初三作文之初三英语一模作文范文

初三英语一模作文范文

【篇一：范文汇总-2015年初三一模-八佰伴初小英语】 2015年上海初三一模试卷英语作文范文汇总

--八佰伴

宝山区2014-2015学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷

初三英语

recently there has been a discussion about the topic “water is precious” in your class.

please write at host 60 words about the topic water is precious to express your point of

view,(请以“水是珍贵的”写一篇至少60词的作文，标点符号不占格） (你的作文内容须包含以下几点)

1）why is water very important in our life?

2）what are the causes of the water shortage?

3）how can we protect our precious water resources?

范文（1）

water is precious

undoubtedly , no man can live without water. when we begin

the new day, we need water to drink, wash things, work.

farmers need water to make the crop grow healthily. the

factory needs water to process the production. animals need water to live their lives.

however, polluting and wasting make precious water less and less. some immediate actions must be taken to protect water resources. as students, we should have the sense of saving water. saving a little day by day, it would make a big influence on protecting water. given all of its importance and urgency,

we must spare no effort to do what i have suggested you.

范文（2）

water is precious

water is the birthplace of life and it plays an indispensable

part in our daily life，so water is very vital for us human. although the ocean covers 71% of the surface of the

earth ,there are many people who can’t get access to water in the world. but how can this be?

above all, the water shortage results from the huge number of people on the world who take it for granted using the water immoderately. another reason for water scarcity is water pollution caused by farming and chemistry industry.

facing these two main reasons, we are supposed to save

water in our daily life and reuse it. only in this way can we protect our precious water resources.

崇明县2014-2015学年度第一学期教学质量调研测试卷

初三英语

write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic changes in my school.(以“学校发生的变化”

为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)

use the fallowing points as a reference(以下提示仅供参考)

-----what changes have taken place in your school?

-----what do you think of these changes?

(注意:文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)

范文（1）

with the rapid development of society and economy, a great number of changes have taken place in my school in the past few years. its my honor to tell you the changes of my school.

on one hand, my school is much bigger than before. when you walk around my school, you will see several new

teaching buildings and modern labs surrounded by various beautiful flowers and trees. in addition, the playground has been rebuilt into a larger one for students to play games. after class, students can play and relax themselves there.

on the other hand, after realizing the importance of knowledge, students also have made up their minds to study harder than before.

generally speaking, my school is becoming more beautiful, more modern and much better. all teachers as well as students are very pleased with these changes.

范文（2）

when it comes to the changes，i can’t help thinking of my school. it used to be simple and rude. however, currently, great changes have taken place.

walking along the road in my school, you can see the green grass ,enjoy the beautiful flowers and breathe the fresh air. move forward, your eyes will be caught by the splendid library, which is the remarkable building of my school. on your left hand, there is a my class building which is about two times as tall as the older one, reaching 20meters.opposed to the class building, there lies the playground, where i can have my pe class and do exercise in my spare time.

do you want know more about the changes in my school, come and have a look in person.

闵行区2014-2015学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷

初三英语

write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “learning to be polite ”. (以“学会礼貌”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：某英语报社正在举办“学会礼貌”的征文活动。请你以“学会礼貌”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，谈谈你对礼貌的理解；请列举

至少三个不礼貌的行为，并谈谈怎样才能成为有礼貌的人。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

the following phrases are for reference only. (以下短语仅供参考) laugh at make noise smoke in public

give a seat to… keep quiet be friendly (helpful…)

范文（1）

as we know, with the development of the society, politeness becomes more and more important.

what is politeness? in my opinion, politeness is a good quality that everyone should have. someone may not know how to be polite. there are some impolite things that we can not do. for example, it is impolite to laught at others, make nosie and smoke in public. we should give a seat to people in need. it is necessary to keep quiet in public area. what is more, being friendly to others is necessary.

奉贤区2014-2015学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷

初三英语

writing (作文): (共20分)

write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信)

假如你是王芳，最近你收到了你好朋友ann的信。她正为她的学习而烦恼。请你根据她的信写一封回信，给她一些建议。（注意：建议不得少于两条）

words and phrasesfor reference （以下短语仅供参考）

improve；i suggest that ...; useful methods; be relaxed;

(注意：1. 开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数 2. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)

范文（1）

dear wang fang,

i’m so worried about my study. i understand what the teacher says, but i forget most of it after class. could you please give me some advice?

yours,

ann

dear ann,

nice to hear from you. i have learned that you’re worrying about your study, but what i want to say is just do your best and never give it up easliy. here are some useful methods i give to you to help you improve your study. firstly, please preview the lessons you’ll learn and take notes while you’re having class,which can help you to strengthen the language points. secondly, if you have some questions, you can ask your teacher or classmates as soon as possible,never leave them till tomorrow. last but not least, always review the lessons regularly and relax yourself in spare time. after all , keeping a energetic mood and a balanced condition is also a good way to help you study efficiently.believe yourself, and you’ll be more and more confident in study.

yours,

wang fang

范文（2）

dear ann,

nice to hear from you.

i am sorry to hear that you have trouble in your lessons. first , i want to tell you that you need not worry much about that..

take it easy. here are some useful advice for you . i think it will improve you situation.

i suggest that you should listen to your teacher carefully in class and take notes. if time is limited, you can use some simple words to help you remember some key points. then after class, you must go over them in time. in my point view, it is a useful method. what is more, you should relax yourself after you finish your homework, as we all know, only we have a good rest, we can work efficiently. so you should make a balance between study and entertainment. i believe you .yours, wang fang

黄浦区2014-2015学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷

初三英语

writing(作文)：（共20分）

write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “i’m not … any more”. (以“我不再……”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

要求：

? 补全作文标题。

? 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

? 范文（1）

how time flies. after three years gains with pains in junior high school, now i’m so proud that i’m not a coward

girl any more.

still i remember the first pe lesson when i stood alone in the playground, not daring to come towards anybody to play with them. i was so coward! that night, mum encouraged me to greet everyone the next day. hard as it was to me, i tried and got warm responses surprisingly! from then on, i always remind myself not to think negatively before i try. like magic, my courage has brought me good friends, third prize on campus speech contest and even a chance to give a speech in shanghai children’s art center!

with the courage, i’m confident to greet the challenge ahead in life

范文（2）

i am not lonely any more

i am not lonely any more after i take part in music club. there is no doubt that it gives me much fun. and i make many friends and they are very friendly to me. not only i learn to how to enjoy myself but also i become outgoing.

the club usually holds some activities. there are all kinds of people to attend. here i can meet many people. they all like music and they can sing well. i like listening to them. the beauty of songs is beyond description. so, as long as you have time, welcome to our club, it cannot be let you down. it is worth coming and attending . i like it.

嘉定区2014-2015学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷

初三英语

writing (20%)

write at least 60 words about the topic “something i should never do”. （以“我不应该做的事情”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

遵纪守法是每个人应尽的责任和义务，作为一名中学生，不应该做违法校纪校规的事情，比如考试作弊、抄袭他人作业、说谎等，请

谈谈你的观点和理由。

phrases for reference（以下短语仅供参考）

obey the school rules cheat in the exams

copy others’ homeworkbe honest

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）

范文（1）

it is widely accepted that a student should obey the school rules. among the rules, the last one i will disobey is to cheat in the exams. to begin with, taking exams makes me learn about the knowledge which i haven’t grasped. so it is the knowledge i hasn’t grasped rather than the grade tha t i should pay attention to. what’s more, cheating in the exams is a dishonest behavior which will disappoint both your parents and your teacher. in conclusion, the only way we can make progress in our study is to work hard instead of cheating in the exam.

金山区2014-2015学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷

初三英语

writing(作文)：（共20分）

write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “one problem /question i met in my english study”. according to the situation given (请根据所给情形，以“我在英语学习中碰到的一个问题”为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文。要求内容切题、语言地道、表达流畅)情境：每个人在自己的英语学习过程中总会碰到这样那样的问题。

你碰到过怎样的问题？你解决了

这个问题吗？如果解决了，你认为你的解决方案怎么样？如果没有

解决，你认为是什么原因？以后会用什么更好的方法？

以下词或词组供参考

can(not), understand, (don’t) know, read…correctly, remember, write, ask

(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不

予评分)

范文（1）

i used to be poor at english. the biggest problem was that i

was afaid of communicate with others in english.i couldn’t understand others correctly, while others didn’t know what i said,either. so i was geting more and more nervous when i met forigeners.

step by step, i feel my english improved very fast. i like

english now and i made many friends from english spoken countries.

静安区2014-2015学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷

初三英语

writing （作文）（共20分）

write at least 60 words about the topic “growing up with good books”. （请以“好书伴我成长”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不

予评分。）

situation for your reference:

nowadays we often talk a lot about reading, especially reading good books. what are good books in your eyes? and what advantages can we get from reading them? please show us

your own understanding and experience of reading good books.

范文（1）

reading has been in my life for many years and has helped me to learnt a lot. when i was five years old, i became interested in reading books. it can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help me to improve myself. i like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books. i can learn a lot of knowledge from books. books can also teach me how to be a good person. books even can solve many problems for me. i will read more good books to improve myself

范文（2） everybody reads books, but not all of them can find enjoyment and pleasure from books. reading books can not only relax me, but bring me happiness as well. very often reading keeps the balance between work and leisure when i face difficult problems. i usually read a book for a while, and try to know a kind of spirit and wisdom from different characters. no doubt it is a good choice to get fun. all in all, i always learn a lot from books. thus, books are a source of my endless happiness.

浦东一模英语作文

94 write at least 60 words about the topic “i get ______from my class life “(以我从班级生活中得到_____”为题，写一篇

【篇二：2014年初三一模英语作文分类及例文赏析】 2014年初三一模英语作文分类及例文赏析

【环保类】

1、杨浦、徐汇：“haze weather in shanghai”

write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “haze weather in shanghai” (以“上海的雾霾天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：近来人们深受雾霾天气的困扰，学习、工作、生活等都受到了不同程度的影响。请简单描述一下雾霾天气给你带来的烦恼或不便，并谈谈你的建议或希望。

the following are for reference(以下词语仅供参考)

outdoor activities, air quality, road safety, mask(口罩), improve, cancel, allow, control, prevent.

2、金山：”a little more fresh air,please”

complete the poster of at least 60 words on the topic “a little more f resh air, please”.

(以“多一点新鲜空气”为题完成一篇不少于60个词的海报，标点符

号不占格。） (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） expressions for reference (以下短语仅

供参考) plant trees, drive cars, walk more, pollute, haze (霾）

3、黄埔：“a heavy smog today”

write at least 60 words with the topic “a heavy smog day” .

（以“大雾霾天”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

提示：去年12月上旬，申城笼罩在茫茫的雾霾（was shrouded in heavy smog）中，陷于重度污染（severe pollution）。人们戴口罩（wear masks）出行，雾霾天给人们的健康带来危害，给生活和工作带来不便（inconvenience）。请你就其中某一天，描述你的经历和感受。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则

不予评分。）

【建议类】

1、静安：“a suggestion to my dear school”

write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “a suggestion to my dear school!” (以“给学校的一个建议！”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则

不予评分。）

questions for reference only(以下问题仅供参考)

what aren’t you satisfied with in your school? your reasons?

what is your suggestion?

would you give your possible solution(s)?

2、嘉定：“how to use red envelope?”

write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信) 假如你是linda，

你收到英国笔友mark的来信，他现在住在北京姑妈家，春节期间他收到一些长辈给的压岁钱，请写一封回信，对有关“如何使用压岁钱”提一些建议。）

3、崇明：“how to communicate with your desk mate?”

write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation.

1.提示：假设你是张翔，你的朋友孙磊上周来信说，他的同桌上课

经常找借口跟他说话，这使他非常苦恼，不知道如何处理这件事。

请你给他写封信，提出一些建议并帮助他。

2.要求：建议不得少于两条。

3.phrases for reference

in trouble; be bad for;talk with; heart to heart; try one’s best; after all; get on well with;

4、宝山：“how to be a good learner?”

write a short passage of at least 60 words on the topic “how to be a good l earner?”. (以“怎样成为一个好的

【推荐信】

长宁、闸北：

suppose you are a fan of “where are we going, dad”. please write a letter to the programme and recommend a place for them to spend a 3-day trip.

提示：近来“爸爸去哪儿”节目轰动了全国。如果你是这个节目的忠实粉丝，请给栏目组写一封推荐信，推荐一个地方适合父亲与孩子

共同度过一个三天两夜的旅行，并请至少给出两个理由。

phrases for reference (以下短语仅供参考)

be located in/on/atfamous for

share…with have interest in

【观点类】

1、普陀：

write a composition in at least 60 words according to the

given situation. (根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60词的短文)

suppose there is an english festival in your school every year. some students think it is helpful, but others don’t think so. what do you think, and why? （假设你们学校每年开展英语文化节活动，有些学生认为活动对自己有帮助，有些则不这么认为，你的

观点是什么？并说明理由）

（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予

评分。）

2、浦东新区：

write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据

所给情景，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

situation: nowadays many students go to school by bike, by car, by underground ... how do you go to school? what do you

think of it? 眼下不少学生骑自行车、乘私家车、乘地铁等方式上学。你是怎么去学校的？你觉得你的方式如何？谈谈你的想法并简述其

理由。

words and patterns for reference（以下单词或词组可供选用）

choice, convenient, save time, stop ... from

（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予

评分。

【其他类】

1、闵行：“a happy memory in my junior high school”

write a passage on “a happy memory in my junior high school” in at least 60 words according to the given situation（以“我初

中时期的一次快乐回忆”为题，谢一篇不少于60词的文章。）提示：初中时期留给我们很多快乐的回忆，你可以结合学习或生活中的某

一个情景或具体事例，例如：一次约会、一次活动等等，谈谈初中

时期曾经留给你的一次快乐的回忆。 phrases for reference（以下

短语仅供参考）：

a spring outinga class meeting a party

take part inplay withbe happy

（注意短文中不得出现任何任命、校名及其相关信息，否则不予评分。）

2、虹口：“when i see an old person fall down in the street,

i ….”

write at least 60 words on the topic “when i see an old person fall down in the street, i ….以《当我看到老人在街上摔倒，我......》为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

reference words (use at least two of them):

a traditional virtue (美德)； in favor of /against; calm; get along with; care for;

(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不

予评分。)

3、奉贤区：“i believe i can _____________”

write at least 60 words about the topic “i believe i can

_____________”.(“以我相信我能____________”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

suggested points:

● what do you believe you can do?

● why do you think you can do that?

● how will you do that?

附：

闵行区范文：

a happy memory in my junior high school

it was an interesting competition that gave me a happy

memory in my junior high school. we were divided into small groups to do puzzle as quickly as possible. in order to be the winner, my partner and i spared no effort to help each other. having the same goal, we cooperated with each other excitedly. she encouraged me to concentrate on the puzzle when i was nervous. we soon completed the puzzle with putting all the colors together. we won the competition! this experience, as well as the warmth my partner gave me, became my happiest and most meaningful memory.

雾霾天气

the continuous haze weather in shanghai has caused a series

of ripple effects. heavy air pollution is taking its toll on shanghais department stores and shopping malls as people reduce their outdoor activities. by contrast, the number of tourists opting for vacations on islands and in forests that promise fresh air away from the suffocating haze is on the rise. following last fridays record air pollution levels, shanghai was shrouded once again in acrid smog on this monday. the air quality index published by the us consulate stood at 442 (hazardous) at 7 am, falling to 185 (unhealthy) by 5 pm.

文中的ripple effects就是“连锁反应”的意思。“ripple”是名词，意

思是“涟漪”。“take ones toll”解释为造成损失，例如：his hard work will eventually take its toll on his health. （他这么辛苦地工作，最终对他身体会造成伤害。）

另外，“air quality index”解释为空气质量指数，缩写为aqi，是定

量描述空气质量状况的指数，其数值越大说明空气污染状况越严重，对人体健康的危害也就越大。

【篇三：2013年中考各区英语一模作文(范文)】

朝阳（感动） i still remember that day. i was taking the final exam when i found i didn’t have my eraser with me. i was so worried thati was deeply moved by what mike did. he is a real

friend. he cares others a lot. i want to learn from him to be the person in need.（109）

通州（环保）

as a student, i care about our environment very much.

i think the most serious problem today is air pollution. both the government and ourselves should take actions to improve it.

firstly, we should drive cars less. cars produce lots of gases and they make the air worse. we can ride a bike or take the bus instead. secondly, we should plant more trees. trees can help to make our air clean. thirdly, we should try to use new energy. coal and oil should be used as little as possible.

fresh air is important to everyone. so it’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment.（104）

海淀（感恩）

there’s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since i was born. with their care, i grow up happily. so i think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.

both of my parents love music. so it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful cd for them. last sunday, i went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. while we were having dinner together, i played the cd. it was beautiful. with great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. i felt very sweet.

i was really proud that i did something for my parents. their smiles were the best encouragement for me. i made up my mind to do things like this more often. （132）

西城（赞美的力量）

praise is like sunlight to our spirit. it gives us confidence and hope. however, this heavenly gift usually shows up unexpectedly.

in junior high, it seemed fashion was never my cup of tea, for i had neither a lovely face nor an attractive figure. i found it boring and even heart-breaking to go shopping.

the time came when we had to dress up for the prom. unwillingly, i joined my friends on the trip to macy’s. unsurely, i tried on a bright violet flowered dress and stepped out of the dressing room. a good-looking lady was standing there. she glanced at me, smiled and said, “i love your dress.” she had no

idea how much her praise meant to me. these magic words touched my heart and i started to love my imperfect appearance.

i appreciated that stranger’s words of praise, which are not often heard. now i keep reminding myself of the power of praise, even strangers, because we never know where it might lead. (166)

东城（压岁钱）

the spring festival is the most important festival in china. giving lucky money to children is a custom. i get lucky money every year. i put most of it in the bank, and spend the rest on some books.

this year, i also got lucky money. with it, i bought some school things for several poor students in ningxia.

for you, i think it’s a good idea to buy a gift with the lucky money for your host family before you leave china. you can also buy some chinese gifts for your parents and friends in england. or, just keep it as good memories.（104）

朝阳二模（生日聚会建议）

hi! tom,

i’m glad to hear from you. yes, i sometimes have the same problem.

i think you’d better go to peter’s birthday party since he is your close friend. you can choose to play other games such as chess if you don’t like playing computer games. you don’t need to worry too much about the science report. you can finish it on sun day. i’m sure you can manage it. but if you don’t go to the party, i’m afraid you may lose the friend.

although it’s true that sometimes people’s needs are different, remember friends can always stand beside you. we must understand and care each other.

i hope what i said can help you.

来北京提的建议

dear tony,

i’m glad to know you are coming to beijing. i can give you some advice about traveling in beijing. beijing is not only a beautiful city but also the capital of china. there are many famous places of in terest, such as the great wall, tian’an men square and so on.

first of all, it’s a good idea to walk up to the great wall because it’s famous in the world. what’s more, the best i can suggest is that you can taste beijing roast duck. it’s so delicious. la st but not least, you’d better go to visit tian’an men square because it is one of the biggest squares in the world. beijing is not only a big city but also an interesting place. everyone in beijing is both friendly and kind.

all in all, follow what i said, i think you will have a perfect holiday.

if you have more questions, please ask me．