2021高考英语读后续写专题训练试题

2021高考英语读后续写专题训练试题
2021高考英语读后续写专题训练试题

高考英语读后续写专题训练试题

1、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

We all could say that we have bad days to endure as we go through life, but what does it take to have a really good day?

Some would suggest that a day would be great if everything they did turned out well, or they got exactly what they needed. On the other hand,have you ever thought that what you may give someone else may be the best day you ever had especially when you put someone else’s well-being or happiness first on your list?

There is special warmth available to you and that warmth can come from a helping hand, doing a small favor for a total stranger, or even a smile.

I recall a day recently when I had to go to the hospital for an appointment because I wasn’t feeling well and my doctor sent me to a specialist to try and determine the cause.

As I drove to the hospital, I admittedly was feeling gloomy and certainly wasn’t on top of my game. As I approached the hospital, I began my search for a parking spot, a spot that was hard to come with everyone else trying to do the same thing. I finally found a spot not too far from the entrance to the hospital.

As I got out and brought my change out of my pocket, I noticed a man looking somewhat upset standing in front of a parking meter two cars away. He seemed to be searching his pockets for what I supposed was change for the meter.

Although,I really didn’t feel that great, I thought that I should at least go over to him and find out if I could help him. As I approached him, he turned to look at me, feeling at a loss not knowing what to do. I asked him if he had a problem I could help with, and he said, without hesitation, that he had no change at all because he left it in his houseonly thinking about visiting his sick wife.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Faced with such a situation, I reached into my pocket.

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The funny thing was that I felt a lot brighter, and a small smile came to my face.

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2、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Have you ever had to overcome an extreme challenge in your life?

My teenage years had been insane. From schoolwork to athletics, I had always been running around. Everything was so difficult.

Throughout my hectic teenage years I have been faced with many extreme challenges that have required extreme focus and hard work to overcome. If it hadn’t been for hard work, none of these challenges that I faced would have been conquered.

Two years ago, when I was a freshman in high school, I dealt with an extremely significant injury. This took place in my tennis tournament in Januaty. In the climax of my match, I jolted my back to the left and soon after felt a sharp, painful shock run through my spine. I knew at that difficult moment I seriously injured my back. I was rushed off the court and my parents made an appointment with an orthopedist (矫形外科医生) for the next morning.

I walked into the office extremely nervous and suffering from excruciating pain. My tennis season for school started in three months and I absolutely needed to build up the strength.

After about twenty minutes of waiting in the office, which felt like an eternity, the doctor walked in to examine my X-rays. With a sorrowful face, the doctor looked into mine and my mother's eyes and said, There is a 50/50 chance that Lucas will be able to participate in this yearns tennis season. Lucas broke his L5 vertebrae in his lower

back." My heart dropped and I felt a sadness come over me. The doctor said that I would be sitting out of physical activity for two and a half to three months.

Those three months were the longest three months of my life. I was so eager to get back to practices for the season.Every day, I would think about how it was going to be when I was fully healthy. I asked myself, "Am I going to be out of shape? Should I even play this year? I probably won't have a successful season. "

From that dreadful day on, I decided that I was going to put in the work to be back in top form and have a successful season.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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After I got the "all clear" from my orthopedist l was going to get to work.

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My hard work proved to be very effective.

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3、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

I am Sadie. I love oceans, especially the one near my grandma's house with beautiful shells. Why? That's what I am about to tell you.

It all started when my parents divorced a few weeks ago. I had remained silent since then. So my mother decided to send me to Florida to live with my grandma.

On the way to my grandma’s house,my mother said, “Sadie,I know we are not the best family you can have and I truly apologize. I just do not know how to be a mother. But remember, Sadie, whatever happened, I do love you." These words made me sadder.

When we arrived, Grandma told me to go upstairs and unpack my things while she spoke to my mother. When I saw a blue and green painted room with a huge window and a comfortable bed, I thought, Moving to Florida might not be that bad." I comforted my-self as I walked towards the window. I opened the curtains and saw

sky-blue waves slowly washing away the sand on the beach and sea birds flying in the clear sky. The ocean was only a few hundred meters away from here.

After my mother left, Grandma softly touched my shoulder, “I want to take you to the place I called 'the Big Blue’. And I think you might like it." (I guess you could know where it is.)

Before I stepped on the sand I could smell the ocean. Together we enjoyed the sunset with a whole lot of yellow and orange. Suddenly she picked out the most beautiful shell I had ever seen in my life. It was almost gold, shining in the sunlight. I couldn’t move my eyes off it.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的同数应为150左右;

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你好;

4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键短语

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"Want to know how I get through my parents' divorce?" Grandma asked.

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"The beautiful shells here gave me the courage to live on,” Grandma said.

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4、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Jamie ran out of his house along the street toward his building. The abandoned buildings there were his playground.

Jamie moved a wooden board from the door to one of the buildings. He crawled inside. There was broken glass on the floor. Jamie went down the stairs to the basement. It was even darker down there, and damp. The buildings were near the river. Sometimes water flooded in. He'd never found anything alive until he found Sharon.

“Sharon, I’m here!” Jamie called. “I brought a candle,too. I'm going to light it so I can see you better."

Jamie took out a match and lit the candle. A soft circle of light lit up the darkness.

“Come over here where I can see you,” Jamie said. “Please don’t be afraid. I’m not afraid. I told you that.”

The creature slithered (滑行) into the light. It was about Jamie’s size. Its head and body were covered with dark green scales(鱗片). In the light of the candle, the scales shone like diamonds. The creature’s eyes glowed red, suddenly, like hot coals. Its nostrils (鼻孔) flared,giving off heat. Jamie stared. He thought he had never seen anything so beautiful. That’s why he’d decided to call the creature Sharon. He wanted to give a beautiful name to hisnew pet.

“Gee, Sharon,” he said, “I wish you could talk. I don’t know if you understand me or not. And I,d really like you to tell me how you got here.

The creature didn’t answer. It just looked at Jamie. Its mouth opened slightly and something white gleamed. Jamiethought it was smiling.

“Well,” said Jamie,"I hope you’re hungry. I brought you a chicken sandwich.”

The creature looked down at the sandwich, thinking about something else, but made no move to eat it.

“I'll just leave the food here for you," Jamie sighed. “I wish I could stay. But I have t o go. Mom is on my case right now. I’d help her. I’ll come back tomorrow after school.”

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Jamie turned to go.

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When Jamie got home, his mother looked angry.

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5、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

When I was ten I was suddenly very sad, for I had to move from the only home I had ever known. My whole life had been spent in that big old house which saw the laughter and tears of four generations.

When the final day came,I ran to the front of the house and sat alone, crying. Suddenly I felt a hand rest on my shoulder. I looked up to see my grandfather. “ It isn’t easy,is it, Billy?" he said softly, sitting down on the steps beside me.

“Grandpa,” I repliedhow can I ever say goodbye to you and all my friends?”

“Goodbye is such a sad word," he said. "It seems too final, too cool, which has one thing in common: sadness.”

He gently took my hand in his.“Come with me, my friend,” he whispered.

We walked, hand in hand, to his favorite place in the front yard, where there was a huge red rose bush — his beloved rose bush.

"What do you see here, Billy?” he asked.

I looked at the flowers, not knowing what to say,"I see something beautiful,Grandpa."

“It isn’t just the roses that are beautiful,Billy. It’s that special place in your heart that makes them so.” His eyes met mine again.“Billy, I planted these roses a long time ago—before your mother was even a dream. I put them into the soil the day my first son was bom. It was my way of saying thank you to God. That boy's name was Billy. I used towatch him pick roses for his mother.

I saw my grandfather’s tears. I had never seen him cry before. His voice became hoarse(嘶哑的).

"One day a terrible war came, and my son, like so many sons, went away to fight a great evil. He and I walked to the train station together... Three months later a telegram came. My son had died in Italy. All I could think of was that the last thing I say to him in his life was goodbye."

注意:

1. 所续写短文的同数应为150左右;

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Grandpa slowly stood up.

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Soon my grandfather became seriously ill.

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6、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Tommy and Mickle walked along the beach, looking for an adventure. They joked that some day they would find a talking fish or a mermaid or a bottle with a treasure map inside. So far they had only found shells and rocks and seaweed. Today was different though. The boys felt excited.

Sea crabs scampered on the rocks, up one side and down the other. They were quick and lively. The tide didn't seem to ever wash them away. Then Tommy saw a fish. It was trapped on the beach, just flopping around.

"Can it talk?'' Mickle asked.

“It looks like any other fish,” Tommy said. He picked it up gently and carried it t o the water.

“Do you think it will grant us any wishes?" Mickle laughed.

The boys watched as the silver fish sped off through the water. “No. Maybe next time”, Tommy grinned.

As the two friends walked farther down the beach they came upon a bottle. It was green with a cork in the mouth.

“Our luck will change. Does it have a map or a genie inside?”Mickle joked.

Mickle reached down and picked up the bottle. He rubbed it. Nothing happened. He pulled on the cork. Nothing happened. He shook it. Nothing happened.

“Try the cork again. I bet the genie is waiting for us to release him. Or we'll find a treasure map and have a real adventure, Tommy exclaimed.

Mickle tugged again on the cork. He wiggled it back and forth. He twisted it around and around. Finally it popped out without breaking. Mickle shook the bottle. Nothing came out. Looking inside he couldn,t see anything. Tommy looked too and shook his head. Empty.

“ It’s just an old wine bottle,” Tommy complained. He grabbed the bottle and tossed it back onto the sand.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

The bottle hit a rock and shattered into many pieces.

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The two boys ran after it.

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7、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Every year on my birthday, from the time 1 turned 12, a white gardenia was delivered to my house in Bethesda, Maryland. No card or note came with it. Calls to the florist were always in vain—it was a cash purchase. After a while I stopped trying to discover the senders identity and was just delighted in the beauty and fragrance of that magical, perfect white flower placed in softpink tissue paper.

However, I never stopped imagining who the anonymous giver might be. My mother contributed to these imaginings. And at that time, she’d ask me if there was someone for whom I had done a special kindness showing appreciation. As a teenager, I had more fun imagining that it might be a boy I fell in love or one who hiid noticed meeven though I didn’t know him.

When I was 17, a boy broke my heart. The night he called for the last time, I cried myself to sleep. When I awoke in the morning, there was a line of words on my mirror in red lipstick. I thought about that quotation from Emerson for a long time, and until my heart healed and went to get the glass cleaned, my mother knew everything was all right again.One month before my high school graduation, my father died of a heart attack. My feelings ranged from grief toabandonment,fear and overwhelming anger; my dad was missing some of the most important events in my life. I became completely uninterested in my coming graduation, the play and the prom. But my mother, in the midst of her own grief, would not hear of my skipping any of those things.

The day before my father died, my mother and I had gone shopping for a prom dress. We'd found a spectacular, and impressive one, with yards and yards of dotted Swiss in red, white and blue.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

高中英语作文专题:读后续写亮点积累实用

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一、读后续写(25分) A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village. On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the fa rmer didn’t admit he was the murderer. 注意: 1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右; 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was lucky. A few days later,

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