参考译文

The weather has been getting nice and cool since we moved to the suburbs. Soybean leaves on the low hedges are beginning to turn brownish yellow.Clusters of white chrysanthemums are vying to break through the rank weeds while tiny yellow ones are shivering in the chilly wind.The autumn scene is most apt to bring about a lonesome and desolate mood,especially when we are in a foreign country; my heart was filled with melancholy when I recited in a low voice the following lines of an ancient Chinese poem:When the west wind furls up the curtain,I'm more frail than the yellow chrysanthemum.

翻译要点

本题的翻译灵活处理了一些语句的翻译，从而使原文作者浓浓的思乡情在译文中得到了很好的体现。例如，在翻译“秋思”时，没有直接译为thoughts in Autumn或者feelings in Autumn,而是结合上下文，以意译法处理为a lonesome and desolate mood，这样不仅贴切地表达了“秋思”所传递的意思，而且充分传达了原文中作者的思乡情。

Practice49

暮霭挟着薄雾，笼罩了外白渡桥的高耸的钢架，电车驶过时，这钢架下横空架挂的电车线时时爆发出几朵碧绿的火花。从桥上向东望，可以看见浦东的洋栈像巨大的怪兽，蹲在暝色中，闪着千百只小眼睛似的灯火。向西望，叫人猛一惊的，是高高地装在一所洋房上而且异常庞大的霓虹电管广告，射出火一样的赤光和青磷似的绿焰：Light，Heat，Power!

参考译文

Under a sunset-mottled sky,the towering framework of Garden Bridge was mantled in the gathering mist.Whenever a tram passed over the bridge,the overhead cable suspended below the top of the steel frame threw off bright, greenish sparks.Looking east,one could see the warehouses of foreign firms on the waterfront of Pootung like huge monsters crouching in the gloom,their lights twinkling like countless tiny eyes.To the west,one saw with a shock of wonder on the roof of a building a gigantic neon sign in flaming red and phosphorescent green:LIGHT,HEAT,POWER!

翻译要点

为再现原文的动态效果，译文中使用了充当不同句子成分的动词现在分词形式，如crouching,twinkling,towering,flaming等等，这些词语并非形式上的简单对应，而是经过精挑细选的、能够恰如其分地再现原文语言风格的表达形式。在句式安排上，译文以简单句和并列句为主，同时频繁运用了状语插入语、独立主格结构、方式状语、后置定语等变化多样的句子成分，这些成分多为分词短语，从而有助于表现原文绚丽的富于动态的行文风格。