强化写作笔记整理

强化写作笔记整理

第一段描述图画

一、第一句

漫画

A The famous painter Qi Baishi once said, "it is reality that our picture wishes to convey", and the picture here perfectly expresses these words、

B Being one of the most outstanding painters, Van Gogh once said: “To draw is to reflect the real world、” and the picture here perfectly expresses his words、

C Mr、Zhang Daqian, one of the greatest Chinese painters, said in his auto biography: “A picture is a world, any dot or line is all from our life、” and t he picture here perfectly expresses his words、

照片

Regarded as one of the leading photographers, Mr、Rankin once remarked: “A photo is a mirror of our society” and the photo here perfectly expresses his words、famous—great/well-known/outstanding/distinguished/celebrate/leading/top/…with great reputation

painter—artist

reality—true world/real world/surrounding environment/real life picture—drawing/cartoon/painting/portrayal

said—mentioned/stated/remarked/offered his view

perfectly—exactly/correctly

expresses—shows/illustrates/demonstrates/ embodies/reflects/reveals/mirrors these words—this sentence/its connotation/its implication/its sense Chinese—oriental/national

autobiography—article/essay/diary/writings/speech/lecture photo—photograph/photographic image

二、第二句(五大分句: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5)

分句一:

结构

A As+副词1＋and＋副词2＋shown替换词＋in the picture above,

B It is+副词1＋and＋副词2＋shown替换词＋in the picture above that

C What is+副词1＋and＋副词2＋shown替换词+in the picture is that

副词vividly subtly

分句二:

地点(介词+名词)+姿势(动词(-s) )+主人公(n、)

分句三:

结构: , doing…

（feeling+adj、+and+adj、to do…/about+n、）

分句四:

结构: , done…

分句五:

结构:

, with+n、+doing/done…(动作)

三、第三句

A Undoubtedly, what the author intends to reveal is not merely the picture itself、

B It is beyond doubt that the author does not intend to reveal the picture itself merely、

C It is out of question that the intention of the author goes far beyond the picture itself、

undoubtedly—beyond doubt/out of question

intends—aims to/seeks to/tries to/attempts to

reveal—show/present/disclose/bring to light/inform/imply/emphasize/underline

一、第一句

漫画

…and the pair of pictures here perfectly express these words、

照片

… and the pair of photos here perfectly express his words、

二、第二句

1、图一

分句一:

As+副词1＋and＋副词2＋shown替换词＋in the first/upper/left picture above, 2、图二

1>两幅图存在对立关系

A When it comes to the second picture, another opposite scene has emerged owing to the presence/absence of 原因、

B Contrary to the former one, evident changes emerge when it comes to the second picture that+结果+with/without+原因、

C Presenting another opposite scene, the second picture shows another entirely different situation that+结果+with/without+原因、

2>两幅图存在相似关系

Likewise, what we can see in the second picture is that …conduct(s) the similar behavior、

三、第三句

Undoubtedly, what the author intends to reveal is not merely the pictures

一、第一句

Bill Gates, the founder of Microsoft, once remarked, "data is the society in miniature", while the graph/table here shows changes/variation about+标题、graph--diagram/chart/graphic chart

table--statistics table/data table/data sheet

shows--reveals/presents/indicates/conveys/illustrates

二、第二句

1、动态图

趋势一

Firstly, the figure of 分项1 has been going upward/downward sharply/slightly, from 起点数据in/on/at 时间to 终点数据in/on/at 时间(, then rising/declining to 终点数据2 in/on/at 时间2)、

趋势二

By contrast, the data of 分项2 show a different situation, in which the starting point was 起点数据in/on/at 时间whereas reaching 终点数据in/on/at 时间, climbing/ falling rapidly/gently(, soon afterwards increased/decreased to 终点数据2 +时间2)、

趋势三

升降:

In addition, the trend of 分项3 is similar to that of the former/latter、

平稳/波动:

In addition, the trend of 分项3 keeps stable/is fluctuating、

数字--number/ figure/ data/ statistics

升--rise(rose-risen)/ grow(grew-grown)/ increase/ climb/ go(went/gone) upward/ show(showed/shown) an upward trend

降--fall(fell-fallen)/ drop(dropped)/ decrease/ go downward/

show a downward trend

快速升--jump/ shoot up/ surge/ soar/ rocket

快速降--plummet/ plunge

平稳--keep stable/ level off/ stabilize/ remain stable/ reach a plateau

波动--fluctuate/ keep unstable/ swing

快--fast/ quickly/ sharply/ rapidly/ dramatically/ markedly/ significantly/ substantially/ in a high speed/ in quickening pace/ to a large extent

慢--slowly/ gradually/ gently/ slightly/ moderately/ steadily/ in a low speed/ in a moderate pace/ in a small extent

2、静态图

Composed of __ totally different parts, the graph/table shows its first part of 分项1 which has the figure of 数据1, compared with that of 分项2, whose number is 数据2, whereas 分项3 accounting for about 数据3 follows these closely, with

the several final section(s) covering 剩余总与、

Composed of--divided into/ separated into/ Cut into/ Consisting of/ Comprised of totally--entirely/ completely/ wholly/ distinctly

different--diverse/ distinct/ independent

parts--shares/ portions/ units/ sections

compared with--being different from/ being dissimilar to/ showing a contrast with whose number--the number of which

account for--make up/ represent/ occupy/ constitute/ cover

follows--goes after

第二段分析现象

一、第一句

结构: 引出句+主旨句

A The intention/purpose of the drawing(s) is to reveal that 主题词is quite vital to us/our society、

B Simple but profound as the drawing is, the inner sense hides behind it that主题词is quite vital to us/our society、

C However diverse the outer form is, the picture serves as a mirror which reflects a common social phenomenon in our contemporary society that 主题词plays a significant role for us、

quite—rather/increasingly/exceedingly/extraordinarily/extremely

vital--indispensable/crucial/key/necessary/essential

simple—plain/superficial/uncomplicated/intuitive

profound—deep-going/penetrating/incisive/intrinsic/inherent繆鮭会涛赠烁墙。sense—meaning/connotation/theme/topic/subject

二、第二句+第三句

结构: To analyze the main factor, 万能理由1、What is more, 万能理由2、

文章内容分类：

万能理由1：经济发展

A With the rapid development of economy and fierce social competitions, 主题词（文化交流/情商）has counted for much for the growth of a nation(文化类)/an individual（情商类）、

B With the boom and burst of economy and fierce social competitions following, 主题词has far-reaching influence on the progress and growth of a nation/an individual、

C With economy development, globalization and modernization getting more

and more universal, which also brought about fierce social competitions, 主题词, as a driving force or impetus for the progress and growth of a nation/an individual, is quite important、

rapid development—boom and burst/flourishing/prosperity/thriving

fierce social competitions—heave social pressure/stress/burden/load

following--that followed/going afterwards

far-reaching--lasting/permanent/persistent/sustained/ceaseless/never-ending

万能理由2：社会变化

A Our modern society has encountered huge changes, in which 现象(文化交流/反面问题) emerged and brought good/bad effect、

B Great changes have taken place in our modern society, while/whereas some relevant aspects follow this step, such as+现象, which works somewhat positively/negatively、

C Great changes have taken place in our modern society, after which came some relevant aspects, such as+现象, generating positive/negative consequence、great--huge/ tremendous/ continuous/ ceaseless/ never-ending/ profound

take place--occur/ emerge/ arise/ come into being

whereas--meanwhile/ in the meantime/ after which/ in the wake of which relevant--related/ corresponding

aspects--fields/ domains

万能理由3：传统教育

A The advantage of school education is book knowledge and exam, which ignores overall aspects, such as lack of主题词(情商/正面现象)、

B The strong point of traditional education is rigid book knowledge and exam-oriented skills, for reason of which several aspects fall behind, thus lack of 主题词has become severe、

C The strong point of traditional education is to value intellect and exam-oriented skills, and here comes the shortcoming that several aspects lag behind, thus giving rise to lack of 主题词、

advantage—strong point/superiority/feature/trait

traditional education—exam-oriented education

rigid—inflexible

value—emphasize/underline/lay emphasis on/attach importance to

三、第四句

A Countless as the reasons are, those mentioned above are the most evident、、

B Were these factors not taken into account, the issue would not come into being、

C No matter how complex the analyses may appear, what we take into account here can explain whether the issue is important、

第三段个人评价

一、第一句

A Based on the analysis above, some effective and efficient measures should be taken、

B Taking the analysis above into account, it is high time that we took some effective and efficient measures、

C Be the issue obvious or uncommon, realized or unknown, simple or deep, necessary measures should be taken、

effective and efficient--proper/appropriate/suitable

measures--steps/actions

二、第二句

万能措施1：政府

A Our government should make up related laws and regulations to put 主题词(文化交流/正面现象) into practice、

B Governments or departments concerned have the duty to enact and carry out laws and regulations in order to promote 主题词、

C Governments or departments concerned have the duty to enact and carry out laws and regulations lest 主题词face certain obstacles、

Governments--departments concerned/ authorities concerned

should—have the duty to/ought to

put… into practice—promote/facilitate/boost

obligation--duty/ responsibility

realize--be aware of/ be conscious of/ take notice of/ keep their eyes open on lest—in case

face—confront/encounter

obstacles—barriers

万能措施2：个人

A It is important that social members realize the weight/seriousness of this issue, and act themselves、

B All walks of life must face the issue so consciously that due thoughts as well as actions should be put into practice、

C So consciously must all walks of life face the issue that due thoughts as well as actions should be put into practice、

三、收尾句

A A hopeful and brilliant future is waving her hand to us when all the measures are taken seriously、

B It is only through the consciousness and actions that we may face a brilliant

future、

C Despite the long road ahead, where there is our hard work (and our determination), there is (success and)a bright future、