作文范文之大学英语四级作文多少字

作文范文之大学英语四级作文多少字

大学英语四级作文多少字

【篇一：四级考试作文要求及评分标准】

大学英语四级考试作文要求及评分

标准

《大学英语四、六级考试大纲》明确规定：大学英语四级考试写作部分考试时间为30分钟。要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文；写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。其命题方式有：给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。要求内容切题，文理通顺，表示正确，语篇连贯，无重大语言错误。

大学英语四级作文采用总体评

分(global scoring)方法，阅卷人员从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表示思想，也要考虑所用语言（英语）是否能清楚而明确地表示思想。阅卷人员根据思想内容和语言表示的总体印象给出奖励分(reward scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。

现在的大学英语四级考试是710分制，作文部分占15%，满分标准分为106分。阅卷时，作文部分满分为15分，阅卷标准分为5等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。

具体评分标准如下：

2分――条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分――基本切题，表示思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。8分――基本切题，有些地方表示思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

另有各档次标准样卷，阅卷人员参照样卷对考生的作文进行评分，首

先看考生的作文和哪个档次的样卷接近，然后上下浮动1分。字数不足应酌情扣分：110――119词：扣1分；100――109词：扣2分；90――99词：扣3分；80――89词：扣4分；70――79词：扣5分；60――69词：扣6分；50――59词：扣7分；50字以下，扣9分。

只写一段者：0-4分，只写两段者：0-9分（指规定三段的作文）。

白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表示思想的，判为0分。

孙子云：“知己知彼，百战不殆”。想在写作考试中获得成功，就必须首

先了解四级考试的要求和评分规则。下面以一篇题目为“do lucky numbers really bring good luck?”的作文为例来讲述几个最基本的道理。

【篇二：大学英语四级作文】

大学英语四级作文

1．why it is difficult ron college students to find jobs?(大学生求职为何难?)

1．描述现状；

2．分析原因；

3．给出办法。

[写作导航]先陈述现实，即虽然从理论上讲不应如此，但大学生找工作确实很难；第二段分析原因，一方面来自大学生自身，如有些

人不能溶入社会，目标过高等，另一方面是所学专业过窄，难以找

到合适的工作；第三段给出“我”的观点：大学生应了解自己的长处

和短处，不要太看重物质利益，而是要着眼于长远发展，另外还要

注意继续深造。

[范文]

more and more college students, in recent years, are finding it difficult to find jobs. this may sound strange since college students used to be the most favored people in society. they have received a higher education, hence they are more intelligent, knowledgeable than their counterparts who failed to attend college. but chances are that some of them can hardly find jobs after graduating from colleges.

there are two reasons that account for this strange phenomenon. one is that some college students cannot come to

terms with themselves and with the world around them. they pursue too high goals and are too particular about such factors as working conditions, salary, and so on. therefore, they are reluctant to accept the job when they are offered to them. another reason is that the majors some students pursue do not match with the demands of the job market. as a result, they can only sit and miss opportunities.

to solve this problem, i think college students should know their own strengths and weaknesses and have the right attitude towards themselves and the job vacancies. in addition,

they should not attach too much importance to material aspects of the job. they should put priority to their future development and their contributions to society in stead. furthermore, they should think of receiving some further training to meet the demands of society.

2. harmfulness of video games(电子游戏危害谈)

1．许多年轻人沉溺于电子游戏中。

2．电子游戏的危害。

3．解决的办法。

[写作导航]第一段可陈述许多年轻人陷入电子游戏不能自拔的现象；第二段罗列电子游戏的危害，如对身体的危害、对

学习和工作的影响，以及不良电子游戏对年轻人道德会产生不良影

响等；第三段可从充分认识电子游戏的危害、取缔非法网吧和鼓励

开发健康游戏等方面提出解决问题的办法。

[范文]

in spite of objections from public opinion, many students cant draw themselves away from video games. it seems that the more they are prohibited from playing the games, the more they are tempted to do so. many students indulge themselves in playing these games.

video games are harmful to both the individual and society in many ways. first, they endanger the young peoples health. sitting in front of the computer for hours on end is bad for the players eyesight as well as his entire physique. secondly, they distract the young people%attention from their work and study. absorbed in the games, the player often forgets to go to work or class. sometimes even if they are at work or in class, they are still thinking of the games they played or are going to play after work or after class. as a result, they quickly fall

behind others in their work and study. thirdly, they lead young people to moral degradation. some young people are especially interested in games that are filled with violence. if they play these games a long time, they may also settle disagreements through violence,

which may give rise to higher crime rate.

therefore, it is time we took effective measures to solve this problem. on the one hand, young people should be made fully aware of the danger of video games. on the other, illegal video game houses should be eliminated, and software producers should be encouraged to make more beneficial video games in the future.

3. the pressures on collese students(大学生面临许多压力) 汉语提示：很多大学生说她们面临很多压力。请写一篇150字的文章，说明她们所面临的压力及你对她们的建议。

[写作导航]第一段是引子，从提示“很多大学生说她们面临很多压力”入手，引出问题：她们面临的压力是什么?第二段谈她们的压力，大致有三种：一是源于她们自身的压力，二是来自同伴的压力，三是未来找工作的压力；第三段辩证地谈压力的利弊，建议大学生释放生活中不必要的压力。

[范文]

many college students say that they are facing so many pressures in their lives that they are on the go from morning till night. what, then, are the pressures on college students? there are generally three kinds of pressures on college students. the first pressure comes from the students themselves.

in order to become top students and to win a scholarship, many students spend more time on studying but less time on recreation or rest. the second pressure stems from their peer

groups. finding that their classmates are staying up late, many students will feel guilty if they do something else. they think the only way to overcome the fear of being left behind the others is to study even harder. the last pressure derives from the competition in finding a job after graduation. there is a sharp increase in the number of college graduates in job markets in recent years, making it hard for college students to find jobs. many students believe that the more knowledge they learn now at college, the more chance they will have in finding a job in the future on the job market.

a certain amount of pressures is not necessarily a bad thing. it stimulates students to make continuous efforts with their

studies. however, too much pressure is certainly harmful to ones well being. college students ought to come to terms with themselves and the world around them. moreover, they ought to learn how to relieve themselves of unnecessary pressures in their daily lives.

4. 求职信（可结合《大学英语》泛读2）unit1，lesson3，

【篇三：大学英语四级写作评分标准】

英语四级考试作文评分标准

一、作文评分标准

1.本题满分为15分。

2.阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷1至2份。

3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）;若认为稍优或稍劣于该分

数，则可加1分（即9分）或减1分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。

4.评分标准:2分—条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分—基本切题。表示思路不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分—基本切题。有些地方表示思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分—切题。表示思路清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分—切题。表示思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

二、作文的种类

若从作文体裁划分，英文作文有议论文（argumentative composition）、记叙文（narrative composition）、描写文（descriptive composition）和说明文（expositive composition），等等。四、六级作文最常见的是前两种。但若从考试的题型来看，则包括以下几种:

1、提纲式作文

用英文或中文给出提纲（outline），要求按提纲写作，当前来说，这种提纲经常是以三段的形式给出，又称三段式作文，这是四级考试的主要形式。如：1993年6月大学英语四级作文题。

2、图表式作文

包括表格式作文。这类作文要求考生用简洁、生动的语言把图中所提供的信息准确、完整地表示出来。这类作文在四级考试中只是偶然才会出现。如:1991年6月四级考试的作文题。

3、情景式作文

用中文或英文给出一个情景，让你自己去说明或评论。这类作文多见于六级和toefl考试之中。例:有些创造如电灯、火车、电机等，对人类极为重要。请再举一个你认为重要的创造事例，并说明你为什么认为它重要?

三、写作的方法（这里只谈四级中出现最多的提纲式）——提纲式（三段式）作文（以考场中占绝大多数的议论文写法为主）

（一）抛开句子的构成、段落的展开、各类文体作文的写作技巧等理论不说，单就实用的原则来看，写四级作文应注意的主要方面有五:1.切题2.干净3.减少错误4.开门见山5.闪光点。

1.切题。拿到作文试卷后的第一件事就是———审题。作文不跑题，这似乎已是老生常谈，但要完全做到，也并非像有些考生想象的那般轻而易举。例如:benefits of sports（运动的好处）自然应该写运动的好处。但有些考生在列举了一系列运动的优点之后，又写道:“运动固然好处很多，但也应避免运动的过量，否则，过量的运动还是有害的。它能够使人过度疲劳，损害心肌，拉伤大腿，等等。”

殊不知，这样写着写着，不知不觉中已跑题了。本文要求你写运动的“好处”。至于其“副作用”或“坏处”，根本不应在文章的讨论范围之内。

又如:有的考生写“how university graduates find work”一文，竟写成了自己喜欢什么样的工作。这样一来，你词汇量再大，语法知识再好，也只能是“南辕北辙”了。假如把文章的重点放在“如何”一词上，就算抓住了要害。比如如何去面试，如何写自我简介，如何进行自我包装和推销，等等。由此看来，切题一事，绝不可掉以轻心。

2.干净。干净本不应列在作文的五项注意事项之内，但大家不要忘记，作文是人改的，人是有情感的。自然是喜欢干净讨厌潦草肮脏。阅卷人员每人每天要批改上百份试卷。试想你的作文如果潦草

不清，成片涂改，她们会费力地去辨别甚至猜想你的本意吗?因此，作文干不干净已不再是一个战术性小事，而成了一个战略性问题。

记住，把你的作文写得干净整齐就等于向阅卷人员发送一个信息———“老师，我尊重你的辛勤劳动!”这对自己作文的得分，不是很有帮助吗?

3.减少错误。写作过程中碰到自己不会写或拿不准的词或句型，是写还是不写?

我们的看法是，尽可能不写，能够采取避开或用别的替代的方法，英语中叫做“play safe”。四级作文万一写不太高明，那也首先要保证减少错误:尽量让你的作文做到无懈可击! 例如:about hong

kong①the present state②hong kong s past③its future

让我们以第一段香港的“现状”为例来看一下:

hong kong is in the south of china.it is a beautiful and prosperous city.its people are brave and diligent.its position is unique and its economy is booming.people call it“the pearl in the east”.

其中，当你写到prosperous，diligent，unique，booming等词的时候，若是拿不准，怎么办呢?

需要指出的是，“play safe”这一招并不意味着我们不必下苦功去记一些必要的、十分基本的词汇，有些词的使用率很高，比如computer，environment，efficiency等，是避不开的。还有的考生上了考场，连modern，society，pollution，甚至benefit这类词都拼写不准，那就不能不给人一个基本功太差的印象。

4.开门见山。

5.闪光点。

这两个术语是什么意思呢?

让我们看一看“good health”这篇作文。①importance of good health②ways to keep fit.③my own practices.

先看第一段“好身体的重要性”，有的考生写道:“with the rapid development of our economy，with the improvement of our living standard，with more and more people s realization of the importance of good health，now people are attaching greater importance to their health.”“随着经济的飞速发展，随着人民生活的改进，随着大家对健康的重要性的了解，…”不要忘记，四级作文总共才要你写百十来个字，你一开头

就罗罗嗦嗦说了三四十个字，还没有说到正题上，多么不得要领。切记，好的作文应该单刀直入，直截了当。不要兜圈子，绕弯子，第一句话最好就采用“topic sentence”，点明主题，重点突出———这叫“开门见山”。

因此，我们上来就应该写:

“good health is important to everyone.”

“开门见山”之后，也就是旗帜鲜明地亮出自己的观点之后，下面我们应该用事例来支持自己的观点，这些事例，就叫做“闪光点”，如果事例很多，还能够采用“first”，“second”，“third”这类的排列方法。

有的考生会说，写议论文先端出论点，再给出论据，这我知道，可是，有时候我想不起来事实或例子来支持自己的结论怎么办?

这时，有两个相当重要的词汇大家应该铭记在心———“with”和“without”，特别是后一个，议论文中几乎能够算是一把开启各式门锁的“万能钥匙”。如:good health is very importan

t to everyone.with it，we can study hard;we can serve the country;we can do everything as we like.without good health，everybody knows，we will fail to do things;we can twork efficiently;we may stay in hospital;we ll become a

burden of our family，etc.

记住，with、without不是在说废话，而是在用“正证法”和“反证法”来论述事情。我们再看第二段“保持健康的方法”。

in my opinion，there are two ways for me to keep fit.first，we must eat a balanced diet.that is to say—we must eat not only eggs，fish，meat but also some vegetables and fruit everyday.besides eating，drinking clean water is also important.never get addicted to drinking the so-calle d“soft drinks”.second，exercising is a vital part of our daily life.we can do some running in the morning and play football in the afternoon.

至于第三段，“我的实践”，有的考生会问:“写点什么呢?”不要忘记，第二段中提到“吃”与“锻炼”是保持健康的最佳途径，那么，第三段还写“吃”与“锻练”———我自己是怎么做的，不就行了吗?还有人会说:“我以前做得不好，那我就写自己的决心和保证吧!”

“from today on，i will...;i will...;”或者“i plan to do it as follows...”那叫“我的实践”吗? 顶多算是“我的希望”或“我的计划”。这样写就跑题了。可见，切题不但是指全文，三段中的每一段也存在是否切题这样一个问题。有的考生这样写第三段，就基本上能够说是达到要求了:

as a university student，i pay much attention to my physical exerciser.i do some swimming in summer and some skating in winter，i often play badminton and tennis.i m also careful with my diet.in a word，keeping healthy is not very hard if you just take it seriously.

（二）有人可能会问:知道了这几项原则，上了考场我为什么还是写不出来呢?这就牵涉到英文作文的两大考试目的了。

英文作文到底要考大家什么?我们认为，主要考查你的两大方面———思路表示与英文水平。有的考生一拿到作文题常常会抓耳挠腮，不知道该写些什么，肚里空空如也，这叫做:“没有思路”;也有的

人，思路倒有，只是“英文水平”较低;当然，更有一些人“思路”没有，“英文”也不怎么样，要拿高分，其难度就可想而知了。下面，

我们分别来谈谈“思路”与“英文”这两件事。

大家知道，到了考场上，作文的第一件事是———思路。有些人，没有思路，只好随心所欲，信手写去，写着写着，自己也不知道写

到哪里了。这种作文，难道会条理清楚?难道会中心突出?又怎么能做到干净整洁，不乱涂乱画?因此，拿到作文后的第一件事就是要审题并列出一个提纲。这就好比家中要待客先列出一份菜单一样。菜

单列好后，按单去把菜买好，这就叫“素材”，再炒好端上桌，就叫“英文表示”了。

没有菜单，再高明的作家也会“巧妇难为无米之炊”的。列“菜单”，即作文的提纲不必过长，寥寥数语，中、英文皆可。万一上了考场

没有稿纸，把准考证翻过来，只言片语可矣! 例如作文“electricity and our daily life”.①electricity is essential in our daily life.②if there were no electricity，...③therefore，...

【outline】

①电的用途:提供动力/照明/日常生活。②假如没有电:生产/生活，都会受到影响。③因此，我们要节约用电。

electricity is essential in our daily life.it runs the machines in factories;it starts the vehicles and light the streets and rooms.with it，we can watch tv，listen to the tap

e recorder，cook meals or store food in the fridge.in a word，it helps us a lot in our daily life.

if there were no electricity，all the machines would stop working.at night，it would be very dark.we would have to wash our clothes with our hands.students would use oil lamps to do their homework.we would live as our ancestors did centuries ago. therefore，electricity is very important to us.our life

cannot go on without it，not to mention the construction of our country.our country is short of electricity，now. so，everybody should try to save it.

（三）提纲列出之后，下一步就是用比较标准的英文将你想要说的意思表示出来，这就需要有较好的英文基本功底:包括单词、句子结构、语法、词组等等。下面，大家先看两篇作文，其思路还算清晰，文章比较切题，层次也很合理，可是，单就其语言文字方面，有哪些主要问题呢?【例】traffic in big cities

1.traffic has become a social problem in big cities.

2.one way to solve this problem is...

3.another way is...

traffic has become a social problem in big cities. of course，have a car is a good thing，but if every person own a car，the streets will became too crowded. so，traffic jams occurred during the rush hours and accidents happened more often.

one way to solve this problem is develop public transportation system.for example，we should buy more buses and we should built more roads，especially round-the-city roads and underground trains is also a good solution. another way is to reduce the big city s population.

our country population control is a wise and necessary policy.if big city people reduce，traffic will less crowded.

第一句抄起始句，无问题。第二句，作者想说:“有车是件好事。”于是就采取了汉语的表示方式:“have a car is a good thing”，但英文就大错特错了。须知，英文的主语一般只能是四部分组成:名词（含代词）、动名词ving、动词不定式to及句子。动词have是万万不能当主语的。因此，至少应改为“having”。接下来，every person 那动词own自然应该加“s”了。streets will后面动词用原形

become，第三行so大写“s”，traffic jams occurred and accidents happened.动词完全不需要用过去式，那样，就给人以一种:“事情已过去了，现在已经不堵车，也没有交通事故了”的印象。因此，切记，议论文中使用过去式

一定要合理，不要滥用。

第二段“one way to solve this problem is to develop...”才行。一般来说，每句话只应有一个谓语动词（并列时当成一个看），因此，有了“is”，“develop”必须消掉（消动词有三招，to v，ving，ved过去分词）。we should build...，and应小写。underground trains is...主谓语不协调或改为trains are，或改为train is，后者更好些，因为此处不是在查数，而是在讲一种情况:“地铁”这种形式，是一个好办法。

末一段可改为:

our country s population control is a wise and necessary policy.if the number of the people in big cities is reduced，traffic will become less crowded.

综上所述，一篇英文要想写得很地道，起码应注意以下几个方面:

①主语是上述四部分之一吗?

②谓语动词是一个吗?（每句话一个，从句也算一句话）这个动词时态、语态、语气正确吗?若是在shall，will，must，may，can 等情态或助动词后，用原形了吗?除了这个谓语之外的

其它动词消掉了吗?（叫做动词的非谓语形式）

③主语与谓语一致吗?

④及物动词或介词后，使用宾语的形式了吗?（主、系表除外）

⑤定语或状语的位置放的合理吗?

⑥从句的引导词使用恰当吗?

⑦单词有没有拼写错误?

（四）现在，我们已经知道了作文大致上怎样写:

①审题并列出提纲（约5分钟）

②开始写:（1）切题（2）干净（3）少犯错误（4）开门见山（5）闪光点（约20分钟）③交卷前检查（1）拼写错误（2）语法错误等（约5分钟）

6月大学英语四级考试

作文标准版点评

the importance of doing small things

from the carton, we can clearly see that the boy is worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father tells him to empty the dustbin first. this carton reminds me of a chinese saying:if you dont clean the room(solve your problems), then how can you control the world. however, most people always attach great importance to something big, but neglect small things.

in my opinion, it is necessary and important to do small things. on the one hand, doing small things well helps us to develop good habits, which set a good foundation for our future development. there is no doubt that one of the greatest differences between success and failure is the importance placed on little things. on the other hand, the big is the little. if something needs to be done, it is big. no matter what kinds of task, if it is worth doing, it can be big.

taking all these into account, we can easily notice that it is reasonable to do small things before big ones. so before doing important things, let’s empty our dustbin first!

【点评】

本次四级作文是一篇图画作文，大家对于这样的作文形式应该不会陌生吧，历年考题中也曾出现过类似题型，因此这也算老生常谈了。

图画作文题目怎么写呢？首先要确立文章的基本思想，这是最重要的。我们要确定图画给我们传达的是一个什么样的信息。本次作文的重点就在这一句话”the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big”。从图画中男孩与父亲的对话