【英语】中考英语书面表达专题练习经典1

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

1．（题文）书面表达

在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：

1. 定时做饭、洗衣服；

2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；

3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打120）

假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。

要求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；

2. 词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）

3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时

emergency 紧急情况

ccompany sb. 陪伴某人

Ladies and gentlemen,

Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,

Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to intr oduce my new invention to all of you.

I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exerci se. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.

I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future 等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的

最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。

My Life At School

How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.

【答案】My Life At School

How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.

In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.

I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不

能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

3．假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。

要求:1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。

Dear Bill,

Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?

Tell me about your ideal job!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。【详解】

首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向Bill提出问题，结束全文。

【点睛】

本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。

4．书面表达

难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。

注意:1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;

2.短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺;

3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.

【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.

In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”为题，结合本题

所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。文中not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表达了自己愿望与想法，使文章增色不少，值得学习。

5．环境保护人人有责，如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。

某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。

提示词语： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action

提示问题：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our

d aily life? ● What’s your wish?

Now there are many environmental

problems._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.

I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.

I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。

例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。

句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点

中可能要用到的表达，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

6．近年来，习近平主席提出了实现中华民族伟大复兴的“中国梦”。学校开展了“梦想少年”的主题演讲活动，假如你是张明，请根据以下提供的要点，以“I'm a Dream Teenager”为题，写一篇80－100词的短文，向大家推介自己。（可联系实际，适当发挥）

注意：1．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

提示词语：1.be good at 2.help..with 3.follow...rules 4.cheer up 5.be popular with...

6.volunteer to do something

【答案】I'm a Dream Teenager

Good morning， dear teachers and friends， I am Zhang Ming． It's great honor for me to make a speech here．

As a fifteen-year-old boy， my dream is to be a good teacher． To make my dream come true， I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects． Also， I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much， and I really enjoy sports． At school， I always follow the school rules， so I am popular with my classmates and teachers． On weekends， I'd like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up．

In a word， I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That's all． Thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇图表作文。学校开展“梦想少年”的主题演讲活动，假如你是张明，要求根据图表提示内容，以“I'm a Dream Teenager”为题，写一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根据所给出的材料提示可知文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的

表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，要将图表内提示信息用英语正确的表达出来，要涵盖图表中提到的所有要点，注意理顺要点，防止漏写。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

7．李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说, 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华, 请你给Jessica写一封信, 介绍该节日。内容须包含以下所有要点：

1. 中秋节的时间；

2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；

3, 我最期待的活动。

要求：1.80--100词〔开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。

Dear Jessica,

I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to

you.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jessica,

I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories. For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。全文可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的活动。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

8．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计

划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。

写作内容：

1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。

2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。

3.读自己喜欢的书。

4.远离危险的地方。写作要求：

1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。

2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。

3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。

My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.

【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.

Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.

I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.

【解析】

试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”

等其他人称。文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：come to an end结束；on the way在途中；get close to nature亲近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事；take part in sth参加活动。用了一些衔接词besides等，句子过度自然。用了because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。

考点：考查提纲作文。

9．书面表达

初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。

要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整洁。 3.80词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。Dear editor,

I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.

Best wishes,

Yours Lihua

【答案】Dear editor,

I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will

give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.

This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li hua

【解析】

【分析】

这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

10．书面表达

为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，某英语网站正在举办以"My Mother"为主题的征文活动，请根据下列思维导图所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事。

参考词汇：give much to…，It's my turn to…，try my best to…

提示：

1）短文内容须包括所给内容，含母亲曾为你所做的事和你将为母亲所做的事各一件，并阐述原因；

2）请注意短文结构层次、时态运用和卷面整洁度；

3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

4）文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息。

My Mother

We need love．We also need to show love．The person I love most is my

mother．___．

【答案】My mother

We need love．We also need to show love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher

in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．

She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．

When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，要求以"My Mother"为主题写一篇短文介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事，参加某英语网站正在举办的征文活动。在写作时，注意文章文体、人称和时态；注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。