2017年英语高考阅卷心得

troubles . I dont kno ho to organize the files and ho to use ords express m thought, I d appreiate it if ou ould tell me the solutions to problems. I treasure this hanes ver

muh ,so it ould be ver kind of ou to help me.In order to onve m heartfelt thanks to ou . Ill visit ou after petition. Ill take ou to the Great Wall, and I am sure that oull be stuk b this amazing orld onder.良好即百分制 7778083紧扣主题,覆盖所有要点,内容较充实, 语言有少量错误, 但基本不影响意思表达.专家评定的25 分作文Ho is everthing going? Im so onerned about our life and stud. Wean muniate a lot in dail life.In order to partiipate in Middle shool students English speeh ontest in Jul, Im planning to searh for some useful information. But I find I have diffiult in searhing for information and spoken English. So I ant ask ou for our advie. Im sure Ill benefit a lot from our timel and valuable advie. Ill appreiate it our ould help me. After m speeh ontest, Ill e to see ou. I an sho ou around the tourist attrations. I think e ill have a onderful time! Looking forard to our earl repl.专家评定的22 分作文Ho is everthing going no ?I kno that ou ame to Beijing for stud last month. So does everthing in Beijing agree ith ou? if ou have an trouble living and studing in Beijing , I

ill go to help ou.Reentl, I took part in an English ontest

held in Beijing during holida. But I found it diffiult for me to look for useful information and the use the language properl. And there are of great importane to in the

ontest.Thus, an ou help me? Whats more, Im going to visit ou after the ontest. Is it onvinient for ou? I do hope that I an see ou again. Looking forard to our repl.一般即百分制

6066770紧扣主题.基本覆盖所有要点, 能够表达基本内容; 语言错误

已影响了部分意思表达,但多数句子基本正确.专家评定的21 分作文

Ho is everthing going ? Have ou alread adapted to the life in Beijing and do ou have some problem in our stud?I ant ait to tell ou the good nes that m middle shool have just alloed me join in the speeh ontest group. I ill be going to Beijing in Jul. But I still have some problem in searh the information and English ords, ould ou give me some suggestions? ou an all e in the next eek. Give me some advie on ho to use the

English ords and some must-see problems.I intend to meet ou after the speeh ontest, ou an sho me around Beijing and e an visit our shool!Best ishes! I ill ait for our earl repl.专家

评定的20 分作文Ho is everthing going? I feel greatl honorned to be our friend. Do ou smile at the life? And ho is our stud goes?I ill attend an English speeh ontest in Jul. But I have some troubles searhing the artiles and the using the language. Whats more, I dont kno ho to use the ords. On the one hand ,

I hope ou an help me solving these problems. On the other

hand, I ant to muniate ith ou. e have not muniate ith eah other for a long time. As far as Im onerned, ou an give me a great help. Whats more, I ant to pla ith ou. Im planning to go to the US after the speeh ontest, so that ou an introdue our hometon to me. Last but not least , remember to smile at our life. I ant ait to reeive our repl.专家评定的18 分作文I miss ou ver muh. I ant to kno that our life and stud. I hear that ou ame to Beijing to studied, so I ant to ask ou some questions.Beause I ill take part in a English ontest in summer holida, and I meet some problem hih olleting paper and using language. So I ant to ou an help me. It is important

for me . It is important for me to have our help. Beause ou have reahied Beijing, so I believe that ou an give me some suggestions. I kno that ou take interested in Chinese ulture, so I think ou give me papers in this a.When I finish the speeh ontest, I plan to visit ou to muniate some interesting ith ou.较差对应百分制 4475053 –57内容不完整,要点不全; 行文不连贯, 语言错误对应百分制20-- 227 –3033740内容混乱或主要内容偏离主题;能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句.专家评定的11 分作文I ant to see ou ver muh. Do ou have a matter? Your has the food in Beijing is must onderful. Whats the matter ith our life. I think is must fortable. And hats our stud has the matter? You English is ver muh. So, I think ou ould help me.I ill take part in a English speeh ontest. But,

I have a problem, so, I need our help, I think m language is bad. And, m rite is bad. So, I ant to ou help me . m English pla doesnt rite. So do ou rite a English pla to me? If ou an , Ill ver happ.I ait English speeh ontest finished, I ill go to Beijing visit ou.I hope ou reive letter to me, and I hope ou an quikl. Beause I ill go to ontest in April.Thank ou!专家评

定的8 分作文We have long time no meet. This is a ver problem.

I ver miss ou . ou life is ver ok, do ou ative? I am go to

the ative long time ou stud is ok? I have a speeh ontest .do ou help me. I ver hope ou help , ou are ver good.I have lots

of problem. I ant ou help to ost the problem.do ou help me,

this is a ver good and neet thints ou have to help. Beause e are a good friendsI eil go to ou home I ant meet ou.I ill go

to ou home to meet ou after the speeh ontest.极差 0710117只能写出与内容相关的词语,没有有效信息;抄写其他文章或只写出与作文

无关的内容.专家评定的4 分作文Hello, m good friend Tom. You

are in the time ho do ou happ? You in the Beijing . Can eat Chinese food? I think Chinese food is ver good. Want ou in

the Beijing learn sta is fun.I from to the Beijing in the 7 mon. from to in the student English speeh ontest. I hpe ou

help m English speeh ontest . I an speak English a later.

Hope ou help. Hoever, the speek ontest ask e an speak good English, ant ou lean to me.I ant the speeh ontest in the over. Go to ou home and ou shool ask to ou in long time dont look

ou. I is ver ver hope ou.In last, ant an ou help me. In the English speeh-ontest to be good. Thank ou. is ver thinks, be.

通过以上对评分细则的解读,也许各位老师内心多少有点触动或感悟.

下面是我在阅卷中从考生试卷中摘抄的经典高频出彩句子,或者是典型

错误,希望对老师在以后的教学中有些作用.出彩句子:

1. I have some diffiult in doing something.

Ill appreiate it if ou ----.

3. Onl ith ou help an I ---.

4. Faed ith so man problems, I have to turn to ou for help.

5. I ill partiipate in a speeh ontest to be held in Jul.

6. do somebod a favour

7. there is no doubt that lause

8. I am onvined that

9. I have no hoie but to典型错误Diffiult----diffiult grammergrammar informationsinformationadviesadviseadviea nesnesmounthmonthtroubles ---troublehearedheardI ver miss ou .

I ver happ . I am miss ou vermuh .I in favour of ou .I ill to visit ou.最后,我想对指导学生写作方面,谈以下我本人的一些粗浅的

做法.

1. 高考英语写作的类型并不是主要的事,关键的是教会学生如何

正确有序地根据题目所给的要点去表达. 我们山东从20** 至20** 年

作文全是书信, 因为书信最能有效地考查多个语言功能,比如说问候,

道歉,感谢. 不管山东还是全国各地的高考作文,都注重了学生的生活,

学生生活中,有可能接触到的事,人,或者某中想法. 总之一点,学生看

到作文题目后,都有东西可写,得分高低,就看个人的英语表达能力了.

要点全是得高分的首要事.指导学生提炼题目中的写作要点和要点间的逻辑关系, 做到行文流畅,至少能保证及格线.

3. 写对句子是保障. 作到要点全,行文流畅,句子对,至少在21

分左右,也有可能得到更高的分数,23, 24等.所以我们在平时的教学中,从简单的五中句型抓起,强化练习,保证70% 以上的同学能把句子写对,写出符合五中基本句型的句子,将是我们备考最有效的过程之一.

4. 整理加工能够让学生作文出彩的句型或高级词汇,不需要很多,多了学生记不住. 我认为有20-30 个就足已.这是影响作文提高的瓶颈问题. 这个问题看来简单,其实要付出我们全体老师共同的智慧和汗水,方可完成这一任务. 我晚上无困意的时候,我总在想这个问题,我们是

否形成自己的独特的有效的指导学生写作的蓝本,公式化,具体化,让英语作文得高分,不在是神话.

5. 我对英语作文高分总结了几句话,这也是我在阅卷中对写作的

感受的凝聚.从整个阅卷的感受,我给考生三句话. 首段勿出错二段要出彩三段快收敛为了能使考生写好高分作文,我编了几句三字经,也

许有点作用. 要点全,行文畅. 句子对,忌罗嗦. 内容实,别空洞. 有细节,勿干瘪. 有亮点,避造作. 卷面净,布局美. 得高分,我怕谁.总之, 这次高考阅卷给自己带来好多的感动,因为从中学习了好多东西,高考

阅卷的过程不再是头脑中凭空的想像; 同时内心产生了巨大的冲动,发自内心的一份动力油然而生,摩拳擦掌,兴奋不已; 更多的是,阅卷的过程和阅卷工作结束后的思考给自己带来心灵上的触动,感到以前对事物

的感知是那样的肤浅;自己在教学中好像还有点责任没有完全尽到;自己在工作还缺少更多的思考和总结;自己好像对高考研究的还不够深,而骄傲自满.刘广厚