读写任务

读写任务解题方法

一、确定标题

不管好坏，一定要有标题，标题是文章的点睛之处。根据所给材料和所规定的论题或要点确立自己论述的内容或观点后进行命题。命题要体现真篇文章议论的中心。如：Opinions towards Fast Food/ Is Failure a Bad Thing?/Learn from Mistakes等。

二、进行概括

概括文章要点，语言要精炼，概括要全面，行文要连贯，表达要准确。议论文则用自己的话表达论点、论据和结论。

概括常用的句式有：

1.This article deals with/discusses/analyzes/strongly emphasizes…

2.This article not only describes …but also suggests…

3.This article compares…and summarizes key findings…

4.This articles gives an account of/provides an analysis of/provides a method of…

5.The article reports the last information on…

6.The problem of sth. Is discussed…

7.This articles shows/tells us that…

8.The author finds it necessary to…

9.The author holds the idea that…giving it an example of sb. who…

10.The author strongly emphasizes the benefits of getting up early such as…

三、自然过渡

写完概括后，用句恰当的过渡语引出自己的观点（反对或赞成）。过渡语起承上启下的作用，使文章显得自然、连贯。

常用的过渡句式有：

1.I do agree with the author…

2.In some way, I agree with…but…

3.This point sounds right, but…

4.However, I think…

5.I definitely believe…

6.In my opinion…

7.Personally, I feel that…

8.As far as I am concerned…

9.I can’t agree more with…Such cases are often seen in our life.

10.Attitudes towards …are various.

列举例证

提出自己的观点后就要用具体的事例来论证自己的观点。常用的句式见下表：

四、总结点题

总结句约30词，进一步总结作者的观点，提出具体做法或号召，升华文章的主题。常用的句式见下表：

五、常用写作谚语：

1.As is known to all, “No pains, no gains.”众所周知，一份耕耘，一份收获。

2.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。

3.Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜于空言/ 事实胜于雄辩。

4.All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。

5.Better late than never. 迟做总比不做好。

6.Every man is his own worst enemy. 最大的敌人就是自己。

7. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难之交才是真正的朋友/ 患难见真情。

8.Haste makes waste. 欲速则不达。

9.He who makes no mistakes makes nothing. 不犯错的人必将一事无成。

10.Health is better than wealth. 健康胜于财富。

11.Take time while time is, for time will be away. 机不可失，时不再来。

12.As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. 常言道，事物总是一分为二的。

13.As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. 正如谚语所云，事物都是一分为二的。

14.Just as a proverb says, “Opportunities are only for the prepared minds. 正如谚语所说，“机

会只会青睐那些有准备的人。”

15.It has often been remarked that time and tide wait for no man. 人们常说: 时光如流水，岁

月不待人。

满分作文鉴赏：

第二节读写任务(共1小题，满分25分) (2010年广东高考)

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

In junior high school, one of my classmates, Ethan, was addicted to TV. This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who’s the Boss?

Then one day Ethan’s mother made him an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjects. She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV. None of us thought Ethan could do it, but he did quite well. His mom paid him $200. He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find.

In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with each for showing up or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will. Psychologists warn that money can actually make kids perform worse by making the act of learning cheap. The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should he despite decades of reforms and budget increases.

[写作内容]

1以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

2以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：

(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：

(2)你的父母(或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的；

(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。

[写作要求]

1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事．也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

2010年满分作文1：

With the development of our modern society, people’s living conditions become much more comfortable. I think that using money to encourage children to study hard is a good choice. This teaches children that hard work is rewarded, and there are consequences for their actions. I would say it was worth it.

Education becomes more and more important. Many parents will spend a large sum of money educating their children. When I was young, my parents paid me for excellent grades. I often spend money on my interest, such as music, sport, study and so on. I can also save the money and put it in the bank, which is also a good way to teach me some money management. It was an extra motivator for me to do my best. And it worked. In other words, if I get the scholarship when I do go to college, I could save some money for my family. In the long run, paying your children for good grades is a small investment with the opportunity for huge gains.

To sump up, I think occasional awards are okay. Rewarding students for good grades is like a double-edged sword. We should make the best use of one edge and try not to be hurt by the other.

点评：

主题明确，内容丰富，用词得当。但作者的观点却标新立异，赞同使用恰当的金钱来作为物质奖励。作者认为，金钱本身没有任何意义，都是奖励或者助人的载体，现在的小孩聪明，其实早早就有了金钱的观念了。直接奖励金钱，不仅可以培养小孩的理财能力而且还是家庭一项投资。这篇议论文论点明确，论据有力。分词短语做伴随状语，do强调谓语动词等语法结构的准确运用，提升了文章的档次。另外也多次有意识地使用目前英语中较流行的句式来引起阅读者的注意，如to sum up…等，足以证明本文是考生超强英语实力的绝对表现，使得该篇文章亮点纷呈，值得学生模仿和学习。

2010年满分作文2：

From the passage, I know that Ethan’s mother paid money to him to keep away from TV and go back school, but she failed, which indicates that paying cash is not a proper method to encourage children to study well. When I was young, I was not a smart girl. Sometimes my parents felt disappointed because I got poor grades. Fortunately, unlike other parents, they seldom blamed me with hash words or beat me. They always helped me analyze the problems and told me that they believe that I could do better next time. A warm word may make a much better effect on children than￥100.I got constant praise and encouragement for my efforts. Thanks to that, I enjoyed a happy childhood and made progress step by step.

I agree with the non-money for good grades. The reasons are as follows: first, I think it may mislead children to think that money is powerful. Second, it may make student lose their direction in studying. Last but not the least, this education may lead children to build up a

wrong attitude towards their life. In my opinion, I think parents should pay more attention to spiritual encouragement than material one.

点评：

作者观点明确，反对用金钱奖励学生。现在，很多富裕家庭大把的钱花在孩子身上，但孩子并不能体验快乐，感受幸福。一味追求金钱，贪图享乐只能消磨孩子的意志，使他们成为社会的弱者。作者用简洁明快的语言以及自己的亲身经历叙述考题中的全部要点，内容充实，贴近生活。First,then,thirdly等过渡词的使用，增添文章的条理性。能在恰当表达所以内容要点的同事安排了许多较地道的连接词，如 first, second, last but not the least 等来使全文结构清晰，层次分明。最后，最值得一提的是，文中多次正确运用的高档词汇和复杂语法句式结构，更给文章增添了不少风采。综上所述，这是一篇不可多得的佳作，值得向学生们推荐。

第二节读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)(2009年广东高考)

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia．All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining．You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off．That’s right--sleep it off．The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy．

The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience．Whatever department in

the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable．How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you?

*考拉即树袋熊

[写作内容]

1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；

2．然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括：

(1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照；

(2)假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应；

(3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。

[写作要求]

1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不

得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯

2009年满分作文1：

The short passage describes a phenomenon that koalas at the Featherdale Wildlife Park are repeatedly awoken up from deep sleep, because tourists want to hug them and be photographed with them. What’s your reaction to the practice?

With the development of the modern world, more and more peoples tend to visit zoo. In the eyes of the tourists, animals are lovely. They even treat them like children, so that they can’t help hugging them and being taken photos with these cute creatures. But these practice does do harm to animals. Take those koalas for example. They are waken up now and then, so that they can’t have a good rest and they feel sleepy and bored easily. How poor they are!

Try to imagine that if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round, furry creatures kept waking you, how angry you would be.

So as for me, it is necessary to prevent the tourists being taken photos with animals. They are also creatures and they also need rest.

Give them some spare time and let them sleep!

点评：

作者对短文的概括能够抓住主题，简明扼要。文章先是分析游客喜欢抱动物拍照的原因，紧接着阐述此举对动物的危害。层次深入，以情动人，为最终提出禁止与动物拍照的观点做好情感上的铺垫。行文中，作者准确使用感叹句，强调句和祈使句，增添语言的表达力度，富有感召力。总之，本文无论是从形式上还是从内容上皆可堪称上乘之作，值得广大中学生学习借鉴。

2009年满分作文2：

Koalas at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia are repeatedly awoken up to be photographed with tourists. This practice does affect Koalas’rest, which make them unhappy and even annoyed.

Animals are cute and they are different from human beings. When tourists visit the zoo, they always want to make their trips special, so they hug animals and are photoed with animals. But they never think of the animals feelings. Once I was in a zoo, I saw a tourist hug a monkey and the monkey seemed unwilling to be hug. I asked the tourist whether she thought about the animal’s feelings, and she said, “I don't think it has its own feelings.”

They think animals’ existence is only to satisfy our need or desire. How terrible it is! They

should exchange their position with animals. In this case, they can find animals’ normal life is terrible and their health is in danger.

In my opinion, that the department makes the practice illegal is reasonable and understandable. Animals also need to live a normal life, and human beings shouldn’t be allowed to bother them.

点评：

作者在概括部分提纲挈领。对游人与动物拍照原因分析细致入微。以自己亲身经历的一件事进行剖析，以情动人，以理服人。难能可贵的是作者以人性化的词语feeling来描些动物，显示对动物的尊重和关爱。总之，本文无论从语言，从写作技巧还是从思想高度，都无愧为一片满分作文。

第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)（2008年广东高考）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment.1 went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills. such as balancing a check—book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.

Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it—good facil ities, helpful instructors. and a good library. The Students’ Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.

One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way ··· it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.

[写作内容]

学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”，内容要点包括：

1. 以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点；

2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括：

(1) 对中学生活的感受；

(2) 理想的大学生活；

(3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。

[写作要求]

1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯

2008年满分作文1：

It was hard for Mike to accomplish the general adjustment but he began to enjoy himself after that owing to different activities. In his opinion, freshmen should be active in order to make new friends.

Personally, I’m preparing to enter a university and leaving the high school where I’ve been studying for three years. I really had a fabulous time in this school where I grew from a lovely child to an adult. I think I will miss my life here and every single person I met here. Meanwhile, I am looking forward to my new college life. I sometimes daydream that maybe I’ll have friendly roommates and be taught by a group of warm-hearted and excellent teachers. It will be wonderful if this ideal daydream come into reality!

However, life is not always all roses and you’ll never know what you will meet in your school. But I’m an active girl and I will do what Mike taught us to---take part in various activities. I’m sure I’ll make a lot of new friends and with them I will be absolutely able to adjust the differences in a short time!

专项模拟（1）

阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

London is quickly becoming a major cycling city after the terrorist bombings on London’s subway and bus system on July 7, which killed 52 people.

London Mayor Ken Livingstone wants to increase cycling 80% by 2010.

“Cycling is the fastest, cheapest, most healthy and environmentally friendly way to get around London, and more and more people are taking it up,” Livingstone said. “The number of cyclists has doubled over the last five years, while those killed or seriously injured has fallen by 40%.”

Under the London Cycling Action Plan, Livingstone hopes to make London a world-class cycling city to reduce congestion(交通堵塞) and pollution. London now has 273 miles of bike roads, half built since 2000. The goal is 560 miles by 2010.

[写作内容]

假设你和同学在英语口语课讨论有关“交通工具对生活的影响”的话题。你准备发言稿，内容至少包括：

1.以约30个词概括短文的要点；

2.然后以约120个词表达你对“交通工具对生活的影响”这一话题，并包括如下要

点：

（1）以你了解的背景材料为例，说明交通工具对生活的影响；

（2）你如何评价伦敦市民使用自行车这种行为；

（3）你对中国的汽车业的发展有何看法；

（4）你认为中学生骑自行车上学有何好处。

（2）

阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Australia is not an old country. But before the white came to this land, aboriginal have lived there more than 42000 years. When the white came to Australia, aboriginals’ painful memory began. In early Australia, Aboriginals were very misery. Their life is change when the white came. The white brought death, illness, displacement and dispossession disrupted traditional lifestyles and practices, The aboriginal were ruled by the white, they had no right. And the white wanted to break the aboriginals’own life. The white wanted to cut the aboriginals’culture and let them become white. Then aboriginals would become white, and they would lose their culture. Aboriginals would disappear from the earth. We can know this from the film named “Rabbit Proof Fence” Now the plan is stopped, aboriginal can live their life . Until 1967, Australia people voted pass the law, which protects Aboriginals. From that time on, Aboriginals have their right.

In a word, Australia is a young country with animation and youth; we should spend time to

taste the history of Australia.

[写作内容]

1以约30个词概括短文描述澳大利亚白人对待土著居民的不同态度。

2然后以约120个词就“对待历史与文化的态度”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括以下要点：

（1）你如何看待不同的历史文化的存在和保护部同历史文化的意义；

（2）你的感想。

(3)

阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Many parents find various available methods to teach their children some skills in order to make them develop a good ability in the future.

Teaching a child to cook will improve many of the skills that he will need later in life. Cooking demands patience and time. It is an enjoyable but difficult experience. A good cook always tries to improve his cooking, so he will learn to work hard and gradually finish his job successfully. The result is, a well-cooked dinner, will give himself much satisfaction and a lot of confidence.

Some old machines, such as a broken radio or TV set that you give your child to play with will make him curious and arouse his interest. He will spend hours looking at them, trying to fix them; your child might become an engineer when he grows up. These activities are not only teaching a child to read a book, but rather to think, to use his mind. And that is more important. 【写作内容】

1、以约30个词概括短文的要点；

2、然后以约120个词表达你对“父母教育孩子的方式”并包括以下要点：

（1）以你自己或朋友的父母教育自律的实例，说明父母的教育方式对你们成长

的影响；

（2）你对父母的教育方式有何感想。

（4）

阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

The way people spent their vacation changed a great deal in the 1990s. In 199,40% of the people spent their vacations at home, but the figure dropped to 9%in 1999. It seemed that people were becoming more and more mobile, and they wanted to explore the entertainment in the outside world. The seaside still has its varied attractions to people. The rate dropped slightly from 38% in1990 to 30% in 1990 to 30%in 1999.But there might be a tendency of further decreasing in the future because of the pollution. Now a great number of people spend their vacations traveling abroad. The rate in 1999 doubled as compared with 1990. And the tendency will be continuing because more and more people can afford the overseas journeys. There are two main benefits for tourism. The first and more obvious one is the economic benefits which come to the host country. It is usually people from better-off countries that can afford to travel, and they bring with them a lot of money to the countries that intend to visit. The second is that tourism increases international understanding and friendship between peoples of different countries.

【写作内容】

1以约30个词概括短文的要点；

2然后以约120个词就“ ”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：

（1）越来越多的人悬着旅游的客观因素；

（2）主管因素，即旅游对个人有何影响

（3）你认为旅游对学习有何影响。

(5)

阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Competition is common in every field of life. For example, the Olympics Games is the most famous competition in the world. In the four hundred meter swimming race, the swimmers plunge into the water at the signal. Each swings his or her arms and legs and tries his or her best to be the first .Also there is the competition for jobs, for promotion, for customers, and so on. We can say, in a certain sense, competition stimulates pe ople’s interest in work and helps society to go forward.

We often find that competition goes hand in hand with cooperation. Take, for example, a volleyball match. The members of the team cooperate with each other. One serves the ball then another passes the ball to a certain height for a still other to hit it over the net while the other members try to block it on its return. It requires good teamwork win the game.

While we advocate competition, we cannot forget cooperation. Human beings are social beings. No one can exist alone in the society. If you want to lay the game well, you have to play with others. You cannot play single-handed and win. You have to cooperate with your playmates, who may make the social ladder for you to climb to the top. From cooperation we get help and understanding. With cooperation the world is progressing at peace and in harmony.

【写作内容】

1以约30个词，概括短文的要点；

2以约120个词为要“Competition and cooperation”这个主题写一篇英语文章，至少包含以下内容要点：

（1)你是否同意文章中的观点？并通过自己（他人）生活或学习中的一次经历来简述；

（2）你的感想