2013年6月英语四级作文真题答案解析

第一套

2013年6月英语四级作文考察的是图画作文。对于图画作文，基本可以认为是我们小学时练习的“看图说话”。虽然题目不会给出提纲，但是基本的写作思路是固定的：描述图片、阐明观点、给出建议。

第一段重点是一定要描述图画内容，这点在题干中也有强调(with a brief description of the picture)。对图画内容的描述可以饮用图画中人物的对话。简要描述即可，不用发散或挖掘。也就意味着，事实上你若看不懂图画中的“核废物”之，其实没关系，照抄就好。

第二段阐明观点，而观点在题干中事实上给得很清楚：the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. 这进一步说明仔细审清题干比看懂图画中的对话更重要。阐明观点之后的思路与一般的六级提纲型写作一致，如我们一般在课上所提的，可以先举例说明现象、然后再探讨导致现象的原因以及该现象可能导致的影响等;还可结合数字、研究、名言等进行论证。

末段除了总结观点外，一般还可以提出建议。这段的写法无论是图画、图表还是提纲写作、甚至格言谚语型写作，都差别不大。

继之前六级考察图画作文后，这次四级也考察了图画作文。这说明四六级的出题思路不再拘泥于传统的提纲写作，开始进行多种变化。我们也要对相应的考法做好准备。但无论哪种考法，最核心的仍然是：仔细审题、清晰思路和不要犯错。四六级一贯会在写作题干中包含重要信息甚至观点，因此审题必不可少;各种考法的文章展开方式、各段写法有类似之处，我们要学会融会贯通;以及文章只要没有犯语言错误，即便遣词造句不那么漂亮，分数也不会低。

下面是2013年6月英语四级作文范文供大家参考。

Talking in the cartoon are two man, who are a boy and his father. The boy is worried

about the expectable impacts the disposal of the nuclear waste may cause, while his father is telling him that what matters now should be emptying the dustbin in front of them.

It is the profound implication beneath the surface of this simple and sarcastic drawing that ought to be taken into account: one who can cope with small tasks first can then undertake something big. Taking a look around, we can easily find some students dreaming of their brilliant future but unwilling to attend classes or to do homework, some netizens worried about the fate of our nation but refusing to better themselves first, some officials claiming their determinations in making our society a better place but reluctant to give up parts of their own interests. Such phenomena collectively reflect the fact that some modern citizens, especially a number of young people, lack the spirit of "think big, down to earth". This can be chiefly due to the fact that these people are so lazy and blind that they are only in want of a fruitful outcome but never make any efforts. As a famous saying goes, you reap what you sow. Those who wants to fly but forget the power of the gravity will be sure to fall down on the ground and hurt badly as a result.

According, I suppose it is imperative for us young people to understand that all that matters to us now should be to better ourselves. Not only are we supposed to learn knowledge and to enhance our abilities, we also need to take seriously the assignments confronting us. I believe only after each of us manages to strengthen himself or herself will

the problems worrying us now be settled in the days to come.

范文二

In this picture, we can tell that the son is talking to his father about his concern about the nuclear waste. His father told him that if he can empty the dustbin first, he can do anything. This is an easy but very important story, telling us that we have to focus on things around our daily life first, and then the things great enough in the world.

In our daily life, it is very common to find some people that talk about their great minds on topics that far away from their lives. However, they provide little concern on staffs that around their own daily lives. These people are usually not very successful because their minds are beyond their grasp. To this end, students who want to be a better man, have to know that one can become greater and greater if they can complete things around their daily life well one by one. They may stand on the top of the mountain in the society finally.

第二套

The importance of learning basic skills

What we can see from the cartoon is that the teacher is instructing the students some basic mathematic skills. However, some students are wondering that if it will be outdated in the future. The picture implicitly raises the question of the importance of the fundamental skills us students learn in our classes.

It is worth mentioning that those seemingly basic and elementary skills we learned in school actually play a significantly indispensable role in our future works. The pervasive undervaluation on elementary skills that we find among current students and even some teachers can largely be attributed to their lack of vision of future and thorough understanding on the knowledge. After all, it’s an obvious truth that we could not build a magnificent mansion without solid foundations; we could not enjoy a long travel unless we make a solid start at first. Those basic skills may look simple to learn, but without them it will not be simple at all to achieve further goals.

To sum up, we should think highly of the importance of basic and fundamental skills that guarantee our wonderful and brilliant future. Furthermore, we should make full use of those elementary skills, consciously applying them in our works and life. Basic skill will never be outdated.

第三套

The importance of reading literature

As is humorously portrayed in the cartoon, a teacher is handing a classic literature book to a student, asking the student to “just read it as if you are reading a long text message.” Obviously, the symbolical meaning of this picture is to show us the importance of reading literature.

It should be generally acknowledged that classic literature plays a significant role not only in preserving the essence of great minds but also in enhancing the quality of one’s life. To begin with, literature as the collection of great minds will help us enormously broaden our horizons, experiencing things we won’t have the chance to do as well as lives we won’t be able to enjoy. What is more, those fine stories selected and conveyed by the great author, although happened in the past, still carry some useful information and implication for our daily lives. In addition, the beautiful words and sentences flowing in the pages of excellent literature can greatly ease our tiredness, making us feel easy and quiet.

Therefore, we ought to fully realize the importance of reading literature. Just as the teacher in the picture puts, reading literature should be as easy and common as reading text messages. Facing the coming challenges in the days ahead, we need to equip us with not only science but also literature by which we can beautify our life and the world.

篇一：提高大学生的心理健康How to Improve Student’s Mental Health

More and more people has begun to consider their mental health that plays an important role in our daily life. Nowadays ,many students suffer from mental illness ,which seriously influence on their study and daily life.

越来越多的人开始担心在日常生活中起着重要作用的心理健康。如今，许多学生都有严重影响他们学习和生活的心理问题。

Consequently, schools should take effect measures to solve this problem. The mental health consul department should be built in school to help those students who suffer from mental illness. In this way, those who are subjected to the mental illness can get rid of the unhealthy shadow and build up their confident. On the one hand, school can provide a chance for students to show their tension. On the other hand, president and teachers should try their best to help those students. In addition, giving more concentration on their physical health would help them to rebuild their mental health.

因此，学校应采取有效的措施来解决这个问题。学校应建立心理健康咨询室来帮助那些患有心理问题的学生。这样，那些正遭受心理疾病的学生可以从不健康的阴影中解脱，建立信心。另一方面，学校可以为学生提供机会来展示他们的紧张。另一方面，校长和教师应尽力帮助那些学生。此外，对他们的身体健康提供更多的关注会帮助他们重建良好的心理健康。

From what has been mentioned above, as students, we should try our best to communicate with our, friends, parents or teachers. Last but not the least; we should not hesitate to go to the mental health consult room for help when we have trouble in mental illness. Only in this way, can we reduce our mental illness, and we will become a strong and confident person in the end.

综上所述，作为学生，我们应该尽我们最大的努力与我们的朋友，父母或老师交流。最后但并非最不重要的；在我们有心理问题的时候，我们应该毫不犹豫地去心理健康咨询室求助。只有这样，我们才可以减少心理疾病，最终成为一个坚强自信的人。

篇二：给大学生开设心理课Open a Psychological Lesson to College Students

The general age of college students are between 18 to 25 year. From the psych ological point of view, it’s in the medium of youth. Some people say that the college students are adults that they handle well with psychological problems. However, the rest argue that college students are not so mature when faced with psychological problems. I agree to the latter and i think it’s necessary to open a psychological lesson to the college students because of the following reasons.

大学生的一般年龄是在18到25之间。从心理的角度来讲，这是青年中期。有的人说大

学生是成年人了，能够很好地处理心理问题。然而，剩下的人认为大学生面对心理问题的时候没有那么成熟。我同意后者的观点，我认为向大学生开设心理课是必要的。原因如下。

Firstly, in recent years, there are more and more college students drop out from school due to psychological problems. Growing suicides, homicides and other unusual serious incidents are reported from time to time. Now, the social attention to college students’ mental health has reached to climax. Secondly, college students are in a perplexed and contradictory age. On the one hand, they have to study in school to enrich themselves and to get a diploma. On the other hand, they think they are mature to live an independent life, but most of them still depend on their parents. In addition, study challenge, employment pressure and life stress could produce psychological problems.

首先，近几年，越来越多的大学生由于心理问题而辍学。越多自杀，谋杀以及其他不正常的严重事故时不时有报道。如今，对大学生心理健康的关注已经达到了高潮。其次，大学生处于一个困惑和矛盾的年龄。一方面，他们认为自己已经成熟了，能够独立生活，但是大部分仍然依靠父母。而且，学习压力，就业压力和生活压力也会产生心理问题。

To sum up, college students are adults but they are still faced with many pressures causing psychological problems that they can not deal with. Therefore, it’s very ne cessary to open a psychological lesson to college students, helping them get through this period smoothly.

总之，大学生是成年人，但是他们仍然面临很多他们不能解决的引起心理问题的压力。因此，向大学生开设心理课程是有必要的，能够帮助他们顺利度过这一时期。

篇三：How to Improve Students' Mental Health

Students' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed，it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains.

Obviously，it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with，schools，such as colleges or universities，can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. What's more，some are physically strong，but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides，specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis，experts can deal with it in a professional way，which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others.

From the factors mentioned above，we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example，if you have pains or puzzles in mind，finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly，there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue.

How to improve student's mental health

1、大学生的心理健康十分重要

2、因此，学校可以......

3、我们自己应当......

In modern society, people are destined to cope with a lot of pressure, from either outer world or inner will. The cases of suicide in campus in recent years fully reveal the importance of mental health.

As a consequence, it is imperative for the colleges and universities to take effective actions. In the first place, the authorities concerned should enhance the awareness of college students that mental fitness is of utmost significance to them. It is true that physical factors affect one’s health conditions a great deal, but at the same time, we should not neglect the mental factors. In the second place, the universities should frequently enlighten the juvenile to keep optimistic in their daily life.

Hence, it is vital for us to keep mental health under whatsoever circumstances. All of us have experienced failures. However, some with self-confidence may draw lessons from failure and achieve success, while others are desperately frustrated. When most people are aware of the significance of physical health, we must also remind them of the value of mental health.

Students' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains.

Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. What's more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others. (学校)

From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue.(我们)