同等学力英语写作练习(含范文)
同等学力英语写作练习(含范文)
练习题一
Writing (30 minutes, 15 points)
范文：
The picture shows a boy who is crossing a river by stepping on his peasant parents‘heads like stones. The river symbolizes the heavy financial load on rural parents to support their children’s advanced education. As is quoted in the picture, a family in countryside can barely afford a high school student, not to mention a college student.
The picture apparently mirrors an increasingly common social phenomenon in China—the hiking cost of education in contrast with the tiny income of the rural population. For one thing, the problem is partially attributed to the present disparity of wealth distribution. Sometimes the college tuition per student equals the annual income of a rural family. For another, colleges and other educational institutions fail to provide financial tools to assist students from poor areas. For example, the application for scholarship and student loan is usually so complicated that the procedure seems to take forever, while students see no trace of money.
In my opinion, the government needs to reform the educational system with measures that can show immediate effect. Cutting tuition and other expenses proves to be most beneficial to students. Further, a large-scale reform at the macroeconomic level to bridge the gap between the rich and the poor is a basic solution to this issue.
译文：
这幅图一个男孩子正在把他的农民父母的头作为垫脚石来跨过一
2020年中考英语作文专项训练(无答案)
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人教版英语必修二Book-2-unit-1-5-各单元写作训练及参考范文
Book 2 Unit 1 Cultural Relics 写作训练假如你是李华，最近，你的美国笔友莎莉（Sally）发邮件说想到你居住的城市北京来旅游，希望你给她简单介绍一下这座城市。请根据以下要点提示，给她回一封电子邮件。 1.历史悠久； 2. 名胜古迹众多(places of interest) ； 3. 可以品尝美食 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总数； 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 Dear Sally, I’m gald to hear that you are planning to come to Beijing. I’d like to tell you something about this city. Beijing is the capital of China and has a long history（历史悠久）. There are many places of interest （名胜古迹）in this city for you to visit, such as（例如）the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and so on（等等）. In my opinion（在我看来）, the best season to come to Beijing is autunm because it is neither too hot nor too cold, and you can enjoy the beautiful flowers and trees everywhere. What’s more（除此之外）, you will have the opportunity to（有机会做某事）taste some delicious food here. I am sure that you will have a great time（玩的开心）when travelling in Beijing. Looking forward to you coming! Yours, Li Hua
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同等学力英语作文范文十篇(修改)
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2019高考英语：写作综合练习集(2)(参考范文)
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(完整版)高三英语作文练习及范文
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英语基本句型写作练习(附答案)
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(完整版)同等学力英语作文(十篇范文)
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英语综合写作练习
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2020年中考英语 写作训练及范文(10篇)
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高考英语一轮写作综合训练9
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高二普通班英语写作训练 (1) 假设你是新华中学的李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom 约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封E-mail： 1. 表示歉意 2. 解释原因 3. 另约时间 注意：1.词数为100左右 2. 可适当增加细节 【范文】 Dear Tom, I am sorry to tell you that I can't go to Bejing with you. I really feel sorry about that and want you to know what happened. My cousin , Li Qiong, left home to Australia for his further study last year. Just now, he informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know, we haven't seen each other for nearly a year. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me.If you like, please allow me to make another date to show you around Bejing. Once again, I am very sorry about that. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【仿写】假设你是希望高中的学生王红，你和在武鸣高中的朋友陈英约好了元旦放假时一起去南宁动物园玩，但元旦时你家要搬新家，你必须回家帮忙，你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给她写一封E-mail： 1. 表示歉意 2. 解释原因 3. 另约时间（放寒假时） 注意：1.词数为100左右 2. 可适当增加细节 3.书写工整 (2) 假设你是高三学生李华。繁忙的高中生活即将结束了，你的暑假一定有很多打算。请根据以下要点，写一篇短文，谈谈你高考后暑假的安排。 1.学开车； 2. 参加英语培训课程； 3. 游览北京的名胜； 4. 去深圳看第26界大学生运动会注意：1.不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节； 2.词数100-110左右 参考词汇：第26界大学生运动会the 26th World Universiade 【范文】 As time goes by, my college entrance exam is approaching and it also announces(宣告）the end of my pressing study life. Therefore, I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving licence. Then I will take some English courses to improve my spoken English. With the Shenzhen 26th World Universiade coming, I will go to watch the basketball match between China and US.After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions of Bejing to widen my mind. That is the plan for my vacation. I am eagerly looking forward to it. 【仿写】假设你是高二的学生李明。繁忙的一个学期即将结束了，请你根据以下要点，写一篇短文，谈谈你的寒假安排。 1.完成寒假作业 2.参加数学培训班 3.与家人一起好好的过年并到云南丽江旅游 注意：1.不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节； 2.词数100左右 3.书写工整