2020-2021年英语中考英语书面表达专题(word)

2020-2021年英语中考英语书面表达专题（word）

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

1．书面表达

假如你是Amy，德国的交换生Sara下周即将来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的来信，在信中，她询问如下信息：1．你家情况；2.有关餐桌礼仪；3. 她要承担的家务劳动；4. …现在，你就她提出的问题给她回信，也预祝她在你家过得开心！

要求：1. 文章必须包括图片中主要内容，可适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；

3. 字数约110词。

Dear Sara，

I’m glad to h ear from you yesterday._____________________________________________ Love，

Amy

【答案】Dear Sara，

I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.

I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say "thank you |"in politely and leave the food there.

As for housework, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.

Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.

Love,

Amy

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。而复杂并列结构In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone.和If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．书面表达

随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。

Dear editor,

As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

Yours,

Mike

【答案】Dear editor,

As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.

First, traditiona l culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.

All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!

Yours,

Mike

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题，接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因，最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of，in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。

My Life At School

How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.

【答案】My Life At School

How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.

In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.

I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

4．书面表达

以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。请用英语写一篇约100词的短文。

要求：1.完整叙述图画内容。

2.简要陈述你从中学到了什么。

【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,

“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.

Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.

【解析】

这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作提纲。通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语

动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序，这样可以使文章条理清楚。还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达的信息，表述准确。作者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述，条理清晰。文章最后的两句话也点明了文章的主题。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。语法规范、准确。短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth.决定做某事；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of等等。

5．书面表达

为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇：梅西 Messi

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.

Thank you for your attention.

【答案】Dear classmates，

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．

I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．

Thank you for your attention．

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second等使得短文层次清楚。

6．随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。“网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。

提示词汇：网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause

注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；

3.词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.

【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what yo u’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. I ts disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of

等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．近年来，习近平主席提出了实现中华民族伟大复兴的“中国梦”。学校开展了“梦想少年”的主题演讲活动，假如你是张明，请根据以下提供的要点，以“I'm a Dream Teenager”为题，写一篇80－100词的短文，向大家推介自己。（可联系实际，适当发挥）

注意：1．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

提示词语：1.be good at 2.help..with 3.follow...rules 4.cheer up 5.be popular with...

6.volunteer to do something

【答案】I'm a Dream Teenager

Good morning， dear teachers and friends， I am Zhang Ming． It's great honor for me to make a speech here．

As a fifteen-year-old boy， my dream is to be a good teacher． To make my dream come true， I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects． Also， I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much， and I really enjoy sports． At school， I always follow the school rules， so I am popular with my classmates and teachers． On weekends， I'd like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up．

In a word， I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That's all． Thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇图表作文。学校开展“梦想少年”的主题演讲活动，假如你是张明，要求根据图表提示内容，以“I'm a Dream Teenager”为题，写一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根据所给出的材料提示可知文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，要将图表内提示信息用英语正确的表达出来，要涵盖图表中提到的所有要点，注意理顺要点，防止漏写。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

8．请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary。

Time Good habits Bad habits

要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确。

2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。

3、词数不少于60个英语单词。

4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。

【答案】One possible version

Dear Mary,

I’m very glad to introduce（介绍） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?

Yours

Huang Deshun

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将张颖的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高兴做某事；a lot of许多；get up起床等。本文中时间词如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理分明。在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：考查提纲类作文

9．书面表达

假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。请你根据以下信息, 给Angel写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好处。

写作要点：

1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。

2介绍活动的情况：

（l）上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。

（2）本周五的下午3点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。

（3）同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。

3说一说网上购书有什么好处。

写作要求：

1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4至少80词。

Dear Angel,

How are you doing?

Best wishes!

Yours,

Cathy

【答案】Dear Angel,

How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。

Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On t he other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .

Best wishes!

Yours,

Cathy 【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，向外教介绍俱乐部中读书交流会的活动，并且告诉外教同学们现在喜欢网购图书并阐述网购图书的好处。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习

惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room 中which引导非限制性定语从句。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

10．书面表达

为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，某英语网站正在举办以"My Mother"为主题的征文活动，请根据下列思维导图所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事。

参考词汇：give much to…，It's my turn to…，try my best to…

提示：

1）短文内容须包括所给内容，含母亲曾为你所做的事和你将为母亲所做的事各一件，并阐述原因；

2）请注意短文结构层次、时态运用和卷面整洁度；

3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

4）文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息。

My Mother

We need love．We also need to show love．The person I love most is my

mother．___．

【答案】My mother

We need love．We also need to show love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．

She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．

When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，要求以"My Mother"为主题写一篇短文介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事，参加某英语网站正在举办的征文活动。在写作时，注意文章文体、人称和时态；注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。