高中英语短文改错专项训练(最新整理)

短文改错专项训练

下面短文中每篇各有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

Passage 1

It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry． The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital．

Passage 2

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

Passage 3

Dear sir,

Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.

Customer

Li Ming

Passage 4

I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.

Passage 5

I feel quite sure the chemistry test that we’re going to have tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good．In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test.

Passage 6

Dear Susan,

I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.

Yours,

Zhang Ming Passage 7

Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English.

I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from

many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.

Passage 8

If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success.

Passage 9

Dear Mary,

I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. I’m afraid I couldn’t agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I’ m looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Passage 10

Dear Ralph,

I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?

Passage 11

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other when fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

Passage 12

Today is the happy day in this holiday. Although I was very tired, but I found myself in these busy days.

I am afraid of taken a bus usually, the awful smell of the bus drive I mad, make me feel carsick. But today I did feel carsick. I can defeat carsickness finally. At night I went out with an old friend who I ever like him, but all of us were busy in the examination at the high school that we hadn't been together. I was such surprised as I received his calling. At first, I thought we would never meet before we graduated. Thank him gave me a happy day!

Passage 13

Dancing is my hobby and otherwise, when I heard there would be a get-together to celebrate the 60th National Day in the evening of October 1st, I signed up for the performance. Luckily, I become a member of the dance group. During the summer vacation, I practiced hard with others regardless of the cold weather. After the new school term began, when I carried on with the practice while I was working hard at my studies. And finally, the great day came. In the evening, thousands people gathered in the splendid Tiananmen Square. By the bright lights shining around, we were dancing to the pleasant music happily and joyful. Beautiful fireworks in the clear night sky added to my excited. It was realty an unforgettable experience.

Passage 14

Most families in China hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. So do teachers in school! Many children are given so much homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder such many children are tired of lessons. Some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our government is making out a plan to solve the education problems.

参考答案

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Passage 2

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Passage 3

Dear sir,

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Customer

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I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my

friend’s to place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s listened

parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer

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holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but

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had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came ∧ see me every day. Then his father has

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Passage 5

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Passage 6

Dear Susan,

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to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the

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Have Yours,

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Passage 8

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Passage 9

Dear Mary,

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Passage 10

Dear Ralph,

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Passage 11

1. friend改为friends【解析】考查名词数的变化。Most of 决定了名词必须用复数形式。

2. it改为one【解析】考查代词用法。it代替同一个，one指同类里边的一个，此处我希望我也能有一辆，与前面提到的是一类。

3.that改为which【解析】考查非限制性定语从句关系词。非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用that.

4.the money前加for 【解析】考查介词用法。此处ask my father的目的应该是钱。ask my father与the money之间需要加表目的的介词。

5. He改为I【解析】考查代词用法。由前句he said he could only give me half of the money. 和后句的myself.可知此处应该改为I.

6. If改为when【解析】考查连词用法。按照句意应该是一个月后，当我给他看钱的时候，可知此处应该用when。

7. After改为later【解析】考查副词用法。此处用副词，不能用连词。

8. gives改为gave【解析】考查动词时态。按照上下文叙述的都是发生地事情。

9. 去掉happy前的much.考查副词用法。此处how与happy之间不需要加任何词。

Passage 12

1. happy改为happiest 【解析】考查形容词。此句意为，今天是假期中最高兴的一天。故将原型happy改为最高级happiest。

2. 去掉but 【解析】考查表转折的连词。因为本句的句首用Although，所以此处不再用but。故将but去掉。

3. taken改为taking 【解析】考查动词ing的用法，of是介词，其后用动词的ing形式，即动名词形式。

4. I改为me 【解析】考查动词后宾语的使用形式。此处谓语动词drive后应该用“我”的宾格形式，即me。

5. did改为didn’t或did后加not 【解析】上文说到，通常我害怕坐公共汽车，汽车难闻的气味让我发疯，使我感到晕车。且下文说，我最终打败了晕车的习惯。所以上下文表达的是转折的意思。故此处意为“但是今天我不晕车了。”所以加上not。

6. like改为liked 【解析】考查动词的时态。这句话的意思是，晚上我和一位我曾经喜欢的老

朋友一块出去。故将现在时改为一般过去式。

7. all改为both 【解析】考查代词。我们两个人用both，三人或三人以上用all。

8. in改为with 【解析】考查固定搭配be busy with sth忙于做某事。

9. as改为that 【解析】考查so和such的区别。So后通常接形容词或副词，such后接名词，此处surprised是形容词，意为“惊讶的”。所以将such改为so。

10. before改为after 【解析】这句话要表达的意思是“起初，我以为我们毕业后将不会再见面了”，所以把before改为after。

Passage 13

1. otherwise改为therefore【解析】考查副词。这句话的意思是“跳舞是我的爱好，因此当我听到…”，otherwise意为“否则”；therefore意为“因此”。故将otherwise改为therefore。

2. in改为on【解析】考查介词。在具体的某一天的晚上用on，所以将in改为on。

3. become改为became【解析】考查动词的时态。通篇文章都是用的一般过去式，所以此处将become改为became。

4.cold改为hot【解析】考查常识判断。由上文“During the summer vacation”可知他们是在暑假排练，因此此处将cold改为hot。

5. 去掉when或去掉while 【解析】考查连接副词。when和while都可以引导时间状语从句，在此应该去掉其中一个，避免重复。

6. thousands后加of 【解析】考查名词的数。“成千上万的人”应该表示为thousands of，thousands不能单独修饰名词，故在thousands后加of。

7.By改为With【解析】考查with结构。这里是with结构作伴随状语，by常意为“通过、由”。

8. joyful改为joyfully 【解析】考查副词。此处是副词修饰动词，且和happily做并列的修饰成分，所以将joyful改为joyfully。

9. excited改为excitement 【解析】考查名词。此句意为“夜空中美丽的烟火增添了我的兴奋”，所以此处应该改为名词作宾语，故将excited改为excitement。

Passage 14

1. hoped改为hope 【解析】考查时态。此处说的是一般情况，意为“中国的大部分家庭都希望他们的独生子女有一个幸福的未来”。所以将hoped改为hope。

2. in改为with 【解析】考查固定搭配。Be strict with sb，be strict in sth，此处后面接的是their children。所以将in改为with。

3. do改为are 【解析】考查前后照应。上文说到“so they are very strict with their children”，此

处应该是so are teachers in schools（他们对学校老师也是如此）。故将in改为with。

4. spare time后加to 【解析】考查固定搭配。have … time to do sth意为“有时间做某事”。故在spare time后加to。

5. 去掉anything but后的to 【解析】考查不定式的用法。通常情况下，but前有do，后面就没有to。因此去掉anything but后的to。

6. such改为so 【解析】考查so的用法。many为形容词，应该用so（副词）来修饰，而不是such（形容词）来修饰。故将such改为so。

7. his改为their 【解析】考查形容词形物主代词。这句话的意思是“有些学生甚至袭击或杀害他们的父母和老师”，所以将his改为their。

8. people后加have 【解析】考查动词的时态。此句意为“我相信很多人已经在报纸或杂志上读了这类新闻”。“已经读了”表达为have read，所以在people后加have

9. draw后加a 【解析】考查可数名词的单复数。此句意为“难道我们不从这些事件中得到一个教训（经验）吗？”lesson为可数名词，意为“经验、教训”。故在draw后加a。

10. making改为carrying 【解析】考查固定搭配。实施计划用“carry out a plan”，故将making 改为carrying。