托福写作教育类总结

教育类话题

1、学生层面

①要不要多学一门课，要不要多干别的事情反对：(1)不要上，学生压力大a: grades 的压力b:

competition 的压力c: 需要时间来complement what they lack (2) 可以通过其他方式field trip: a interest 学生更有兴趣b 锻炼学生的品质：合作精神、克服困难、interpersonal skills

②其他方式上课：online course ：time-consuming ，efficiency, more study material Field-

trip ：interest, interpersonal skills, cooperative

Make friends with strangers, art persuasive in group setting, and the ability of giving a presentation in the front of the audience.

对学生的四大好处

①skills a: interpersonal skills

b: time management skills---prioritize tasks/manage time /combat stress

②quality a: independence--- reduce reliance on others

b: perseverance: overcome difficulties--optimistic

③knowledge a: understand thoroughly

b: access to more knowledge

c: interest

④future career development a: locate work

b: promotion 更有竞争力2、其他干扰的东西对学生的坏处

1 对学习的坏处：academic performance ① understand thoroughly

② intersect 没有兴趣学习

2 对skill 的坏处① 没法培养时间管理能力time management

② 没法培养interpersonal skill 能力; addicted to/ feel reluctant to interact with others

2、教师和学校层面

School: a: reputation/increase enrollment rate b:donation (alumnus, company) 对老师的好可以：对学生好对学校好

3 教师的教学方法好

教学方法的多样化：diversify ① apply advance technology in teaching

② group discussion

学生很忙：（忙课内，忙课外，学生要不要做，不做，很忙，即使有时间也会做课外活动和参加实习，然后写它们的好处。

Since most stude nt are busy with their studies, sth is not a practical way to do sth. Stude nts today have a very tight schedules. In class, they are always occupied by their assig nmen ts, exams and papers. After class, they also participate in extracurricular activities and take field trips or intern ships, which is why they simply do not have the time for doing sth. In additi on, whe n they do have some treasured time, they are more likely to spend it in doing extracurricular activities and tak ing intern ships, for they can ben efit a lot from them. Atte nding extracurricular activities can help them know to prioritize tasks and learn the importance of multitasking as well as discover effective time man ageme

nt skills. Taking field trips and intern ship motivates us to put our own theoretic kno wledge into practical use. Not only can tak ing such intern ship and field trips con tribute to perfect and con solidate our kno wledge and skills, but also they are con ducive to cultivate and foster character build ing such as cooperative and in terpers onal skills. Without being equipped with these skills and qualities, we can never become well-rounded and a con tributor workers in our compa ny after graduated from schools. From this perspective, doing sth is an impractical approach and it can hardly play an important role in this highly competitive and ruthless arena.

参加课外活动的好处①遇到跟多的人②相同兴趣的人可以增加关系

Attending community activities is a very effective way to widen students social circles, for it allows them more opport un ities to get to know people of differe nt backgro un ds. When atte nding community activities, students can meet not only peers but also people who are older or younger, and most importantly, they can do the things that they enjoy doing the most with others. Pursuing com mon in terests with one ano ther will defi nitely stre ngth the relati on ships they have with others.

大学教育的好处：①专业知识和实习对职业的发展好②课外活动会锻炼品质

Uni versity educati on also serves as an irreplaceable part in the course of many people 'lives and it provides things that are not available in the earlier education. Students in college can prepare for their careers by atte nding specialized courses and tak ing intern ships. They are equipped with skills to use professi onal software and operate the certa in in strume nts and mach in es. They also graduate know their the path of their career development and have their plan for the future. Besides hav ing classes and intern ships, stude nts in college and uni versity also atte nd social activities which improve their skills of making friends with strangers, art of persuasion in the group sett ing as well as the ability of givi ng a prese ntati on in the front of audie nce. Such skills are quite esse ntial not only at work but also in lives. Accord in gly, we can say that college educati on prepares students for their lives in the real jungle of the competitive world.

基础教育的好处①是高等教育的基础②可以更好的认识到自己的优缺点

Young childre n 'educatio n lays the foun datio n/gro un dwork for the higher educati on by teachi ng them how to lear n and what they are supposed to lear n. In primary schools, childre n are taught how to read, how to work, how to ask releva nt questi ons, as well as how to use tools like dictionaries and the Internet to look up information. They are also instructed and trained by teachers about how to memorize efficiently in order to get good scores on the tests. These are

basic learning skills which are necessary for their college education. Plus young children ' educati on in crease their self-k no wledge, making them realize their weak nesses and stre ngths, so they can make more in formed choices in decidi ng what they want to study in the future. Many people would avoid subjects that they were not good at even in primary schools when deciding which major to study and which job to take. From this perspective, young children 'education is the corn erst one of their higher educatio n.

教育类的句子：

①the world has become a highly competitive and ruthless arena where academic degrees, certificati ons and qualificati ons can enhance the prospect of success.

②从所周知it is a well-k nown and well-accepted fact that...

Although, college education is costly, time-cconsuming and demanding, education makes it easier to stay competitive in cut-throat job market and secure a well-paid job.

③one reason why sb should do sth is that......... /sb prefer to / be more likely to/do sth for the primary reas on that.....

one reas on why stude nts should participate in extracurricular activities is that

Stude nts prefer to participate in extracurricular activities for the primary reas on that they can help them learn how to prioritize tasks and learn the importanee of multitasking as well as discover effective time man ageme nt skills

④it allows sb more opportunities to do sth

It allows stude nts more opport un ities to get to know people of differe nt backgro und.

⑤传授知识impart knowledge/ the sense of self-discipline

⑥承认错误

Un doubtedly, some teachers thi nk that their authority in the classroom can be un derm ined by mistakes, however, teachers who ack no wledge their mistakes and apologize for them whe n they affect the stude nts set a model for their stude nts.

学生太忙，是压力太大，需要时间放松

Students need sufficient time to release stress, students in a society pressured by grades and competition. Grades and competition are two blades of a sward which are always stabbing students' necks. Nowadays, in these growing competitive and ruthless society, increasing competiti on betwee n the stude nts have become highly intense and it may cause stude nts into extreme frustrati on and even pose a threat to stude nts ' health. In a word, stude nts are saturated with enormous stress, and they should definitely allocate time to do some physical activities for the sake of relievi ng themselves.

大人也忙，忙家庭（上有老，下有小）忙工作（大量的mission，maintain relationship ）Similarly, adults are clouded with nu merous pressure as well, they have to assume resp on sibility for the family. Not only should they take care of their children and enable them to access to better education, but also they have to provide their parents with good medical care so as to ensure that they will lead a healthy life. Therefore, they have to try everything to improving themselves in order to earn mon ey. From this perspective, adults have eno rmous stress and they should have time to relax, for otherwise, they may suffer from depression and even illness.

这样做可以提高学生的interest （良性循环）

Students usually enjoy studying easy subjects. In other word, when you take an easy course, you easily get interested in that class. Since you are interested in the subject, you are more likely to do additional research about the topic and get more knowledge from it. As the process is repeated, you will naturally become good at the subject. This virtuous cycle provides students with more knowledge than taking too difficult course in class.

分数和academic performance 对学生的好处

Getting a good grades and a prefect academic performance is crucial for a college student. Later when students seek a job after graduation, it is their grades and academic performance that provide the general standard by which employers evaluate their ability. When students apply for jobs after they graduate, competition will be inevitable. Thus, people with better grades are more likely to get better jobs.

If you get a good grades in your subjects, you will be more likely to be interested in it. Since you are interested in the subject, you are supposed to do additional research about the topic and get more knowledge from it. As the process is repeated, you will naturally become confident and be good at the subject. This virtuous cycle encourage students to make more friends and strengthen the relationship with their teachers. On the contrary, if the students get a bad grades, they probably become diffident and even suffer from depression. Worse still, bad scores exert adverse impact on the students, they can even hardly access to higher education due to their bad scores.

a: in the class, they have to accomplish numerous tasks, like take piles of assignments, various exams and enormous huge challenged papers.

b: after class, they are also occupied with various of extracurricular activities. They have to participate in social activities like community services and academic clubs