高中英语作文高分秘诀 第一课

高中英语作文突破

书面表达体裁包括记叙文、说明文、应用文和议论文，提示的形式有图画、图表和文字。从浙江省近几年的趋势看，书面表达给出的具体信息逐渐减少，只是给出写作的大致框架和要求，考生需要在所给信息的基础上适当的发挥，不像以前已经给出具体要求，考生只需重新组织材料采用翻译即可，对考生的写作能力提出了较高的要求。

敬中博教育联盟特此联合新东方优秀英语教师及新航道英语教师，采用其高中英语作文教学模式及内容，以辅助学生在本机构短时间内突破英语作文障碍，在考场有限时间内完成一篇出色的英语作文。本课程度对学生的要求即是，“掌握技巧，熟读记忆”。

【知识方法】

一、怎样布局谋篇？

“三段式十句成文作文法”

“三段式十句成文作文法”是结合多年高考英语书面表达总结出来的一种考场高效高分作文方法，具有很强的针对性。

1、“三段式”

将一篇书面表达按照三段的写作模式布局谋篇，即开头、正文、结尾。这种写作模式思路清晰，结构分明，是考生提高作文档次的最佳选择。

1）第一段开门见山点明主题，议论文，说明文提出要解决的问题或观点，记叙文交代时间、地点、人物、事件。

2）第二段议论文，说明文摆出事实或提出论据，记叙文把事情的经过详细介绍。该部分要条理清晰，过度自然，使文章结构紧凑。

3）最后一段得出结论。好的结尾能起到画龙点睛的作用。不同的题材可以采用不同的结尾方式。

2、“十句成文”

十句成文名为十句，但又不拘泥于十句的束缚，根据表达的需求，可以是8-12句。如果现有的句子不能达到试题的字数要求，也可以在文章中适当位置添加一些修饰性或限制性的定语、状语等，来达到其字数要求。

由于十句作文法对主题句、扩展句、结尾句以及各段的功能都给出了严格的界定，通过对十句作文法的学习、训练，考生在动笔之前，头脑中就形成一套结构清晰、脉络分明的作文提纲思路。

3、三段十句作文基本模式

1）第一段为开头，通常包括2句。第一句为主题句，点名全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明主题句。

2）第二段为正文，约7句。包括1-3个要点句及扩展说明句。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡句，从而使段落逻辑合理，结构得到。

3）第三段为结尾，简化成1句或者一个复合句。总结全文，表明观点。

4）三段之间要做好衔接，巧妙使用过渡词，从而句子节奏紧凑，行文自然流畅。

二、如何开展段落

1、句子段落的展开方式

由词到句，由句到段。牢记“三段十句作文法”的要求。讲要点转化为句子，并按照逻辑顺序、时间顺序、空间顺序把句子联络成段。

2、表示顺序和逻辑关系的常见词

1）时间顺序：at first；secondly;then;finally;when;while;before;after;as soon as.

2）空间顺序：near;next to;far;on the right;on the left side of

3）逻辑顺序:

因果关系：because;since;for;therefor;thus.

比较关系：however;while;on the one hand;on the other hand;on the contrary

并列关系：and;as well as;also

转折关系：but;yet;although;or;otherwise;despite;in the spite of;instead of

递进关系：besides;what’s more;moreover;in addition

4）总结句：in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, in conclusion

三、写作基本原则

1、词汇具体化，舍弃概念化。

即多用具体化的形容词或动词，少用概念化的词语。避免使用good这样空洞的词汇，多使用generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted等。例如：

概念化句子：He is very good.

具体化句子：He is very generous.

概念化句子：He goes to school every day.

具体化句子：He walks to school every day.

2、句型灵活变换

“主谓宾”简单句、并列句、复合句通力合作，倒装句、强调句句句叫绝。

1）表并列

除了用and链接两个句子，我们更鼓励使用

not only ...but also,besides,furthermore,moreover等更为高级的连接词.

例如：He likes music and he is fond of playing guitar.

Not only is the fur coat soft,but also it is warm.

2)表转折

转折句可是使文章重点突出。除了but表示转折，要学会使用其他表示转折意思的词语，尽量避免同一篇文章中多次出现同一个转折词语。

表示转折意思的词语有：despite that,however,nevertheless,in spite of,despite.

3)表因果

文章使用了因果联系的连接词后，可以让你的句式变得丰富多彩。除了so，应掌握therefore,consequently,accordingly,as a result,for this reason,so that.

4）失衡句

借助主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句、定语从句、同位语从句使得句子不合常理，以吸引注意力。

例如：

This is what i can do.

Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.

The man who you met is a friend of mine.

Mr.Liu, our english teacher, is easy-going.

5)排比句

类似于中文文学作品，排比句的突出作用不言而喻。可通过多个形容词，多个动词，多个不定式，多个对偶句，多个短语构成排比。例如：

We have to study hard,to enlarge our scope of knowledge,to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.

6)难句突破

独立主格结构结构的运用，能很大程度上增添文章的风采,另阅卷老师刮目相看。

例如：

The weather being fine,a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.

高考英语书面表达评分标准强调四个方面：1）覆盖所有知识要点；2)应用较多的语法结构和词汇；3）使用较复杂语法结构和高级词汇；4）有效使用了语句段落间的连接词语，行文流畅紧凑。

3、长短句结合

一个短小精悍的句子，通常可以起到画龙点睛的作用。尤其是当我们的把短句放在段首或者段末时，它不仅可以承上启下，还可以揭示主题。例如：

As a creature, i eat;as a man,i read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind,they are in a way quite similar.

长短句结合，给予人抑扬顿挫之感。

文章第一段，用一长一短句式，先长后短；文章第二段，先用短句介绍论据，再具体解释。即先短后长；最后一段，一长一短即可。

4、开篇点题

一篇文章的开头（有时也在结尾），有一个主题句，也就有了中心，然后围绕主题开展相关内容，这样的文章思路清晰，让人一目了然。否则，主题句藏在文章里，很可能是阅卷老师云里雾里，不知所云。

5、条理清晰

文章第二段如果以第一、第二、第三或首先、其次、最后等方式罗列出要点，会让人感觉层次分明。条理清晰、逻辑性强。例如：

To begin with,then,furthermore,finally;

To start with,next,in addition,finally;

First, besides,last but not least;

Most important of all,moreover,finally;

For one thing,for another;

On the one hand,on the other hand

6、短语优先

正确使用短语有两个好处：一是给文章添光增彩，制造得分点；二是缓解时间压力，凑字数达到字数要求。例如：i can’t bear it.可以表达为，i can’t put up with it.

【英语作文万能模板】

一、正反观点万能模板

1、提出主题

（1）The topic of（主题）is becoming more and more popular nowadays.

（2）There is a widespread concern over the issue that…

（3）…has attracted extensive（广泛的）attention of the society.

（4）There is no consensus(一致) of opinion among people as to the view of…

（5）Different people have different opinions on it./ Opinions on this phenomenon differ from person to person.

2、展开

（1）Firstly…secondly(besides)…thirdly(finally)

（2）For one thing…for another…what’s more…

（3）On one hand…on the other hand…moreover…

3、转折

（1）On the contrary…

（2）however, as a coin has two sides…

4、自己的看法

（1）In my opinion

（2）As far as I am concerned

（3）From my point of view,

（4）With reference to my standpoint ,

（5）I think / I firmly support…

5、喊口号

（1）Only through…can we…

对比观点例文1

There is a widespread concern over the issue that （作文题目）.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.

A majority of people think that _ 观点一_. In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,原因一.Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二. So it goes without saying that观点一. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that观点二. In their point of view, on the one hand，原因一. On the other hand,原因二. Therefore, there is no doubt that观点二_.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that观点一或二.It is not only because ____, but also because ____. The more ____,the more___.

对比观点例文2

_____ is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say ____ is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ____. What is more,_____。Moreover,______.

While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,_____. Secondly (besides),______. Thirdly (finally),___.

From my point of view, I think _____. The reason is that _____. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.

对比观点例文3

Nowadays，_____ is playing a more and more important role in people’s daily life. However，people’s opinions are still divided on this point.

Those who are in favor of ______ think that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly，_______. Secondly，______. Finally，______. Those who are opposed to ______ hold that disadvantages are many. In the first place，______. In the second place，______. Finally，______.

All in all，we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons. The past twenty years saw the fast development of ______ along with ______. A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of ______.

【课堂练习】

一、依据“三段十句作文法”，参考观点类万能模板，找出以下文章的行文大纲（主题、论据、总结）及过度衔接词

Nowadays，the Internet is playing a more and more important role in people’s daily life. However，people’s opinions are still divided on this point.

Those who are in favor of the Internet think that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly，information searching is no longer a tough job with help of all kinds of search engines. Secondly，we can keep in touch with friends or business partners via e-mails or software. Finally，we can take part in groups to talk with friends of the same interest. Those who are opposed to the Internet hold that disadvantages are many. In the first place，the Internet costs time，money and energy，especially for those with less self-control. In the second place，surfing on the Internet for a long time harms the eyes a lot. Finally，more and more young people are addicted to online game and Internet chat，which are harmful to their future development.

All in all，we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons. The past twenty years saw the fast development of the Internet along with national economy. A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of the Internet.

二、根据以下要求，按照“三段十句作文法”，及观点类万能模板，完成该主题的行文大纲。

1、目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点。请你根据下表提示，以Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?为题，写一篇短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。

有些人认为有必要另一些人认为没有必要

跟老师学比自己学好可以巩固课堂所学内容可以学到更多的东西容易养成依赖习惯

学生需要时间休息

许多培训班和家教以赢利为目的

要求：（1）层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，但不要逐字逐句翻译；

（2）词数：120 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

（3）参考词汇：巩固strengthen vt.

2、“神六”返回以后，人们就“普通人去太空旅游”的话题展开了热烈讨论。请你根据下

列提示以“The advantages and disadvantages of Space Travel”为题写一片英语短文，简要地谈谈你的观点。

太空旅游的利太空旅游的弊

1、提供人类居住的新场所。

2、给人类提供新能源。

3、帮助人们更好地了解宇宙。

4、太空研究对其他领域有好处。

1、花费太大。

2、人类住在其它行星上的想法不切实际。

3、太空旅游有危险。

注意事项：1、短文必须包括所列内容。

2、不要逐字逐句翻译。

3、词数110 左右。