雅思小作文模版

回顾全文+观点+展望：

这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文，在这种写法中，我们要注意的是结尾段由三个

要素组成，其中第2个要素是必须的，但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子：

I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways.

上面这个例句中，作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后，起到了一个欲扬先抑的

效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子：

In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline.However, it should be

the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible.

大家不难发现，2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式，即首句委婉地回顾全文，将观点的对

立面用“让步”的方式表达出来，同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自

己的看法和观点。最后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。朗阁海外考试研究中

心分析认为，这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结，但同时观点又是非

常鲜明有力的，加上对于未来的润色，使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法，我们再来看第三

个例句：

To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education,I feel strongly that the country can only progressif all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability.

和前2个结尾不同，第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文，但是它将作者的观点和对未来的

期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造“展望未来”时的一个思路，即

搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。此种结尾发展方式同样适用于分析解决

型大作文的结尾段布局，比如：

All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore.

对于毒品对社会的危害，作者先是承认现状的无法改变，进而乐观地阐述了自己的观点即

采取了切实有效的行动后可以减弱其危害。最后用毒品的危害性来对未来作展望。换句话说，在社会类分析解决型议论文中，我们在展望未来时可以考虑用强调其长远的影响作为

突破口。又如：

In short, there are several things that the government can do to allow more people to finish school.However, a number of society attitudes also have to changeif the country’s people are to achieve their full potential.

这个结尾的题目是讨论辍学这一社会现象导致的问题和解决方案的。我们发现使用前面提

到的条件状语从句也可以作为这类题材结尾的重要句型。1.文化融合与差异

母题：Multi-cultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (060825)

提示：多元文化multiculturalism的好处是促进文化的融合，鼓励思维的多样性，带动社会

创新。而缺点则可能导致文化同化cultural assimilation，会导致民族间的文化冲突cultural conflict.

子题：游客是否应当遵守当地的风俗习惯，还是应该让当地人接受文化差异?外来移民应

该接受当地文化还是作为一个独立的群体过不同的生活?

2. 语言应当受到保护吗?

母题1：Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important and that

life will be made easier if there are few languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (041030)

提示：尽管语言单一性语言与文化息息相关，语言的灭绝就是人类文化多样性cultural diversity的丢失。语言就是一种思维方式，语言的消失就意味着人类将会失去一种思维模

式thinking pattern，失去一种认识世界的角度perspective to recognize the world.

子题：语言和文化消失的原因是什么，如何预防?(提示：全球化)把英语作为一种全球通用语言好不好?学习一个地区的语言是否要同时学习它的文化?要不要创造一门新的语言来便利人们的交流?(提示：世界语Esperanto)政府是否应该投资保护语言?(提示：与政府类话题结合)

3. 国际旅游业是好是坏?

母题：International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Do the problems of international travel outweigh its advantages? (060520)

提示：这道题目入选母题是因为它范围很广。建议大家在准备这道题的时候借鉴一下子题提供的思路，这样就可以不怕任何变题了。

子题：国际旅游业带来了理解，还是不同文化之间的冲突?国际旅游业是破坏当地的文化

传统，还是拯救传统?为什么很多发展中国家发展旅游业，有何利弊?国际旅游业使人们更加有偏见prejudiced而不是心胸宽广broad-minded，为什么，如何增进对旅游国的了解?现

在世界各地的景色都大同小异，为什么，利大于弊吗?现在在电视上和网上也能看了解国

家的信息，因此没必要旅游了，你同意吗?(提示：与科技类话题结合)外国游客是否应当被征收比当地游客更高的费用?

4. 要不要保护老建筑?

母题：Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (110428)

提示：要不要花钱保护老建筑?这类话题和语言类话题、教育类话题中的“要不要学习历史”这道题目类似，因为建筑也是历史的见证者，保存历史建筑就能够让后人了解到先人的文化，了解历史才能帮助人们更好地把握将来。

子题：是否要把新的建筑建成传统的样式来保护文化文化认同感cultural identity?建筑物的实用价值要比美观更重要，因此建筑师不用操心把建筑物建成艺术作品，你同意吗?

5. 艺术

题目：艺术可以告诉我们哪些科技不能告诉我们的东西?音乐仅仅是一种个人娱乐，还是

有其它角色?

6. 经济与文化全球化

母题1：The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone. Do you agree or disagree? (120209)

母题2：As global trade increases, many goods, even some daily goods, are exported to another country, which includes long-distance transport during shipping. Do you think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks? (081204)

母题3：Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion. (040821, 051029)

提示：以上三道题目分别对应经济、贸易和文化的全球化。全球化是一把双刃剑，正反双方的论据大家都要充分准备好。

子题：现在人们喜欢住在物价低廉的地区，利大于弊吗?社会从国际旅游和国际商业中得

到好处了吗?发展中国家是否应该邀请发达国家来开公司，还是只发展本土公司?接触国际媒体，诸如电影、电视和杂志，有何影响，利弊如何?国家之间的差距越来越小，因为人

们共享同样的电影、音乐、品牌、电视，利大于弊吗?

7. 国际合作

母题：Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (090207)

提示：“授人以鱼”和“授人以渔”，如何选择?

子题：应该给予发展中国家经济上的帮助还是一些实用的建议?随着人类面临的问题增多，国际关系变得日益重要，同意与否?

More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks of living

in a large metropolis. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve city life for

the average inhabitant.

The main problem for anyone who hopes to migrate to a large city is that the cost of living is

likely to be much higher than it is in a small town or village. Inhabitants of cities have to pay higher prices for housing, transport, and even food. Another issue is that urban areas tend to

suffer from social problems such as high crime and poverty rates in comparison with rural areas. Furthermore, the air quality in cities is often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and the streets

and public transport systems are usually overcrowded. As a result, city life can be unhealthy and stressful.

However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, they could invest money in the building of affordable or social housing to reduce the cost of living. Secondly, politicians have the power to ban vehicles from city centres and promote the use of cleaner public transport, which would help to reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion.

In London, for example, the introduction of a congestion charge for drivers has helped to curb the traffic problem. A third option would be to develop provincial towns and rural areas, by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities.

In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city residents.

International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Are the problems that international travelers cause great than the advantages they bring?

Sample answer:

With the general decrease in travelling costs, international travel is becoming more prevalent. For a variety of reasons and with great frequency, people are travelling to other countries. International visitors bring their own range of behaviours and customs to the countries they visit.

I believe the advantages international travelers bring to the countries they choose to visit outweigh the negatives.

Unfortunately, all countries have within them people who exhibit undesirable behaviour. The vociferous minority seem to leave an impression in the minds of people in host counties. Whether it be leaving the hotel room in a complete mess, or loudly arguing about matter with a local person, international visitors are sometimes a poor advertisement for their counties. This is certainly the negative side of international visitors.

However, the far greater impression international visitors leave is a good one. Typically, international visitors bring with them money which they inject into the local economy they are visiting which is excellent for business. They can also educate the local people about what life is like in other part of the world. These international travellers are like “ambassadors” for their

county and can cause others to want to visit their country—this brings with its obvious economic benefits as well. In addition, international visitors can help others to see things from a different perspective and, often, improve on the way things are down.

Problems can arise from international visitors however, the benefits they bring to the countries thy visit are greater. International visitors around the world will continue to impact the countries to which they travel, it is up to the individual to make sure the example they set is a good one.