中考英语作文评分标准及范文

中考英语作文评分标准

评分原则：

1.总分25分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先跟据文章的内容和语言初步确定其

所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

2.总词数不足的，可在本题总得分中扣去1-2分。

3.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和正确

性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。各要素的权重大体为：卷面书写（1-2分），内容16分（其中要点10分，语意连贯6分），语法结构、单词拼写、标点（5分），词数（1-2分）。

4.拼写与标点符号是语言正确性的一个方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度

予以考虑。

【各档次的给分范围和要求】

第一档（23-25分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本无语法和词汇方面的错误，少数错误主要是由于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致。词数达到要求。基本无单词拼写及标点错误。

第二档（18-22分）：写出大部分要点类容。语句较流畅。有少量语法和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。有少量单词拼写及标点错误。

第三档（13-17分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误。

第四档（8-12分）：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。

第五档（0-7分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较多。基本上没有通顺的句子。只写出一些单词，不知所云。

【说明】

1、要点可用不同方式表达。

2、对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。

凡不写任何内容，抄袭、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。

中考英语作文预测及范文(一）

1．每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。请你用英语写一篇80词以上的短文，谈谈你在成长过程中所经历的最大的一次蜕变。内容要求：1.变化前后分别是什么样子的？2.促成你转变的主要原因是什么？3.你为变化而付出了怎样的努力？注意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。

I used to be a naughty boy and my mother used to be angry with me. Now I’d like to say I’ve changed a lot. In fact, It is because of my mother’s diaries.

One day I saw my mother’s diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I was surprised and began to read my mother’s diaries. In her diaries, she

showed her deep love for me. She also expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes. She said she loved me so much and she believed I could be a good boy. I couldn’t help crying after reading my mother’s diaries.Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. I ’ll try to understand my mother’s feelings.

2 .最近，你们班就“幸福是什么”进行了一次讨论，学生们发表了自己的看法，他们认为：1. 认真学习是幸福，父母总是关心他们的生活与健康，是幸福 2. 有时当他们做错了事，周围的人会帮助他们改正，他们感到幸福。3. 你同意同学们的看法，你认为当你做……你也会感到幸福。要求：①第三要点的内容需用三到四句话展开合理想象，进行适当发挥；②词数80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Happiness is for everyone. Some students think happiness comes from studying hard at their lessons. Their parents are always taking good care of their life and their health. They feel happy.Some students say when they do something wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happiness.

I agree with them. I love my friends congratulating me when I enjoy success. When I do something kind to others, like congratulating them, I feel happy, too.

When we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all around us.

3. “安全你我他，幸福千万家”，关爱生命，确保平安，让我们的生活更加幸福安康。请以“Keeping safe________ (at home/ at school /on the road…)为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

要求：补全标题：条理清晰，语言流畅；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。内容包括：

(1) Is it important to keep safe...?(2) Why do you think so?, (3)How can you be safe...?

Keeping safe at school

It’s important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better and live mo re happily. In order to keep safe at school, we must do like these.First, be in order wh en we are going upstairs or downstairs. Second, make sure to be safe when we are doi ng sports. Try not to be hurt. Third, know about some knowledge of safety. It’s helpful to us.

If we follow the advice, we’ll make ourselves safe at school.

4. 醉酒驾车，已经成为严重的社会问题，越来越受到人们的关注，根据下面提

故 traffic accident 对……造成伤害 do harm to…

Everyone should obey the traffic rules. Yet there are still many people drunk driving.

It’s irresponsible(不负责任的) not only to the drivers themselves but also the others.

Many drivers drive very fast in the street, or even in the crowded traffic while they are drunk. Drunk drivers caused a lot of accidents. Thousands of people were killed and many more were injured every year. In order to keep the public safe, we shouldn’t drunk drive. We must obey the traffic rules. If you drink too much, you shouldn't drive by yourself. You’d better take a taxi or ask others for help. The government is supposed to make more serious rules and laws as soon as possible.

5. Keep Healthy

Every one wants to keep healthy today, especially our students. But we don’t

pay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the mornin g. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, especially at w eekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke.

It is important for us to have good habits. We should eat breakfast every morning . We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.

6. 以“I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）” 为题写—篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean. "But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmates to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?

7. 全国实施公共场所禁烟规定，针对这一话题，某中学对该校学生的吸烟情况进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。

要求：1. 对调查结果进行描述；

2．表明自己的看法并提出建议；

3．词数在80左右。

提示词: do a survey about…(做一个有关……的调查)

3% of the students (百分之三的学生)

A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. That’s terrible.

As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Every year, thousands of people lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, but also wastes money. Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. It’s a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking.

In short, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it.

8. 目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：

有些人认为有必要，另一些人认为没有必要。跟老师学比自己学好……可以巩

固课堂所学内容……可以学到更多的东西……容易养成依赖习惯……学生需要时间休息……

请您根据以上提示，以Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary ?为题，写一篇120 词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。

要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。

参考词汇：巩固strengthen；

Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?

More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.___________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】

Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?

More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.

Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it’s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what we learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it’s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.

9. 最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开了讨论。有些人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，写一篇短文介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。

观点

原因同意不完全同意

1 教会如何生活过分溺爱

2 指出缺点，指明方向强加兴趣、价值观

3 教会富有爱心希望值过高

要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯；

2、词数110左右；

3、开头已给出，不计入单词总数。

【参考范文】

Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. What’s more, parents’love helps to teach them how to love others. So parents are their most important teachers.

However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give

them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.

In my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap.

10. 新农村-A New Village

Yesterday we went to visit a village. On our way to the village, we were glad to see a lot of nice rice, vegetables and fruit in the fields. Also we saw new schools, factories and buildings.

We got a warm welcome at the village. Some farmers invited us to their houses. They had moved to the new buildings. Their living room was large and bright. In it there were all kinds of new furniture. Nearly every family had color TV sets, fridges,washing machines and some of them even have bought motorbikes. Everyone had a smile on their faces. It was said that some guests from a foreign country would come to visit it.

We were very glad to find the farmers' life had changed a lot. We hope their life will become better and better.

11.许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:

●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；●我的压力是什么；●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。

注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100；短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. ___________________

That’s all. Thank you!

参考范文: Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t ge t on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at https://www.360docs.net/doc/e612999116.html,st Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That’s all. Thank you!

12. 你心目中的好老师是什么样子的？一名受欢迎的老师应该有什么样的特点?围绕这个主题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

The Good Teacher in Your Heart

Firstly, a teacher should be able to play different roles in school. He can care about us like a mother. He can give us knowledge. He can play games and discuss problems with us like a friend.

Secondly, a teacher should be patient and helpful. When we are in trouble, he can always help us patiently.

Thirdly, a teacher should be fair. He should have the same rules for everybody. Fourthly, a teacher should be fun. He can make his class interesting and make us laugh.

13.爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校的“English Garden”正在举办主题为“付出即是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。要求：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

2.. 80—100词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Giving is Receiving

I am a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to the old people's home and do some cleaning for them once a month. I often visit the Children's Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I also help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?

中考英语书面表达背诵范文（二）

一、Great changes in my hometown

More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .

Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .

二、Save the earth

How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world .

It’s our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t leave rubbish