雅思写作旅游类范文

雅思写作旅游类范文
雅思写作旅游类范文

雅思写作旅游类范文

范文一

International travel is becoming cheaper,and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?

Air travel combined with early retirement and people with money to spend has meant that more and more people can travel the world. Some countries,especially those with famous historical sights and beautiful natural scenery try to attract this large market. While there are some problems that can be caused with all this travel,generally it is a positive thing.

Firstly,consider that all these tourists mean money that governments are eager to tap into. For many countries,tourism is a big part of GDP and without it their economies would suffer. Foreign tourists bring important dollars to the service industry and lots of small shops and vendors.

Secondly,by encouraging tourism governments are promoting their cities and countries. In my country,China,for example,increased tourism and hosting the Olympics has changed people’s perception of our country. At the same time,tourism allows local people to gain exposure to people from other countries,which is also a good thing.

Of course it’s not always a perfect picture. Not all tourists have a good attitude and manners. And in some cases they may even have a negative influence on the local population. But these situations are not so common,and embassies can create tough guidelines for getting a visa. This seems like a reasonable compromise.

To conclude,international travel is a great thing,but it is a privilege that should not be abused. Governments should encourage it,but also put in place measures to keep dangerous people away. This will result in a win-win situation for everyone. (251 words)

点评:

写作线索:首段,国际旅游利大于弊;第二段,刺激本国经济;第三段,加深双方了解;第四段;不利之处。末段总结。

本文我们看到加汉老师是以一位中国学生的口吻写出来。他曾告诉我他的中文名字有两

个含义:加拿大的男子汉;加入汉族。

第四段的观点比较抽象,其实针对国际旅游的弊端,我们可以谈对旅游资源的过度开发;旅游景点的环保压力;对当地居民生活方式的影响;经济过渡依赖于旅游业的后果等等。

如果我写这篇文章,国际旅游的好处第一条我就说:“许多人类的文明古迹虽然是某个国家拥有的,其实也是全人类的财富。比如长城、金字塔。应该让全世界的人去参观、欣赏和尊重”。先上升到一个全人类的高度,凸显大气。大部分考生不是写不出来,主要是想不到。思想有多高,作为分数就有多高。

先学习下面的词汇和短语,然后再重读范文,体会它们在文中的运用

词汇

Retirement n.退休Tourism n. 旅游业

V endor n.卖主,小贩promote vt.促进,推广

host vt. 主办perception n.观念,理解

embassy n.大使馆guideline n.指导方针

compromise n.妥协,折衷privilege n.特权

abuse v.滥用

短语

famous historical sights 历史名胜

beautiful natural scenery 美丽的自然风光

be eager to渴望

tap into 利用

in some cases在有些情况下

have a negative influence on对…有负面影响

win-win situation 双赢局面

三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子

Some countries,especially those with famous historical sights and beautiful natural scenery try to attract this large market.

Secondly,by encouraging tourism governments are promoting their cities and countries.

This will result in a win-win situation for everyone.

范文二

Tourism is a multibillion dollars industry that supports economic development. Some people think that it causes damage to the local environment and culture. What is your opinion?

Tourism is acknowledged by many people as a multibillion dollar industry. Some people still think that it causes damage to the local environment and culture. I have some reservations about such a negative view.

Many successful experiences demonstrate that the development of tourism can realize the “win-win” of economic development in an area. It can improve the well-being of local inhabitants and provide jobs for many people. Take Hangzhou for example. It earned 237 million dollars through its tourism industry last year. Another case is Suzhou, one of the four key tourist cities of China. In 2006 the city received 20.1 million domestic and foreign visitors. The income from tourism is currently close to RMB 20 million.

Another positive example is the large recreational and cultural value of ecosystem services which are now sufficient to attract the local government’s attention and encourages them to plan further development and thereby accelerate a city’s construction. For instance, in t he coming three years, RMB 120 million will be invested(这儿最好用injected)into Jiuzhaigou, a World Natural Heritage site, to return the area to its original scenic beauty. As well Zhejiang Province has planned to invest 990 million US dollars in the next five years to develop 10 tourist projects on and around the ocean. Furthermore, tourism supports the cross-cultural contact with foreigners promoting friendship, goodwill and cultural diversity that might otherwise be lacking .

In conclusion, our tourist dollars can do much, often unrecognized, good –not only by helping financially, but by placing public value on local culture and heritage.

结构清晰,表达流畅,用词丰富,语法规范,立属优秀范文之列。

2011年2月12日雅思写作第一时间评析

来源:环球雅思学校发布日期:2011-02-16

【写作题目】A类

Tourism is an excellent way to develop a country, but it also can cause harm. How can a country ensure that tourism benefits the development?

【题目翻译】

旅游业是一个很好的方式去发展一个国家,但它也可以造成伤害。一个国家如何才能确保旅游能够使其发展受益?

【话题分类与题型】

本话题属旅游类话题。题型为分析原因类型。

【话题评价】

雅思历史上考过国际旅游带来的是紧张还是不同文化之间人们的理解,当时考的是同意与否题型。此次,考题再次涉及旅游类话题,但是这次题目跟原先的题目比较而言,主要是题型发生了质的变化,因为这次考的是分析原因类型。

【类似真题】

Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【结构与思路】

建议采用平衡式论证结构。本文四段,头尾各一段,第二段分析旅游带来危害段落;第三段提出如何确保旅游能够受益于发展的方案。

背景:

如今旅游业的确成为了很多国家的支柱性产业,例如泰国。但是在发展旅游的同时,很多人发现它也带来了一些不容忽视的危害。

Body 1: 分析旅游带来危害段落

旅游所带来的危害主要有以下几个方面。

【文化】对旅游目的地本土文化和习俗所带来的负面影响。【解释】有些旅游地为了迎合游客的需要,会将本土文化和习俗加以改变或者过分强调游客的文化和习俗的要求,从而对本土文化和习俗造成冲击。

【环境】对旅游目的地自然环境的破坏。【例证】例如,2002年,三亚市为修建三亚湾滨海大道并将三亚湾建成新的旅游度假基地,对原有的基岩、沙岸、珊瑚礁、红树林、野菠萝、海草等海岸生态进行大规模清除。使得这里的原生态植被遭到严重破坏,海岸基本丧失防风功能。

【社会】会诱发旅游目的地很多的犯罪行为。【解释】在很多旅游目的地,时常发生针对游客的街头强劫、盗窃、诈骗、针对游客的色情敲诈、暴力宰客等违法犯罪行为、制售假冒伪

劣商品、非法经营的违法犯罪行为。

Body 2: 提出如何确保旅游能够受益于发展的方案。

【个人】从个人角度而言,应该提高自我素质,重视对本土文化和习俗的维护。

【政府】从政府角度而言,一可以加大警力,完善法律,从而将各类违法犯罪行为杜绝,并且把影响旅游区自然环境的问题作为治理的重点。二可以对本土的文化和习俗的重要性以宣传片的形式进行宣传,从而让民众了解其重要性。

结论:

总之,旅游业的确既有好处又有缺点。对于它所带来的缺点应该进行有效的方法去解决,而不是禁止旅游业的发展。

【写作题目】G类

Some people think that traveling abroad can enrich young people’s experience, while others think it is only the waste of time and money. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

【题目翻译】

有些人认为出国旅游可以丰富青年人的经验,也有人认为这仅仅是时间和金钱的浪费。讨论这两方面的意见,并给出你自己的看法。

【话题分类与题型】

本题属结合型话题,是出国旅游和青年人相结合的话题。题型为双边讨论型。

【话题评价】

在2011年1月27日A类雅思考试中也考到了国际旅游,那时是将国际旅游与科技相结合的组合。而在本次G类考试中却是国际旅游与青年人相结合,从而看出雅思写作考题如今会将主题保留,但是将侧面加以改动的趋势。

【类似真题】

Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, while other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

【结构与思路】

建议采用平衡式论证结构。本文四段,头尾各一段,第二段说明国际旅游让青年人丰富阅历的理由;第三段论证国际旅游的确会花费青年人金钱和时间。

背景:

如今出国旅游的确在年青人中越来越受欢迎,很多青年人会将出国旅游作为自己的假期安排。一些人认为这种国际旅游的确让青年人的人生得以丰富,而另外一部分人认为这种国际旅游只会带来金钱和时间上的浪费。

Body 1: 论证国际旅游为何让年轻人花费时间和金钱的段落

不可否认,国际旅游对于大部分年轻人而言,的确会花费不少的时间和金钱。

【费时】从计划国际旅游,到为国际旅游的费用打工,到办理各种签证和证件,海外旅游整个过程所花费的时间,短的也需要年轻人花费数个月的时间准备,长的可能需要一年时间去准备。

【费钱】一方面,如果国际旅游的费用完全依赖于年轻人平日的积蓄而言的话,那一次国际旅游的费用可能会将其数年积攒的费用耗尽。另一方面,就算是一次经济型的国际旅游,那些最基本的费用,例如:飞机票,食宿费,签证费等,这些费用对于年轻人而言,仍然是一笔不小的开支。

Body 2: 论证为何出国旅游可以让青年人丰富人生阅历的理由段落

但是除了会花费一定数量的时间和金钱以外,国际旅游也会让年轻人丰富阅历。

【文化】一方面,国际旅游活动是一种流动的社会文化活动。年轻旅游者的海外旅行可以使其了解到不同的国家和地区、不同的社会群体及不同的民族文化。

【实践】另一方面,国际旅游是人类探索未知的一种实践活动。年轻人通过海外旅游,可以观察世界、增长知识、丰富阅历,通过旅游而探索微妙、寻找创作灵感、做出科学发现。因此,国际旅游可以让年轻人开拓视野、丰富人生阅历。

结论:

我个人认为,国际旅游的确会花费部分时间和金钱,但那绝不是浪费。国际旅游的确会增长年轻人的见闻、丰富其阅历。

Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is the case? Is it a positive development?

当前,人们对发展中国家大力发展旅游业的原因以及这是否有利展开了热烈的讨论。在我看来,我确信它是积极的发展。在这篇文章中,我将在以下段落对其原因进行分析。Currently, there is a hot discussion about the reasons why there are developing countries in growing number expanding tourist industries and whether it is a positive development or not. As far as I am concerned, I am convinced that it is a positive development. In this essay, I will make an analysis of the reasons in the following paragraphs.

首要的原因是,旅游业是很多发展中国家财政收入的主要来源,财政上对这些国家的经济发展很有利。例如,中国需要大量的外汇来执行现代化建设计划。旅游业是获得外汇的最重要的渠道之一。此外,旅游业能促进餐饮业和交通运输业的发展。另外,旅游业还对国民收入和税收做出不可或缺的贡献。

The first and foremost reason is that, tourism, which becomes the principal source of financial revenue in many developing countries, is financially beneficial to the economic development. For instance, China needs an increasing amount of foreign currencies for its modernization drive. Tourism is one of the most crucial channels to obtain such currencies. Furthermore, tourism facilitates the development of the catering business and transportation service as well. Additionally, tourist industries make primary contribution to the national income and tax revenue.

其次,旅游业给旅游胜地的居民提供了更多的就业机会,这在某种程度上消除了一些社会问题。甚至是一些没有接受过教育的人也能靠卖纪念品或当地特产等谋生,这种想象在旅游景点相当平常,这减轻了当地政府的压力。

In the second place, tourism provides local habitants in tourist attractions with more opportunities of employment, which has eliminated some social problems to some extent. In the scenic spots, it is common that even the uneducated people can make a living simply by selling souvenirs, local specialties and so on, which relieves the pressure of local government.

最后,旅游业极大地增进了各个国家以及人民之间的友谊和相互了解,这毫无疑问将促进各国间今后在国际事务中的合作。旅游业给人们提供了一个更好的了解国外文化、历史以及习俗的机会。

Last but not least, it is true that tourism contributes a great deal to the friendship and mutual understanding between people from different countries, which will unquestionably enhance the future cooperation in international affairs. Tourism provides people with a good opportunity to have a better understanding of the culture, history and customs in foreign countries.

总之,发展中国家发展旅游业有相当大的益处,因为它不仅在经济的发展,同时也会在政治发展方面起到积极的作用。

All in all, it is of great benefit for developing countries to promote the tourist industry, for it will play a positive role in both the economic and political development of a country.

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