2016年大陆托福独立写作题库大全
Recently some students need to arrive at school at the early time in the morning. Some people think that starting school day early is a good approach to support learning, while other people think that starting school day at the later time is a good approach to support learning.
1. 2. 2016年1月23日独立写作
Some people think that some lessons for young students (aged 5--8) which include video games are effective and interesting, while other people think this way is distracting and wastes time.
What's your opinion?
1. 3. 2016年1月24日独立写作
In times of an economic crisis, in which area should governments reduce its spending? 1）Arts；2）Scientific research；3）Parks and public gardens.
High school students should be required to study many different subjects at same time or they should study only three or four subjects at a time？
1. 5. 2016年2月28日独立写作Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smart-phone, video games for fun and entertainment; playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children‘s development？
1. 6. 2016年3月11日独立写作
Agree or disagree: students do reading by their own interest is as important as or more important than the reading teachers assigned.
1.7. 2016年3月13日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: After high school,
students should have at least one year to work or travel. It's better than attending university straight away.
1.8. 2016年3月19日独立写作
Agree or disagree: the university club wants to help others, if you are a member of them, which following would you prefer to choose? 1）help young students in nearby primary school
2）help people to find new houses for rent; 3）help old people for caring them in daily life
9. 2016年3月26日独立写作
Agree or disagree: it is often not a good choice to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose touch with old friends.
10.10. 2016年4月9日独立写作
Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than
getting advice from friends your same age. Do you agree or disagree?
10.11. 2016年4月23日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: sports can teach us lessons about life.
10.12. 2016年5月7日独立写作
Which do you prefer with the same rate of pay: an interesting and challenging job with less vacation time or a job with more vacation time but less fun?
10.13. 2016年5月22日独立写作
As the leader of a city, what would you do to ensure the prosperity and success of the city? A. Creating job opportunities for the unemployed;
B. lowering food price;
C. providing affordable housing
14. 2016年5月28日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: The movies are worth watching only if they can teach
something in real life.
15.15. 2016年5月29日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: It is better for elders to take risks and explore new things than young people.
15.16. 2016年6月4日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: The most important thing for government to improve health care is to clean the environment.
15.17. 2016年6月18日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: To be a successful person, one must be open to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind.
18.2016年6月25日独立写作
Which one of the following is the most important action for the government to take for the protection of natural environment?
1) Fund research on new energy sources
such as solar and wind power
2) Preserve natural places such as forests and natural wildlife species.
3) Pass and enforce laws to reduce the pollution produced by companies and industries
19. 2016年7月2日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships.
20. 2016年7月3日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: People who develop different skills are more successful than people who develop one skill only.
21. 2016年7月9日独立写作
Would you prefer a higher pay job with longer work time or an average pay job with normal work time.
22. 2016年7月10日独立写作
How to improve the education of high
school?
1.1）Train a group of excellent teachers
and then let them teach other
teachers
2）Train every teacher online
23. 2016年7月16日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: the universities should spend more money in improving facilities (libraries, computer labs) than hiring famous teachers.
24. 2016年8月20日独立写作
What’s your opinion？Spending a long time in making an important decision is often considered as a bad quality. However, some people think that it is a good quality for a person.
25. 2016年8月21日独立写作
Some believes that it is important to spend more time be far away from the people we care about, because it is
necessary for people to understand the importance of relationship of people we care about, while others think being away from people we care about can damage our relationships with them. 26. 2016年8月27日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree：It is more important to read and watch news presented by people whose opinion is different from your own view than by people whose opinion are similar to yours.
27. 2016年9月3日独立写作
What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities?
1）Plant trees and create parks
2）Persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers
3）Increase access to public
transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on roads 28. 2016年9月10日上午独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: The government should offer internet access to all of citizens at no cost.
29. 2016年9月10日下午独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: primary schools should spend more time on teaching young students (5-11years old) technology (like computer) than teaching music and art.
30. 2016年9月11日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: One can learn a lot about another person from the books and the movies that the person likes
31. 2016年9月24日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: Your job has more effects on happiness than your
social life does.
32. 2016年9月25日独立写作
Your school wants to improve the quality of students’ life in the dormitory. Which one of the following do you think the school should build in dorms?
1）Quiet study area
2）exercise room for students to keep physical well-being
3）room for entertainment
33. 2016年10月15日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: Young people should try different jobs before they take
a long-term career.
34. 2016年10月16日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Require young children (aged 5-11) to work together in a small group rather than work by themselves is the best way to teach them.
35. 2016年10月22日独立写作
Some teenagers take part in many kinds of activities, such as musical classes, sports classes and so on, but others only focus on one activity which is important to them. Which idea do you support? 36. 2016年10月28日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is easier for parents to raise their children than 50 years ago.
37. 2016年10月29日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: It’s more important to use your own knowledge and experience than ask others’ knowledge and experience to solve problems.
38. 2016年11月5日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Students should be encouraged to take courses like science,
technology, engineering and math that are likely to lead to job opportunities rather than subjects they might be interested in.
39. 2016年11月13日独立写作
Some believe that teachers (for students from age 14-18) should focus on lecturing and asking students to take notes during lectures. Others believe that teachers should get students involved in discussion and encourage them to exchange ideas in class. Which way of teaching do you think is more effective for students’ learning?
40. 2016年11月12日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: People can solve important problems in their daily life on their own or with the help from families; the help from the government is not necessary.
41. 2016年11月19日独立写作
Some people like to study alone while others prefer to study in a group. Which one do you think is more effective? 42. 2016年11月26日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: Nowadays it is easier to be an educated person than it was in the past.
43. 2016年12月3日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: Nowadays people are more willing to help the people they don’t know(for example, giving clothing and food to the people who need them) than people were in the past.
44. 2016年12月10日上午独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is better for people to travel abroad when they are younger than they are older.
45. 2016年12月10日下午独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: It is difficult
for teachers to be both popular and effective in helping students in learning.
46. 2016年12月17日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree: Children should play and study rather than learn how to do household chores.
-2018托福独立口语真题汇总
1: Do you think it is a good idea to let students keep pets in dorms Task 2: Do you agree that celebrities are good examples for young people 1: Which one of the following history courses should be added 1. history of science 2. art history 3. modern history of the 20th century Task 2: Some people prefer to make a plan with their friends about social activities, while others prefer to decide about what to do when they meet their friends. Which do you prefer 1: Which of the following volunteer jobs would you like to choose 1. clean up the park 2. plant trees 3. build a bicycle lane Task 2: Do you agree that universities are successful because of experienced professors 1: What hobby would you recommend to a friend who is busy with work Task 2: Which is more important to the success of an artist: natural talent or hard work 1: What are the disadvantages of moving to new places for work or education Task 2: Do you agree that schools should encourage students to be creative and imaginative in order for them to be successful 1: What is the biggest challenge for university students and why Task 2: Do you agree that it is more important to maintain the relationship with family members than with friends 1: Which one of the following should be done in order to improve the quality of life and study for the students 1. repairing the swimming pool 2. building a new cafeteria 3. improving laboratory equipment Task 2: Some people tend to judge a person on the basis of the first observation, while other people believe that it takes a long time to know a person well. Which do you think is better 1: If you are a member of a tutor group, which of the following places would you like to take the students to go on a field trip 1. a science museum 2. a local farm 3. a theater Task 2: Do you agree that students should be allowed to take additional courses to graduate as soon as possible 1: What do you think of the school you went to for the first time Was it a good school and why Task 2: Some students prefer to study alone, while others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer 1: Describe one of the most popular websites in your country.
新托福独立写作21类题目
新托福独立写作21类题目 1.体育类： 2008.11.14—Children should only play sports for fun rather than play sports in competitions or contests. (Education) 孩子们应该为了乐趣而去参加体育活动而不是为了竞争或者比赛。 体育在现代生活的重要性有： 1.体育可以在身体得到锻炼，使身体素质得到提高； 2.体育活动让朋友和家人聚集一起参加锻炼，有社会意义，是一种积极的休闲和团体活动； 3.体育可以调节生活，让人们获得心理上的健康和快乐，更好的缓解压力； 4.体育可以提高人的意志和韧性； 5.体育是一个大的产业，给国家带来收入； 6.体育体现了人类社会的精神，可以促进世界和平。 体育运动的优点： 1.增加体质(increase physical strength)，有益于身心健康； 2.加快脂肪燃烧(accelerate fat burning)，有助于减肥(lose weight)； 3.有助于保持体形(stay in shape)，提高自我的形象(improve self image)； 4.有助于缓解压力(relieve stress)，调节心情(improve mood)，减少失落的情绪(reduce the chance of depression)； 5.有助于保持旺盛的精力(keep energetic)，从而提高工作效率(increase productivity)。 孩子参加体育项目是为了获得快乐：因为体育活动可以让他们得到精神上的放松，可以是他们和朋友交流的一种方式； 而获得乐趣并不是体育活动的唯一目的，参加比赛也是一种目的，因为比赛获胜可以让他们获得一种成就感，输了可以学会逆境成长的精神。 2008.12.5—Sports teaches us lessons about life. 运动教会我们一些生活道理 运动教会我们要养成健康的生活方式和积极的人生态度； 体育比赛告诉我们竞争是生活的一部分，但友谊同样重要； 团队运动教给人们要合作，在生活中和工作中也要学会合作，这样做事情才会能有效率，比如，在足球篮球比赛中，你不能时时都争着进球，要注意合作才能获得更高的分数，一个全都是优秀球员的球队并不一定能给打败一个球员很平庸但是合作的很好的球队，在生活上也是如此，我们不必事事争第一，和别人合作往往能达到共赢的目的。 棋类运动教给我们许多生活道理，比如我们下棋的时候必须瞻前顾后，考虑很多步，生活上也是，凡事三思而后行 2.专业知识类： 2006.11.19—It is more important to choose a subject of your interest than to choose subjects which prepare you for a job or a career.(Education) 选自己感兴趣的学科比选有前途的学科更重要（支持该观点） 中间段写作思路： （一）Reason 1: 因果链接：资源有限—竞争激烈—压力大—就业压力—就业竞争中脱颖而出—有前途的专业（举例） 首先：学习对于未来的职业有用的学科之后才能更容易找到工作。当代社会每个人都渴望取得成功，但是资源是有限的，所以竞争激烈，每个人承受的压力都很大，其中大学生面临的最现实的问题就是就业问题。
托福写作新题库精选题库
托福独立写作新题库—188题库 一、教育类 1.Teachers are appreciated and valued nowadays not as much as they were before.(Students nowadays do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past.)难度4考频4 2.University should spend more money supporting social activities rather than improving the food students eat.难度4考频3 3.When you are assigned an important presentation for work or school, you prefer to work on it right away so that you can work on it a little bit every day, or wait until you have a good idea about the presentation?难度5考频3 4.Some students prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas others prefer to have their final grades determined by only a few large ones. Which do you prefer and why?4/2 5. In order to attract good students, many universities spend a lot of money in society activities.3/3 6The student should be required to take history courses in the university no matter what their field of study is.5/3 7Students can get as much benefits from participating student organizations or club activities as from their academic studies. 4/3 8Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the Internet or listen to the music while studying.3/4 9Teachers' performance should be evaluated by students rather than by other teachers.3/4
托福TPO48独立写作题目文本+满分范文
为了帮助大家高效备考托福，为大家带来托福TPO48独立写作题目文本+满分范文，希望 对大家备考有所帮助。 托福TPO48独立写作题目原文： Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and https://www.360docs.net/doc/b514998326.html,e specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 托福TPO48独立写作满分范文1： Increasingly sophisticated technology, explosive information and intricate international relationships all work together to complicate the modern life, which makes our modern people somewhat overwhelmed. Individuals whoever want to have a better control of one’s life must equip themselves with some essential skills or abilities. Planning and organizing, which embodies the skill of anticipating, influencing, and controlling, in my view, is becoming gradually important in coping with today’s complication especially for the young who are always the most passionate but also with less self-control. First of all, planning helps keep one on course in achieving goals and crystallize objectives. Young people always possess some grand dreams which may take years to accomplish. Planning ahead, on the one hand, could effectively put one on the right track thus prevent energy from being scattered or wasted. A survey conducted by experts from Oxford University shows that over 90% of elites and enterprisers had precise objects and made plans for decades later at very young age. Like Bill Gates, one of the most prominent persons I have ever seen, discontinued their studies since he was definite aware of what he should do in order to become the leader of IT field. On the other hand, plans, which are organized step by step, could turn the ultimate goals into several achievable ones. With achievable objective achieved one by one, the ultimate goal will finally be attained. Besides, planning and organizing help to promise one’s best performance in most occasions. Panning means trying to anticipate all the possibilities and arrange things in a scientific order. It clearly tells people what to do currently and what should do the next, which prevents disorder or chaos. Thus, people may feel assured and will be with less stress. For example, a student who sticks to a study plan is less likely to be nervous thus will be more likely to have better performance than those who crams for tests. Today youngsters are exposed with fierce competitions but also abundant opportunities. Good performance is key to hold these opportunities in hand. It is undeniable that our society changes at such a quick pace that we cannot plan everything in previous. But this by no means implies that the ability is not important. Without a plan, complex things will only get more complicated. Abraham Lincoln reportedly once said, “If I had 60 minutes to cut down a tree, I would spend 40 minutes sharpening the ax and 20 minutes cutting it down.” Planning is just like “sharpening the ax”, which will no doubt facilitate a task easy done. All in all, though the ability of planning and organizing may not be omnipotent for people
2016下半年托福口语真题
6.25 Task 1 Sometimes people behave impolitely in public. Describe a time when an impolite behavior annoyed you.Explain why you were annoyed. Task 2 If someone donates a piece of Iand to your community, should it be used to construct an amusement center or grow plant and flowers? 7.20 TASK1 Your friend is coming to your country for studying, but he or she is worried about the cost, what are the advices you can offer? TASK2 Some people answer mobile phones and reply text messages when they are meeting friends in person, others think it is not a polite thing to do when they are already having a face to face conversation, what is your opinion on this matter? 8.20 Task 1 In every culture there are some customs or traditions from the past those young people no longer follow. Describe a custom or tradition form the past that is no longer common but that you wish still popular today. Give specific reasons why you wish that still popular. Task2 Some people prefer to watch entertainment programs on television. Others prefer to watch educational programs. Which do you prefer? Explain why? 8.21 Task 1：
托福独立写作满分范文30篇
托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（１） Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice? As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others ’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative. Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group ’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village. Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other. Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrasedfrom John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do. 托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(2) Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative. Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly
托福TPO45独立写作题目文本+满分范文
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2016年1-12月托福独立口语题目汇总(1)
2016年1-12月托福独立口语题目汇总(1)
S1: Do you think it is a good idea to let students keep pets in dorms? S2: Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are good examples for young people. 16.01.23 S1: Which one of the following history courses should be added: history of science, art hist ory or modern history of the 20th century? S2: Some people prefer to make a plan with their friends about social activities, while other s prefer to decide about what to do when they meet their friends. Which one do you prefer a nd why? 16.01.24 S1: If you were to do a volunteer job in the community, which one of the following jobs wou ld you like to choose? 1. clean up the park, 2. plant trees, 3. build a bicycle lane. S2: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Schools and universities are s uccessful because they hire experienced professors? 16.02.27 S1: What hobby would you suggest your friend who is busy with his or her work to take up ? S2: Which one of the following two factors is more important to the success of an artist? na tural talent or hard work
托福独立写作的审题原则和布局(上)
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