自2016年起,专四考试写作部分改革,要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等,写一篇200词左右的作文。出现

专四新题型写作

自2016年起，专四考试写作部分改革，要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等，写一篇200词左右的作文。出现的新题型命题+材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。考生可以采取“简短概述材料—评论—总结”的写作模式。值得注意的是，在写作过程中，概述材料和进行评论缺一不可，否则将可能被扣分。例题1

PART VI WRITING

Read carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS, in which you should:

1)Summarize the main message of the excerpt, and

then

2)Comment on whether students learn more from

classes than from other resources

You can support yourself with information from the excerpt.

Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of

marks.

范文1

In the information age, the traditional student-teacher relationship has been affected deeply and people begin to doubt whether students can learn more from classes than

from other resources.（介绍背景）According to the conventional view, teachers are still the primary source from which students obtain professional knowledge, timely class interaction, and effective supervision from teachers.（总结第一种观点）On the contrary, nowadays, many people believe that students can learn more from other resources such as Internet and TV since they are more accessible and engage students more actively in research.（总结第二种观点）

For me, I am in favor of the first view.（表明立场）Teachers play an irreplaceable role in education, whether it’s in the past or at present, since they not only impart knowledge, but also educate people.（总论据）For one thing, what students learn from their classes is more precise than from other resources which provide an enormous amount of data needed to be sifted through to determine which information is accurate.（理由一）For another, teachers in school put the shaping of personality in a place as important as the teaching of knowledge, which is hard for students to obtain from other resource.（理由二）

In conclusion, the development of cutting-edge

technology exert s a big impact on modern education. However, it can never eliminate the need for high-quality professionals in classroom.（重申论点）(213 words)

例题2

PART VI WRITING

Read carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS, in which you should:

1）Summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then 2）Comment on whether people should choose to become indoorsy

You can support yourself with information from the excerpt.

Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

范文2

审题思路

本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。在具体行文方面，考生应首先简要概述正方观点：“宅”是现代的一种新型生活方式。然后概述反方观点：“宅”有种种弊端。接下来给出自己的观点：现代科技是把双刃剑，我们要把握好，适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利，但过度依赖则会对身体有害。最后总结全文，重申观点。

Should We Embrace Indoorsy Lifestyle?

With the globalization of modern technology, especially the world-wide access to Internet service, people’s lifestyle has been greatly influenced. (介绍背景) Some enjoy indoorsy lifestyle. They hold that indoorsy lifestyle is time-saving and peaceful. In contrast, those against the idea claim that keep an indoorsy lifestyle will do harm to people both psychologically and physically.（总结材料）

As far as I am concerned,modern technology is a double-edged sword.（点明观点）If we consider it as a useful tool to improve our life,it will certainly bring unprecedented convenience to us. With the assistance of the Internet, one can save his time through working, shopping, or communicating with others at home.（正方理由一）Also, solitude isn’t always equal to loneliness. Free from outside interruption, one can be creative and keep his mind sharp.（正方理由二）On the other hand, too much reliance on or indulgence in the Internet will certainly have an impact on our normal life and work. For instance,indulging in social network online may corrode peoples’ social skills. To be specific,they may

feel lost when talking with people face-to-face, which may affect their normal relationship with family members and friends.（反方理由一）What’s worse, sitting in front of a computer all day long means little outdoor activities, which may damage one’s health.（反方理由二）

In conclusion,while enjoying all the benefits the virtual world has brought to us, indoorsy people should also step out of their home and engage themselves in the real world.（总结上一段）(234 words)