2019浙江省高考压轴卷英语附答案解析

2019浙江省高考压轴卷

英语

注意事项：

1．答卷前，考生务必将自己的姓名、考生号等填写在答题卡和试卷指定位置上。

2．回答选择题时，选出每小题答案后，用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。

如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其他答案标号。回答非选择题时，将答案写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。

3．考试结束后，将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。

第一部分听力(共两节，满分30分)

第一节(共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分)

听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。

1.What will the woman probably do next?

A. Relax in the backyard．

B. Make some coffee．

C. Wash clothes．

2．How did the man get here?

A. By subway．

B. By train．

C. By car．3．What time is it now?

A.6:00 pm．

B.6:30 pm．

C.7:00 pm．

4．What was the woman’s problem?

A. She lost her train ticket．

B. She took the wrong train．

C. She forgot her seat number．

5．What does the man mean?

A. He handles his work with ease．

B. He is fully occupied with his work．

C. He can’t describe his duty at work．

第二节(共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分)

听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。

听第6段材料．回答第6、7题。

6．What is the relationship between the speakers?

A．Mother and son．

B．Interviewer and guest．

C．Job adviser and student．

7．What does the man want to do?

A．Start a restaurant．

B．Run a clothing shop．

C．Teach skateboarding．

听第7段材料，回答第8、9题

8．What subject is the man good at?

A. History．

B. Maths．

C. Computer Science．

9．What does the woman want the man to do?

A. Get some books for her．

B. Draw some graphs for her．

C. Lend his computer to her．

听第8段材料，回答第10至12题。

10．Where are the speakers?

A. In a supermarket．

B. In Gerry’s house．

C. At home．

11．How much tea does the woman need?

A.A quarter pound．

B. Half a pound．

C.A large tin．

12．What does the man mean in the end?

A. He will drive a truck．

B. The list is a bit too long．

C. The woman should do the shopping．

听第9段材料，回答第13至16题。

13．What do the speakers agree on?

A. The meeting is successful．

B. They have had a long day．

C. Their work is satisfactory．

14．Where will the man go for dinner today?

A. An Italian restaurant．

B. A French restaurant．

C. A Swiss restaurant．

15．How long will the man stay here?

A. One day．

B. One week．

C. One month．

16．On which street are there some Asian restaurants?

A. Main Street．

B. Lake Street．

C. Dublin Street．

听第10段材料，回答第17至20题。

17．How many floors does the model home have?

A.2．

B.3．

C.4．

18．What can be expected on the second floor?

A.A balcony．

B. Two bathrooms．

C. Three bedrooms．19．What can the back door in the kitchen be connected to?

A.A one-car garage．

B.A swimming poo1．

C.A yard．

20．What is the speaker trying to do?

A. Find a roommate．

B. Sell houses．

C. Move into a new place．

第二部分阅读理解（共两节，满分35分）

第一节（共10小题；每小题2.5分，满分25分）

阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该项涂黑。

A

Welcome to the Civic Art Museum’s Exhibit of West African Art, showing pieces from our collections. Background

The peoples of West Africa, including the Yoruba, the Dogon, the Igbo, and the Akan, have a long art tradition. Tribes (部落) in the area have developed different styles of art and architecture that are suited to the climate and available materials and based on their traditions.

Gallery A: Photographs of Traditional West African Architecture

This section shows historical and contemporary photographs of traditional West African architecture. Of particular interest are the photographs of the Dogon village. The design of the Dogon village is based on the human figure. Certain types of buildings are placed in particular areas according to the Dogon’s complex philosophical (哲学上的) tradition. For example, the men’s houses are placed in the “head” of the village, the leader’s house is in the “chest,” and the women’s houses are in the “hands.”Gallery B: West African Masks

The art of mask making is well developed in West Africa. Masks are important to West African traditions and have clear social, political, and economic roles. However, most masks are worn only at particular times or on special occasions. For example, among the Dan and the Kota, certain people wear special masks to show their power when they act as judges and policemen within the community. Among the Bambara of Mali, headdresses are worn during planting and harvest celebrations.

Gallery C: West African Sculptures

West African sculptures are made from materials such as metal or wood. They are based on tribal traditions and are quite different. The Dogon are especially known for making figures of their ancestors. They believe their ancestors, called Nommo, came down from the sky at the beginning of time. Nommo figures are often shown with their hands reaching out to the sky. The collection contains several wonderful examples of Nommo sculptures.

21. What is special about Dogon houses?

A. They are shaped like human beings.

B. They are designed by the village leader.

C. They are grouped according to tradition.

D. They have many photographs inside them.

22. West African masks ____________.

A. have recently developed

B. play many different roles

C. are mainly worn at harvest time

D. show the everyday life of the Dan

23. What do we know about the Dogon people?

A. They are afraid of Nommo figures.

B. They make statues of their ancestors.

C. They believe they will return to the sky.

D. They straighten their arms to show respect.

B

Several years ago, I received an e-mail from a total stranger —a 17-year-old girl named Monica Gottlieb, who lived in Vienna. In poor English, she explained that she was doing an online search for people who shared the same names as members of her family. She tried her 19-year-old brother’s name —Marcus, and that was how she hit upon me. Monica asked me to write back and tell her a little something about myself, which I did.

Not long after our first exchanges, Monica’s mother, Regine, wrote to me. Regine’s English was a little better than Monica, so she was able to provide more details about their life in Vienna. She also mentioned that she and her husband Michael were planning their first visit to the US. As motorcycle lovers, they intended to make a two-wheeled tour of California and the Southwestern states. She wondered if I could tell her something that I thought they should know before they began their great adventure.

I spent about an hour putting together what I considered reasonably practical advice and sent it along. Regine wrote back with thanks, and told me if I came to Vienna, I should consider the Gottlieb family home as my own. She even offered me both a room and a key to the house.

The Gottliebs eventually made their motorcycle trip and enjoyed every minute of it. Eight months later, I was welcomed to Austria by the Gottlieb family.

We got to know each other fairly quickly. Michael and I even seemed to hit it off particularly well. Almost the same age, and sharing a similar sense of humor, we were soon so comfortable with each other.

A few days later, Michael, Regine, and I were walking off the big meal we had just had at an open-air restaurant. As we walked and chatted, an older man coming toward us said something in German to Regine. She replied politely, laughing. After he passed by, I asked Regine if the man was a friend.

“No,” she said. “He looked at you and Michael and said, ‘It’s nice to see two brothers out for a walk together.’”

Brothers? Well — not quite. But perhaps long-lost cousins after all.

24. Which of the following helped start the author’s friendship with Monica?

A. A stranger.

B. Names.

C. Hobbies.

D. A visit.

25. Why did Regine write her first e-mail to the author?

A. To invite him to join their two-wheeled tour.

B. To offer practical advice about his trip to Vienna.

C. To ask for some useful information about the US.

D. To provide him with information about California.

26. Which can be used to describe the author’s trip to Vienna?

A. Tiring.

B. Boring.

C. Fruitless.

D. Pleasant.

C

It is National Sleep Awareness Week and reflecting on the importance of this basic act is timely. As a preventive cardiologist (心脏病专家), I work with patients who want to improve their health and lengthen their lives. Many of them have major risk factors for heart disease; others already have full-blown heart disease or have experienced a heart attack.

Traditionally, patients who want to improve their heart health have received four main suggestions from their doctors: Eat a healthy diet, get more exercise, quit smoking, and enjoy proper amounts of alcohol. Plenty of research backs up these four pieces of advice: Large studies have found that making improvements in these four areas lowers the chance of dying of heart disease by 67 percent.

But lately, researchers are starting to recognize that there should be five recommendations on that list, not just four. They’re disco vering that getting enough sleep is a powerful health protector as well. When researchers include enough sleep in their studies as a fifth cardio-preventive behavior change, they find that it lowers the chance of dying of heart disease even more: Adding a good seven hours of sleep a night in addition to making positive changes in diet, exercise, smoking, and alcohol intake lowers the chance of dying of heart disease by 83 percent.

When that news started coming out, doctors began tagging (添加) sleep onto their list of recommended health behavior changes. But I don’t think sleep belongs at the bottom of the list. I think it should be at the top! I believe that getting enough sleep — at least seven to eight hours per night for most people — is the most important health behavior change you can make to improve the health of your heart and your overall health.

Sure, I’d prefer that everyone mak e all of the big five lifestyle changes, but if I could only choose one, I’d pick sleep because wh en you are well-rested, you have more power to make the right choices

about what you eat and drink, and you have more energy to exercise and you have the resilience you need to kick bad habits such as smoking and overeating. But when you’re exhausted, ever ything in life is more difficult.

27. What does plenty of research show about the 4 common suggestions?

A. They should be reconsidered.

B. They are the best ways found so far.

C. They are not as helpful as expected.

D. They help impro ve people’s health.

28. What does the latest research show?

A. Various factors lead to good heart health.

B. Enough sleep contributes to good heart health.

C. Seven hours’ sleep is most important to the heart.

D. The chance of dying of heart disease has dropped.

29. What was the doctors’ reaction to the news on sleep?

A. They tried to ignore it.

B. They discussed it publicly.

C. They thought it made sense.

D. They totally changed their mind.

30. What does the last paragraph mainly talk about?

A. What the importance of a healthy lifestyle is.

B. Why different factors need to work together.

C. What prevents people from living healthily.

D. Why the author makes sleep his No. 1 suggestion.

第二节（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）

根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

Get yourself lost

Travelers to a new city are often encouraged to take a bus tour. __31__ But that's nonsense! What we see from the inside of a fast-moving bus is unreal, fully removed from the authentic (真实的) sights, sounds and smells outside.

The best way to experience any destination (目的地) is by foot, without a plan, wandering where your spirit leads you. “But what if I get lost?” people ask. __32__ You can easily return to the center of town by taking a bus with the words “Central Station” on its front. Besides, if you do get lost, you can stop at a sidewalk cafe to sit and relax and then ask directions from the locals at the next table.

Here are a few ways to make the most of your travels:

1. Know before you go. Before you start, spend time in a library or bookstore, learning about the history and culture of your destination. __33 _

2. Move around like a local. __34__ You'll not only save money, but learn how people live there.

3. __35__ If you must book a guided tour, select the nonstandard, inexpensive kinds led on foot.

So, the next time you feel attracted by a sightseeing bus tour, save your money and instead, wander around on your own. I promise you a time you'll remember fondly.

A. Take a walking tour.

B. Read the guidebook carefully.

C. Use the local subways and buses.

D. No one ever gets completely lost in a major city.

E. If so, you will better understand the place you're visiting.

F. The free bus can give you a chance to join or meet the locals.

G. The thinking is that it allows us to do some sightseeing easily on the bus.

第三部分语言运用（共两节，满分45分）

第一节完形填空（共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分〉

阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该项涂黑。

In the past, people used to make clothes and do repairs on things in the house more than nowadays. I think the difference between then and now has been _ 36_ by a number of _37_ such as the quantity of other _ 38 _, the differences in jobs and in lifestyles, etc.

In the past, after people finished their workdays, it was still _39_ and they didn’t have too many other activities to do, _40_ they spent their free time doing some repairs and many women used to make _41_ (most of them did n’t even have a job). Nowadays, _42_ , a large number of women work and both men and women have to _43_ the pressures of work and they usually work _44_ hours, so they have little time to do repairs or make clothes themselves.

Another reason that has led to this _45_ is that people have less and less time for a _46_ that requires a lot of time. And when their hobby needs some knowledge, they have little time to learn it. Because everything that you want to _47_ is more technical and complicated (复杂的) than before, doing repairs takes up too much

_ 48_ and people nearly always have to turn to a qualified technician.

Besides, traditions are being _49_ because people learn traditions from their

_50_ when they are young, but nowadays, _51_ people have too many hobbies like sports, video games, computers, cinemas, amusement parks, chat rooms and _52_

spend any of their free time _53_ their parents.

_54_ , globalization and the great technical advances in the home are also contributing factors (因素), so this situation is _55 _ around the world.

36. A. planned B. allowed C. caused D. noted

37. A. reasons B. choices C. opportunities D. decisions

38. A. habits B. thoughts C. activities D. judgments

39. A. special B. hot C. normal D. early

40. A. but B. so C. if D. because

41. A. toys B. clothes C. dinners D. tools

42. A. however B. therefore C. otherwise D. besides

43. A. look into B. point out C. rely on D. deal with

44. A. flexible B. long C. difficult D. happy

45. A. mistake B. relationship C. idea D. situation

46. A. job B. dream C. hobby D. meeting

47. A. fix B. buy C. copy D. check

48. A. luck B. power C. courage D. time

49. A. studied B. lost C. discussed D. taught

50. A. teachers B. friends C. neighbors D. parents

51. A. interesting B. ordinary C. young D. elderly

52. A. hardly B. usually C. actually D. completely

53. A. looking after B. learning from C. cheering for D. knowing about

54. A. After all B. At least C. For example D. At last

55. A. happening B. passing C. disappearing D. serving

第三部分语言运用（共两节，满分45分）

第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。

Global warming refers to the fact that the earth's atmosphere is warming near ____56____ (it) surface — in other words, it's getting hotter. Some scientists say it is human activity ____57____ has caused global warming. However, there are other theories as well.

One popular theory relates to the “greenhouse effect”. Gases that make up the atmospher e are similar to ___57 _____ greenhouse because they allow sunlight ____59 ____ (pass) through, and then trap much of the heat from____ 60 ____ (escape). This naturally occurring phenomenon, ____61 ____ is called greenhouse warming, keeps the earth's surface ____62 ____ (warm) than it would be.

While scientists agree that human-produced compounds (化合物) like carbon dioxide and others are being released into the atmosphere, some argue it's not clear how this results ____63____ the changes in temperature.

Global warming can ____64____ (great) affect human life on many levels. Scientists have made great ____65____ (contribute) to finding out how long the earth has been warming, at what rate it is warming, and what factors are causing it. These answers may better prepare people to handle its effects.

第三部分写作（满分40分）

第一节：应用文写作（满分15分）

假设你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你校将开展“创建书香校园”系列活动。请你代表学生会用英语写一份倡议书，号召同学们养成阅读的习惯。

要点包括：1. 阅读的好处； 2. 阅读习惯的培养（每天阅读，定期去书店、图书馆购买或借阅图书，分享读书心得等）。

注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear fellow students,

______________________________

_______________________________

__________________ ____________

__________________ ____________

Student Council 第二节：概要写作（满分25分）

47.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60字左右的内容概要。

In recent years, our parenting culture began to send the message that competence was important for building self-esteem. However, that same parenting culture made a big mistake by telling parents that the way to instill competence in their children was to tell them how competent

they were. But here's the problem. Children can't be convinced that they are competent.

When parents try to convince their children of how competent they are, they often have the exact opposite effect. There is this little thing called reality that children have to confront on a daily basis. When children are faced with the conflict between what their parents had told them about how good they are and what reality is telling them, the resu lt is the bursting of the “You are the best” bubble that their parents blew up for them.

You can, however, do several things to encourage them to develop their own competence. First, you can give them opportunities in their daily lives to gain a sense of competence, for example, dressing, eating, drawing, cooking, and interacting with others. These daily experiences allow your children to develop specific competencies that will be helpful to them as they progress through childhood and into adulthood.

Second, you can be sure that they gain the most value from their experiences. You can direct

their focus to the competencies that enabled those successes (e.g., “You were really focused and worked h ard on that project.”) rather than some generic praise of the accomplishment itself (e.g., “Good job.!). And you can praise their accomplishments (e.g., “You must feel so good about your project.”).

But you shouldn't just focus on the successes because, as every parent knows, as your children develop, they will experience far more failures than successes as they begin to gain competence. How you react often dictates how they will respond to those failures. if you are positive

and supportive, your children will get the message that failure is okay and just a part of life.

英语试卷答案

阅读理解：A:CBB B:BCD C:DBCD

七选五：GDECA

完形填空：CACDB BADBD CADBD CABDA

语法填空：61. its 62. that 63. a 64. to pass 65. escaping 66. which 67. warmer 69. greatly 70. contributions

A篇(兴趣与爱好)

本文是应用文。文章介绍了Civic Art Museum的一个展览，并对每个展览馆的展品进行了概述。

21. C。细节理解题。由Gallery A部分中的Certain types of buildings are placed in particular areas according to the Dogon’s complex philos ophical tradition可知答案。

22. B。细节理解题。由Gallery B部分中的Masks are important to West African traditions and have clear social, political, and economic roles可知，面具在各个领域均发挥着重要作用。

23. B。细节理解题。由Gallery C部分中的The Dogon are especially known for making figures of their ancestors可知答案。

B篇(人际关系)

本文是记叙文。作者是美国人，共同的名字让他与维也纳的一家人成为了好朋友。

24. B。细节理解题。由第一段的search for people who shared the same names ... tried her ... brother’s name — Marcus, and that was how she hit upon me可知，名字促成了作者与Monica之间的友谊。

25. C。细节理解题。由第二段的if I could tell her something that I thought they should know before they began their great adventure可知，Regine和丈夫打算骑着摩托车在美国旅行，于是她冒昧地给作者写邮件询问关于美国的信息。

26.D。推理判断题。由最后四段作者去了维也纳与Gottlieb一家相处融洽、交谈甚欢可知，作者的维也纳之旅非常愉快。

C篇(健康)

本文是说明文。作为一名心脏病学专家，作者认为充足的睡眠对我们的心脏健康最为重要。

27. D。细节理解题。由第二段中的Large studies have found that making improvements in these four areas lowers the chance of dying of heart disease by 67 percent可知，大量研究表明，这四个建议对人们的健康有益。

28. B。细节理解题。由第三段中的When researchers include enough sleep in their studies as a fifth cardio-preventive behavior change, they find that it lowers the chance of dying of heart disease even more 可知，最新研究表明，充足的睡眠对心脏健康更重要。

29. C。推理判断题。由第四段中的When that news started coming out, doctors began tagging sleep onto their list of recommended health behavior changes可知，医生们认可该消息。

30. D。段落大意题。在最后一段，作者认为充足的睡眠是五个建议中最重要的，对此，他给出了自己的理由。

本文是说明文。作者推荐了几条外出旅游时的窍门。

31. G。根据下文作者认为大多数人推荐的巴士旅游毫无意义可知，空格处是人们喜欢乘坐大巴旅游的原因。

故选G项。

32. D。根据前一句人们的提问But what if I get lost?和下一句作者提到乘坐公交车和询问当地人的办法可知，在大城市没有人能完全迷了路。

33. E。出发前查询旅游目的地的历史和文化，可以让旅游者更好地了解这个地方。

34. C。根据本段的小标题Move around like a local，像本地人一样使用当地交通工具，不仅省钱还能了解当地人的生活方式。

35. A。A项中的a walking tour与本段中的select the nonstandard, inexpensive kinds led on foot相呼应。话题：日常活动

本文是议论文。文章主要探讨了现代的人们不再像以前的人那样经常在家做衣服和修理物品的原因。36. C。37. A。在下文中，作者列举了“导致（caused）”现代人不像过去的人那样经常自己做衣服和修理物品的几个“原因（reasons）”。

38. C。由第二段中的they didn’t have too many other activities to do可知，此处介绍的影响因素是“活动（activities）”的数量。

39. D。40. B。由下文中的they spent their free time doing some repairs and many women ... 可知，过去，人们下班之后天色还“早（early）”，因为没有其他事情可做，“因此（so）”他们可以从事修理等活动。

41. B。第一段中的people used to make clothes和下文中的make clothes themselves对此空有提示。

42. A。上文中的most of them didn’t even have a job和下文中的a large number of women work构成转折关系，因此应用however。

43. D。现代人无论男女都需要“应对（deal with）”工作压力。

44. B。由下文中的so they have little time to do repairs or make clothes themselves可知，他们需要工作很“长（long）”时间。

45. D。本空指现在的人们不再像以前的人们那样经常自己做衣服和修理物品这种“情况（situation）”。

46. C。下文中的their hobby对此空有提示。

47. A。由下文中的doing repairs takes up too much ...可知，你想“修理（fix）”的东西变得更专业、更复杂。

48. D。由上文中的requires a lot of time可知，做修理工作会占据非常多的“时间（time）”。

49. B。由下文中的nowadays, ... people have too many hobbies可知，现在的年轻人有太多其他的兴趣爱好，没有时间学习传统技艺，故传统技艺正在“失传（lost）”。

50. D。下文中的their parents对此空有提示。

51. C。由上文中的when they are young可知，此处指“年轻（young）”人。

52. A。由上文中的have too many hobbies可知，他们“几乎没有（hardly）”花时间向他们的父母学习传统技艺。

53. B。由上文中的people learn traditions可知，此处指向父母“学习（learning from）”传统技艺。

54. D。由下文中的are also contributing factors和this situation is可知，本段介绍的是最后一个原因，故选At last。

55. A。由上文中的globalization and the great technical advances可知，现代的人不像以前的人那样经常做衣服和修理物品，这种情况在全世界范围都有“发生（happening）”。

56. its。考查形容词性物主代词。设空处修饰surface，表示“它的”，故填its。

57. that。考查强调句。say后的从句是强调句，被强调部分为human activity，故填that。

58. a。考查不定冠词。greenhouse是可数名词，且在此表泛指，故填a。

59. to pass。考查动词不定式作宾语补足语的用法。allow sb. / sth. to do sth.意为“允许某人或某物做某事”。

60. escaping。考查动词-ing形式作宾语的用法。设空处作from的宾语，且heat与escape之间是逻辑上的主谓关系，故填escaping。

61. which。考查关系代词。设空处引导非限制性定语从句，指代主句的内容，且在从句中作主语，故填which。

62. warmer。考查形容词比较级。由设空处后的than可知，此处应用比较级，故填warmer。

6638. in。考查介词。result in意为“导致”。

64. greatly。考查副词。设空处作状语，修饰affect，故填greatly。

65. contributions。考查名词。make great contributions to (doing) sth.意为“为……作出巨大贡献”。

书面表达：

Dear fellow students,

As we all know, reading can not only broaden our horizons, but also keep our mind active, and help reduce stress. Therefore, let’s develop the habit of reading and enjoy the benefits of reading together. Here’s what we can do to achieve this goal.

First of all, spend a certain amount of time reading books every day instead of playing computer games or watching TV. Secondly, it is a good idea to visit bookstores or libraries regularly to buy or borrow our favorite books. Lastly, why not share the knowledge we gain from reading with our friends or classmates? This will not only do good to our writing but also promote our friendship.

Enjoy reading, enjoy lif e! Let’s take action!

Student Council

【答案】Parenting culture misleads parents to instill children’s competence by telling they are competent.（要点一）But it causes the opposite effect that children will be unsure about this competence when they face reality. （要点二）However, parents can offer opportunities like daily chores to develop children’s competence. （要点三）What’s more, ensure them gaining the most value from their experiences by focusing on their competences instead of success itself. （要点四）But beside success, failure should also be focused.（要点五）

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达要求写一篇内容概要。

读写类书面表达主要要求学生必须熟悉所读材料的整体结构与主旨大意，利用略读和检索阅读的方式寻求信息，对文中信息进行有效筛选、整合和综合概括。在阅读理解的基础上，对阅读信息进行二次理解、加工，归纳要点、整合零散信息，把加工后的信息准确有序的通过短文表达出来。学生应看清答题要求，并在答题中自始至终贯彻其要求。

文章主要讲述了父母对孩子能力的培养方式，范文将内容概要分成五个要点，思路清晰、层次分明。

【详解】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句的运用。Parenting culture misleads parents to instill children’s competence by telling the y are competent. 和ensure them gaining the most value from their experiences by focusing on their competences instead of success itself.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。