批改网高分表达
作文经典表达
一、短语，高分词组
1. creating a green campus创建绿色校园
2. enjoy great prestige in the world享誉世界
2. is the essence of 是…的精华
3. Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention. 引起公众关注。
4. Undoubtedly 毫无疑问
5. Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.对个人和社会有极深影响。
6. Needless to say, a green campus includes...不必说
7. Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。
8. make efforts to
Meanwhile, we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmospher e for the sake of students’mental health.
9. Work out 解决，实现
10. Increase the awareness of the importance of...增强对... 的认识的重要性
11. Rewind the clock 时光倒流
12. In addition to this除此之外
13. Go all out 全力以赴(属于四六级经典高分短语)
14. what's more意思是另外，而且…，是四六级经典补充类词组。What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure .
而且，大银行可以使他们的收入多样化，这可以防止经营失败。
15. whereas 意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇。
16. nothing but意为：只有, 只不过，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才只不过是劳动加勤奋。17. take advantage of利用，是四六级经典短语
18. attach importance to意为：重视，属于四六级经典高分短语19. take pride in意为：以…自豪，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒
20. take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语。
21. on account of意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短语
22. far beyond的意思是远远超过，大量超出，远在天边，是四六级经典词组。23. may as well 意为：最好，不妨，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！We may as well cut across the playground.
我们不妨从运动场上横穿过去。
24. it pays to 意为：... 是值得的。属于四六级经典高分句型，用得很棒！Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better.
25. not to mention意为“更不用说/别提……”，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of
26. be of接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。
27. contribute to意思是对某事有帮助，有贡献；有助于做某事…，是四六级经典短语Many retired people can still contribute to the society with their rich experience .
许多退休的老人还能用他们丰富的经验为社会作贡献。
28. On no account can意思是... 绝对不能... ，是四六级经典句型
On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。on no account 意为：决不，Young people should on no account neglect their daily physical exercises.青年人决不应疏忽每天的体育锻炼
29. stay up late意思是熬夜，是四六级经典短语。
30. look forward to意为“期望/等待……”
31. w hereas 意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇
32. t ake into account意为把…考虑进去，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！
33. cope with 意为：对付…，妥善处理，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！
34. once for all意为：一劳永逸地，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒
35. Give priority to给===优先权
36. Be short of 缺乏…
37. attach great importance to高度重视
38. enrich one's experience 增长见识
39. in defiance of不顾，无视
40. Submit oneself to... 遵守
41. Interpret...as. .. 把什么理解为
42. be keen on[口语]热衷于，喜爱；渴望；对…有兴趣
43. with the result that其结果是
44. [高分词汇] important的近义表达有crucial/essential。
45. [高分短语] may as well意为：最好，不妨，
46. [高分词组] what's more意思是另外，而且…，
47. [高分句型] There is no denying that意思是不可否认的，
48. [高分句型] It is conceivable that 意思是可想而知的... ，
49. [高分短语] on no account 意为：决不，
50. [高分句型] On no account can意思是... 绝对不能... ，
51. [高分句型] the reason why 意为：... 的原因是... ，
52. [高分词汇] whereas意思是然而,
53. [高分句型] It is universally acknowledged that意思是大家都认为，
54. [高分短语] and so forth的意思是等等，诸如此类，
55. [高分短语] succeed in意为成功地做成了某事，。
56. [高分短语] in the main 意为：基本上，大体上，
57. [高分短语] for certain 意为：肯定地；确凿地，
58. [高分短语] learn off意为：记熟，背下来，
59. [高分短语] make joint efforts 意为：共同努力，拧成一股劲儿，
60. [高分短语] cope with 意为：对付…，妥善处理，
61. [高分短语] in terms of意为根据，一般和具体事物搭配，不用来表达某人的看法。
62. [高分短语] as it is意为：事实上，既然如此，
63. [高分短语] think out 意为彻底地想一想，
64. [高分词汇] 建议将trustworthy 改为dependable 。
65. [高分句型] There is no doubt that 意思是毫无疑问，
66. [高分表达] make do的近义表达有enable sb to do ath句型。
二、高分句型
1. it goes without saying that意为：不用说... ，很明显... 。类似的表达有：经典高分句型，(It is) needless to say (that)，It is obvious that，Obviously, ...。It goes without saying thatit pays to keep early hours. 不用说早睡早起是值得的
2. There is no denying that意思是不可否认的，是四六级经典句型。
There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
3. the reason why 意为：... 的原因是... ，属于四六级经典高分句型。The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
5. A case in point is[高分短语] 意为：一个恰当的例子，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！
6. It is universally acknowledged that意思是大家都认为，是四六级经典句型。that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是四六级经典句型
7. An advantage of ~ is that + 句子(...的优点是...) 例句：An advantage of
using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution.
8. ~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~ too much.(再怎么强调... 的重要性也不为过。)
例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
9. It ’s highly desirable for sb to do something. 很希望某人做。。。
10. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that
11. There are many ways which can be adopted to 解决问题
12. With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people’sincome spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.
13. It makes me understand that perseverance makes the impossible possible.
14. In the first place, it is essential that..., furthermore , it is high time for us
to..., last but not least... 过渡句
三、从句，句型
1）主语从句
It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.
It is well-known that…
It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that…
It goes without saying that…
It is universally acknowledged that…
It is / that
2）宾（表）语从句3）定语从句（限定性和非限定性）
As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described… in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…,
It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our 4）状语从句（时间，原因，地点，条件，让步，转折when, since, because, if, though, before等）（怪物）which will devour him. 5）分词短语做定语或状语better.
6）倒装句
（only, neither, nor, at no time, in no case) activity known to geologists as hot spots.
7）被动句
Many people believe that…（…）
8）强调句
9) 省略句
If so, we have to give it up.
If necessary...
Whatever the reason..
10) What句型
11) 设问句
Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?
12) no more …than…
A home without love is no more a home than a body without a soul is a man.
13) may as well…as 与其…不如
One may as well not know a thing at all as know it imperfectly.
14) the ~est …that I have ever seen
( known/heard/had/read, etc)
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
15) cannot…too…
You cannot be too careful.
16) 否定+until(till)
Nobody knows what he can do till he has tried.
17) Nothing is ~~ er than to
Nothing is more important than to receive education.
18) There is no doubt that ~
There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
19) So …is…that …（如此... 以致于... ）
So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.
20) Adj as…is
Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
21) the more…the more…
The harder you work, the more progress you will make.
22) By doing, we can …
By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
23) It is time + 过去式（该是... 的时候了）
it s time the authorities took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
24) Those who…
Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
25) For the past…years，sb + 现在完成式...
For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
26) Since+S+过去式，S+现在完成式。
Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
27) It pays to do…（... 是值得的。）
It pays to help others.
28) Due to/Owing to/Thanks to …（因为... ）Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
29) 不定式、动名词作主语
To know something about English is one thing; to know English is quite another.
30）It is no use doing sth.
It is no use crying over the spoiled milk.
31) “too…to”句型
She is too angry to speak.
32) “so…that…”“…so that…”句型
He ran so fast that nobody could catch him up.
The teacher explains the sentence slowly and clearly so that everyone can understand.
33) “range from …to…”结构
His hobbies range from painting to playing basketball.
34) attach importance to / lay emphasis on
The government attaches great importance to the protection of the environment.
35) not… but
Tom was not there but his brother was.
36) there is a chance that …
There is a chance that we can finish the task on time.
37. instead of…+句子
Instead of telling the truth, he lied.
38. it is + a.+ for sb. to do sth.
It is convenient for us to search online.
It is necessary for you to hurry up.
39. when it comes to…+名词/动名词
When it comes to his achievements in the past, he becomes really excited.
40. partly because of… and partly because of…
Partly because of his great effort, and partly because of his talent, he achieved great success. 41. It seems as if…
It seems as if it is going to rain.
42. …也是/….也不
You agree with him, so do I.
You don’t agree with him, nor does he
43. Only if…只有…才
Only if you go visiting the mountain by yourself, can you feel the beauty of it truly. Only in this way can you learn English well.
44. if only/ as long as 只要…就If only you work hard, I believe you can get promoted.
4) 状语从句(时间，原因，地点，条件，让步，转折等)
When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster (怪物) which will devour him.
Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.
5) 分词短语做定语或状语
Prof. Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.
6) 倒装句Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.
Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.
7) 被动句
Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem. He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.
Many people believe that…(It is believed that…)
8) 设问句
Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?
9) 比较1.The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that...
5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
6.Like anything else, it has its faults.
7.A and B has several points in common.
8.A bears some resemblances to B.
9.However, the same is not applicable to B.
10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.
12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.
13. The same is true of B.
14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...
10) 原因
1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation. A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).
2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.
3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...
4. The factors that contribute to this situation include...
5. The change in https://www.360docs.net/doc/cc6409127.html,rgely results from the fact that...
6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are...
7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...
8. One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...
9. Another contributing factor (cause ) is ...
10. Perhaps the primary factor is that …
11. But the fundamental cause is that ...
11) 结果
1. It may give rise to a host of problems.
2. The immediate result it produces is ...
3. It will exercise
a profound influence upon... 4. Its consequence can be so great that...
12) 批驳
1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that...
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6) It makes no sense to argue for ...
7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ...
9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ...
13) 举例
1) A good case in point is ... 2) As an illustration, we may take ... 3) Such examples might be given easily. 4) ...is often cited as an example.
14) 证明
1) No one can deny the fact that ... 2) The idea is hardly supported by facts. 3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ... 4) Recent studies indicate that ...
5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ... 6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ...
15) 开篇
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ... 2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic. 4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ... 5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ... 6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular. 7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ... 8) According to a recent survey, ... 9) With the rapid development of ..., ...
16) 结尾1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...
3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...
4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...
5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.
6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...
7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...
10) Taking all these into account, we ...
11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
四、作文常用短语
1. 许多
可数名词: a great/good many a large number of many a +单数名词
不可数名词: a large amount of a large sum of a great deal of 两者都可：plenty of 2. 影响
have an effect on have an influence on have an impact on
play an important role in play an important part in
3. 喜好
prefer A to B prefer to do sth.
prefer to do rather than do would rather do than do
4. 把…看作regard…as view…as consider…as look on… as refer to…as
5. 区别
distinguish… from…; separate… from… divide… from…tell…from…
6. 就我(们) 所知As far as we know, As is known to all, As we all know, As far as I’m concerned
7. 导致
result in result from cause lead to
8. 阻止
prevent sb. from doing sth. stop sb. from doing sth. inhibit sb. from doing sth. discourage sb. from doing sth. forbid sb. to do sth.
9. 重要的
critical, essential, vital, crucial, significant It is …to do sth.
10. 减少
diminish, decrease, reduce, cut down cut back on, decline, eliminate
11. 尽管
despite that, in spite of, although, though
12. 作用
contribute to affect play a part in
13. 关于，鉴于，由于with regard to in view of with a view to concerning considering
14. 以免、唯恐lest for fear that +虚拟语气in case that in case of +名词短语
15. 对比
in contrast, by contrast, in contrast with, by contrast with in comparison, by comparison in comparison with , conversely, compared to
16. 决定be determined to do choose to do
17. 经常all too often, more often ,frequently
18. 好outstanding marvelous terrific splendid excellent distinctive distinguished
19. 易于、倾向于
be liable to be inclined to tend to be likely to
20. 努力make an effort to struggle to do sth. do one’s utmost to do sth.
21. 一系列a series of a range of a string of
22. 毫无疑问，众所周知
Undoubtedly There is no doubt that without doubt No one can deny that
It is commonly acknowledged that It goes without saying that
It is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that
23. 事实上in fact actually as a matter of fact practically virtually
24 为了for the sake of on behalf of
25. 有时sometimes at times from time to time on occasion
now and then now and again
26. 越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise,
the growing number of more and more
27. 归因于；归咎于attribute… to owe…to be to blame/ blame sth. on sb.
五、短语积累
A. 时间关系
1. after a while 不久, 过一会儿
2. afterward 然后, 后来
3. as soon as 一…就…
4. at first 首先
5. at last =eventually 最后，终于
6. meantime=at the same time 同时
7. immediately 立即，立刻
8. presently 现在, 目前
9. recently 最近10. since then 自从那时起
11. to begin with=to start with 首先
B. 举例说明
1. a case in point 恰当的例子
2. as an illustration 举例来讲
3. for example (instance) 例如
4. for one thing…for another…一来…二来…(相似观点)
5. on the one hand…
on the other hand 一方面…另一方面…（相异观点）6. namely =that is to say 即, 就是, 换句话说7. firstly…secondly …thirdly …finally 8. in the first (second, third) place 第一（二、三）
9. take…as an example=take…for example 以…为例10. such as …例如，诸如
C. 解释或定义
1. in other words 换而言之
2. in simple terms = simply speaking =in brief 简而言之
3. namely =that is to say=that is 即, 就是, 换句话说
D. 递进关系
1. furthermore=moreover= what’s more 而且
2. in addition= additionally=besides 此外
3. not only…but also 不但…而且…
4. also=too 也
E. 条件关系
1. as long as …只要…就…
2. provided/providing (that…) 在…情况或条件下；假若，如
果3. even though=even if 即使…4. on condition that 在…条件下5. supposing (that) 假设，假定6. otherwise=or 不然；否则7. unless 除非F.强调关系
1. above all 最重要, 尤其
2. anyway = in any case无论如
何3. in fact=as a matter of fact=actually 实际上4. in particular=especially or specifically 尤其；特别5. on no account 决不6. obviously 显而易见地7. no doubt无疑地
G. 因果关系
1. accordingly相应地; 于是, 从而, 因此
2. as a result 因此
3. consequently 所以，因此
4. because (since, as, for)
5. due to=owing to=because of
6. hence 所以，因此
7. now that …既然…
8. therefore=so
9. thus 因此, 从而
H. 转折关系
1. although 虽然
2. but, however, yet 但是；然而
3. nevertheless (尽管如此)还是, 然而, 不过
4. in contrast to …与…相对照；与…相反
5. on the contrary 与此相反
6. in spite of …尽管…
7. on the one hand…on the other hand
I. 比较与对比关系
1. by contrast /on the contrary 相反地
2. compared to/with 与…相比较
3. differ from 与…不同
4. have…in common 与…有相同之处
5. in comparison with 与…相比较
6. in the same way/similarly/likewise 相似地
J. 总结与归纳
1. in the short run 短期来看in the long run 长期来看
2. above all 最重要的; 尤其
3. by and large 总的说来
4. all in all 总而言之
5.in a word 总而言之一句话
6. in brief 简而言之=in short
7. in conclusion （表示结论）最后
8. in summary 总的说来; 归纳起来=to sum up K.
K. 个人观点
1. as far as …be concerned 就…而言
2. as for sb 关于；至于
3. as to …关于；至于
4. in one’s eyes/opinion 在…看来
5. it seems to sb that…在某人看来，似乎…
6. when it comes to…当谈到…的时候
L. 引用他人观点
1.1as it is known to all,…正如大家所知道的
2.2. as sb puts it, …正如（某人）所言
3.3. as the proverb goes,…正如（某谚语）所说
4.4. it is said/reported/predicted/believed that 据说/据报道/据预测/据信
5.5. some people hold/claim/think that…but others argue that…有人认为…但是另一些人认为…M. 图表说明
1. The figure of the graph/table shows that…图表的数据表明…
2. according to the figure/number/statistics 根据数据/统计数据…
3. in the table/chart, it can be seen that…由图表可知…
4. the figure indicates/shows/suggests/proves that…图标表明…
5. As shown in Table 1/Figure 1, there was a gradual/sudden rise/decline in…正如图一所示，…有缓慢/急剧的上升/下降。
6. from the two graphs, it may be inferred that…从这两个图表中，可以推断…
批改网高分表达短语及句型总结
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第一次翻译内容 留守儿童来源：2016年六级预测话题：教育创建者：安徽农业大学李梅 留守儿童（left-behind children）很容易面临情感关怀的缺失。父母外出务工后，他们大多由祖父母或亲友临时监护。他们无法像其他孩子一样得到父母的养育，而祖父母又极可能缺乏养育的精力和能力。这种亲情和关怀的缺失，已严重影响了留守儿童的心理健康发展。更为严峻的挑战是，留守儿童群体还在不断扩大。据最新统计，目前全国农村留守儿童人数已达6102万，占全国儿童总数的21.88%，比五年前增加了近300万人。如何让这些占全国儿童总人数超过五分之一的孩子们更健康成长，不仅是对弱势群体应有的关爱，更是社会健康发展的必要条件。 The left-behind children easily suffer from the lack of emotional support. Since their parents are migrant workers, they are mostly left in the care of their grandparents, relatives or family friends. Unlike other children, they don't have their parents to care for them, and much too often , their grandparents don't have the energy or capability to look after them. The absence of such support and care seriously influences the healthy psychological development of these children. An even more pressing issue is the fact that the number of the left-behind children is still growing. According to the latest statics, the number has reached 61.02 million, which is three million more than five years ago, accounting for 21.88 percent of China’s children. Giving them a healthy upbringing isn’t just about providing this vulnerable group with the care they are entitled to and deserve—it is also a prerequisite to the healthy development of Chinese society. 第二次翻译 景德镇来源：2015年六级预测话题：文化创建者：句酷批改网 景德镇(Jingdezhen)位于江西省东北部，以瓷器而闻名，历来被誉为中国的“千年瓷都”。
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四级作文经典句型 creating a green campus enjoy great prestige in the world 享誉世界 is the essence of 是。。。的精华 Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention.引起公众关注。Undoubtedly毫无疑问 Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.对个人和社会有极深影响。 Needless to say,a green campus includes...不必说 Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。 Meanwhile,we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’mental health. 过渡句：In the first place,it is essential that...,furthermore,it is high time for us to...,last but not least... Work out 解决，实现 Increase the awareness of the importance of...增强对...的认识的重要性 Rewind the clock 时光倒流 In addition to this除此之外 Go all out全力以赴属于四六级经典高分短语 What’s more [高分词汇] whereas意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇。 nothing but意为：只有,只不过，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才只不过是劳动加勤奋。 what's more意思是另外，而且…，是四六级经典补充类词组。What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure . 而且，大银行可以使他们的收入多样化，这可以防止经营失败。 take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语 attach importance to意为：重视，属于四六级经典高分短语 [高分短语] take pride in意为：以…自豪，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒高分短语] take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语。 on account of意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短语 it goes without saying that意为：不用说...，很明显...。类似的表达有：属于四六级经典高分句型，(It is) needless to say (that)，It is obvious that，Obviously, ...。用得很棒！ [高分词组] far beyond的意思是远远超过，大量超出，远在天边，是四六级经典词组。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. 不用说早睡早起是值得的。 [高分短语] may as well意为：最好，不妨，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！
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enjoy great prestige in the world享誉世界is the essence of 是。。。的精华 rouse public attention.引起公众关注。Undoubtedly毫无疑问 Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.对个人和社会有极深影响。Needless to say不必说 Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。Meanwhile,we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’mental health. 过渡句：In the first place,it is essential that...,furthermore,it is high time for us to...,last but not least... Work out 解决，实现 Increase the awareness of the importance of...增强对...的认识的重要性 Rewind the clock 时光倒流 In addition to this除此之外 Go all out全力以赴 whereas然而…，转换话题类词汇。 nothing but只有,只不过 Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才只不过是劳动加勤奋。 what's more另外，而且…，是四六级经典补充类词组。 What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure . 而且，大银行可以使他们的收入多样化，这可以防止经营失败。 take advantage of利用 attach importance to重视 take pride in以…自豪 on account of由于 it goes without saying that不用说...，很明显...。类似的表达有： (It is) needless to say (that)，It is obvious that，Obviously, ...。 far beyond远远超过，大量超出，远在天边， It goes without saying thatit pays to keep early hours.不用说早睡早起是值得的。 may as well最好，不妨 it pays to ...是值得的 It pays tohelp others.帮助别人是值得的。not to mention更不用说/别提……，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of。 be of接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better. contribute to对某事有帮助，有贡献；有助于做某事…， [stay up late熬夜， Many retired people can still contribute to the society with their rich experience . 许多退休的老人还能用他们丰富的经验为社会 作贡献。 on no account 决不 Young people should on no account neglect their daily physical exercises. 青年人决不应疏忽每天的体育锻炼。 in a nutshell简言之，概括的说 It is conceivable that可想而知的... attach importance to重视 There is no denying that不可否认的whereas然而…，是经典转换话题类词汇。 a case in point 一个恰当的例子 in a nutshell简言之，概括的说 On no account can...绝对不能... On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。There is no denying that不可否认的 There is no denying thatthe qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。The reason whywe have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的 空气。 look forward to期望/等待…… It is universally acknowledged that大家都认为 take into account把…考虑进去 A case in point is[一个恰当的例子 cope with 对付…，妥善处理 once for all一劳永逸地 that is the reason why原因是 Give priority to给===优先权 Puzzle out，puzzle over苦思 Be short of 缺乏。。。。 attach great importance to高度重视 An advantage of ~ is that + 句子(...的优点是...) ~cannot emphasize the importance of ~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。) 例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
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1、元宵节是春节后的第一个重要节日。元宵节的习俗在全国各地不尽相同，其中赏花灯（lanterns exhibits）、猜灯谜、吃元宵等是几项最常见的民间习俗。据说，吃元宵的习俗起源于汉代，唐宋时期开始盛行。如今，元宵已成为人们的日常饮食之一，在超市一年四季都可以买到。 The Yuanxiao Festival is the first important festival after the Spring Festival. Although customs of the festival vary from region to region, the most common ones include appreciating lantern exhibits, trying to solve riddles written on lanterns, and eating yuanxiao. It is said that the custom of eating yuanxiao originated from the Han Dynasty and became popular during the Tang and Song periods. Nowadays, yuanxiao has become a food in people’s daily life, which is available in supermarkets all the year round. 2、皮影戏（shadow puppetry）是流行于中国的一门古老民间艺术。这种艺术形式产生于两千多年前，到了宋代，皮影戏已十分发达。13世纪时，皮影戏传到西亚，到了18世纪传到世界很多地方。皮影戏是世界上最早由人配音的影画艺术。过去没有电影、电视等现代娱乐，皮影戏成为重要的娱乐形式。 Shadow puppetry is an ancient folk art popular among the Chinese people. The art form first appeared 2,000 years ago and by the Song Dynasty it had become highly developed. In the 13th century it was introduced into West Asia, and by the 18th century, it had spread to many parts of the world. Shadow puppetry is the world’s earliest movie art with the accompaniment of human voice. In the past, without film, television, or other modern entertainments, shadow puppetry was an important form of entertainment. 3、中医（traditional Chinese medicine, or TCM）历经几千年的发展，形成了一套独特的疗法和理论体系。中医认为人体由阴阳元素(the elements of yin and yang) 组成。如果人体阴阳平衡，人就不会生病。中医强调对整个身体的治疗，目的是调节整个身体的平衡。最近几十年来，中医得到西方人的认可，并日益受到西方人的关注。 With thousands of years’ development, TCM has formed a unique set of treatments and theories. TCM holds that the human body is made up of the elements of yin and yang. When there is a balance between yin and yang in the body, the person will be free of disease. TCM emphasizes treatment of the whole body with the aim of regulating the balance of the whole body. Over the last few decades, TCM has gained recognition in the West and is attracting increasing attention from the Westerners.
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AIDS is the threat of entire society What is AIDS? AIDS is a serious infectious disease that can cause people to death. The AIDS virus which is also call human immunodeficiency virus(HIV) invades the human body then destructs body's immune function. It can make people suffer from various incurable infections and tumors. The full name of AIDS is Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome. From its name we can know three specific definition, Acquired means the cause is acquired rather than innate; Immune Deficiency means in the aspects of pathogenesis, it is mainly caused by the body's immune system and lead to reduce the damage or loss of the protective function of the immune system; Syndrome means In the clinical symptoms, complex symptoms due to various system immunodeficiency caused by infection and tumor. The origin of AIDS is Africa and mainly comes from developing country. Transmission and pathogenesis of AIDS The AIDS virus mainly exists in the various body fluids of the AIDS virus infection and has strong infectious. The main route of infection of the AIDS virus are sexual transmission, blood transmission and mother to child transmission. From HIV infection to develop into AIDS patients has four stage: The first phase is acute stage, The second stage is the asymptomatic period, which is called the incubation period, too.The third stage is the pre AIDS.The fourth period is full period of AIDS or AIDS in the late, which is the most complex. The treatment and prevention of AIDS AIDS is a serious infectious disease with high fatality rate, there is still no cure for drugs and methods, but can be prevented. Drug therapy can be divided into three categories: Anti HIV drugs, immunomodulators and anti infective Drugs. AIDS is a threat to every person and every family, the prevention of AIDS is the responsibility of the whole society. Many daily behaviors cannot infect AIDS virus. To comply with sexual morality is the fundamental measures for the prevention of the sexual transmission of AIDS. Sharing syringes, drug taking is a major channel for the spread of AIDS, therefore, we should refuse drugs and cherish life.