2011MBA英语作文经典范文背诵版

2011MBA 英语作文经典范文（背诵版）模板作文A：

1、道歉+建议信：最新英语（二）大纲样题

Directions:

You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to

1) make an apology,

2) suggest a solution.

Dear Bob，

I'm writing to apologize for having forgotten to return the “the Beatles”CD to you when I left Canada. I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in

my luggage without checking carefully. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn't

have made such a stupid mistake.

Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you

cherish the CD enormously. I can either send it to you by express mail or

alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price. If you do not mind, I may

bring it back to you next time I go to Canada.

Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience.

I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.

Faithfully yours,

Li Ming

亲爱的鲍勃：

我写此信的目的是为了向你道歉。在离开加拿大时，我忘了把那盘披头士乐队的CD还给你。走的时候太匆忙了，我把所有东西都塞到行李中，没有仔细检查。

当时要是多加注意的话，就不会犯这种低级错误了。

因为我知道你特别珍爱那盘CD，所以一定要想办法解决这个问题。我可以寄快

递包裹给你，也可以按合理的价格赔偿你的损失。如果你不介意的话，我也可以在下次去加拿大的时候把它给你带回去。

请在方便的时候尽快让我知道你倾向哪一种解决方案。希望你能接受我真诚的道歉。

2、订购 +建议信

Directions:

You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books.

Write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for:

1) detailed information about the books you want,

2) methods of payment,

3) time and way of delivery.

Dear Sir or Madam,

As I am planning to take the National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates

(NETEM), I have decided to place an order of some NETEM books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of

your books.

Firstly, please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors, publishing

houses and prices of these books. Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payment

and after-sell service. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver

these books by EMS to the headquarters of Beijing New Oriental School by September

1, 2007. I have arranged to pay for the service.

I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

3、商务索赔+建议信函

Dear Mr . Smith,

With reference to your letter of 6th September ,in which a claim was lodged

for a short delivery of 500 silk-carpets , we wish to express our deepest regret

over the serious mistake .

The mistake is entirely our own .It occurred as a result of staff shortage

during the busy season and the fact that the number of goods is not counted carefully. We will make payment by remittance for $382. 00, the amount of claim ,

upon receipt of your agreement .

Its embarrassing to cause inconvenience to any customer ,but unforgivable

when that customer is so highly valued as you . Red-face and contrite ,I ask your

indulgence and offer you my personal assurance of better service in the future .]

With best regards .

亲爱的史密斯先生：

关于贵方九月六日信中要求对短缺五进件丝毯进行索赔一事，我方深表遗憾，非常抱歉出现这一严重失误。．

失误的造成完全是我方的原因。在此销售旺季，由于员工短缺，未能仔细清点货物数量。如贵方同意，我方将电汇索赔金额382美元。

给顾客带来不便是很令人窘迫的，尤其是给像您这样重要的客户带来不便是无法求得谅解。我羞愧而懊悔地请贵方包容这一失误，并保证今后提供更优质的服务。

模板作文B：

在准备大作文的过程中，大家慢慢可将具体步骤和相应的时间确立下来。熟悉操作步骤，能极大地提高效率和成功的概率。拿到题目之后，一是看图读图，一是看指令。综合考虑后将主题确定下来，就可以构造文章的整体结构了。之后考虑每段大致分成几点来写。如果熟悉这个过程，速度是非常快的。在这上面节省下来的时间，可以被用在对词句的斟酌之上。这样主动权掌握在自己手里，考试中就会有稳定的发挥了。

4、漫画作文—批判危害性的框架

(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, （描述图画内容），which seems

to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The

most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, (3)Recent

few years has witnessed a phenomenon of （主题） which seems to be disastrous

to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of （主题）should be

condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning

subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects

have been put forward. (2)To begin with,（主题） not only results does harm to

our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating

life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than（主题） to contradict with

a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as（主题）to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling

to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example

mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93%

people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of

hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this

trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the

gloomy future of something.

(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that should

we hand, one the (2)On . 主题preventto taken are measures effective some be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something.

(3)On

the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance

of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier

said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous

one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can

you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

5、图画作文—城市化对环境的影响

Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:

1. describe the drawing,

2. interpret its meaning, and

3. make your comment.

You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

该文可分三段来写。第一段描述图画。第二段分析城市化带来的严重后果。第三段谈解决问题的办法。

This picture leaves a deep impression on me: a skyscraper, like a beast with sharp teeth, is pulling a big tree completely out of the earth. Anyone who

has seen this picture will realize that urbanization has made a serious impact

on the environment.

Although urbanization has improved our quality of life in many aspects, we must be aware that it has also brought about a series of unfavorable consequences. First, the farmland in the country is shrinking. For one thing,

some rural areas become cities during the process of urbanization, chiefly because

they are near big cities and thus included in the urban development plan. For

another, more and more rural people are now working in the cities. They bring

advanced technology back to their homeland and the land may serve diversified

purposes nowadays. Second, sometimes, the rural land, rivers and air are polluted.

When more and more new factories are set up, the surrounding environment is likely

to decay.

In my mind, it is not necessarily the result. First, if urban planners take the environment into consideration before the actual construction stage,

the present situation will be much better. Second, every citizen should be both

the advocator and the practitioner of environment protection. Third, laws and

regulations should be established to punish those environment violators severely.

Only when such measures are implemented will cities take on a better look and

bring all of us a better life.

第一段首句描述图画，并在第二句中点出了图画说明的社会问题——城市化对环境带来的负面影响。第二段首句是段落统领句，该句旨在引出下文的严重后果。可是城市化是有利有弊甚至利大于弊的事情，如果不想谈有利的方面，就可以使用一个让步状语从句，从而不失客观。这里请大家用心领悟。而后分两方面来说：一是耕地减少，二是环境污染。

第三段首句别具一格，是特殊的段落统领句，与传统的办法类统领句根据不同情况加以使用，可取得良好效果。比如说，如果图画给人的冲击很大，就可以使用一些主观色彩较强的句型来感染读者。而后分城市规划者、民众和法律三方面来说，条理非常清晰。最后一句是结语，包括一个平行结构和“城市让生活更美好”的理念，请大家体会。

6、图表作文

“Changes in the ownership of Houses in Beijing ”

Ownership of Houses in Beijing

Outline: 1. 根据上图描述北京市住房产权的变化

2. 简要分析其变化的原因

你认为该变化对社会和个人有何影响 3.

Changes in the Ownership of Houses in Beijing

As can be clearly seen from the above graph, great changes have taken place in the

ownership of houses in Beijing during the past decade. In 1990, 75% houses in Beijing were

state - owned, with only a quarter left for individuals. From then on, the number of private

houses has increased much, but still less than state - owned ones. While by the year of 2000,

private houses increased sharply from 40 % in 1995 to 80 % in 2000, when the state –owned

houses only accounted for 20 %. ( 90 )

It goes without saying that some driving factors that contribute to the above changes may

be summarized as fallows. To begin with, with the rapid development of

market-oriented

economy, the Beijing government abandoned the traditional housing system which did not

accommodate to the new situations. Houses were no longer distributed according to people' s

ages or official status. People were encouraged to buy their own houses. What's more, owing to

owing to the rapid improvement of Beijing's living standard, an increasing number of people

can afford to buy their own apartment.

Based on what has been discussed above, we may reasonably make the comment that the

Changes in the Ownership of Houses in Beijing not only foster the economic development and

city construction of Beijing but also improve Beijing People's housing standard and living

conditions. (229)