雅思作文提纲18篇(转)
一、跳槽的原因及解决办法
1.相关词汇：Fierce competition heavy pressure job-hopping is looked upon to move upward quickly, keep skill fresh and up to date acclimatize themselves to the rapidly changing society
2.原因：（1）社会压力大，人们的竞争意识增强，不断改变以适应社会的变化（2）处于个人发展的需要，寻求升职，更新知识（3）金钱的诱惑，不在乎在哪儿工作，做什么职业，只要挣钱多（4）家庭原因，spouse工作地点改变或孩子去其他地方上学
3.解决方法：（1）要理性看待，一般来说，stability equals success （2）chronic job-hopper将被questioned integrity and loyalty ,not reliable （3）政府和mass media 应该鼓励人们扎根一个地方，扎扎实实干事业，并且尽可能提高welfare,改善城市和community的环境，留住人才（4）公司应该提高工资待遇，给employee 创造一个良好的工作环境，在保证企业利润的同时要考虑员工个人发展，增加培训，扩充员工的知识
二、大学是否应该根据就业教授学生知识，大学的主要功能是什么
平衡写：1. 认为应该提供实际知识的：（1）大学生毕业就要找工作，因此要培养学生掌握future job的技能（2）有人甚至声称理论没用，不是每个大学生都要做科学家
2. 反对方（1）It will definitely be shortsighted to…目光短浅理论知识非常重要，理论指导实践，大学的职责不仅是教会学生一门技术，更重要的是教授一种方法（2）不学理论只学实际知识，会使学生变成utilitarian, narrow-minded, lack of imagination，如果学生要学的只是生存的技能，那就去vocational school
3. 总之，我认为大学的功能是versatile的，促进学生all-around development,培养学生具有creative mind in some special field,而不只是教授该领域的实际知识，可以通过一些part-time job来获得。
三、个人不能对环境保护做不了什么，同意不同意
This is just an excuse for the ignorance of environmental protection 1. 分析环境恶化原因是缺乏环保意识 2. 给出解决办法
四、维持博物馆是否是浪费金钱？
1. 政府应该spend a lot of money to enrich the collection of museums to cater for different tastes or needs of different people.有的人认为是浪费钱，我认为是很有必要的。
2.博物馆很重要（博物馆的作用）（1）illuminate the culture, history and arts of the world. 比如，世界上最大的British Museum provide visitors with all-round knowledge about the world culture and arts , collections in it trace the development of civilization throughout the history of mankind. Definitely a heartquake! （2）shoulder the responsibility to preserve and carry forward a country’s traditional culture. （2）serve as a significant mean of adolescent education, benefit both the present and future generation. 教育学生什么是美，purify their heart，也可以作为第二课堂，提供教学参考
3.不是浪费金钱（1）这种观点是shortsighted，只是从个人的利益出发，政府应
该站在一个更高的角度去看问题。对国家的经济和人民生活是有很大促进作用的（2）不同于其他产业，不能让其自生自灭，否则可能很难生存（3）花的钱多，个人没有能力支付。
五、考试
1. Used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fail in a subject
2. 不能evaluate one’s true ability.只是测试memory or the skill of working rapidly under pressure. 高分does not mean possessing creativity in dealing various problems
3. Encourage bad study habits, emphasis on memorizing 考试内容rather than to think。考试前非常用功，但是考试后forget all the information
4. lower the standards of teaching, deprive teachers of freedom. Teacher are judge by the examination results of students, 老师只顾教了考试技巧。
5. 考试是可以作为评判学生的一个依据，但是不能是唯一evaluation.
六、科技（电话，电脑）的利与弊
1. On the positive side, (1) make life faster, easier and safer (2) the world is becoming smaller and closer, trains cars plains make possible to travel to distant places (3)modern communication tools,使人们更好的交流，与任何地方的人交流，特别使促进了business的发展（4）longer life expectancy由于progress of medical science (5)电影电视made life enjoyable and colorful (6)计算机和Internet get information easier, make friends, business, tele-education
2. On the negative side, (1)机器的使用造成unemployment（2）电话和互联网的使用alienate people from their friends 因为lack adequate face-to-face communication. （3）Children 缺乏essential interpersonal skills.Those who indulge in … often feel isolated and being cut off from the outside world, they tend to be more introverted, self-centered and with drawn.
七、彻底禁止吸烟
1. 从经济方面，contribute much to government revenue,如果baned ,则会导致unemployment
2. 从权利方面，Smoking just a hobby and amusement, 人们有权选择自己的lifestyle
3. 从健康方面，必须承认抽闲是detrimental to health,但是the harm is exaggerated.如果控制每天的吸烟量，不会对健康造成devastating problem. 而且还有relieve stress 和calm down.历史上有一些伟人吸烟，毛泽东，邓小平，他们仍然enjoy long life expectancy.
八、老年人问题
1.take care by children 和in nursing homes 各有优缺点
2.在家的话，老人可以享受与家人交流的机会，这样他们不会孤独，而且还可以照顾小孩，而且他们的经验对人们的事业和家庭生活都有帮助。但是由于老人经常会出现健康问题，因此需要花很多时间照料，影响人们的工作。
3. 在nursing home的话，可以有更多机会与their peers相处，common language and interest,而且现在的条件越来越好，得到专业的照顾及医疗服务，还有proper diet
对他们的健康有利。而且让小孩有充分的时间工作，追求自己的事业。但是缺少与家人的交流，会使他们感到lonely，出现一些psychological problem而且如果将所有老人都放到rest home,将给政府增加财政负担。
4. As neither the two solutions is effective enough to solve the problem of …, I fav or the combination of the two.
九、如何对待罪犯
1.criminals 应该be locked up in prison(jails).
2. can ensure a safe and comfortable living environment for law-abiding citizens. Thieves ,robbers, rapists and murders are dangerous, pose potential threat to the society
3. 放到监狱教育是一个很好的方式，让他们知道侵犯其他人的权利是要付出代价的，这样就会减少他们再次犯罪的可能性
4.不但是punish criminals but also deters the potential criminals. 有些有犯罪倾向的人由于害怕被处罚，可能会放弃commit crime.
5.应该放到监狱。Just as the old saying goes, mercy to the criminal may be cruelty to the people.
十、古迹是否应该保留
1. Historic building is useful for studies. 每个阶段都有不同的建筑，反映当时的文化，研究他们可以理解evolution of society and culture. 社会发展是continuously 的，the later generation bases on and inherits from the former.因此,获取这些是非常必要的。
2.Bring advantages of tourism.很多外国人和本国人都对古代文化很感兴趣，因此保留古迹可以吸引很多游客，bring much benefit to the country. 如果都是高楼大厦的话，在自己的城市也可以看到，谁还去旅游。
3. 古代建筑中也有一些我们值得学习的技术，不是所有技术都传下来了，有些建筑的奥秘现在人们还不是完全清楚。
十一、动物保护（动物实验）
1. 共同生活在一个地球上，应该保护动物，maltreatment to animals is barbaric and uncivilized practice. 但是说动物濒临灭绝是exaggerated，禁止动物实验更是irrational
2. Select the superior and eliminate the inferior, the survival of the fittest 是一个natural rule can not be violated，有些specifies缺乏生存技能，就应该被淘汰，如果人们的过渡干预反而会造成坏的作用对ecological system.当然，如果是因为人类破坏了其habitat而导致的endanger,另当别论。
3. 动物实验是indispensable for medical research, all of which 是为人类造福，没有人不希望在全球范围内消灭AIDS，而这一切需要大量的生物实验来完成。而且目前还没有有效的alternative methods,计算机还不足以仿真整个生物实验，或许以后有替代方法了，就可以取消动物实验。目前能做的只能是减小痛苦，relieve pain.
4. 有人说吃动物的肉很残忍，让大家都做vegetarian, 在我看来很可笑，动物有生命，植物就没有生命了？这么说人类就该饿死starve to death 。因此，只要不
是虐待动物，将他们作为食物和衣服is not blameworthy.
5. 因此我不赞成…
十二、青少年犯罪与Drug abuse
1.原因：（1）电视中的暴力与色情（2）家庭原因：Increasing divorce rate, Brought up in a sole-parent family, 缺少父母的关爱,psychological problem, feel disoriented. （3）学校原因：schools and society should be responsible在学校学习压力大，就业压力大（4）自身原因：不成熟，sequacious，lack of self-control an self-discipline, can not resist the temptation of drugs and fall victims to drug dealers.
2. 解决方法：（1）政府应该strict censorship should be imposed on 媒体中的不健康内容（2）家长应该多关心（3）政府和学校应该多教育，不能只顾academic performance
十三、学生评价老师
1. Drawbacks: （1）学生还不够成熟，他们往往从自身的经验和利益出发来评价老师，因此unable to evaluate teachers’ performance in a sound way。可能会出现要求严格的老师不受欢迎的情况。（2）学生评价老师也会对老师产生不好的影响，老师为了cater for the needs of children and get a high evaluation, 从而放松对学生的要求，而且对教学内容和教学效果也会有影响
2. Advantages: （1）对学生来说，评价老师有利于培养学生think independently. 应该鼓励学生challenge 老师，这样他们不但学到知识，而且具有innovative思维，敢于超越老师。（2）对老师来说，获得feedback 也是提高自己教学能力和教学效果的有效途径，也有利于培养老师的竞争意识，不断学习，不断完善自己来满足学生的学习要求。（3）学生交了学费，就是customer,老师提供教学服务，从这点上说，学生也有权评价老师。
十四、明星拿高薪
1. 承认明星给人们带来pleasures,他们提供的娱乐使人们在工作之余放松，有一个健康的lifestyle.但是they are definitely overpaid.
2. Wealth should be allocated according to the contribution to the society. 与明星相比，很多ordinary people在医学，教育和科研领域工作的人，对社会的贡献更大，但是他们的薪水要低很多。获得Nobel prize的科学家甚至都没有明星拿的多，这是inequitable。
3. 虽然从事体育娱乐的明星也需要有skills and talents,但是其他’ordinary’ professions也require special skills，而且很多职业years of education and special training.这样的收入不公使得人们are doubtful of接受教育的作用，这对培养下一代是很不利的，他们可能会give up school study and pursue to get money much easier like the sports star.
4. Things should be done to make salaries fairer. Government should impose heavy taxes upon 明星who earn excessively high salaries, greater amount of money should be given to 贡献更大的公民who deserver the earning .
十五、在公共场合（超市）安装监视器
1. 安装监视器的优点：利用监视器可以帮助警察catch criminals, thus reducing
crime. a camera is more effective than security guards. 警察和保安不可能全天24小时工作，而camera will not feel tired.而且它更objective, sometimes our eyes might deceive us, while a machine can exactly record what happens, it can prevent much unnecessary embarrassment. Frighten off the criminals and reduce potential crime.
2. 缺点：Critiques about installation of surveillance typically look at the infringement of people’s privacy. Being photographed and reco rded by the camera,很多人feel uncomfortable and no privacy.特别是女性，有些人可能会将camera获得的资料用于illegal use.
3. 尽管有缺点，但是为了public safety ，监视器是有必要的。但是应该尽可能balance the need for security with respect for individual’s privacy and freedom.
十六、孩子和大人谁学的快
1.孩子学的快：比较单纯，在学校的环境中容易学习，语言，新事物（游戏，网络）
2.大人学的快，有方法和经验，而且具有一定的知识积累，所以在相关领域学的很快，但是busy with family and work ,可能没有足够的时间学习
3. can not generalize about children or adults being better learners. It depends on the situation and motivation of a individual and the level of enthusiasm he or she has for learning.
十七、是否应该根据不同的智力对孩子分别教育
1. 有人认为gifted children think different from common children ,他们应该分别进行教育.If all children are grouped together regardless of intellectual ability, teacher will be caught in dilemma that 将会出现，聪明学生觉得too slow not satisfy ,feel boring to the course, 而有一些学生can not catch up with the progress, 也会感到frustrated.
2. 但是我认为，是非常不合理的：（1）无法确定哪个孩子智力高，用IQ test 以及考试成绩来判定is stupid. （2）to separate children according to their individual competence can hurt their feelings, which goes against their personality development.学习成绩好的学生are instilled(逐渐灌输) with a sense of superiority while 成绩不好的学生感觉很失败。
3. 如果将学生放在一起教育的话，这种氛围更有利与孩子的成长，鼓励好的帮助差的，差的学习好的。至于老师上课内容的把握，适合大部分学生就行，特别优秀的和特别茶的都可以通过自学和请教老师获得需要的知识。
十八、电脑（互联网）是否会取代老师（学校），在哪些方面老师重要，哪些方面电脑重要
1. 先承认电脑教学的好处（1）study in any convenient time and location at a personal speed and intensity （2）提供的信息量大
2. 不可能替换，因为其缺点1：little social contact, lack of interactivity, 在学习中遇到困难得不到老师的指导
3. 不可替换
2：学生不成熟，控制不了自己电脑的好处：CAI(Computer Aided Introduction) multimedia technology 可以用于自动化考试系统online test system 教师：现代教
育技术受制于学习软件，好的学习软件需要老师的参与开发教学生如何学习，分析问题，解决问题在智力教育方面，计算机可能部分的替代或者辅助老师，但是道德教育，价值观的培养离不开老师和学校。
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Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development. Others thought that they are dangerous and have negative effects on the society. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the robots. The pros and cons of technology development have long attracted considerable public attention for they are closely connected with human life. Some people argue that robotic technology can be very harmful and has the potential to destroy social stability. However, sound and attractive as their arguments may seem, I am still convince that there are more advantages than disadvantages of robots. With the assistance of robots, one can enjoy a more convenient life thus will have more time to accompany his family. For example, if robots can help mothers with gardening and laundry, they will have more time to spend with their kids, which is essential for the mental and physical development of children as well as the harmoness of the family. Healthy family relationship will undoubtly result in a better society eventually, then all of us should thank for the robot. Moreover, the significance of robots is also because they are important supplement or substitution of human labor. For some dangerous job, such as deep well mining and electric work, using robots instead of human will improve the safety rate and efficiency substancially without causing any injury. People who relase from the high pressure of dangerous work can enjoy a better life. However, it is also true to some extent that robots can influent the society in a negative way. For example, crime may become easier and more frequently with the help of high technology; and the substitution of human labor may result in the increasing of unemployment and extend to the decline of economy. However, these problems can be solved by education. A proper education means that people will obtain more useful skills and knowledge. It also means that they will become more reliable people who can take responsibility for the society, and these purpose, excitingly, can be achieved in an earlier day with the help of robots. To sum up, robots can help human enjoy a more convenient and safer life. They may have negative effects but we can always fix the problems by education. 总点评：
雅思写作常用连接词2
在雅思写作的四大评分标准当中，连贯性与衔接性是其中的一项评分标准，连贯性与衔接性其中一方面就是用连接手段（即连接词）来实现的。连接词本身是非常繁琐的知识，在教授连接词时也会遇到很多困难，那么学连接词首先把连接词词性掌握并掌握各词性的用法，学连接词就简便得多。朗阁海外考试研究中心分析认为，连接词大体可分为四种词性：连词，副词，介词和短语，它们各自的用法又不一样。 连词 如but, and,后接句子，连接并列句时前面逗号可有可无。当然连词也可放句首，这一点在考官范文里有很多体现。 例：In the past, populations were partly regulated by frequent war and widespread disease, but in recent years the effects of those factors have been diminished. (并列句中的连词) 段落开始：But how should it be achieved ( 连词放句首) 介词 如before, despite：后接名词或动名词 例：Before talking about the essential role of death penalty, you have to think about the meaning, and the purpose, of any kind of punishment. 副词 副词连接并列句，前面用句号或分号，后面用逗号（当然，如果副词前用句号，那就是另起一句了，不称之为并列句） 例：In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven. However, because it is more likely now that both parents work, there is little opportunities for children to stay in their own home up to that age.( 副词另起一句) The crime rate is increasingly high; therefore, the government needs to enforce more laws to curb this situation. ( 副词在并列句中) 短语 如on the contrary, in addition：用法和副词用法完全一样 例：They feel this is one area of life where they have the right to make decisions for themselves. For that reason, it would seem that the best approach would be work by persuasion rather than compulsion. The government plays a crucial role in scientific research; on the other hand, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research. ( 短语在并列句中) 掌握连接词的四大词性及用法以后，连接词的教学和运用就容易展开。我们可以参看考官范文，看看各类关系的时候考官如何使用连接词，使文章凸显出来。 因果关系 根据词性及用法可归结于: because / since/ as / for, so (连词), because of/ due to / owing to/ as a result of (介词) for that reason/as a result/ therefore/ accordingly (短语和副词) 例：I think the amount of waste produced is also as a result of our tendency to use sth once and throw it away. （可代替词汇because of/ due to / owing to）
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Foreign languages have increasingly gained popularity among students these years, given that the world is shrinking and each country now has a more frequent contact with the outside world. Many people[c1]argue that children should begin learning a foreign language at elementary school, instead of waiting until [c2] they enter secondary school. There are several reasons for this. Firstly, despite the fact that parents do not want to put too much pressure on their children, they also do not want them to lose at the starting line. This means, if the kids start to learn a foreign language early, their parents are relieved from the thought that their kids will have to catch up later on, which is true to some extent. On the other hand, it is scientifically proved that children tend to learn a language faster before the age of 12. As far as I know, my friends who started to learn English when they were six or seven now have a much more satisfactory English level than those who started at12 or 13. So it is wise to have foreign language course in primary school curriculum. Additionally, learning a foreign language at an earlier age can lay children a solid foundation for future studying.Rather than just learning a language itself, children learn a lot more about the learning methods. As a result, when they enter secondary school, they can explore more languages and enrich their knowledge by extensive readings.
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雅思大作文批改范例4
Some people think government should pay for public libraries in every town, while others think itis a waste of money because people can access information from the internet. Discuss both viewsand give your own opinion. It is argued that government should invest more money in public libraries; the other people believe that we can search the information from the internet, so government should not cost money in public libraries. I agree with this idea. Surfing on the internet is the fashion way to search information in modern life, there are a lot of people use computer or mobile phone to find some information on the internet. It is because people believe that internet is the most convenient platform to find the key. People can get all the information they want effectively, rather than go to the library cost a large amount of time to read book. On the other handthe books in libraries are though many times of check and reserve, that can ensure the authority of every book. So some people would like to go to library to read the book and find the truth. Especially in medical book, if doctor find some information is wrong, it will affect the patient who was saved by the doctor. Considering the
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雅思6.5分 小作文范文参考
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2016.12.17雅思真题大作文7分范文
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