高中英语作文建议信

建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：

1. 菜价昂贵，菜市单一；

2. 排队时间长，浪费午休时间；

3. 味道不佳，浪费现象严重。

注意：1. 词数不少于120； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇: 食堂canteen

Dear Principal,

Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!

Yours,

Li Hua

作文范文：

Dear Principal,

Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. The problems are as follows.

Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste.

As far as I’m concerned, measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. First of al l, it’s suggested that the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various. In addition, it’s better to open more service windows to reduce waiting time.

I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!

需注意的词汇、表达：

1.delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)

price 价格

2.lower /bring down the price 降低价格

3.at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格

4.varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品

5.For one thing,……. For another,……

6.make sb (not)do sth

7.wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time

8.The kinds of food are few.

表达食堂出现的问题：

9.The prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them.

10.There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy our

needs.

11.It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon.

12.The food in the canteen doesn’t taste good./ nice.

The taste of food in the canteen isn’t good.

13.The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted

14.It’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.

15.The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food.

16.In the long run, it’s bad for our health and study.

17.It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon.

表达提出的建议：

18.Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems.

19.I think it’s necessary to provide more kinds of food.

20.It’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems.

So it’s high time for us to take measures

21.To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the

present condition to satisfy the students’ needs.

22.We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price.

23.The canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long.

24.As far as I’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. What’s more,

different kinds of food should be provided.

25.Measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.

建议模板：

Dear ….,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…….(引出话题). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.

建议句型积累：

1.Many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but I think the following may be the most

effective ones.

2.I’d like to make some suggestions on …….

3.It’s of great importance for sb to do sth.

It’s necessary for sb to do sth

4.It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / It would be a better idea if…….

5.It contributes /helps a lot if ………

6.I suggest that …../ My suggestion is that …

It’s suggested / advised / recommended that……

7.You’d better do sth./ We’d better do sth

It’s better to do sth

8.Measures are supposed to be taken to do sth

We are supposed to take effective measures to do sth

9.It’s high time that sb did sth. / It’s high time for sb to do sth

建议信(2)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Sad Mother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. Recently I have found that my daughter told lies to me. The other day she told me that she did well in the final exam. However I found out she failed in math and English. What should I do?

写作要点：

1.表明了解她的问题；

2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；

3.提出至少两条建议

要求：

1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。

2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。

3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

4.书写需清晰、工整。

Hi，Sad Mother，

I have learned that_____________________________________________

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___________________________________________________________________________ 作文范文：

Hi,Sad Mother,

I have learned that your daughter told lies to you. As a peer of your daughter, I think the reasons are as follows.

To begin with, maybe the reason why your daughter told a lie is that you are too strict with her and she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth. Besides, nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their kids. In order not to let you down, she has no choice but to lie .

Here are some suggestions for you.First of all, you’d better have a heart-to–heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. In addition, don’t be too strict.It’s suggested that you should allow her to make some minor(微小的) mistakes.

I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions.

daughter女儿expectation 期望be worried / concerned about 担心

calm down 冷静下来at a loss 迷惑不解keep in touch with 保持联系

be strict with sb in sth 在某方面对某人要求严格heart-to-heart 推心置腹的

idea 注意想法test 测试text 文本cheat 欺骗want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事

1. It was because she didn’t want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores.

2. She isn’t aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself.

3. Being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged. And it’s you who can do this.

4. It is probably your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie.

5. You should figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem.

6. It goes without saying that lying is bad behavior.

7. The reason why she didn’t tell you the truth may be that she didn’t want to let you down.

8. It is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open her heart to

you.

9. To avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams

10. The reason that leads to the problem may be various.

11. Confronted with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help

you daughter.

12. As far as I’m concerned, it’s better to communicate with her in a friendly way to let her know it’s

wrong to tell lies.