托福写作技巧：满分作文的练成法
托福写作技巧：满分作文的练成法
其实新托福考试作文部分的判断标准，既能够被我们称为多元化，也能够被我们称为单一化。说多元化，是因为判断标准的细化，也就
是要求我们能够清楚准确的表达自己的含义，并且逻辑清晰，用词准确。
当我们的作文达到21分的时候，其实句子里面严重的错误已经很
少了，比如说一个句子缺少谓语，没有主语的情况已经很少了。最多
也就是写写stop smoking这样的Chinglish。简单来说，很硬性的语
病已经不多了,不过这个时候，是最令人茫然的时候，因为这个时候好
像我们的已经达到了自己的极限，自己能做的全都已经做了，好像一
下失去了前进的方向，更是因为作文是主观题，我们身边总是缺少一
个判断标准。对于托福作文，一个很关键性的要求就是要用词准确，
行文流畅。我们以前往往总是会陷入一个误区，就是要用大词，要写
一些句式磅礴的句子。之所以这样就是因为现在中国95%以上的作文教师，尤其是托福作文教师对于什么样的作文才是满分作文缺乏一个概念，虽然很多人能考出高分作文，但是他们很难做出一个指向性，就
像是他们杀鸡用牛刀，然后他们就认为杀鸡只能用牛刀，是一个道理。他们不知道，其实杀鸡的时候，只用一把菜刀就能够了，是一个道理。所以，这就是为什么现在很多国内的初中经常用博士来当老师，但是
这些人一上课就发现，学生根本不喜欢听他在说什么，甚至这些教师
还经常被学生赶走，就是这个道理。
我们来看一些真实的例子。
Nevertheless, it would not work either if everybody just keep to themselves without communicating. It is also
essential for roommates to share their experiences with one another and thus get close in their relationship. In this case, a good sense of humor can be a such a valuable quality
as a single joke may break the silence and open up a nice conversation.
从这段文字里我们就会发现，本段几乎没有什么我们以前很多老师推崇的长难句，复杂句，整段内容，几乎都是由简单句组成的。这对于现在的培训机构的老师讲课的内容是一个大大的嘲讽，但是反过来又能告诉我们考生很多信息。
这段节选告诉我们：
1 托福满分作文，要求的不是庞大的单词量，而是在已有的8000单词的准确应用。
2 想拿满分作文，不是靠单纯的堆砌复杂句就能够完成的，如果你还不相信这个点，请去中国各大留学论坛，看看一片哀嚎之音。
3 想要拿到30分，要求你写出更为具体化的例子，而不是单纯的泛泛而谈。
有时，“投机取巧”与“踏实肯干”的差别就在一线之间。同样一种方法，花1周的时间来研究，就是“踏实肯干”;只花一分钟，读完了事，就是投机取巧。
新托福满分作文范文(30篇).pdf
新托福满分作文范文(30篇).pdf
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托福满分作文
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托福写作满分范例
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托福独立写作满分范文30篇
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Test1 People listen to music for different reasons and at different times.Why is music important to many people?Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. Music has always been important to people.Scientists have found musical instruments at the camp sites of ancient humans.While the reasons why ancient humans made music may never be known, music today is still quite popular.People listen to music to help them relax,concentrate,and express their emotions. Music is excellent for helping people relax.This is because music helps transport people to a different place.For instance,whenever I have too much stress,I always listen to my favourite song. No matter where I am,the moment I hear that song,I think about the time I was at the concert and heard it live.For that moment,all my stress is gone,and I am back at the auditorium,away from my trouble. Music is great for helping people concentrate.By removing distractions,music enables people to get focused.To illustrate this,think about students who like to listen to their MP3players while studying. Many people,especially parents,think the students are just playing around.However,listening to music gets rid of all other noises so the students can focus on their work. Music is beneficial for people who want to express their emotions.Too often,people don’t know how to express what they feel inside.To be more specific,young people often experience new feelings that they cannot put into words.Listening to a love song or a sad song helps them express their emotions, since it can be hard for them to express those feelings to others. In conclusion,for relaxation,concentration,and emotional health,music has a number of benefits. While some people often see music as just being junk,they don’t realize the many benefits that it has. As a result,it is important that people have the chance to listen to music so they can be happy. (311words,typing in12minutes) Test2 Some students like classes where teachers lecture(do all of the talking)in class.Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking.Which type of class do you prefer?Give specific reasons and details to support your choice. The traditional classroom is the one with teacher in the front doing all the talking and the students just listening.However,this method both fails to interest the students and prevents the teacher from seeing how much the students are learning.In contrast,by having the students speak more frequently, these problems are eliminated.Thus,this style improves classroom interest,enables better monitoring,and increase learning. First,when students are allowed to talk in class,the class becomes more interesting.This is because
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修饰全句常用的副词有： obviously undoubtedly apparently fortunately clearly unfortunately incredibly luckily unluckily surprisingly frighteningly 这些副词大多数表示说话人对全句的看法，在意思上相等与“It is … 形容词that …” 。e.g: Obviously, he is nervous about the test. =It is obvious that he is nervous about the test. Unfortunately, he tripped over and fell in the mud. =It is unfortunate that he tripped over and fell in the mud. (2) 强调副词 Hurriedly, the man drew me a scratch map to show me the direction. Dangerously, the drunkard sped down the street. Slowly and gently, snowflakes were drifting down from the sky. (3) 副词表示某一地域或某一领域 Geographically, Canada is the biggest country in the world. Financially, she is independent, but emotionally she is dependent. 2. 用插入语开头，表示说话人的态度，或使句子的意思更加准确： Strangely enough, Jennifer does not enjoy sunshine and beach.
托福满分作文惯用的4种结尾
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托福满分作文惯用的4种结尾 摘要：一篇让托福写作考官满意的作文，不光要有一个漂亮的开头，一个精彩的结尾对于这篇文章而言同样重要。有不少的考生认为，只要有好的开头就好，考官不会认真看结尾部分。其实你错了，写作也一样需要善始善终。有一个精彩的结尾也能让你的托福写作增色不少。如果你想要明天考试托福写作满分，不妨尝试一下以下4种结尾招式。 满分作文惯用的4种结尾： 写作招式一：回答问题 E.g.1 When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good,I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’,in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology,because it can be our friend and support our way of life. 这个结尾段落明确地提出了自己的观点，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。 写作招式二：不要添加新的信息
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托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（１） Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice? As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative. Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shinin g compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village. Asking o thers’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other. Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do. 托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(2) Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative. Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and 1