CET4写作部分讲义

Persistence and Perseverance

CET-4 各项分值一览

PART ONE：写作

一．考试要求

四、六级考试改革已开始，虽大纲和改革要求都没有对写作部分做特殊的规定，但根据改革的总体方向和趋势可知，写作将朝着更加实用的方向发展：写作题材将更贴近日常生活和社会热点，（如学习、工作或课余生活、科普话题等）题材将更具实用性。

改革后的四级考试写作部分的考试时间仍为30分钟，分值为总分的15％。在规定时间内紧扣主题、层次清楚、段落分明、用词恰当地表达自己的思想是考生取得写作高分的关键所在。

二．评分标准

1.四级写作满分为15分，阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14

分。

2.另外，作文词数未达要求也会酌情扣分。

3.由此可见只要能对症下药，做好如下三点，写出一篇11－13分的作文并

不难。

①“切题”＝审清题目

②“表达思想清楚”＝言语有层次

③“文字通顺连贯”＝提彩句、模块句的使用

4．高分作文的特点：

三．文章的基本构架与展开方式（万能通用模式总揽）

1.短文的宏观框架：

Title（给出）Introduction(综述，引出话题) Body(正文，论点与论据) Ending(总结全文、前后呼应)

2.正文的写作

Ⅰ.首段的写作：

i.对立法：

①When asked about/When it comes to/faced with , most/many people believe that , other people regard as /consider it differently；②Now, it?s generally acknowledged that . But I doubt whether ; ③When it comes to , people?s opinions differ. Some hold the opinion that , while others claim that ; ④There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the role/view/idea of . Some people claim that , while others believe that .

ii.现象法：

①Recently, the rise in the problem/phenomenon of has aroused public/popular/wide concern; ②Recently, the issue of has been brought into focus/brought to public attention；③There is a general discussion today about the issue/problem of . Those who criticize argue that . They believe that…

But people who advocate , on the other hand, argue that .

iii.观点法：

①Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that ; ②Most of the people are of the opinion that… But I personally believe that .

iv.引用法：

①“”is the remark made by . It has been shared by more and more people; ②“”. How often we hear such statements/words as these.

v.比较法：

①For years, have been viewed as . But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing , people ; ②People used to think that /In the past, …… But now people share the new idea of

vi.问题法：

①Should/What ? Options of vary greatly: some , while others . But in my opinion, .

常备句型及应用

2.1：引出话题的常用句式：

● ____ is one of the most striking(appare nt, evident, manifest, crystal-clear, staggering, arresting, amasing, eye-catching, astonishing, alarming, shocking, unprecedented ) subjects of the modern society.

____是现代社会一个最为引人注目的话题。

空间探索是现代社会一个最为引人注目的话题。

Space exploration is one of the most striking subjects of the modern society.

● The issue of ____ has aroused(attracted, sparked, intrigued, captivated, evoked, yielded) much attention (debate, dispute, controversy, concern)from the general public.

____问题已经引起了公众的极大关注。

环境保护问题已经引起了公众的极大关注。

The issue of environmental protection has aroused much attention from the general public.

● ____ has sparked an increasingly heated debate among ____ .

____ 引发了____ 越来越热烈的讨论。

计算机广泛应用于教育领域引发了使用者越来越热烈的讨论。

The wide use of computers in the field of education has sparked an increasingly heated debate among users.

● The problem of ____ has been in the limelight(a focus) since _____.

自从____以来____问题已成为人们的注意中心。

十多年以来青少年犯罪问题已成为人们的注意中心。

The problem of juvenile delinquency has been in the limelight since more than a decade ago.

●Recently, the problem of ____has attracted such widespread attention that _____.

近来, ____问题引起了人们的广泛关注，以致____。

近来环境污染问题引起了人们的广泛关注，各级政府已把它列为首要议程。

Recently, the problem of environmental pollution has attracted such widespread attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.

●A vigorous debate over the issue of whether or not ____ has intrigued the public.

关于是否____问题的激烈讨论引起了公众的兴趣。

关于教师是否在教育领域不再起重要作用的问题的激烈讨论引起了公众的兴趣。

A vigorous debate over the issue of whether or not teachers are no longer important in pedagogy field has intrigued the general public.

● One of the most +形容词（形容词的最高级）+problems(issues, topics) facing(confronting)____ today is that ____.

目前____所面临的最____的一个问题就是____。

如今年轻人所面临的最主要的一个问题就是就业压力越来越大。

One of the most leading problems facing young people today is that there are more and more employment pressures.

● 当前大学毕业生面临的一个最紧迫问题就是如何找到理想的工作。

One of the most pressing problems university graduates are confronted with in today?s world is how to hunt for decent jobs.

让步开头法的常用句式

● Some people are of the opinion that ____. However, I find it hard to side with them fully on the ground that ____.

有人认为____，而我很难同意他们的看法，因为____。

有人认为在商业和文化领域进行广泛的交流无益处，而我很难同意他们的看法，因为这样无疑在许多方面对人们的生活有利。

Some people are of the opinion that frequent business and cultural communications are negative. However, I find it hard to agree with them fully on the ground that they undoubtedly benefit people?s life in a great many ways.

● These days ____ is becoming increasingly significant in ____；however, some problems associated with this have arisen, which have negative effect on ____.

如今____变得越来越重要，然而，也引发了一些相关的问题，这对____产生负面影响。

如今国际旅游在世界各地变得越来越重要，然而，也引发了一些相关的问题，这对环境和当地习俗产生负面影响。

● It does make sense to ____. Yet the practice is now being challenged by more and more people.

____，似乎确实有道理。但是这种做法现在正受到越来越多的人的挑战。

把做坏事的人关在一个地方，使他们不再损害无辜的人，似乎确实有道理。但是这种做法现在正受到越来越多的人的挑战。

2.2：比较法的常用句式

●People used to believe that ____, but now things are quite different.

人们过去认为____，但现在情况大不相同了。

Traditionally speaking, people are preoccupied with ____, but now the pendulum

seems to be swinging the other way.

传统上来说，人们关心的是____，但现在钟摆似乎转到另一方向去了。

2.3：引用统计数字的常用句式

●According to a recent survey(report, statistics, poll, census, investigation, research, study), ____.

依照最近的一项调查, ____。

Recently, ____ issued a report which laid bare(disclosed) ____.

最近____发表了一个报告，披露了____。

Nowadays the most surprising results come from a recent research carried out by a University of .

最令人吃惊的结果来源于____大学进行的一项最新研究

2.4：轶事法的常用句式

● The story(tale) still has a realistic significance.

这个故事仍具有现实意义。

I came across(hit upon) an article about ____ (in which _____). The problem of ____ has aroused public(wide) attention(concern). ____.我曾经看过一篇关于____ 的文章。这个____的问题已经引起了广泛的关注。

I was extremely (exceedingly, rather, fairly)surprised(shocked, amased) to read the other day that ____. 有一天我看到____的报道感到很吃惊。

2.5：观点法的常用句式

●Perhaps it is time to reexamine the value (idea, attitude) that ____.

或许现在该是重新检查一下____的价值观。

Perhaps it is time to reexamine our present values of life and attempt to figure out why people in modern society are becoming more greedy and egocentric.或许现在该是重新检查一下我们现在生活流行的价值观，弄清楚在现代社会中人们为何变得更加贪婪和自私。

2.6：定义法的常用句式

____ is best characterized by ____.

____ 最明显的特征是____。

一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律，毅力和敏锐的观察。

A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations.

2.7：文章主旨句的常用句式

● Personally, I am in favor of the view that air transport is used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries wher e those plants can?t grow or be out of season.

就个人而言，我赞同空运水果和蔬菜到长不出该品种或不在生长期的国家的观点。

I would like to begin by pointing out that with the growing popularity of computers;

student literacy is on the decline dramatically.

我想，首先应该指出的是，随着计算机的普及，学生的读写能力在急剧下降。II.中间段的写作：

i. 列举法通过列举一系列论据对论点进行多方面的陈述和解释，列举的顺序

可以按照所列各点内容的重要性，时间顺序或空间层次确定。

ii．举例法通过举出具体事例阐述或说明论点的内容。列举重罗列，举例重通过例子解释观点。

iii 对比法将同类事物按照某种特定的规则进行比较分析。

iv 因果分析法用分析某种观点的原因的方法来阐述自己的观点。

正文段常用句式表达

主题句的常用表达

● ____ is an integral part of ____.

____ 是____ 不可缺少的组成部分。

手机是我们日常生活不可缺少的组成部分。

The mobile phone is an integral part of our daily lives.

● An advantage of ____ is that ____.

____的一个优点是____

住在城市里的一个优点是它会提供更多的就业机会。

An advantage of living in the city is that it can provide more employment opportunities.

● It can be seen that many of the merits of ____ seem obvious.

看得出，____的许多好处似乎很明显。

看得出，从事兼职工作的许多好处似乎很明显。

It can be seen that many of the merits of taking part-time jobs seem obvious.

● The benefits of ____ are difficult to deny.

很难否认____的益处。

很难否认把罪犯投入监狱的益处。

The benefits of sending criminals to prison are difficult to deny.

● In addition to ____, ____ can also ____.

____除了____之外，还____。

计算机除了准确性之外，还具有一些奇特的功能。

In addition to its accuracy, the computer can also have some marvelous functions. III. 末段的写作：

i.结论法：

①From what has been discussed above/Taking into account all these features/Judging

from all evidence offered, we may safely draw the conclusion that ; ②In summary/In a word, it is more valuable that ；③All the evidence supports an unshakable conclusion that .

ii．建议法：

①While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most popular

is . Another method is . Still another one is ; ②Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation; ③It?s high time that we placed great emphasis on ; ④It is (high)time we put an end to the undesirable phenomenon of ; ⑤It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation.

iii．方向性结尾法：

①Many solutions are being offered here, all of which make some sense, but none is

adequate enough. The problem should be recognized in a wide way; ②There is little doubt/no denying that further attention must be paid to the problem of

iv. 意义性结尾法：

①Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the payout might

be worth the effort. It will not only benefit but also ; In any case, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly .

四．四级写作基本类型

议论文：1.对比选择型（2006,12）

2.现象/观点阐释型（2011,6；2010,12；2010,6；2008,6 ; 2007,12 ）

3,问题分析型（2012,6；2001,1）

应用记叙型：体现交际功能；把握5个“W”（2007,6）

图表作文型：对图表或图画进行客观描述，并就所提供数字，图画内容进

行分析与结论（2013,6；2012,12；2002,6,）

五．模板应用，真题体验

1，对比选择型：要求作者就题目中提到的某一事物或社会现象给出两个对立的观点，然后将两种观点进行对比，并表明自己的看法各立场。

模板1

As regards… there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. People who believe in its necessity point out that…

However, other people stand on a different ground. They believe that…

As far as I am concerned, I prefer…

…

模板2

Recently, we may hear quite different opinions… Some contend that…

By contrast, others hold that…

Considering one after another, I stand on the side of …/ as far as I am

concerned…

真题体验站

2006年12月英语四级作文

Direction : For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay entitled On the Spring Festival Gala. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1．许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会

2．但有些人提出取消春节晚会．

3．我的看法

快速构思

考生按提纲写出，支持的理由，反对的理由，我的观点即可。第一段：指出现象，简单叙述人们喜欢看春节晚会，并给出支持这一观点的理由；第二段：有些人认为应该取消春节晚会，并给出理由；第三段：表明我的看法

Model Essay

On the Spring Festival Gala

As regards the spring festival gala there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. People who believe in its necessity point out that the Spring Festival Gala performed on CCTV on New Year?s Eve and presenting grand sight and sound has already been considered as an indispensable custom by many Chinese people.

However, other people stand on different ground. They believe that the 4-hour show is gradually losing its appeal and should be canceled. The past two decades has witnessed a steady decrease in the number of people watching the Spring Festival Gala from 943,5000,000 to 728,500,000. With the roaring development of economy, various mass media come out like bamboo shoots after spring rain, making it increasingly difficult to cater to all tastes.

As far as I am concerned, I prefer the program to stay. Served as an occasion for families to get together, the Spring Festival Gala is a tradition and treasure of the Chinese people.

2000年6月四级作文

Direction : For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay entitled Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1, 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是…

2，也有人持不同的意见

3，我的看法是和打算

Model Essay

Recently, we may hear quite different opinions on the necessity of holding a test of spoken English. Some contend that spoken English test helps to evaluate students? spoken English ability. What?s more, it will definitely stimulate students to lay more emphasis on listening and speaking,which are surely needed in their future career.

By contrast, others hold that spoken English test is of no necessity. According to recent survey conducted by China Daily, a sight proportion of college graduate as low as 8.37 percent actually use spoken English in their daily work. In addition, spoken English test may not faithfully reflect the level and therefore cast doubt on college students.

As far as I am concerned, I am most happy to attend such a test of spoken English I am most happy to attend such a test of spoken English. I plan to seize every chance to improve my spoken English capability so as to achieve outstanding performance in the coming test.

2，现象/观点阐释型：要求考生对某一事物或社会现象进行客观的分析和评论，最终提出自己的观点。

模板1

Nowadays,… take an important role in …(background)

It goes without saying that…has both advantages and disadvantages. To begin with…in addition, … however…

As a college student, I think…

模板2：

Recently，it ha been a common phenomenon..

When it comes to …different students hold different opinions. Some…while others…

As far as I am concerned…

真题体验站

2008年6月英语四级作文

Direction : For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1, 娱乐活动多种多样

2, 娱乐活动可以使人受益，但也可能带来危害

3，作为大学生，我认为…

快速构思

文章开篇引出题目要求讨论的现象,简单介绍随着社会的发展，娱乐活动变得多种多样了；第二段开门见山展现段落中心“娱乐活动可以是人们受益，也可能带来危害”；第三段阐述“我”的看法，并提出一个原因，不做深层次的展开。

Model Essay

Nowadays, there are great varieties of recreational activities in people?s life. According to a recent survey by CCTV, the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the kind of recreational activities nowadays people take up to an astonishing number of 2,490, ranging from horse riding to Kara OK, from internet to skating.

It goes without saying that the recreational activities have both advantages and disadvantages.To begin with, recreational will relieve us the tension and

discomfort by offering ways to let out emotion and bring out excitement. In addition, it broadens our horizon, which may in return help us be more creative in daily life. However, those who lack self self-control would very easily get lost and become addicted to the various recreational activities.

As a college student, I think recreational activities should be done with a certain limit so that we can strike a proper balance between recreation and study. 2007年12月四级作文

What Electives to Choose

1，很多大学开设了各种各样的选修课

2，学生因各种原因选择了不同的选修课

3，以自己为例…

Model Essay

Recently it has been a common phenomenon for college to offer a great variety of electives for the students to choose from. Take Beijing Normal University as an example, in the past 5 years, the number of selective courses has increased from 4 to 129, covering nearly every aspect of culture, science and techno ledge.

When it comes to the choice of what specific elective to take, different students hold different opinions. Some choose practical course to obtain necessary skills, so that they can have stronger competence in the future job hunting, while others select courses of their pure interest that may look easier to pass the examination so as to get enough credits for the degree.

As far as I am concerned,I seize every chance to take courses that may enlarge my horizon for I want to be a man with sharp, active and imaginative mind.

3，问题分析型：要求学生针对给出的问题进行论述，分析问题的危害或原因，并提出解决该问题的建议。

模板1

(problem)

Then how……in the first place……in addition……what?s more….

Put the above principles into practice…

模板2

（problem）

To solve this problem, there are at least three approaches. In the first place…..In addition…..What?s more…

Personally( as far as I am concerned), I would lie to…..

真题体验站:

2001年1月四级作文：

1．面试在求职过程中的作用

2．取得面试成功的因素：仪表，举止谈吐，能力，专业知识，自信，实事求是……快速构思：

第一段:开门见山提出该段主题句“面试在求职过程中很重要”。第二段：设问“如何在面试中取得成功”。第三段：简易型地结尾，做补充。

Model Essay

How to Succeed in a Job Interview

A job interview is vital to the job hunting process in that if you are successful in it, you stand a good chance of finally obtaining the ideal job.

Then how can you succeed in a job interview? In the first place, you should dress and behave properly in order to leave a good first impression on the interviewer. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, a proportion of interviewers as high as 86.5percent make the decision by interviewees? behaviors of the first 30 seconds. In addition, when it comes to talking, you should speak of your expertise and special abili ties clearly and honestly. What?s more, self-confidence telling the interviewer that you will face the challenge whenever you encounter difficulties is also of great importance.

Put the above principles into practice, the job you have been dreaming of will not be far.

2012年6月英语四级作文（On Excessive Packaging）

1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象

2.出现这一现象的原因

3.我对这一现象的看法和建议

快速构思：

第一段：提出问题“描述社会上普遍存在过度包装这一现象，并举出例子”；第二段：提出该段中心“分析造成过度包装的原因”；第三段：提出自己的看法，并给出合理建议。

Model Essay

Nowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society:clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in hand-woven baskets, to name but a few.

There are several causes of excessive packaging. The first reason is that a large number of companies believe that they can attract customers? attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. On the other hand,quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging.

In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill.To solve the problem,it?s necessary to take the following measures. First, laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies. In additi on, we need to raise consumer?s awareness that excessive packaging doesn?t equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling.

2000年1月四级作文：

1.大学的费用可以通过很多途径解决

2.哪种途径适合我（说明理由）

快速构思：

第一段：提出问题“怎样支付学费成为了大学生关注的焦点”。第二段：提出该段中心“大学费用可以通过三种途径解决”。第三段：直接展现适合自己的途径，并简要给出原因。

Model Essay

How I Finance my College Education

The past decade witnessed steady rise in average university tuition and fees from RMB 500 to RMB 3,450. Consequently students voice growing concern over how to finance their college education.

To this problem, in my mind, there are at least three approaches. In the first place, the main financial support comes from parents and other family members. Under any circumstances will Chinese family members back up their children?s college study. In addition, students can borrow money from the bank to support their study, which has become increasingly convenient especially in recent years. What?s more, doing part-time job is also a wise choice, in which students can not only earn money, but also combine textbook knowledge with social experience.

Personally. I would like to choose the second method, which will both relieve my retiring parents? burden and make me concentrate on my study to lay a solid foundation for future career.

4，应用叙述型：要求考生根据该场景写一封信，海报，或演讲。大部分内容与生活贴近。就应用问而言，应关注其交际功能，主体段的确定应有其主要交际功能而定。就记叙文而言，要分清脉络，对要写的事件或人物进行分析，理清事物的发展过程，弄清五个“W”。

高分演示：

(1)表示感谢

My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words.

Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.

I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.

(2)期待回复

I am looking forward to your reply/hearing from you soon.

I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated

Model Essay

Directions: You want to study at a certain foreign university. Write a letter to ask about the situation there as regards accommodation and fees, possible scholarships, and what qualifications one needs for acceptan

咨询信/求学信

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.（表示感谢，grateful，appreciate，feel obliged to….）

First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a bachelor?s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation as regards accommodation?

I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Ming

真题体验站

2007年六月四级作文

1，本社团的主要活动内容

2，参加社团的好处

3, 为何加入本社团

快速构思

此作文属于应用文，考生只需要安提纲写出相关内容即可。第一段：引出话题后提出首段中心“本社团的主要活动内容”。第二段：开门见山展现段落中心“参加本社团的好处‘。而后具体说明参加社团的几个好处。第三段：介绍如何加入社团。

Model Essay

Welcome to our club! Our “easy-to-learn” English Club, which has varieties of colorful activities almost every week—such as English Talk show, English Corner and English Songs Competition, aims at helping college students to study English in easier ways.

If you are accepted by our club, you will find you have made a wise choice. According to a recent survey conducted by School Union, a high proportion of students as high as 86.5 percent admit that they practice and improve their English in our club in a relaxed and comfortable way. What?s more, there?s no doubt that you will make good friends here a d your college life will become more colorful and meaningful because of valuable friendship.

If you feel interested in our club, you just need to fill in the form and we may contact you as soon as possible .thank for your attention and we were looking forward to your joining.

5, 图表作文:要求考生通过对数据或文字内容进行分析与讨论，准确地表达内容，

然后得出令人信服的结论。

模板1：

There has been a tremendous growth/decrease in….

To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with various reasons listed below. To begin with,…what?s more…

Disadvantages also accompany with…. We should strike a balance between….

模板2：

As we can see from the table, great changes have taken place in….

There are several reasons for such changes. Firstly, with the development of economy, people become more and more…. Secondly, nowadays, people belie ve that… in order to…., they should…

So, from the above table, we can see that…, and we can help…in the future.

思路点拨：

1．用描述性写作方式将图表内重要数据表达清楚

2．分析图表所表现得观点

3.重审图表所揭示的问题，做出合理可信的预言

真题体验站：

2002年6月真题

1．下图为1990年，1995年，2002年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化

2．请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途，价格和社会发展等方面加以说明）

3．你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题

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快速构思：第一段：描述现象，引入该段中心“大学生使用计算机时间的增长”。

第二段：提出该段中心“产生这些变化的原因”。第三段： 就“目前大学生在计算机使用中的问题”，并给出建议。

Model Essay

Student Use of Computer

There has been a tremendous growth in students? use of c omputer since 1990. The past 12 years has witnessed a sharp increase in the hours students spend on computer per week from 3.6 to 12.

To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with various reasons listed below. To begin with, computers can help us accomplish many tasks, including both work and study. We used to do homework on paper while now we could just finish it with computer and e-mail to teachers. What?s more, computers are getting increasingly cheaper and more college students can afford it.

Disadvantages also accompany with the wide use of computers. Many college students may be addicted to playing computer games and neglect their study. We should strike a balance between using computer and study well.

2012年12月真题:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Education: A worthy Investment

Source: US Bureau of Labor Statistics

Model Essay 1:

The above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. We see that one with higher education background earns more money weekly than those with lower ones. For instance, the college students with no degree get paid $712 per week whereas those with a Bachelor?s degree can earn $1038.

Several reasons, in my opinion, can be identified to account for this phenomenon. To begin with, c ompared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which are essential to a high-income work. Also,the higher one?s education degree is, the bigger platform he will enjoy to show his ability. For example, his college, university, or research institute will organize various job fairs for him to communicate face to face with employers.

This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. Therefore, substantial education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students,

should study harder to build our country and strive for better lives for ourselves. Model Essay 2:

From the bar chart given above, we can observe that it reflects the statistics of income among people of different educational background. Those who possess a doctoral degree earn 1,551dollars median weekly, ranking first among people of other education level. The median weekly earnings of people with associate degree and below can not reach the average of 797 dollars, ranking from 768 dollars to 451 dollars. As for the unemployment rate, 2.5 % of people with doctoral degree will suffer form unemployment. However,the unemployment rate of people with some college, no degree and lower degree surpass the mean value of 7.6%，ranking from 8.7% to 14.1%。

The bar chart of Education Pays reveals a phenomenon that there exits some difference in incomes and unemployment rate among people with different educational level. Quite a few reasons can account for this phenomenon: for one thing, with the advancement of technology and the adjustment of industrial structure, quite a few high-tech industries emerge overnight, which leads to a soar demand of workforces with high educational degree,thus,it is natural that graduates with bachelor? and higher degree get a high pay-packet and enjoy a stable job. Additionally,those with educational background under associate degree are easily dismissed and paid by low salary. They can be replaced any time due to the fact that their jobs are easy and can be finished by average people。

Definitely, the higher education degree you get, the more likely you are to enjoy a competitive edge in the employment market. Thus, the authorities should enforce some policies to ensure the equity of education. Only in this way can more people lead a stable and comfortable life.

图标作文常用词汇和句型

词汇based on基于category种类，范畴

chart图表graph图表

table表格figure数字