上海英语高考作文题目

上海英语高考作文题目 Modified by JACK on the afternoon of December 26, 2020

2015上海英语高考作文题目

【篇一:凯文老师,2015年上海高考英语作文题目(作文解

析和范文)】

2015年上海高考英语作文解析,及,作文范文

ii. guided writing (25分)

directions: write an english composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in chinese.

学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:

1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;

2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。

作文解析:

今年的英语作文题目同样重点考察了主观理由型作文的写作手法,这篇文章要求学生在三幅学校读书节宣传图片当中选出自己最喜欢的一幅,对图片进行描述并说明原因。这也是继2013年和2014年连续两年考察书信体与主观理由型文章的结合体之后出现的第三篇主观理由型文章。

整体来看,今年的作文题目似乎与往年没有什么区别,但细细分析,我们会发现今年英语作文的难度,不管是在文章内容、还是在形式上面,都有了大幅提升。因为考生需要同时兼顾三个难点:1、书信体正确的的书写格式;2、对图片内容进行细节的描述;3、找出恰当的理由(2-3点)进行论证,说理充分,同时注意论点和论据相结合,以及文章语句之间的逻辑严密性。可以说,近三年来英语作文虽然都在考察主观理由这个大的方向,但是考察的难度确实是在逐年递增。

对于考生来说,要想在短短的20分钟之内写好这篇作文,首先需要拿捏好这篇文章的结构。一般来说,文章第一段用来引出话题,第二段可以对所选择的图片进行描写,描写时要格外注意的地方是对细节的详细描述,基本内容讲清楚就可以开始第三段的理由阐述了。

写好重头戏理由之后,在尾段我们无需过多笔墨,基本上通过三句话就可以收尾了。也就是总结加升华,由于这是一篇征集建议的书信体文章,所以需要最后有一句客套话,考生可以通过looking forward to your reply或者i will appreciate it very much if you can take my suggestions into consideration进行文章自然收尾。这样整篇文章便达到了内容统一,结构完整,说理充分了

作文范文:

dear sir/ madam,

since the reading festival is around the corner, i’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.

in the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. it seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. though it is admitted that reading is

mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as i’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the

same book is being appreciated. just imagine that you have read a

terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. you are

so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it

with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. the moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiam about the story will explode which can never be gained on

your own. my ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also

have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. to sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of

particiation and common interest.

i sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and i’m looking forward to your early reply.

yours,

pan yang

【篇二:2015上海高三一模英语写作解析(各区英语点评)】

2015上海高三一模英语写作解析

——有多少爱还在重来?

马不停蹄的时间走到了2015年,高三的童鞋们,一模考你们准备好了么?截止到今天,已经有四个区考完了,而我们上海新东方优能中学也为大家搜刮到了这四个区大部分的一模真题。接下来的日子,本大熊会陪你们一起分析这次高考一模的英语写作~为考完的同学做好总结,也为没考的同学做好准备~

这期的副标题才是重点——“有多少爱还在重来”。经历了那么多年的高考在英语写作上其实已经出现了很多的规律和考察的定向思维。我们就从这些蛛丝马迹里找找真相吧~

屁话不多说,甩题~

2015 宝山区一模

目前,在网上购物的人越来越多,有人说在网上购物比实体店购物优势多,有人说还是在实体店购物好。请写一篇文章阐明你的观点。你的文章必须包括:简要介绍两种购物方式的不同之处

你喜欢哪种购物方式为什么

2015 普陀区一模

假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动,有三种方案:一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学;二、聘请英语专家介绍有效地学习方法;三、组织一次班级新年派对。作为班级的一员,请你根据你的实际情况,在三项方案中选择其一,提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由。

你的写作中必须包括:

在三项方案中选择其一;

对该方案提出建议;

谈谈你提出建议的理由。

2015 静安区一模

假如你是某中学高三(1)班的学生李明,写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师,因为你校图书馆将选择招募课余学生图书管理员。信息必须包括以下内容:

简要介绍个人特长

表达希望成为课余学生图书管理员的愿望

谈谈你作为课余学生图书管理员,对学校图书馆里提出一些建议

注意:文中请勿提及真实学校

三道题看完,发现什么没有?估计多数人除了脑子一片白茫茫就是眼前一片白茫茫了~跟着本大熊慢慢分析吧~今天先说宝山区一模~

目前,在网上购物的人越来越多,有人说在网上购物比实体店购物优势多,有人说还是在实体店购物好。请写一篇文章阐明你的观点。你的文章必须包括:简要介绍两种购物方式的不同之处

你喜欢哪种购物方式为什么

这类作文上海高考相同结构的考法出现过一次,不过是在很久远的1999年:

一些学生认为学英语很重要;一些学生则认为不必学英语;我认为(观点、理由)

在上海高考一模卷里好像也不怎么的受待见,近三年(2012~2014)一模卷一共考过次,具体题目如下:

那么到底为什么这类文章每年都会零星出现他的考点到底是什么用意又是什么呢其中是否又有着规律呢

答案我们现在来揭晓!

这类文章从题干里就能看出来两个比较重要的规律:

一、一定会有两方针锋相对的对立方观点;

二、一定需要你做出自己的选择。

如果我说这样的文章其实很简单,你信么?

之所以这么说,是因为这样的文章结构会很清楚,而且如果题干中给出的是具体观点而不仅仅只是大致方向的话,那么其实连内容都可以少想好多了~

结构如下:

段1 ——提出针锋相对的话题,表明立场(2~3句)

段2 ——支持方内容重点提出(4~5句)

段3 ——反方内容简略提出(2~3句)

段4 ——权衡两者,重申段1的立场(1~2句)

今天就来好好看看这十句话左右的作文有哪些是固定的,哪些是可控的吧!

段1

句1:recently, what has drawn a social attention is 主题词

【第一句的目的很简单,引出主题词。有时候适当翻译题干就好,如果题干特别短,那么就用上面这句话。】

句2:however, views on that differ from person to person.

【这句话替换已经用烂的模板some people think … while the others … 这句话存在的价值其实只是表明纠结就好,如果你用旧模板的话那么必然啰嗦而且文章下面还要重复。所以是我就用最简单的话一笔带过。】

句3:personally speaking, i am in favor of …

【第三句其实才是文章的最开始~因为文章接下来的主线由这句话决定!所以麻烦拜托求求你们用上“个人而言”这样的逻辑词标亮!】

段2

句4:as is often pointed out by the supporters (advocates)/ objectors (opponents), …

【从第四句开始其实就是对于文章题干内容的列举,但是绝不是简单翻译列举!改变从第五句开始!】

句5:to be more detailed, …

【多数人的最大问题其实就是在这个点上!会翻译但是不会扩展深入~如果语文议论文的九

个字“是什么,为什么,怎么样”你能懂得话,那么就容易多了。if not,那就只能来我的课上听了!或者你可以浏览我的新浪微博@新东方许振斌去看看我做的《大熊日报》!】

句6:继续句5深入 or 和句4并列~

【这句话决定了自主扩展内容的多少,当然也取决于题干中所给的内容的多少~如果题干内容多,那么明智的选择就是并列句4;如果题干内容很少,那么如果不想多角度,就可以选择继续深入句5~】

句7:此处省略?

【不同选择造成的7其实都是不同的!】

段3

句8:nevertheless, there is no garden without weeds.

【都第三段了要是再不转折那么分段有何用?而且题目是有要求的!】

句9:一句翻译【反方观点】

【这里点到为止,力求翻译到位稍加修饰便可~写多了没必要,写少了怕老师看不到!】

段4

句10:weighing up what has been mentioned above, …

【这句话就该总结了,可以简短收尾,也可以详细具体~具体怎么写?问老师,问同学,问新东方吧~】

你觉得你现在知道怎么写作文了么?按照我的写作教学的经验,明显没有~可能今天讲的是你们从来不去涉足的意识,可能今天会让你觉得不可思议,但是作文其实真的可以这样~我很讨厌教模板,我不相信有什么万能模板,我今天讲的那些句子甚至有些文章用了就是

【篇三:2006-2015十年上海高考英语作文范文】

十年上海高考英语作文例文(2006-2015)

2015年上海卷高考英语作文范文

学校即将举办“读书节”, 目前正广泛征集“读书节” 宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳, 你已找到以下三幅图片, 决定给读书节组委会写一封信, 推荐其中一幅,。你的信须包括以下内容:

1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;

2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节” 的理由。

dear sir/ madam,

since the reading festival is around the corner, i’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.

in the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. it seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. though it is admitted that reading is

mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as i’m concerned, it can also be a s haring experience when the

same book is being appreciated. just imagine that you have read a

terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. you are

so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it

with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. the moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on

your own. my ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also

have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. to sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of

participation and common interest. i sincerely hope that you will take

my suggestion into consideration and i’m looking forward to your early reply.

yours sincerely,

pan yang

2014年上海卷高考英语作文范文

学校英语报正在酝酿改版,拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容:

1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;

2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。

dear sir / madam,

when it comes to the selection of the columns for the school english newspaper, opinions vary from one to another. as far as i am concerned, the columns preserved will definitely make a feature of students’ interest and exert (运用;发挥) positive effects on their study and https://www.360docs.net/doc/cb1902139.html,paratively speaking, i maintain / insist that the value of the columns concerning health and culture far outweighs (比……更重要;更

有价值)that of the entertainment. the immediate factor is nothing is more valuable than keeping healthy in that loss of health indicates kissing goodbye to life. that’s why more knowledge of how to keep fit, more effectively one can improve his quality of life.

the second point to be mentioned is that progress in the acquisition of cultures contributes to broadenin g one’s horizons, which in turn promotes one’s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.

as for the addition, the career planning constitutes a top priority. for one thing, it concerns one’s career development a great deal while for another, it m akes a great difference to one’s career success in the future.

i am pretty convinced that a wise choice makes perfect. i am writing the e-mail in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school english newspaper.

yours sincerely,

cheng fei

2013年上海卷高考英语作文范文

上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见,假设你是王敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求:

1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;

2. 说明你的理由(从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)

to whom it may concern:

i’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. i’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.

in my opinion, it is more advisable(适当的) to hold the art exhibition in shanghai museum than in community libraries(社区图书馆). my reasons are as follows.

on one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to shanghai museum which is located in the center of the city. and the museum is much more spacious(宽敞的) than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.

on the other hand, as a well-known museum, shanghai museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions.

its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.

therefore, i suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.

wang min

2012年上海卷高考英语作文范文

上周一,你在一所小学观摩了小女孩amy所在班级的两堂绘画课(如图所示),

回家后你用英语写了一篇日记,内容包括:

● 对两堂绘画课的具体描述;

● 你从中获得的启发。

date: june 8, 2012

last week, i sat in on two painting classes at a primary school. in

one class a student dipped her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints. by contrast, the same student used a brush to make a

breath-taking landscape painting—so vivid that one could almost smell the refreshing rivers and hear the chirping birds.

though standing in stark contrast, the two paintings both intrigued me. in fact, they reminded me of what facebook founder mark zuckerberg said,

“keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground.” it’s this maxim on success that lends insight into the two paintings. the first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success. a kite stays afloat because it’s attached to a reel; otherwise it will instantly lose its balance before eventually crashing into the ground. so it is with us.

however, success requires more than being simply down-to-earth, with a lofty ideal being another crucial factor. so grand was the scenery portrayed in the second painting that it embodied the reach of our dreams. instead of ignoring the gleam of light, the spark of wisdom

that flashes

across our mind and worshipping the luster of the sky of geniuses,

we’d be better off trusting that the gleam and the spark will one day shine as brightly as a search light if we have faith in ourselves.

the paintings taught me to dream big and act small. and i believe, by doing so, the warm light of success will cascade into my life.

2011年上海卷高考英语作文范文

话题:向一个基金会申请2000元做个项目来支持贫困学生,需要包含以下的一些要点1.介绍自己 2.项目具体实施方案 3.2000元如何利用

dear foundation organizers:

my name is jerry lu, a student currently studying at shanghai xx high school. i am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to apply for the 2000 yuan worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping

those students who are financially disadvantaged.

being raised in families that don’t have to worry about putting food

on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers. on

this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. the following is how we would go about using the money. we would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students at our school. it is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us “doling out” th e supplies so that we wouldn’t embarrass those who we want to help. the remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker

who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making

right academic and professional decisions.

modest as our efforts may sound, we believe they will warm some hearts. much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience.

yours sincerely,

jerry lu

2010年上海高考作文及范例

下图是小学新生的课堂一角,对照你当时的上课情况,作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括:

●描述图片里学生上课的场景

●比较你同时期的上课情况

●简单谈谈你的感受

as is described in the picture, a group of foreign students are raising their hands to give answers to the question in a joyful and active way. the purpose of the picture is to show us how active the class performance is in the foreign country.

compared with the class performance in local china, the difference is quite obvious. we chinese students stay quiet in class, keep taking notes and listen to what teacher is talking in a careful way.

i ask myself what causes lead to the phenomenon why class performance of chinese students is quite different from that of foreign students possible reasons can be listed as follows. most important of all, education system in china is the key reason. the first day we become

the primary student, our teachers tell us to obey the rules in class. we put our hands back and stay quiet in class. lecture-model teaching is the traditional way in chinese class. teacher is the leading actor or actress and student is always the supporting roles. gradually we get into the habit of staying quiet in class and lose the ability to raise questions and give the answers.

the second point to be mentioned is that chinese students hold different attitudes toward study. in our minds, we always think what we should learn instead of how we should learn knowledge in a smart way. we behave us as a passive listener, but foreign student act as a active learner.

as a saying goes, it is better to teach to fish rather than give a fish. taking what has been discussed above into account, there is no doubt that we need to think it over whether we are supposed to be a leaner or a quiet listener.

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