天津高考英语作文2011真题解析及应试策略.doc

天津五年高考作文探究

引言

天津卷作文，从近几年的趋势不难看出，天津卷侧重书信、email、演讲稿等实用性强的作文题材，这类题材考察目的当然是考察学生的英语表达能力、创新能力，非常体现现在学习英语的终极目标，听说读写都要并重，学习了十几年的英语，写不出一篇像样的文章绝对不是我们想要的，所以针对天津市考试的规律与趋势，务必大家要掌握这些作文的考察方向，在平时注意积累相关知识及素材，写出符合英文表达要求的英语作文。

下面以天津市近几年的考试真题为例解析一下考试规律和应对策略

2017高考天津卷

书面表达（满分25分）

61.

假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。

（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；

（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；

（3）希望她有机会重访天津。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。

（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；

（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；

（3）希望她有机会重访天津。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mrs. Green,

I’m so glad to hear from you. I’m writing to tell yo u something about my life and study in recent days. I’m very busy with my lessons now, for the Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near. Every day, I have to spend most of my time studying. As a result, I don’t have enough time to take exercise, what’s worse, I don’t communicate a lot with my parents and my friends.

By the way, I am now a volunteer for the 13th National Games, which will be held at the end of August in Tianjin. In order to be a qualified volunteer, I have to

improve myself by reading some books about Tianjin so as to know more about it.

Will you please pay a visit to Tianjin once more so that we may meet again, for I miss you very much !

Looking forward to seeing you a second time.

Yours,

Li Jin 2016天津卷

假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。（1）回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；

（2）谈谈收获或感情；

（3）表达祝愿语期望。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear friends,

How time flies!

Thank you.

【参考范文1】Dear friends,

How time flies. It has been two weeks since you came to our school for the exchange program, which has benefited all of us.

During the past two week, we have been buried in study in the same classroom and lived in the same dormitory harmoniously, which has enabled us to know each other better. Doing the same sports on the playground gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship. What impresses us most is your art skills, in which you showed your outstanding talent. We believe that the students in our school have learned a lot from the exchange program.

At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish you will have a safe and happy journey home and that we will have more programs like this in the future. Thank you.

【参考范文2】Dear friends,

How time flies! My name is Li Jing. I’m very glad to have the chance to speak here. I feel greatly honored to be here to say a few words to welcome you. The topic of my speech is friendship.

As is known to all, we have friends from the UK. They have been here two weeks. But they

need to go back their hometown now. So let’s look back the activity that we have experienced. In the first place, they got knowledge from us, and then we live together. Secondly, we play basketball and soccer together. Finally, we are talking about different art from different country. I think students of UK and us must gain more things. It’s really interesting,isn’t it? I hope we’ll be more better in the future. Therefore, let’s see the guests off sincerely. Thank you.

2015年高考天津卷

假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。

（1）自我介绍；

（2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；

（3）询问对方的其他需求。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

参考词汇：学生会the Student Union

Dear Chris,

I am Li hua, chairman of the student union, from Chenguang high school. I am writting to tell you something about donating books to your class. to enhance communication with your school, we prepared about 100 books ranging from chinese cartoon to literature. With them, you may have a better understanding of china and its culture, we will take the books when participating in the summer camp this July to your school.

Would you please tell me something about your other requirements? We will spare no effort to meet your needs. I sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and more and developing our friendship.

Best wishes

Your sincerely,

Li hua

2014年高考

第二节：书面表达（满分25分）

61.假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：

（1）表示欢迎

（2）介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如天气，饮食等）

（3）介绍本班情况

（4）希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊

注意：

（1）请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

（3）词数不少于100；开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（4）参考词汇：

交换生exchange student

Dear Chris,

I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.I hear you will come to china as an exchange student. Welcome to china! There are fifty students in our class and all of them are very friendly and hardworking. The teachers are also kind and helpful.the weather here is warm but sometimes the wind is strong.I think you will adapt to it soon. There are a variety of food here, which will make your stay pleasant.to strengthen the friendship between the American students and the Chinese students, I hope you can tell your classmates in American about our culture and tradition, which will help them understand our country better.

Look forward to seeing you soon.

yours

Li Jin

2013年高考

五、书面表达

61.假设你是某大学的学生李津，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。

?个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等）

?组织校内的活动的设想（如举办讲座、英语晚会等）

?组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等）

?表达竞选的愿望。

注意：

1.词数不少于100；

2.请勿提及真实学校姓名

3.可适当的加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；

4.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

副主席：vice president

竞选：run for

Good afternoon,my dear friends,

My name is Li Jin, I am glad to have this opportunity to run for vice president of our English Club.

I am responsible,sociable,and easy-going by nature. Additionally, I have varied interests,I love singing and playing the drums as well as soccer. I am also a good listener and always open to different opinions. I am confident that I can do the job well.

If I am selected as vice president of our English Club, I will organize all kinds of activities to enrich our school life. I will host an English lecture every week, inviting our experienced English teachers and our students who do well in English to give advice on

learning English. An English Evening will be held every other week, allowing us a stage to show our talents.

At the same time, I will organize exchange activities between schools, we will hold debate competitions and speech contests, through these activities, we will create an English atmosphere so that everyone in our school will improve their English studies.

I believe I am the right person for this post and I hope to have your support and vote.

Thank you.

2012年高考

第二节：书面表达（满分25分）

61. 假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2：00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。

*提出邀请并简述原因；

*提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等）

*请求对方回复

注意：

1.请使用规范英语，词数不少于100；

2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

越剧：Shaoxing Opera 《梁山伯与祝英台》Butterfly Lovers

天津大剧院Tianjin Grand Theater

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you that Shaoxing opera Butterfly lovers will be put on in Tianjin Grand theater buit before long. Shaoxing opera is one of the famous chinese operas , like Beijing Opera. It shows the Chinese traditional culture , the story of butterfly lovers is very familiar and popular to chinese people, just like the story of Romeo and Juliet in the west world. You can learn much knowledge about chinese culture through this opera.

I think we can visit Tianjin Museum after watching butterfly lovers.there are many history articles which can help you to know chinese culture better.

I sincerely invite you to take part in the activities i tell you above with me. Please send a massage and tell me what you think.

Yours

Li jin

2011年高考

假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。

上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；

中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；

下午与我校学生游览海河。

注意：

1. 次数不少于100；

2. 可是当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。

参考词汇：

海河the Haihe River

Dear Mr Smith

I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. I am honored to make arrangements for you and your students on behalf of our school.in order to give the students from the two countries a good chance to understand each other better, we will have a talk about the school life, and the cultural differences in the morning, after that, we will have lunch together in the school dinning hall, where we can enjoy some traditional Chinese foods, such as dumplings, noodles and so on. I hope the students from America will have a better understanding of the Chinese culture. In the afternoon, we will visit the Haihe River, which is the most beautiful river in our city.I am sure you will be deeply struck by the beautiful scenery.

I will be glad to follow it if you have any better advice on the arrangements

Thank you

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

写作素材以及模板

高级表达句型

Be expert at/in/on doing sth 擅长做2.be bound to do sth一定会做

Be bound up in doing sth 专心做某事4. Be occupied in doing sth忙于做某事5.be determined to do sth决定做某事6. Have a great command of 对…很好的掌握7. Have a great knowledge of 对…很好的了解8. Spare no effort to do sth不遗余力做9. Commit oneself to doing sth致力于做10. Devote oneself to doing sth 全心全意做某事11.make a contribution to doing sth对…有贡献12.have affection for 喜欢13. Be fed up with 讨厌14.be firmly convinced of （sth或doing sth）be firmly convinced that +句子对…很确信15. Be of great benefit to sth Be beneficial to sth 对…有好处16. 1.There be 句型there is no need to do sth 2. There is no doubt

that 3. There is some doubt whether 17. Have an effect/impact on 对…有影响18. Apologize to sb for doing sth 19. Arrange for sb to do sth 20. Arrange with sb to do sth 21.be equipped to do sth准备做某事22.be equal to doing sth 23. Only by doing sth can sb do sth24. It is worthwhile for sb to do sth 25. Be concerned about 26. Show great interest in 27. Be exposed to doing sth接触…28. Be grateful to sb for sth 29. Have faith in 30. Have a gift for sth 31. Have nothing to do with have something to do with 32. Be eager to do sth long to do sth33. Make the best of 34. Be accustomed to doing sth 35. Show mercy to sb have mercy on sb 36. At the mercy of 37. Make fun of 38. Play tricks on 39. Be concerned with 40. Keep sth in mind 41. Have no alternative but to do sth 42. It occurs to sb that 43. Provide sb with sth/provide sth for sb 44. Forbid sb to do sth/ ban sb from doing sth 45.show/pay respect for sb 46. Bear responsibility for 47. Set out to do sth/set about doing sth 着手做48.be strict with sb in doing sth 49. Have a tendency to do sth/ tend to do sth 50. Sb firmly hold the advice that +句子51. Sb firmly hold the opinion that +句子52. Be willing to do sth 53.

Be in the hope that +句子54. V +sb +for+sth (blame ,forgive, punish, scold, thank)55. V+sb+of+sth（accuse, cure, inform, remind, rid, rob, warn, suspect, convince）56. Have /gain access to doing sth 有机会做57. Pose a great threat to ~~ （对……造成一大威胁）

例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。58. Get into the habit of + Ving = make it a rule to + V （养成……的习惯）

We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。

59. bring home to + 人+ 事（让……明白……事）

例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。

60. Adj + as + Subject（主词）+ be，S + V~~~ （虽然……）

例句：Rich as our country is，the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

61. So + 形容词+ be + 主词+ that + 句子（如此……以致于……）

例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它62. …的主要理由是…

The main reason why ….. is (that)子句

例︰青少年犯罪的主要理由是社会环境日一败坏。

The main reason why the juveniles commit crimes is that social environment is becoming worse.

63. 在讨论…一个人不得不承认…。

In dealing with …, one cannot but admit (that)子句

例︰在讨论未来的职业,一个人不得不承认尽早决定未来的职业很重要。

In dealing with one's future career, one cannot but admit that it is very important to decide one's future career as early as possible.

64. 世上没有什么比…更令我高兴。

Nothing in the world can delight me so much as …

例︰世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴。

Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fast-food restaurants. 65．常用谚语(在议论文中):

1) As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”.

2) As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. On the one hand, physical exercise is good for your health. On the other hand, if you don t deal with it properly, it will do harm to your health. So we should look at the matter from two sides.

3) As a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way.” (有志者事竟成)

4) As a popular saying goes, “A man is known by the company he keeps.”(观其交友,知其为人)

5) As is known to all, “No pains, no gains”.(没有苦,就没有甜)

66. On no account can we + V ~~~ （我们绝对不能……）

例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

67、It is time + that +从句（+ 过去式）（该是……的时候了）

例句：It is time that you spared no effort to learn English by heart.

68. be aware of sth / be aware that +句子意识到

2.熟练掌握各种从句

1.说明原因。There are some reasons behind my choice/the reasons are chiefly as follows. First of all, the reason why +简单句is that +简单句

2.what is more, it is widely acknowledged that +简单句

https://www.360docs.net/doc/3c7216919.html,st but not least. No one can deny that +简单句2.提建议

Here are some suggestions which I think may be helpful. 1.first and foremost, I firmly hold the advice that+简单句2. Besides, it is high time that we took measures to do sth3. Last but not least, what is the most important is that +简单句总结句only by doing these I have mentioned can the problem be solved.

3.观点表达

开头部分：

1）We have discussed whether to surf on the net on weekdays.

2）W e have debated whether China should develop private car industry.

3）The students of Senior Three in our school have had a heated discussion about whether Senior Three students should attend the sports meeting.

过渡句：

?Opinions are divided on the question．

?Opinions vary from person to person.

?引入观点的持有者：

Nearly a quarter of people think//believe that…

Almost a half of the students suggest that …

Thirty percent of us be are against that

Another fifty percent of us hold the belief that…

The majority of them support that…/oppose that…+简单句

不同观点之间的过渡句：

?But another twenty percent disagree with them.

?However, the rest suggest that …

On the other hand, nearly a third of us hold the belief that …+简单句

?While the other thirty percent students hold the opposite opinion.

结束句：

?The discussion is very exciting although we have not reached an agreement.

?we have one thing in common that+简单句

although we hold the different opinion.

高考书信作文模板

询问信

Dear ______ ,

①I am ______（自我介绍）. ②I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding ______（要询问的内容）.

③First of all, what are ______（第一个问题）? ④Secondly, when will ______（第二个问题）? ⑤Thirdly, is ______（第三个问题）?

⑥I would also like to inquire ______（将最重要的问题单独成段）. ⑦Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?

⑧Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

请求信

Dear ______ ,

①I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.

②The reason for ______is that ______（给出原因）. ③I ______ , so I ______

（给出细节）.

④I would also like to request ______（提出进一步的要求）. ⑤I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.

⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests. ⑦If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at ______（电话号码）. ⑧I look forward to a favorable reply. Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

祝贺信

Dear ______ ,

①I have learned with delight that you ______（祝贺事由）. ②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. ③You must be ______. ④And I feel very happy for you.

⑤______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! ⑥I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝贺人的优点）.

⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.⑨I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）. ⑩My best wishes for your further success.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

推荐信

Dear ______ ,

①It affords me much pleasure to recommend ______（要推荐的人）to you.②During his/her graduate years he/she was my ______ . ③As his/her ______ I found

him/her ______（介绍与此人的关系）.

④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding. ⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents in ______ . ⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality. ⑦He has developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him is always. ⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.（介绍此人的

能力）

⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart. ⑩Should you favor him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university？I am sure that his/her future conduct/academic work will prove worthy of your confidence. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

投诉信

Dear ______,

①I am ______（自我介绍）. ②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.

③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______（总体介绍）. ④In the first place, ______（抱怨的第一个方面）. ⑤In addition, ______（抱怨的第二个方面）. ⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______（感觉）to______（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）.

⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______（提出建议和请求）, preferably

______（进一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by ______（设定解决事情最后期限）. ⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

建议信

Dear ______,

①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.

②In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______（建议的内容）.

③I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

邀请信

Dear ______ ,

①There will be a ______（内容）at/in ______（地点）on ______（时间）. ②We would be honored to have you there with us.

③The occasion will start at ______（具体时间）. ④This will be followed by a

______（进一步的安排）. ⑤At around ______（时间）, ______（另一个安排）.

⑥I really hope you can make it. ⑦RSVP before ______（通知你的最后期限）. Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

道歉信

Dear ______,

①I am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）.

②The reason is that ______（介绍原因）. ③Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. ④Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

感谢信

Dear ______ ,

①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______（感谢的原因）. ②If it had not been for your assistance in ______（对方给予的具体帮助）, I fear that I would have been ______（没有对方帮助时的后果）.

③Every one agrees that it was you who ______（给出细节）.

④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

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With best wishes.

致以我诚挚的祝福

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

期待您的回信

I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.

如果您能尽早回复我会万分感激

I sincerely hope this letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problem mentioned above can solved as soon as possible。

我衷心希望这封信可以引起您的注意，并且也希望以上问题能够及早得到解决