改错专练一

It is known to us all that we each has a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into my primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of diseases, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are bad needed at home and abroad. My dream is to become a successful doct or, helping to save people’s lives.

Although to be a good doctor is very difficult, I will do whatever I can keep everyone health. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I’ll concentrate more to studies. After all, only by work hard can one succeed.

二

Do you often talk with your parents? A recently survey shows that nearly half of the high school students doesn’t like to talk with their parents. 43.3% of them have trouble communicate with their parents. What is bad, 82.8% of them don’t want to share their secrets their parents. Actually, it is important for us to communicate with our parents though they are the dearest people in our life, who cared for us all the time. By letting them know that what we think, we can get practical advice from them, which can help us to deal with many problem in life.

In this way, we can feel more confident about us and live happily.

三

Many students are now facing with problems like deciding whether to focus on science or art. Not taking the children's interest or preferences in account, some parents force their children to make the choice as their will, that troubles many students.

Throughout our lives we have to make much choices. As students, we should talk to our parents or teachers especial on life-changing decisions. But when it came down to it, we're the ones who must live with their choices. On the other hand, parents should try to help their children make the best possibledecisions, instead forcing them to do something that against their will.

It depends on students themselves whether they'll be science students and arts students. Just let theirhearts show them the way.

四

I just came back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the students from different country to visit the UK from Feb. 16 to 28. We paid a visit to a good many of places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in Britain was that I make a lot of friends there.

When Louis Braille was a very small boy, one day, while played, he picked up a small tool of a sharp point, Louis fell, the point entered into his eye, and later he became blind. He wanted such much to read books for the blind that at last he invented a way for the blind read and write. People didn’t believe him first. One day a blind girl was playing piano. People thanked her of playing so well. She said it was Louis Braille who made that possible for her to learn music.

六

Yesterday morning，I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital．The other day when he was going to cross a street，he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green．But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards them．It was too late for Allee to escape．He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away．He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation．When I went to see him，he was out of dangers but still looked pale．I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible．

七

Sorry to hear that you were ill. What’s worse, the College Entrance Examination is approaching, I want to remind you not to put too much pressures on yourself.

Although it is vital to learn hard, keeping healthy should not be ignored, for it may be affect your study. Thus, have a good rest whenever possibly and eat more fruits and vegetables. If not, you can not only become stronger, but also learn effectively. Beside, just study as usual. When read, keep silent and concentrate on which you are reading. I think it is in this way you can get the most information in a limited time.

Looking forward to your recovery soon.

八

Dear schoolmates，

In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment, and China Daily is planning to hold an interest knowledge contest. A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31 st. Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student. The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline.

Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time.

St udents’Union

答案

一. 1.has->have 2. 去掉into 3.go->going 4.kind->kinds 5.bad->badly 6.keep前加to

7.health-> healthy 8.me-> myself 9.to->on 10.work->working

二. 1.recently-recent 2.doesn’t-don’t https://www.360docs.net/doc/de3344925.html,municate->communicating 4.bad->worse 5. secrets后加with 6.though- because/as/since 7.cared- care 8. 去掉that 9. problem- problems 10. us-ourselves

三. 1.facing-faced或去掉with 2.in-into 3.that- which 4.much- many 5.especial- especially 6.came-comes 7.their- our 8.instead后加of 9.去掉that或在that后加is

10.and- or

四 1.luckily-lucky 2.country- countries 3.去掉of or- and 4.where- which 5.much-many

6.pity前加a

7.they- we

8.excited-exciting

9.make- made

五 Key：1．正确。2．将played改为playing。while playing相当于while he was playing。3．将Of改为with。with相当于having。4．去掉into。enter为及物动词。9．将such改为so。so接形容词或副词，后文that是个信息词，可判断是so...that...句式。6．在read之前加to。为forsb．to do...句式。7．在first之前加at。at first起初。8．在plano前加the。通常在表示乐器的词前加定冠词。9．把of改为for。thank sb. for为某事感谢某人。10．将that改为it。此处it做形式宾语。

六. 1.surprising- surprised 2.has- had 3.such-so 4.去掉to 5.while-when 6.them- him

7.or - and 8.operation前加an 9.dangers- danger 10.sincere- sincerely

七. 1.were-are 2. I前加so 3.pressures- pressure 4. 去掉be 5.possibly- possible 6.not- so 7.Beside- Besides 8.read-reading 9.which-what 10.you前加that

八．1.attaching 改为attach 2. China Daily前and去掉 3.interestingly 改为interesting 4. A改为The 5.end改为ends 6. that 改为which 7.student改为students 8. must后加be 9.after 改为before 10. 最后一句中them改为it