专八作文模板+优秀范文.docx

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Ambiguity:尽量不去使用可能引起歧义的词语或句子。

Brief:文章 " 简为贵 " ，要抓住要点，简明扼要。

Coherence:文理通顺，前后连贯。

Development:主题的发挥应当充分、合理、正确。

Division:词汇、句子、段落要分配使用得当，划分要清楚，避免使用重复字句和种子片段。Figures:正确合理使用各类修辞格式。

Inflated diction:不使用做作的语言。

Key:用适当的关键词突出主题，每段都应有主题句。

Logical:内容要符合逻辑。

Message: 信息要新鲜、确实、可信。

Omit:合理删除多余的不必要部分。

Proposition:主张、观点、论述要清楚肯切、合情入理。

Punctuation:正确适时使用标点符号。

Relevant:文章一定要要题。

Sentence pattern:句型要尽量多样化。

Straight:开门见山，直来直去。

Style:文体恰切，适合内容要求。

Tense:动词时态要正确、一致、变化合理。

Theme: 选题得当，主题突出。

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1.With the(rapidly)growing popularity of Internet surfing(computers /cars/mobile phones/pagers/.PDP television/...)in China ， the quality of our lives is improving for the better.

2.With the(rapid)growth of our economy(heavy industries/transportation system/market economy/population/private enterprises/housing industry/... )， an increasing number of problems， such as (water shortages/traffic jams/industrial

pollution/ waste of energy/desert spreading/... )， are beginning to surface.

3.As the proverb says...( It goes without saying that.../Generally speaking， ... /It is often said that... )

4.With the(rapid)development of science and technology( market economy/electronic industry/information industry/higher education/...)an increasing number of people come to realize that(knowledge is power/a weak nation has no International prestige/education is of vital importance/...).

5. Currently，there is a widespread concern over drug abuse (high unemployment

rate/wildlife extinction/environmental pollution/desertification/organized

crime/widespread corruption/energy crisis/water shortages/traffic jams/increasing traffic

accidents/... ).

6. It is quite clear that (Them is no doubt that/ Some people believe that)..

because...

，

7. There is a wide spread concern that many large state-owned (quite

a few Chinese cities face the problem of water shortages pollution and waste of energy/various kind of superstition flare up/... )companies are in deficit

， industrial

8.The government is (We are) seriously concerned with wildlife extinction (drug

abuse/widespread corruption/organized crimes/high unemployment rate/...).

9. Many people often ask such question:” ...’( More and more people have come to realize...)

10. In the past two decades ( In the past enterprises( private schools/supermarkets/fast five years)

food

，millions

restaurants/...

of private

) have

mushroomed all over China.

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11.In recent years ， many Chinese families have owned cars (computers/mobile

phones/video cameras/houses/... ).

12. Recently the issue of... has been brought to public attention.(Currently there

is a widespread concern that.../Now people in growing number are coming to realize that... )

13.Nowadays ， a heated debate (discussion) about the accession to WTO (private

cars/stocks/brain-drain/Chinas football/... ) is under way in China.

14. As the market economy (the legal system/the living standard/the higher education system/the highway network/the infrastructure/...)improves in China ， free competition will increasingly replace all sorts of monopolies.

15. One great man said that...

16.As the public awareness of the market economy (population control/socialism and communism/wildlife preservation/environmental protection/higher education/human

rights/anti-monopoly/creativity/competition/laws and regulations/...)heightens ，the gap between China and the developed countries will gradually vanish(many social problems will be solved gradually).

17.Recently ， extensive studies(statistics/surveys/investigations/...)show (reveal/indicate/demonstrate/prove/...) that 07 Chinese cities and 23small towns suffer water shortages.

18.These days we often tell that...， but is this really the case

19.There are three major values of owning a car (a computer/an apartment/a mobile

phone/a beeper/...).To begin with....Next https://www.360docs.net/doc/5b12072390.html,st ....There are ， on the other hand， more reasons against it. First (ly)... Second (ly) .... Finally .....

20.There are some reasons for owing a car ( traffic accidents/big fires in

big cities/water shortages/destruction of virgin forests/... ).

21. In the past several years there has been...

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22. Nowan increasing number of people come to realize that time is money (knowledge is power/science and technology energize economic growth/we must learn to live in

harmony with wildlife/weak nation has no international prestige/cheating never

pays/science and technology constitute the primary productive force/... ).

23. There are three basic differences between the large and small universities

(cities and countryside/ceramics and plastics materials/...). In the small university ， you... In the large university， you...

24.There are various ways(at least three ways/possible techniques/problems/methods/approaches/... ) to do something.

25. Now it is commonly held that... but I doubt whether...

26. The policy ( The president/The major/The reform/The bidding for the 2008 Olympic Summer Games) enjoys grass-root support for three main reasons，

27. Smoking (alcoholic beverage/Drugs/Guns/Firecrackers/... ) should be banned from college campuses for two reasons. The first reason is that... The other reason is that... (on the one hand .... On the other hand .... )

28. There is a general discussion today about the issue of...

29.No pains，no gains.No money，no honey (friendship/work/promotion/admission/love/assistance/service/justice/... ). No

shirt ( shoes )，no admission.

30. We enjoy Internet surfing not because we are curious about new things，but because Internet represents the latest technology.

31.The possible solutions of the energy crisis(water shortages/desertification/pollution/theses social problems/... ) depends on....

体育与图书馆，孰轻孰重

题目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their

university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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I disagree strongly with the idea that the same amount of money should go to

university sports activities as to university libraries. Although playing sports

is a wonderful way to learn about teamwork, strategy and reaching your goals,

it should not be the principal focus of a university education.

Students need the most up-to-date library facilities available to get the best

education. Many of those facilities are very expensive to buy and maintain. These

include computerized programs and access to internet research databases that students can use to find information all around the world. If a university is only

offering its students resources of a decade ago,it ’ s depriving those students of a tremendous amount of information.

Even the book and magazine budget of universities has gone up tremendously in last decade.More is being published on every subject,and every university wants to have this information available to its students.

It also costs money for universities to keep their libraries open. Students need to

have access to all the libraries' research tools as much of time as possible. Because

students are young and can stay up all night studying, many universities

are starting to leave their libraries open all night during exam periods. This costs money, because the staff has to be paid extra to be there. It also costs money to run the building (electricity, heat) during that time.

Students at universities are only going to benefit from their education if they can get to all the tools they need to learn. Sports are secondary to the resources that students need from university libraries. For this reason, libraries should always be better funded than sport activities.

不靠运气，只靠努力

题目：

"When people succeed, it is because of hard work, Luck has nothing to do with

success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above Use specific and examples to explain your position.

参考范文：

Whenpeople succeed, it is because of hard work, but luck has a lot to do with it,too. Success without some luck is almost impossible. The French emperor Napoleon said

of one of his generals,“ I know he’ s good. But is he lucky” Napoleon knew that all the hard work and talent in the world can’ t make up for bad luck. However, hard work can invite good luck.

When it comes to success, luck can mean being in the right place to meet someone,

or having the right skills to get a job done. It might mean turning down an offer

and then having a better offer come along. Nothing can replace hard work, but working hard also means you ’ re preparing yourself opportunity. Opportunity very often

depends on luck.

How many of the great inventions and discoveries came about through a lucky mistake or a lucky chance Oneof the biggest lucky mistakes in history is Columbus’ so-called discovery of America.He enriched his sponsors and changed history,but he was really looking for India. However, Columbus’ chance discovery wasn’ t pure luck. It was backed up by years of studying and calculating. He worked hard to prove his theory

that the world was round.

Success that comes from pure luck and no hard work can be a real problem.For example, consider a teenage girl who becomes a movie star.

Imagine she ’s been picked from nowhere because of her looks. She is going to feel

very insecure, because she knows she didn’ t do anything to earn her stardom. On

the other hand, think about an actress who’ s spend years learning and working at

her craft. When she finally has good luck and becomes a success, she will handle

stardom better, she knows she earns it.

People who work hard help make their own luck by being ready opportunity knocks.

When it comes to success. I think that hard work and luck so hand in hand.

直面人生危机

题目：

Throughout our life,we are more often than not faced with various crises. Confronting crises, different people respond differently. What is your

attitude toward crises Write an essay of about 400 words to state your view.

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Crisis is to us what illness is to our body. Just as fatal disease can destroy our

body and sometimes even put an end to our lives, so does smashing crisis knock us

down so irrevocably and hopelessly that we might never have chance of standing

up again. However, most crises that frequent us in life are not such category. They,

like occasional ailments which sometimes can bolster our body ’ s immune system, are mostly minor and surmountable and therefore making us hardy enough to survive

whatever adversities in our later life. Even those serious crises, if handled

properly, can be turned to a blessing to us, too.

A ready example that comes to mind is SARS crisis that has recently torn apart and

ravaged most of China. Admittedly, it has cost us quite a lot. Some people suffered health damage and still some even lost their lives. And our economy suffers a

temporary setback and a slowdown. However, we still have much to learn and are yet

to exhaust listing legacies left by this crisis. Among them are:

First,we are more concerned than ever before with our health, and the environment we live in, and above all, the vulnerable medical system and practice we have so

long cherished and regarded as matter of course(have taken for granted).Also, we, all of sudden,realize otherwise not so obvious a truth that life is so infirm,feeble and precarious that if we somehow fail to take advantage of it right here and now,

we may have no chance of even saying any words of love to our beloved,not to mention doing anything. Additionally, we tried and bettered and are still bettering our

mechanism to respond to unexpected crises. These and other lessons and legacies

brought about by blood,tear,toil and sweat are benefiting and continue to benefit us and generations of Chinese to come.

As a well-known ancient Chinese notion goes, the past lessons if not buried in

oblivion are mentors for us all. If we can bear in mind sufferings and ordeals we

have experienced, then those of our compatriots who had died did not die in

vain and our sufferings will not go unrewarded.