高考英语核心突破(作文题型)

考情分析

书面表达，是对考生语法、词汇、句子组织及逻辑表达能力、语言综合应用能力的考察，在高考中占25分，考察体裁与题材都很丰富，且对题材的涉猎更加广泛；就近五年的高考真题来讲，分别考察夏令营课程申请、学校教育、扶贫基金申请、学习方式思考、活动选址等，且题目也多以图片或话题形式呈现。

试题探究

1、思维导图形式先呈现整体框架

2、重难点

高级词汇及短语的恰当应用：

表达内容的清晰与条例性；

句型的丰富性与多样性；

3、不同体裁考点解读（注意相关模板句子、连接词和高级句型、词汇）

Exercise one 图片类

下面的一幅漫画描写了当前社会的教育状况，请结合自己的感受谈谈你对这种状况的看法。你的作文必须包括：

●漫画所反映的社会教育状况。

●你对这种现状的观点和看法。

参考范文：

In the picture, a boy who is bound by a lot of after-school lessons looks very upset. This image indicates a

common phenomenon in a funny way that students today are forced to take too many lessons after school.

As far as I am concerned, taking one or two lessons after school is acceptable and will improve our ability. But overtaking extra lessons really does no good to students.

First of all, after studying hard on weekdays, most students are quite exhausted and need a break at weekends. However, many of them are robbed of the chance to relax themselves. Long-term working may cause them to have difficulty concentrating on their studies and may even affect their daily life.

On the other hand, are those students interested in the after-school lessons or just forced by their parents? If they are not willing to learn, they won’t try their best to obtain the knowledge and skills. It’s a waste of time, and money.

Last but not least, some tutorial centers are not as qualified as expected. They just care about making money but pay little attention to teaching. I’m afraid that students who enroll in the courses won’t learn what they want to learn.

To sum up, taking lessons after school is a way to help students study better, but it shouldn’t be a burden. What really works is not those lessons but your own efforts. (235 words)

Exercise Two应用类

某高中校方在全校征求学生建议。李佳给校长写了封信，建议学校培养学生学习能力，以提高他们在这个信息爆炸的世界上的竞争力。同时建议学校组建学生俱乐部，学生得以展露才华，培养兴趣，获得更多的生存能力。

参考范文

Dear Headmaster,

I am most pleased to learn that our school is seeking students' suggestions on how to make our school life better. I am writing this letter to share with you my suggestions.

First of all. our school should lay more emphasis on cultivating students' learning methods. As the saying goes, teachers should not only pass on knowledge to students but also teach them how to study. In a world of information explosion, if students can he equipped with independent learning skills, no doubt they can have an advantage in this increasingly competitive world.

In addition, students' after school life can never be overlooked. Our school should set up more clubs where students can display their talents and acquire some survival skills such as how to get along with others and how to be a team player. Allowing for more leisure time means that students can devote more time pursuing their interests and hobbies, which may well turn out to be a welcome supplement to their beautiful life later.

Thank you for spending your precious time reading my letter and I hope my suggestions can be of some help. Best wishes, Li Jia

Exercise There 议论类

现在高中学生申请出国的现象非常普遍。人们对此看法不一。请谈谈你对此事的看法。

参考范文：

Nowadays, it is very common for high school students t apply to foreign universities for admission. The phenomenon has aroused heated discussion among students and opinions on it vary from individual to individual. Some people are in favour of the practice, saying it helps it broaden their horizons, while others are strongly opposed to it. They argue that it is purely a waste of money. As for me, there are both merits and demerits lying in the debatable problem.

On one hand, the expense of learning abroad is beyond what an average family can afford. Many parents will

probably be overburdened cover all the expense. Worse still, many students cannot discipline themselves without their parents around. Chances are that faced with temptations, they may pick up some bad habits and return eventually fruitless.

On the other hand, we cannot deny the fact that learning abroad helps to cultivate children’s spirit of independence and enables them to be more sociable. To plus, being exposed to a totally difference, environment will definitely enrich their experience, which has a far-reaching effect on their future development.

As a saying goes, each coin has two sides. Therefore, there is no need to be lost in the argument. What we should bear in mind is that wherever we learn, we should make full use of all the resources available and become a responsible learner.

Exercise Four 图表类

Directions: Write an English composition in I20-150 words according to the instructions.

下列图表中数据反映的是某高中学校对全体学生英语学习动机的调查结果，请就此调查结果写一篇作文。内容包括：

1．描述图表

2．根据图表得出的结论

3．谈谈你的看法

参考范文：

As we can see in the chart, there are varieties of reasons why students study English. 65% of students’ aim is to pass the exams. A q uarter of them are willing to meet their parents’ and society’ s demands. Only 8% of them study English based on their interests.

According to the chart, we may easily draw a conclusion that most of the students are forced to learn English by different kinds of pressure. English is treated as a tool to accord with the condition. I believe that such people have been suffering from studying English for a long time.

Nowadays, English is the most widely-used language all over the world. There is no doubt that students learn English for the exams and their parents’ requirement at school. But such passivity of learning English is not definitely good for their performance in the future, regardless of their careers or personal life. Having a good command of English does not only help you pass exams or make others satisfied with you, but also give you a chance to understand a culture and enables you to communicate with foreigners without any difficulties.

From my perspective, nothing can be compared with the happiness of learning English.

真题解读

2011上海高考英语题目：

若你是明启中学李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启示写一封申请信。

启事

国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困

地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。

有意者请来信告知：

1）你个人的基本情况；

2）你对申请项目的基本设想；

3）项目经费的使用计划。

联系方式: 2011hope@https://www.360docs.net/doc/014673235.html,

2011

【高考作文评分标准】

1．本题总分为25分，其中内容10分，语言10分，组织结构5分。

2．评分时应注意的主要方面：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性以及上下文的连贯性。3．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后对照相应的组织结构档次给予加分。其中，内容和语言两部分相加，得15分或以上者，可考虑加4-5分，15分以下者只能考虑加0，1，2，3分。

4．词数少于70，总分最多不超过10分。

档次内容语言组织结构

A 9—10 9—10 4—5

B 7—8 7—8 3

C 5—6 5—6 2

D 3—4 3—4 1

E 0—2 0—2 0

各档次给分要求：

内容部分

A．内容充实，主题突出，详略得当。

B．内容较充实，能表达出作文要求。

C．内容基本充实，尚能表达出作文要求。

D．漏掉或未能写清楚主要内容，有些内容与主题无关。

E．明显遗漏主要内容，严重离题。

语言部分

A．具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构正确或有些小错误，主要因为使用了较复杂结构或词汇所致。

B．具有较强的语言表达能力，语法结构和词汇的应用基本正确，错误主要因为尝试较复杂结构或词汇所致。

C．有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。

D．语法结构与词汇错误较多，影响了对内容的理解。

E．语法结构与词汇的错误很多，影响了对内容的理解。

组织结构部分

A．自然地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文流畅结构紧凑, 句子结构多样，词汇丰富。

B．能使用语句间连接成分，全文流畅结构紧凑, 句子结构多样，词汇较丰富。

C．能使用简单的语句间连接成分，全文内容连贯, 句子结构有一定的变化，词汇使用得当。

D．尚能使用语句间连接成分，语言连贯性较差，句子结构单调，词汇贫乏。

E．缺乏语句间的连接成分，语言不连贯, 词不达意。

【参考范文一】

Word came that the International Children Funds Association intended to aid middle school students financially in launching programs designed to help children in poor areas. And I am writing to you to apply for one, hoping that the fund as much as 2000 yuan can realize my wish to help these children.

As a normal student of MingQi Middle School, I, Li Ming, Has been long cherishing a dream that every single child in poverty can have free access to knowledge, thus devoting themselves to society to make it more harmonious in turn.

Consequently, if my application can be luckily agreed to, I will spare no efforts to build a library for those children as my program.

To be more specific, the fund will be divided into three parts. First of all, 800 yuan of it will be spent on buying books which may be mainly second-hand, in order to ensure the quantity. Also, another 400 yuan will be intended to carry out advertisements that call on the people with a sense of responsibility in society to donate textbooks and so forth. What’s more, the remaining 800 yuan, according to my design, shall be given to those children, entitling them the right to buy their favorite books that are beyond what is mentioned above.

As you can see from what is talked about above, my plan may still leave something to be desired, but as far as my strong wish to help those children is concerned, I genuinely hope you and your association can grant me the opportunity to turn it into reality.

【参考范文二】

I am Li Ming. A student in Ming Qi Middle School, who is eager to apply for the project. I have a perfect blueprint for that and I am self-confident in making best use of the fund as well. My management is as followed.

Firstly, I will talk about my plan on the project. Resuming the fact that the children in poor area lack opportunities to study and know something new about the modern society, a series of lectures will be held in the poor area, I will select many excellent students and volunteers to address the lectures, which is beneficial not only to the children but ourselves as well. Further more, large quantities of books will be sent to the students in poor area which we believe can contribute to the children’s growth up.

Secondly, the fund of 2000 yuan can also be well used. We will rent a bus to reach the poor area and it may cost half of the fund and we will release a report about our activity on newspapers to attract more volunteers. Furthermore, the rest of the fund will be spent on buying books.

I am sincerely willing to apply for this project and I believe it will be a remarkable event under my organization.

【参考范文三】

My name is LiMing from MingQi School. I always watch the poor children study hard with bad condition in poor area on television. I was totally moved by that. So I am dying to apply for a product which can help them. The following is my plan.

First, I think what they need most is clothes and books. The clothes can keep them warm and the books will be their friends. So we need an activity about donation. We will appeal for the students to donate these things which they don’t need in our school. My schoolmates are all warm-hearted and glad to help people. They will ready to do it so we will succeed at last.

Then, to expand the influence of the activity, we can set up a website. We can put some photos on the website to introduce the conditions of the children in poor areas to let people know more about them. Then they will be eager to play a role in the donation. Frankly speaking, I am good at computer so I have the confidence to do well.

As we all know, we can’t completely change their situation by it, but there is a famous saying which stands the test of the time ‘Rome is not built in a day’. If I wish, I will put all the money into holding the donation. I think with our joint effort they finally have got rid of the poverty.

Thank you for reading the letter!

【参考范文四】

My name is Li Ming from Ming Qi Middle school. I am proficient on English and have a good command of singing and writing.

I plan to apply for a project of helping the children who come from the poor areas. I have several plans. To begin with, I will keep a close touch with them. You know. Finally, communication can put our heart together.

Secondly, I will teach them some necessary skills, such as singing and dancing which can bring them happiness.

Last but not the least, I will spent money calling a experienced teacher. He can teach them a lot of knowledge which I can give them.

If I apply for this project successfully, I will use project money to call in a teacher.

All in all, I can eager to get this chance.

【参考范文五】

My name is Li Ming. I am a student from Ming Qi Middle School. I’d like to apply to you for the item. I will help the poor.

Since I am 18-year- old teenager, I have ability to afford for the item. My parents are going to help me too. I can use the knowledge I have learnt from the class to improve poor childre n’s life.

I have planned for the item. I will offer for their tuitions and other payments about studying and living.

The money of 2000 will be used up in two years for their tuition and other payment meaningful.

I hope that you would give me the chance. It will serve as a bridge between I and one poor child. I will do my best for him.

内容 5

语言 5

结构 1

归档 C

总分12

学法点睛

遣词四原则：

1、晚词优先；

2、短语优先；

3、派生优先；

4、具象优先；

夺分四部曲：

1、列提纲：布局行文结构，帮助文章定格基调，有效避免偏题跑题；

2、列句型：把平时学到的被动结构、倒装、强调、with短语、独立主格等地道英语表达在动笔之

前结合文章内容列出2-5个，有效避免句型单调；

3、长短句错落排布；

4、注意书写与修改；

过关检测

巩固测试：

2009年上海高考作文及范例

某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self- defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：

1、你感兴趣的课程

2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么

3、为什么想学这些内容

提升测试：

2010年上海高考作文及范例

下图是小学新生的课堂一脚，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：

●描述图片里学生上课的场景

●比较你同时期的上课情况

●简单谈谈你的感受

附【参考答案】

巩固测试（2009年高考真题）

It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from. I am interested in gardening, in that I believe it features my character and personal benefits.

During the learning period, I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge. A radical technique I’d like to obtain is to know how to tell difference species of plants and flowers apart. This helps me to have a clearer outlook of those in my garden. Furthermore, the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn. A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or reasonable positions will also be a good choice.

The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden. In addition, I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening, missing a chance to have a word with nature, so that knowing the surroundings is imperative. Last but not least, by attending the courses, I will have a meaningful summer vacation, and drowning myself between plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life.

提升测试（2010年高考真题）

From the picture, it can be easily seen that four primary students are raising their hands to answer the questions. So happy and excited are they that I see their eagerness for knowledge, which is powerful in all our life. Therefore, unlimited as knowledge is, we should keep our enthusiasm to learn.

When it comes to my first day in my primary school, I felt curious about everything. When my teacher asked questions, all of us raised our hands including some to answer them … wonderful moments in my life because although we were little kids, we carried our passion for learning new knowledge, which is beautiful and mysterious in our hearts. We were just like the children in the picture, active and creative. It was at that time that

knowledge appealed to me.

Just as Bacon wrote in 1597, knowledge is power. I reckon that all of us should keep up enthusiasm to explore in the known and unknown worlds. Time-consuming and painstaking as it might be, nothing can stop a willing and curious heart. Only by living knowledge can we strive to learn. And only by gaining more knowledge can we become powerful, thus achieving our success and living out our values!

There is no one but can resist the charm of knowledge, just like these students. Having an active heart and persevering in learning, the day we succeed will surely come!