高考英语新题型---读后续写训练六篇

高考英语新题型---读后续写训练六篇（供山东2017级及以后的

高中学生使用）

“读后续写”试题引入的背景：

1. 2015年8月，教育部考试中心发布《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》（高考综合改革试验省份试用）（第一版），明确了考试内容和要求，考试形式与试卷结构，提供了一份参考试卷。首次提出了写作新题型：读后续写或概要写作，两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用。参考试卷的读后续写，记叙文，试题未提供标题。

2.

2016年10月，新高考英语首考，写作第二节题型为读后续写，记叙文，试题未提供标题。

3.

2017年6月，新高考英语第二考，写作第二节题型为读后续写，记叙文，试题未提供标题。原文出处《美国读者文摘》Reader's Digest，标题是Attacked

By a Wolf! What One Smart Cyclist Did to Save His

Life。

4. 2017年11月，新高考英语第三考，写作第二节题型为读后续写，记叙文，试题提供标题A

Vacation with My Mother。

5.

2018年6月，新高考英语第四考，写作第二节题型为读后续写，记叙文，试题未提供标题。原文出处是一外教的教育博客。

试题解读：

1.从题型设计看，《普通高中英语课程标准》（2017年版）明确了英语课程内容包含六个要素：主题语境、语篇类型、语言知识、文化知识、语言技能和学习策略。

读后续写题型能很好地检测学生的学习效果，即阅读理解的能力和书面表达的能力。

2.从评分标准看，评分原则涵盖四个方面：一是与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；二是内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况；三是应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；四是上下文的连贯性。

3.从实际阅卷看，把握的具体原则和规范如下：

(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；

(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；

(3)上下文的连贯性；

(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。

读后续写训练六篇：

一、读后续写（25分）

A farmer grew some

vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no

money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The

next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was

raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the

street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought

some medicine and hurried to his village.

On

his way home he saw a person lying on the

snow. He placed his

baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get u

p.

At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on

his body. He was so afraid

that

he ran

away quickly,

without taking the baskets with him.

The

next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police

station. Having shown

the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes, sir.” the

farmer answered timidly（胆怯地）. “Have you killed the

man” “No, no, sir.”

the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About

seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.”

The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet”

“No, sir.” The officer became angry and

told the policemen to beat

him up and

sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into

the confession(供认),

but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.

注意：

1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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The

officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up

again.

The

farmer was lucky .A few days later,

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The

officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up

again. The farmer was very afraid, he

thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he

didn’t, he was innocent. He must tell people the

truth, but no one could hear his voice. he hoped that someone could

come and save him.

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The farmer was lucky .A

few days later, a young

man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying

that he saw the murderer. It was the

police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the

police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening. he

was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the

farmer was innocent. So he took

the great courage to expose the real criminal. After the

investigation, the young man was right. The police

officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the

farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero

by the villagers

二、　读后续写（25分）

I was responding to a call from a small

brick flat in a quiet part of town. I

assumed I was being sent to pick up some party-goers，or

someone who had just had a fight with a lover，or

a

worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the industrial

part of town.

When I

arrived at 2：30

a.m.， the building was dark except for a single

light in a ground floor window. Under such

circumstances， many drivers just honk（按喇叭） once or

twice，wait a minute，then

drive away. But I had seen too many weak people who depended on taxis

as their only means of transportation.

Unless a

situation smelled of danger，I always

went to the door.

This

passenger might be someone who needs my

assistance，I

reasoned to myself. So I walked to the door and knocked. “Just a

minute，” answered a frail，elderly

voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floor. After

a long pause，the door

opened. A small

woman in

her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a

pillbox hat ，like

somebody out of a 1940s movie. By her side was a small nylon

suitcase.

The

apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the

furniture was covered with sheets. There were no clocks on the

walls， no equipment on the counters. In the corner was a cardboard

box filled with photos and glassware.

“Would

you carry my bag out to the car？” she

said. I took the

suitcase to the cab，then

returned to assist the woman. She took my arm，and we

walked slowly toward the cab.

She kept

thanking me for my kindness. “It's nothing,” I told

her. “I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my

mother treated.”

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Having

given me an address, a hospice , she asked.

“Could you drive through

downtown?”

Paragraph 2: we drove in silence to the address

she had given me , and it…

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Having

given me an address, a hospice , she asked.

“Could you drive through

downtown?” Asked why we didn’t take

the shortest way, the small woman

told me it was the last chance for

her to visit the city. We drove

through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived.

Besides, she asked me to slow in front of a

particular building

or corner and would sit staring into

the darkness, saying nothing. At last, s

he said she was tired and

wanted to go to the hospice.

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we drove in silence to

the address she had given me , and it was a low building,

where the old lady would live the rest of her

life. Two nurses who must have been expecting her came out

to the

cab as

soon as we pulled up. I opened the trunk and took

the suitcase

to the door and the woman was

already seated in a wheelchair. When she

asked how much she owed me, without thinking, I said nothing and

bent to give her a bug . It was my

assistance that helped

one of weak

people realize her

wish.

三、读后续写（25分）

My fiance (未婚夫) and I

were excited about shopping for our first home. But our funds

were limited,

and none of the houses in our price range seemed

satisfactory.

One

agent recommended a house in particular.

Although her description sounded wonderful, the price

was beyond our

range, so we declined. But she kept urging us to have a

look at

least.

We finally did and it

was love at

first sight. It was Our Home, small and charming, overlooking a

quiet lake. Walking through the rooms and talking with the owners,

a nice elderly couple, we felt the warmth

and happiness of the marriage within that

home. As perfect as it was, the price remained too high for us. But

every day, we would sit by the lake, looking at the house and

dreaming of what it

would be like to live there.

Days later, we made

a(n) offer—far

below the asking price. Surprisingly, they didn’t

laugh at us. They renewed their

offer instead.

It was also much more than we could afford, but

far less than the original asking

price.

The next day, we got

a disappointing message that another buyer had

offered a much higher price. Even so, we decided to talk with

the owners directly. We made our final

offer, which still was thousands of dollars less

than the other buyer’s bid. We knew

it, but we had

to try. Nobody

knew if we could get it.

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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We

went to the owners’ home after we made our final

offer, the other buyer came to visit

the owners, he said the price he offered was much higher than ours,

he begged the owners to sell it to him, then the owner asked the

buyer, “why do you want this house?” the buyer said

,” because it is near the city, I

want to buy it for investment. I can rent it to earn

money…” the owner thought for a while

and then looked at him and said, I’m sorry,

sir, I can’t sell my

house to you, because I am looking for someone who truly loves my

house, not just for money.”

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The

owner looked at us and said, “ I want to sell my house to

you!” then he

explained: He’d seen us sitting by the

lake all those times; he knew how much we loved the place and that

we’d appreciate the years of work they had put

into their home; he realized he would take

a loss by selling it to us, but it

was worthwhile; we were the people they wanted to live there. He

told us to consider the difference in the price “an early wedding

present.” That’s how we found our home and how I learned

that when people are kind they are not strangers, only

friends we haven’t yet met.

四、读后续写（25分）

A friend of mine, named Jack, received an expensive car from

his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve when Jack came

out of his office, a street urchin(顽童)was walking around the

shining car. “Is this your car, sir?” he asked. Jack answered, “Yes, my brother gave it to me for

Christmas.” The boy was surprised. “You mean your brother

gave it to you and it did cost you nothing? Sir, I wish…”He

hesitated(犹豫),Jack thought of course he knew what the boy wanted,

but what the boy said surprised him greatly. “I wish,” the boy went on, “that I could be a brother like

that.” Jack looked at the boy in surprise, and then he

said again, “Would you like to take a ride in my

car?” “Oh yes,

I’d love to

,”the boy answered.

After a short ride, the boy turned and with his

eyes shining, said, “Sir, would you mind driving in front of my

house?”

Jack

smiled a little. He thought he knew what the boy wanted. He wanted

to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big car. But

Jack was wrong again. “Will you stop where those two steps

are?” the boy asked.

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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He got out

and ran

up to the steps.

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Jack got out and lifted the

boy to the front seat of his car.

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He got out

and ran up to the

steps. Then in a short while Jack

heard him coming back, but he was not coming fast. He was carrying

his little crippled(残疾的)brother. He sat down on the step and

pointed to the car.

“There he is, Buddy, just like I told you

upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didn’t

cost him a cent. And some day I’m going to give you one just like

it…then you can see for yourself all the nice things in the

Christmas windows that I’ve been trying to tell you

about”

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Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front

seat of his car. The shining-eyed elder brother

climbed in beside him and the three began an unforgettable holiday

ride., looking at all those

beautiful things. That Christmas Eve ,Jack learned the real meaning

of the words: “It’s more

blessed to give than to receive.” He also

learned what it means to be “an elder

brother like that.”

五、读后续写（25分）

Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi for a living.

One night I went to pick up a passenger at 2:30 a. m. When I

arrived to collect, I found the building was dark except for a

single light in a ground floor window.

I walked to the door and knocked, "Just a minute," answered a weak,

elderly voice.

After a long time, the door opened. A small woman in her eighties

stood before me. By her side was a small

suitcase.

I took the suitcase to the car, and then returned to help the

woman. She took my arm and we walked slowly towards the

car.

She kept thanking me for my kindness. "It's nothing," I told her.

"I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother

treated."

"Oh, you're such a good man." She said. When we got into the taxi,

she gave me an address, and then asked, "Could you drive through

downtown?"

"It's not the shortest way," I answered quickly.

"Oh, I'm in no hurry," she said. "I'm on my way to a

hospice (临终医院). I

don't have any family left. The doctor says I don't have very long.

"

I quietly reached over and shut off the meter (计价器). For

the next two hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the

building where she had once worked, the neighborhood where she had

lived, and the furniture shop that had once been a ballroom where

she had gone dancing as a girl.

Sometimes she'd ask me to slow down in front of a particular

building and would sit staring into the darkness, saying

nothing.

At dawn, she suddenly said, "I'm tired. Let's go now." We drove in

silence Lo the address she had given me.

"How much do I owe you?" she asked.

"Nothing." I said.

"You have to make a living," she answered. "Oh, there are other

passengers," I answered. She said thanks to me, but she looked

so sad.

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Almost without thinking, I bent

and gave her a hug.

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I

was on my way to visit her.

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Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a

hug. She held onto me

tightly. Before the woman left , I said

to her, “My mother

treated everyone kindly,

she is a great person, but she passed away years ago. you are like

my mother,” the

woman said, “ thank you. If you want to

visit me,　I’ll tell

you my story.” Then the

woman left. After a long

pause, I

drove the taxi

to go home.

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The next day, I

was on my

way to visit

her. The old woman told me that she used to be a

millionaire. She became

immersed in making money. She was

the owner of a particular

building we saw last night.

But she neglected her family. her only son died one year ago because of

cancer. She sold everything to save him, but

failed. How sad！ At last, the old woman said to

me, “Life is short, but please be

in no

hurry. Though everyone has to earn

money to make a

living, always remember

that family is the most important thing to you,” I said nothing but nodded hard.

六、读后续写（25分）

Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school

and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents' home in

Missouri for Christmas. I stopped at a gas

station(加油站)about

50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit

a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash

register(收款台), I

said hello to an older couple who were also paying for

gas.

I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured

from the back of my car. I stopped and wondered what I should do. A

car pulled up behind me. It was the couple I had spo

ken to at the

gas station. They said they would take me to my friend's .We

chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car,

the husband gave me his business card.

I wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me. Soon

afterward, I received a Christmas present from them. Their note

that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays

meaningful.

Years later, I drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morning.

In late afternoon I returned to my car and found that I'd left the

lights on all day, and the battery(电池)was

dead. Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership

--- a shop selling cars --- was right next door. I walked

over and found two salesmen in the

showroom.

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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I

entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to

me.

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After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck

to my car and started it.

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I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came

to me. I recognized him

at once. the two salesmen were the older

couple, and they were the owners of the Friendly Ford

dealership. “ Hey,

it’s you! you ever helped

me, remember?” I said to them

excitedly. Yeah, we do!” the old man laughed, we run the shop to help more

people. you know, it makes

our life so meaningful!”

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After

a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started

it. they solved my trouble once

again, but when I paid for it, they would not accept my money. they

told me that when they ran the shop at first, no one had ever taken

the time to write them and say thank you, but now they received

more and more thank-you notes from people, which they were really

happy about.