专业英语四级写作讲义

专业英语四级写作讲义-

第一部分：专业英语四级写作题型

1）旧题：Direction-Write

2）新题：Read-Summarize-Comment

Read carefully the following except on term-time holiday arguments in the U.K. and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should: ?summarize the main message of the except, and then

?comment on whether parents should take children out of school for holiday during term time in order to save money.

第二部分：不变

1）题材

●环保、社会经济发展、诚信、文化）

●教育择业、人生哲理（价值观）

●爱心和伦理、健康、网络电讯

2）核心内容（开篇点题-关联词-核心例证）

第三部分：变

●第一段

●做题流程

第四部分：做题流程

1）阅读：首尾、转折、否定

2）归纳主旨、看出写作题材

3）第一段：模板+主题词

●不能没有模板（原创的危险性）

●也不能只背模板句

●模板和文章指向内容相融合

4）第二段：提供相应例证对于主题进行支持

5）第三段：呼应第一段

As one of your tenants, I am writing to kindly inform you that I feel awfully sorry for what had happened. Last night I had a bitter quarrel with my girlfriend Niki who co-lives with me in the Charles Street, Boston, MA. When I was playing the League of Legends with my team on your Alien computer,she came to the living room, urging me to work harder for the United States Medical Licensing Examination. Immediately, I felt extremely impatient and anxious. Unfortunately, I couldn’t help pushing her on the abdomen. This bitch suddenly ran wild, up my iphone 7 plus from the dinner table and threw it right on my nose, saying “Your mother fucker! Asshole! ” Abnormally, I dodged unconsciously and that mobile phone narrowly flew over the tip of my left eyebrow, smashing your computer screen spontaneously.

例子：首尾

It is a warm autumn morning, and I am walking through downtown Mountain View, Calif. A small vehicle that looks like a cross between a golf cart and a bubble-topped spaceship glides to a stop at an intersection. Someone is sitting in the passenger seat, but no one seems to be sitting in the driver seat. How odd, I think. And then I realize I am looking at a Google car. The technology giant is headquartered in Mountain View, and the company is road-testing its diminutive autonomous cars there. This is my first encounter with a fully autonomous vehicle on a public road.

The Google car waits patiently as a pedestrian passes in front of it. Another car across the intersection signals a left-hand turn, but the Google car has the right of way. The automated vehicle takes the initiative and smoothly accelerates through the intersection. The passenger, I notice, appears preternaturally calm.

I am both amazed and unsettled. I have heard from friends and colleagues that my reaction is not uncommon. A driverless car can challenge many assumptions about human superiority to machines.

例子：转折词不见得是But, However, Nevertheless,

It is frequently assumed that/the mechanization of work has a revolutionary

effect/on the lives of the people who operate the new machines and on the society into which the machines have been introduced. For example, it has been suggested that the employment of women in industry took them out of the household, their traditional sphere, and fundamentally altered their position in society. In the nineteenth century, when women began to enter factories, Jules Simon, a French politician, warned that by doing so, women would give up their femininity. Friedrich Engels, however, predicted that women would be liberated from the "social, legal, and economic subordination" of the family by technological developments that made possible the recruitment of "the whole female sex ... into public industry." Observers thus differed concerning the social desirability of mechanization's effects, but they agreed that it would transform women's lives.

In fact, historians, particularly those investigating the history of women, seriously question this assumption of transforming power.

注意以下词汇：

1）但是：But, However, Nevertheless

2）实际上：In fact, Actually, As a matter of fact, Indeed

3）让步：though, even though, although

4）惊奇、不幸、讽刺：astonishingly, surprisingly, stunningly, startlingly, unfortunately, ironically

5）Instead of, rather than

结论：

1）读很重要，没有观点，无法写好第一段

2）找到主旨，第一段填空

The essay mainly discusses the issue of a fully automatic automobile in Mountain View, California. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and an in-depth analysis, the author states that a driverless car can change the traditional idea that human wisdom can be superior to the machines, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.

54 words

3）关键是第二段

4）讲课顺序：

●怎么套第一段

●第二段应该怎么想

●怎么背

第五部分：怎么套第一段

1）第一句话：5-8秒

2）第二句话：抓住议论文的特点，用模板句过渡

3）总结文章的主题，形成填空

The essay mainly discusses the issue of a fully automatic automobile in Mountain View, California. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and an in-depth analysis, the author states that a driverless car can change the traditional idea that human wisdom can be superior to the machines, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.

54 words

4）如何填空

●定名词，不要乱换

●换动词，换（消）形容词

●换句型和语序

例子：

The essay mainly discusses the issue of a fully automatic automobile in Mountain View, California. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and an in-depth analysis, the author states that a driverless car can change the traditional idea that human wisdom can be superior to the machines, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.

54 words

The essay mainly discusses the effects of mechanization effects on the individuals and society. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and an in-depth analysis, the author states that the power of machines cannot greatly change the women’s lives, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.

54 words

question: …the transforming power of machines on the women’s lives is questionable.

第六部分：定住第一段，才能写好第二段

1）如何进行头脑风暴

物质金钱责任爱心作息娱乐健康

方便快捷沟通安全时尚

素质成功违法文化

发展环保趋势管制

2）背诵顺序

●先宏观题材

●再微观题材

●注意人生哲理和教育择业（和八级考试类似）

第七部分：各种题材的写法

题材1：社会经济发展

写作思路

第一段：表态

第二段：分析

好处：调整产业结构-整合资源-增加政府税收-增加就业-改善基建设施-国际化形象

问题：环保-交通堵塞-出行不便-恐怖袭击

第三段：

建议措施：建立机制-制定计划-听专家的-媒体-万能结尾句

旧题目的考法：

Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don't think so. What is your opinion? Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

新题目的考法：

So many places in the world rely heavily on tourism as a key source of income and employment nowadays, as well as a way of showing off national and local heritage, plus perceived successes.

Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems too, especially if it is not managed correctly. A constant flow of foreign visitors can, for instance, undermine the beauty, uniqueness, character, and social coherence of a tourist destination over time.

It is easy to underestimate the scale of world tourism without being aware of the figures. There were estimated to be around 983 million international tourist arrivals In 2011 —this is nearly a 5 percent increase on the numbers in the previous year.

Travelers in those sorts of numbers can easily present huge challenges and problems for many destinations, including transport, places to stay, policing, and maintenance.

参考范文

The essay above mainly discusses the advantages (benefits) and disadvantages (drawbacks) of tourism development. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and in-depth analysis, the author holds that tourism industry is of great importance (indispensable) for a nation under rapid economic growth. In this process, the importance of environmental protection cannot be ignored, as can be

seen in the following paragraphs.

There’s no denying the fact that (Evidently/Beyond doubt/Undeniably,) there exist some problems such as air quality degradation and water pollution. The most serious ones even include the loss of local ecological balance (a terrorist attack), while the minor ones are the commuting inconvenience to the local residents. This statement does have a grain of truth at the first glimpse. But it must be pointed out that the social and economic return of tourism is attractive. For one thing, in the process of developing this industry, a tourist city can not only pool its various resources, but also adjust its industrial structure. In this way, infrastructure construction can be greatly strengthened, hence providing a solid basis to the sustaining urban growth. For another thing, tourism growth will provide new incentive to the local economy, because its boom often becomes a source of government revenue as well as a provider of job opportunities. To conclude, the influence of encouraging tourism industry is far reaching, in terms of social development and economic reward （international image）.

To sum up, it is essential that a country provide mechanism for the development of tourism industry. To bring its negative influence under control, the government department can make plans for the environmental conservation. In this way, a tourist city can impress the outside world with its new image: a place with beautiful scenes, meanwhile, with a high level of civilization.

补充好词好句：“万能”结尾段：模板和主题指向相结合

1）建立机制：In the issue of 主题词 (misleading information and empty promises in the advertisements), it is essential that an effective feedback mechanism (should) be set up at the government level.

2）制定计划：In this framework, the relevant government departments are supposed to make concrete plans to control … (promote …).

3）听专家的话：Meanwhile, advice from researchers and experts cannot be ignored:

After all, they are more professional and qualified, especially in the process of policy making (in the establishment of quality standard system).

4）媒体的力量：The mainstream media, including TV stations and websites, is also an indispensable part. They can launch a campaign in (give a wide coverage to) the issue. In this way, the general public can form the awareness that … is the mainstream (the general trend), and then play their part in this matter. 5）结尾1: In a sense, it is not why the issue exists in our society, but what should be done to handle it properly.

6）Having read this essay, some readers might think that my proposals are somewhat conservative, no less traditional, but they are at least rational and realistic. 7）My advices sound general, because I am not professional in this field, but they are at least rational and realistic.

题材2：环保

写作思路

第一段：表态

第二段：分析

好处：调整产业结构-整合资源-增加政府税收-增加就业-改善基建设施-国际化形象

问题：为了利润-不自律-不负责-没责任感-政府不管-破坏-消失

第三段：建立机制…

写作练习题：大气雾霾防治（引文略）

The essay above mainly discusses the issue of air pollution in a large city under rapid development. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and in-depth analysis, the author holds that the elimination of PM 2.5 is of great importance for a nation, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.

Evidently, as a country with rapid economic development, China has to various resources, adjusting its industrial structure. In this background, economic

activities are the most important in the national strategy. In this process, air pollution is almost inevitable. This statement does have a grain of truth at the first glimpse, but it must be pointed out that some industries, such as mining sectors and steam plants and metallurgical factories, often lack self-discipline in their daily business operation, discharging various kinds of air pollutants into the atmosphere. For another thing, their responsibility of environmental protection is seldom truly performed. In this situation, under a slack supervision system, these activities are bringing a negative influence to the urban development. The environment is being ruined in many large cities. Clean air and blue sky are gradually vanishing from these regions.

On the basis of the analysis, effective measures can be taken as following. First, the central authority of China is supposed to provide a control mechanism so that air pollution can be limited, but the incentive of economic growth is maintained. Second, the government department must make concrete plans to control pollutant emission. Third and last, it is essential that new technologies be developed, the most reliable method to change the whole situation. My advices sound general, because I am not professional in this field, but they are at least rational and realistic.

题材3：诚信话题

思路：

1）便利-效率-安全

2）金钱-自律操守-责任-管制-破坏-消失

原文：

After supper, most people would sit on the sofa and watch TV programs with families. And there is one thing always annoying people-TV commercial. TV commercial is such a thing which almost involved every TV grogram and every person's life. Some people claimed that TV commercials should be eliminated because TV programs mislead

people to buy some useless products, it caused a lot of waste.In order to hook the potential consumers, some TV ads choose ambiguous introductory statements to highlight the so-called special performance of their products. In this case, many TV viewers often receive the information passively, thus very often paying for a product which doesn’t meet their potential demand.

But sometimes TV commercial does bring us some conveniences. First is that TV station needs money to make more interesting programs. The business men give them money and they insert the TV commercials inside their programs-that's a fairly deal. The second is that TV commercials also provide people with some useful information. People could know what products are popular currently and what they should buy through the information. The last is that TV commercials give people a chance to have a break when they are watching an excellent TV program. You can have a rest, go fetch some foods or go to toilet without missing any interesting things.

参考范文：

题目转化为：

Nowadays TV commercials are gaining increasing popularity in our lives. What are their advantages and drawbacks? Give your opinion.

第一段：Some people think that, other people think that并不好写

Recently, there emerged a social highlight, that is, various kinds of advertisements are gaining more popularity in our lives. Some people believe that their benefits outweigh the so-called problems, while others argue that the opposite might be true. By comparison, I agree with the latter point of view for the reason as following.

Evidently, advertisements are indispensable in our lives，providing the consumers with convenience and efficiency (或者a wealth of information such as the size and function of a product. However, it must be pointed out that (those who disagree with such a point of view emphasize that) some drawbacks of TV commercials cannot be overlooked, particularly misleading information, false message or empty

message they probably provide. Under a slack supervision system, the lack of occupational self-discipline among some advertisement companies will probably bring a negative influence to the market: the reputation of the whole industry is being ruined, and the faith to quality foods is gradually vanishing from the consumer groups.

To sum up, I’d like to emphasize my point of view. I believe that consumers can benefit greatly from advertisements on TV. However, despite the fact that there might be some advantages, it is still necessary that some feedback mechanism should be set up at the government level. In this framework, a serried of plans can be make in order to control those misleading TV commercial into the market. Meanwhile, researchers and experts must play their part in this issue: they are more professional and qualified, particularly in the establishment of standard system. My proposals might be conservative, but it is at least rational and realistic.

题材4：文化和时尚

思路：

1）时尚：便利-效率-简洁-消费-时尚

2）文化：历史-智慧-遗产-形象-价值-过时

题目：Traditional Chinese characters r simplified Chinese characters?

PART ⅥWRITING

Should we revive traditional Chinese characters orcontinue using simpli fied characters? This has been an intensely discussed question for ye ars. The following are the supporters' and opponents' opinions. Read carefully the opinions fromboth sides and writer your response in no less than 200 words, in which you should firstsummarize the opinion s from both sides and give your view on the issue.

YES

Traditional characters, which date back to more than 2000 years ago, have a more beautifulappearance and a more reasonable structure. As indicated by examples, traditional characters make more sense, convey traditional values and can thereforerepresent traditional culture.

For two millennia, Chinese historical records and classic works were written in traditionalcharacters. To be able to read them and inherit traditional culture, we need to bringtraditional characters back. Politically, it is also necessary to restore traditional Chinese chara cters. Currently, traditional

characters are still in used in Hong Kong, Taiwan and many Chinese communities around theworld. Restoring them can contribute to cross-Str aits exchanges and national reunification andunite Chinese people aroun d the world.

NO

In today's world, efficiency matters most. Traditional characters, whic h usually have morestrokes than simplified ones, are more difficult t o learn. By contrast simplified, characters are

much easier to learn and use.

Over the past 50 years, lots of classic texts have been turned into simplified-characterversions, which means simplified-character can also promote and preserve traditional culture.

Constant simplification has been a trend in the evolution of Chinese characters. From theoracle bones script of 3000 years ago to tradit ional characters, the Chinese writing systemhas always been slimming d own for better communication.

参考范文：

As is shown in the essay above, simplified Chinese characters become increasingly important in the modern society. However, the influence of traditional

ones cannot be ignored. People might vary in their views in this matter, but simplified characters are the trend in the future, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.

There’s no denying the fact that those traditional Chinese characters have a long history in a country like China, and they are still being used in some other parts (regions) of China. These characters can either be regarded as a symbol of ancient civilization, but also represent an element of national heritage. Nevertheless, it must be pointed out that simplified language system is indispensable for a nation under rapid development. For one thing, efficiency is the key note in this transformation. For another thing, productiveness plays a key role in various kinds of economic and social activities. As a result, it is inevitable that language changes into an open and direct pattern in order to achieve face-to-face communication. In this situation, simplified Chinese characters are the primary choice (option) for many people, even though traditional ones also have a folk value in a country.

To sum up, I’d like to emphasize my point of view in the first paragraph. Language will become increasingly simplified along with the social development. This statement might not be conservative, but it is at least rational and realistic, at least in the current social setting in China.

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题材5：爱心关注

思路：

物质金钱责任爱

样文：如果不是对立观点怎么办？

December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world have

volunteered to help those in needs. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?

The above mentioned facts show that volunteering is generally considered an altruistic activity where an individual or group provides services for no financial or social gain "to benefit another person, group or organization". Volunteering is also renowned for the improvement of human quality of life. Volunteering may have positive benefits for the volunteer as well as for the person or community served. Many volunteers are specifically trained in the areas they work, such as medicine, education and emergency. Others serve on an as-needed basis, such as in response to a natural disaster.

参考范文

The essay above mainly discusses the issue of volunteering in the world. By providing concrete facts and reliable statistics, the author holds that a growing number of people are doing volunteering work in our society. And they are playing an increasingly important (indispensable) part in a civilized society, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.

Undeniably, Those who disagree with volunteering might emphasize that people are hard pressed with test results or a tight job market, so it is hard to strike a balance between volunteering and one’s career. Such possibility does exist, but it must be pointed out that the influence of volunteering is still indispensable. The major reason is that such work enables many professional or warm-hearted people them to assist the elders, the young, and the homeless. It follows that the social responsibility and moral obligation can be better carried out. As a result, those disadvantaged groups can receive material support, mental back-up and spiritual comfort.

In sum, I believe that people can benefit greatly from their volunteering work. Love is never vague and abstract, but always visible and concrete. Different social

groups can be brought together, when each citizen extends his helping hand.

题材6：身心健康：

基本思路：金钱-占用时间-耗费精力-生活颠倒-亚健康

选文：如果段落比较难，怎么办？

抓名词-代词-连词

It seems particularly apropos given our current social climate to pay lip service to stress. We have to deal with it often, despite our best attempts to avoid it. Fortunately some kinds of stress are minor and innocuous, yet others are incendiary and damaging.

No matter the scale, the consequence, or the context, understanding how to deal with stress, or say physical and mental pressure, is a life skill. I know that some people are even crippled by the thought of stress. I think that any stress-related fears arise because we are never taught how to grapple with such moments. It’s a shame, and perhaps many a more grave situation could be avoided were we imparted with some resolution and avoidance strategies at an early age.

参考范文：

追求非模板？不如背（写）模板

还没学会走，就不要想着跑。

“反”模板”

Hard pressed with social competition, people are exposed to two kinds of stress: one is from education, while the other is from their family and careers. So there’re solid reasons for the statement that people must keep a good mood.

Clearly, to keep a good mood, one is suggested to return to nature, that is, to expose himself to music, songs, paintings and poetry. In such a world, people can not only expand their horizons and calm their nerve, but also get away from daily grind and restore their souls. Meanwhile, he is supposed to take part in various

forms of leisure activities such as jogging, swimming or playing basketball. Such experiences can keep him refreshed and gradually relieve pressure.

However, if one is not so interested in music, songs, paintings or poetry, nor is he showing the least intention to exercise, he is expected to stay with his friends or families. If he has a man who knows his heart, he can also keep a good mood because a chat of five minutes can help him overcome anxiety and depression.

In conclusion, it is important for people to keep a good mood and relieve stress. 模板

In this passage, the author gives his comment to the issue of stress. According to the author, along with the social development, physical and mental pressure cannot be ignored in the daily life of many people, and therefore it is important to take some actions to relieve it. Personally, I agree with this point of view, as can be seen in the following.

As I can see it, it is essential that the physical and mental condition be given more priority to. Due to social pressure or material desire, modern people have to work hard to make both ends meet（钱）. For another thing, for the so-called personal success, they often take up much time and energy on their daily work or academic studies. Under these circumstances, their physical health is more or less affected, along with many sub-healthy problems or chronic diseases. In this situation, it is barely possible to seek wealth, because physical and mental health is worsening off.

Nothing is more important than solid physical condition. Without it, people cannot work effectively or develop their career. It is advised that modern people form a good habit, living a balanced life. In addition, they are suggested to take some sports activities to improve physical health. This statement might sound too traditional, but it is at least realistic and rational.

放弃模板，等于自由写作

别人信手拈来，你海量背诵

思路：最通用的词汇组合

题材7：网络科技

写作思路：喜欢-便利效率-信息-互动沟通-传统不消失

样文：2017年考题：人工智能和人类思考能力

With intelligent machines to do the thinking, will our brains get lazy?

Nowadays, people are enjoying one of the greatest technological boom times in human history. Many aspects of people’sdaily life have undergone considerable changes because of the recent development in artificial intelligence. In spite of many benefits brought by intelligent machines, it has been concerned that our brains will get lazy with intelligent machines to do the thinking. In my opinion, artificial intelligence will help our brains get more creativeinstead.

Artificial intelligence has already made its way into our work field and completely renovated people’s lifestyle. Admittedly, a lot of work has been done by intelligent machines. It seems that the function of people has been weakened and people’s brain has been replaced.As a matter of fact, thanks to artificial intelligence, people can expand their creative energy and add new varieties. Simply speaking, when people are free from tedious, repetitive, sometimes even dangerous and risky work, the work efficiency has undoubtedly been improved. As a result, people can spare more time to do what they want and pursue what they dream of, which is the premise of creativity. Moreover, creativity stems primarily from knowledge and thinking. Once people have opportunities to do more thinking and learn more knowledge, their intelligence would be enhanced rather than weakened.

Actually, intelligent machines are the exhibition of people’s high degree of creative power.No matter how technologies develop, it should be noted that technologies should be people-oriented, and then we may embrace a more enlightening and intelligent society.

参考范文：Intelligent machines, will human think?

Doesn’t the author present a thought-provoking reflection upon the ground-breaking impact of artificial intelligence (cell phone)! According to the author, this scientific invention plays an important role in the daily life of many people, even though there might be some side-effect in its development, as can be seen in the following.

Evidently, some drawbacks are given more priority to, particularly the weakening human intelligence. However, it must be pointed out that modern people are in preference for owning AI technology, which can provide them with information, convenience and efficiency. Thanks to this great invention, their information sources become increasingly direct, easy and transparent. With the scope of this high-tech, many objectives can be achieved. But many years ago, they are still far beyond the grasp of humans. As a matter of fact, artificial intelligence can be compared as a kind of glue, which keeps different social groups together.

To sum up, it is short-sighted to emphasize the negative side of AI. Convenience and efficiency is what people gain from this invention. But the weakening human intelligence is the thing which people lose. But it is noted that AI can be in the grip of humans, who are its inventors. Since they can create AI, they can surely take some (precautionary) measures to control it.

题材8：教育人生

写作思路：

自律-习惯-方向感-态度（如脚踏实地的精神）-素质（知识-能力-技能）-成就成功（金钱、就业、机会、成功）

样文：2016年考题

参考范文：

The essay above mainly discusses the issue of term-time holiday in the U.K. By providing concrete facts and in-depth analysis, the author holds that child education is more important a vocation. And it is not advisable that parents take their children out of school for a short holiday, as can be seen in the following.

There’s no denying the fact that the term-time holiday brings many benefits, particularly reduced tuition fee, more leisure time and various entertainment activities. However, it must be pointed out that the side-effects outweigh these advantages. For one thing, in the early stage of childhood education, many students are in lack of good learning habits. For another thing, without strict training and systematic learning, these have a long way to go before they have a clear sense of direction about their future. Under these circumstances, it is difficult for them to show (form) a good attitude towards their academic studies, especially after a short holiday for nothing but leisure, relaxation and pastime. In this situation,

it is barely possible to for these children to obtain theoretical knowledge, let alone improve their overall qualities at school(improve the practical skills and strengthen the problem solving abilities.)

To sum up, I’d like to emphasize my point of view in the first paragraph: education is central of all things for a child. So it is not worthwhile to take them out of school for a short holiday. The decision of education authority in the U.K. is conservative at the first glimpse, but it is rational and realistic.

第八部分：总结

一、弄清题材，才知道背什么

●环保、社会经济发展、诚信、文化）

●教育择业、人生哲理（价值观）

●爱心和伦理、健康、网络电讯

二、背哪里才能得分？

●开篇点题

●关联词

●核心例证（第二段）

●先宏观、再微观，注意人生哲理、教育

三、怎样抓主旨

●首尾

●转折

●名词

四、如果不会表达态度，尽量围着以下的词写

●… is of great importance

●Nothing is more important than…

●… is central of all things