(完整)高考英语漫画类作文写作指导

高考英语漫画类作文写作指导

一．漫画作文概述

高考英语考试说明写作部分第二节表述为：“要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文（山东卷为120—150词）。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。

因此，图画是高考作文所提供的情景之一。从最近几年高考试题来看，图画类作文占据了相当大的比重，当然主要是以记叙文为主。而漫画又是图画的表现形式之一。漫画的含义是：漫画是一种具有强烈的讽刺性或幽默性的图画。画家从生活现象中取材，通过夸张、比喻、象征等手法，来讽刺、批评或表扬某些人和事。它与图画相比，更能够与社会现实紧密结合起来，在大学英语四六级考试和研究生英语入学考试中应用的较为广泛。同时在高考中出现的频率也越来越高，例如在上海卷、北京卷及山东卷中都出现过漫画作文。

二．漫画作文的特点

1.试题命题特点

漫画作文的主要特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。它就要求考生在写作时做到主题明确，即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想。

2.能力考查特点

漫画作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力、丰富的想象力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力，以及最终将以上能力表达出来的书面表达能力。

三．漫画作文的写作思路

一般的漫画作文一般可分为三个步骤，即：

1)describe the drawing briefly.

2) explain its intended meaning and give examples(if necessary)

3)give your own comments or opinions

各部分常用的表达

描述图画部分：

1)From the cartoon we can see that…

2) As is shown/indicated in the picture

3)This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see…

4)Look at the picture. It is a picture about…

论述漫画寓意及所反映现象部分

1) What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today’s society./ Apparently, the cartoon reflects a major social problem.

2) This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.

3) What the cartoon reflects set me thinking a lot.

4)After seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by the phenomenon. In today’s society,…

5)The cartoon implies that……

评论与观点部分

1)As far as I’m concerned, what we have to do is to make full use of……and also……If we……and……, it will not only……but also……

2)We can learn from the picture that

3)Consequently, it is high time that measures should be taken to avoid this phenomenon from happening again.

4)Therefore, I am firmly convinced that…

5) Let’s call on everybody to……In the long run, it will have a negative influence on constructing

a harmonious society.

四．典例分析

【经典回放】06山东卷

请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，简要描述漫画内容，并结合生活实际，就漫画主题发表感想，题目自拟。参考词汇：公民道德—civic virtue

One possible Version:

Who lost your civic virtue?

Let’s look at the picture above. It is about a boy who picks up a book on civic virtue and he is looking for its owner. But let’s pay attention to the passers-by. One boy is throwing rubbish and one of the couple is spitting.

Something occurs to me. The owner of the book not only lost a book, but also his civic virtue. It is our duty to obey the principle made for our behaviors. And parents should set examples for their children to teach them to protect the environment. As we all know, kids always do as their parents do.

Let’s call on everybody to do the tiny things we meet in our daily life to make our earth, our homes cleaner and more beautiful.

【范文分析】这篇文章分为三段，第一段描述了图画的内容，第二段就图画所反映的问题进行了论述，第三段提出了观点并发出了号召。同时每段的第一句都是过渡性的词语，使文章显得层次分明，结构明了。同时文章有效地运用了连接成分和高级句型与表达，提高了文章的档次。

【写作步骤】在写作时，可以用以下的问题问自己！

1. What’s the type of the writing? ___________

A.说明文

B. 书信

C. 夹叙夹议

D.人物传记

2. What’s the tense and person of the writing? ___________

3. 在写漫画类作文时，应认真审题，注重文章结构。

The writing contains there parts: _________________ (简要描述漫画内容)、__________________（说明漫画所反映的社会现状）、__________________（发表自己的观点和看法）。

1) How many people can you see?

2) What are they doing?

3) Whose behavior is to blame first?

4) What does the cartoon reflect?

4. What’s the tone of the author? ___________

A. subjective

B. objective

C. critical

D. indifferent

5. Pay attention to beautiful expressions in the passage

(1 ) Description of cartoon: _________________________________________________

(2 ) Reflection of cartoon: _________________________________________________

(3 ) Author’s opinion:_________________________________________________ 【专题分析】

根据图画内容，以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”题，用英语写一篇0词左右的短文。120—150词的短文。

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter

The picture shows that a girl is wearing a pair of glasses and

carrying a big heavy schoolbag, and a woman is doing some exercise.

The gir l says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure

you will lose some weight.”

As is well-known, we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework which our teachers have given us. All that we do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.

We do hope our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way will we have spare time to do more physical exercise and make us stronger, and we will have more spare time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically healthier.

【范文分析】

范文包含了以下要点1）简单描述漫画的内容；2)作业负担过重；老师精讲精练；3)参加体育锻炼和社会活动。

本文思路清晰，表达准确，层次分明。文章运用了大量的高级词汇、短语及句型（见文章划线部分），语言地道，上下文连贯。恰当的运用了过渡性的连接词语，是一篇质量上乘的范文。

五．专题训练

根据下面图中的相关信息写一篇以“成才之路”为题的短文。

要求：1．写作应包括图示要点；

2．针对图示所反映的问题，发表自己的观点和看法。

The Road to Success

As it is depicted in the cartoon, a small child is driven to play the piano．The child is nervous, reluctant and unhappy, but he has to do what he doesn’t want to because his parents have whips in their hands and even the teacher also has one．It is a long way to gain success.

Every child has the right to enjoy a happy-go-lucky childhood．Under such a circumstance of China nowadays, all the children face the painful road to success．On the one hand, we want to live a happy life in the future, we have to study hard． On the other hand, is it really worthwhile to gain so-called fame at the cost of the happiness of childhood?

In my opinion, what we have to do is try our best to do what we can and make full use of our time．We only hope the next generation will have more free time to do what they like.