丁往道《英语写作手册(中文版)》考研真题详解(图表作文)【圣才出品】

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题1 [英语二2010研]

Directions:

In this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1) interpret the chart and

2) give your comments.

You should write at least 150 words.

Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

【图表解读】

图表以图形柱状图的形式给出，反映了从2000年到2008年发达国家和发展中国家的手机用户量变化图。由图表可知，从2000年到2002年发展中国家的手机用户量低于发达国家，而从2003开始前者一直高于后者；且但发展中国家的增速远远高于发达国家，并且

在2008年差额达到最大，前者用户量达到4亿，是后者的4倍。

根据要点，范文将安排三个段落：第一段简单描述图表内容，以2003年为分水岭，之前发展中国家的手机用户量一直低于发达国家，之后前者远远高于后者，且发展中国家的增幅远高于发达国家，08年差额达到最大，前者总量达到4亿，是后者的4倍。第二段，指出两个原因，最初发展中国家的经济情况远远落后于发达国家，但近几年经济开始崛起，所以导致先少后多；发达国家人口总量少，个人主义强烈，文明化程度高，且其他社交媒体发展完备，故增速低于人口众多的发展中国家。第三段，表达个人立场，手机的便利性极大地促进了人们的交流，但是也给换件和健康带来了危害，建议合理使用手机。

【参考范文】

（1）As can be seen from the chart, from 2000 to 2002, the mobile phone subscriptions in developed countries are higher than that in developing countries.

(2)However, the situation reverses from 2003 and since then the number of mobile phone users in developing countries has been increasing much faster than that in developed countries. Particularly in 2008, the total number of the mobile phone subscriptions in developing countries has witnessed a peak of 0.4 billion, compared with 0.1 billion in developed countries.

（3）I believe that this interesting fact is caused by the following two reasons.

(4)Above all, during the beginning years, the developed countries have much more advanced economic development and thus more people can afford this service. However, developing countries have recently elevated their economies to a more and more higher stage, which thus benefits an increasing number of people with phone use. (5)Furthermore, the developed countries have a rather smaller

population who keeps a limited demand for mobile service. There, most of the people are well-educated and the society is highly civilized, which decreases the potential in many aspects including in the area of private telecommunication tools and people’s demands for further enlargement of such tools tend to saturation. This is why the number of mobile phone users in developed countries has remained below o.1 billion within almost ten years.

（6）In my opinion, mobile phones can greatly facilitate interpersonal communication but at the same time do harm to the physical health and the environment due to the radiation. In this sense, people should use their phones in a proper manner so as to decrease the harm as much as possible.

【行文点评】

（1）开篇点题，as 引导非限制性定语从句，指代后面的主句内容。

（2）however表示转折，提示后面的变化趋势与前面差别很大，甚至相反。reverse表示“倒置，完全相反”，4亿更合适的表达为“0.4 billion”。

（3）中心句，统领全段，be caused by“由……导致”。

（4）（5）分别以above all和furthermore开头，层次分明地解释原因，条理清晰。第二条原因中提到，西方国家高度文明化，导致了对于通讯工具的需求饱和，需要仔细揣摩。

（6）点明个人立场，结合图表和生活实际，给出自己的建议和意见。

【亮点词汇】

subscription [] n. 订阅；定金；签署

reverse [] v. 颠倒，倒转，相反

witness [] v. 见证，证明，表明

civilized [`] adj. 文明的，文明化的

telecommunication [] n. 电讯，无线电通讯enlargement [] n. 扩大

saturation [] n. 饱和（状态），饱和，浸透

in a proper manner合适地，恰当地

【实用句型】

As can be seen from the chart ....

However, the situation reverses and ....

The total number of … has witnessed ….

I believe that this interesting fact is caused by the following two reasons.

In this sense, people should use …in a proper manner so as to…..

题2 [英语二2011研]

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1) interpret the chart and

2) give your comments.

You should write at least 150 words.

Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

2008、2009年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图

【图表解析】

本题以柱状图的形式给出，反映了从2008年到2009年三大汽车品牌在国内轿车市场份额的变化。由图表可知，国内品牌的市场份额显著增加，日系品牌急剧下降，而美系品牌基本持平。考生可先对这一现象作简单描述，再着重分析其原因，最后给出自己的观点或建议。

根据解题思路，范文将安排三个段落：第一段，描述图表内容，从2008年到2009年，国内品牌的市场份额显著增加，从25%上升到33%，日系品牌急剧下降，从35%下降到25%，而美系品牌基本持平，保持在15%左右；第二段分析原因，首先国内科技进步巨大，汽车行业不断创新进步，再者日系品牌原来一直以品质著称，但近几年的汽车召回事件损害了品牌信誉，最后美系品牌由于其消费群体定位精确，故仅存在有限的消费人群。

【参考范文】

（1）This chart clearly reveals the change of market shares of three regional car brands from 2008 to 2009. （2）The market share owned by domestic car brands has increased dramatically from 25% to 33%. By a sharp contrast, the market share

Japanese car brands accounted for has dropped rapidly from 35% to 25%. At the meantime, the market share of American car brands has remained at about 15%.

（3）This phenomenon, in my opinion, can be attributed to three reasons. Above all, domestic technology has increasingly advanced and the car industry has all the time concentrated upon innovation and self-owned technologies, so the quality and function of domestic cars have been greatly improved. By contrast, Japanese car brands which were well-known for top quality have terribly been damaged by several times of massive car-recallings. （4）Meanwhile, American car brands usually design customer-made sales strategies and target specific consumers, so they have a limited proportional consumers.

（5）Evidently, the Chinese automakers are doing a good job in competing with Japanese and American counterparts. In the future, I believe Chinese car brands will become more and more popular both home and abroad.

【行文点评】

（1）首句整体说明柱状图展示的内容，reveal意为“揭示，显示”，传神达意。

（2）分层叙述市场份额的变化情况，dramatically，sharp，rapidly，increase，drop，remain 等词准确表示出变化的形势。

（3）开头即为中心句，统领全段，为下面即将分层展示的三个原因做铺垫。be attributed to归因于。

（4）美系车在华销量不是特别好的原因需要仔细思考，同时需要具备一些基本的背景知识。（5）最后表达了对国内车系销量成绩的肯定与未来发展的美好憧憬。

【亮点词汇】