2019届二轮复习短文改错记叙文类型10篇训练之一(5页word版)

2019届二轮复习短文改错记叙文类型10篇训练之一

[一]

When I was young, I lived in the countryside. At that time, the trees there were very green, that left a deep impression on me and the water there was so much clear that I even could see the fish swimming. When it gets dark, the air was cooler than it in the daytime. People liked to walk out their houses to chat together. I liked to play games with my friends but ran along the village happily. As the moon rose highly in the sky, the village was lighting. When I looked up, I could see the moon and a few star. They were so close to me. It seemed that I could touch them. The life in the countryside were so wonderful.

答案：第二句：第一个that→which; 去掉much

第三句：gets→got; it→that

第四句：out后加of

第五句：but→and

第六句：highly→high; lighting→lighted/lit/light

第七句：star→stars

第十句：were→was

[二]

Dream is a common word in our daily life. As we all know, people like to use it to express the strong desires they have for our future. Some young people dreamed of becoming scientists when others wish to become astronauts.

In my opinion, what matter most is that we should be responsible our society and its citizens. I want to be independent and have a strongly sense of responsibility. And also I want to be helpful to those in the trouble. Beside, I will learn modestly from those devoted themselves to our society.

I do hope all of us can make every efforts to live our dreams.

答案：第二句：our→their

第三句：dreamed→dream; when→while

第四句：matter→matters; responsible后加for

第五句：strongly→strong

第六句：去掉the

第七句：Beside→Besides; devoted→devoting

第八句：efforts→effort

[三]

Dear Sir or Madam，

Knowing that our school is going to buy books, I'd like to give any advice.

What we need most is popular science books, which explain basic principles of nature in a simply

and interesting way. They helped us understand science subjects better and become curious with scientific discoveries.

In addition to read for knowledge, we read for the fun and inspiration. That is because I recommend another category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by master, present great thoughts through fascinating stories. They not only make us joyful, and encourage us to think critically.

I would appreciate if you can consider my recommendation.

Yours，

Li Hua 答案：第一句：any→some

第二句：simply→simple

第三句：helped→help; with→about

第四句：第一个read→reading; 去掉the

第五句：because→why

第六句：master→masters

第七句：and→but

第八句：appreciate后加it

[四]

As we all know, we can meet with various challenges in our life. Facing with challenges, how should we do?

Last month, our class climbed Mount Tai, which was more than 1,500 meters above sea level. Lacking exercises, I thought that this activity was great challenge for me. I felt very exhausted halfway that I wanted to give up. See this, my classmates and even some strangers encouraged me. In the end, I managed to reach on the top of the mountain.

Therefore, don't give up in the face of challenges. If you are determined enough, it's certainly that you can overcome it.

答案：第二句：Facing→Faced; how→what

第三句：was→is

第四句：exercises→exercise; was后加a

第五句：very→so

第六句：See→Seeing

第七句：去掉on

第九句：certainly→certain; it→them

[五]

My first stay at home alone was very memorable. One day when I was twelve, both of my mother

and father were away on the business, and I had to be all with myself for two days. My parents left early the first day, I got up soon after they left. The first evening I was a little scare, so I turned on all the lights. I actually keep the light on in my bedroom the whole night, that finally put me at ease. For fear of get up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarm respectively at 6：00, 6：10, and 6：15. In order to prove that I could take care of me, I washed my own clothes the next day, though I could wait for Mum to do it. I really felt proudly of myself and thought I had grown up.

答案：第二句：去掉of; with→by

第三句：I前加and

第四句：scare→scared

第五句：keep→kept; that→which

第六句：get→getting; 第二个alarm→alarms

第七句：me→myself

第八句：proudly→proud

[六]

Dear classmates，

Nowadays many of us use social networking apps as different purposes. In opinion, using social networking apps too much bring some negative effects. First, if we spend too much time on social networking, when should have been used in studying and taking part in outdoor activities, our study and health will gradual be affected.Second, by chatting the online, we may not know how to communicate with people face to face, which was bad for our relationship in the long term.Worse still, there is some unhealthy informations on social networking sites.

Besides, let's turn back to our lessons instead of focused on the social networking apps.

Thank you for listening.

答案：第一句：as→for

第二句：opinion前加my/our; bring→brings

第三句：when→which; gradual→gradually

第四句：去掉第一个the; was→is

第五句：informations→information

第六句：Besides→Therefore/Thus/So; focused→focusing

[七]

In most cases, almost everyone visit a cafe or friend's house asks for the WiFi password first. The Internet seems have become one of your basic needs. And 60% of the world's population still didn't have Internet access. The situation is even more worse in the least developed countries —only one in 10 people have regular access to the Internet. That's why in the recent survey, many

people think of Internet access as a privilege instead of a human right.

However, the UN has made it clearly since 2011 that the Internet, that should be accessible to everyone, is a human right.

答案：第一句：visit→visiting

第二句：seems后加to; your→our

第三句：And→But; didn't→don't

第四句：去掉more; have→has

第五句：the→a

第六句：clearly→clear; 第二个that→which

[八]

Last week, our school hold an activity about how to help some poor children to go to school and live their childhood happy. First, some old textbooks were collected and sent to those children so that the books could reused by them. Second, we made speeches in the public to appeal to more people and organization to help and care for those poor children. Beside, after the speeches, some students even donated his pocket money and clothes. They were proud of that they did.

Thanks for the activity, I have made up my mind to do more to help the children in need, for giving is better than receive.

答案：第一句：hold→held; happy→happily

第二句：could后加be

第三句：去掉the; organization→organizations

第四句：Beside→Besides; his→their

第五句：that→what

第六句：第一个for→to; receive→receiving

[九]

Last week, my friends invited me go camping to see the sunrise.I felt so exciting and asked for my parents'permission.Luckily, he agreed. We got to the mountain top that we would stay for a whole night.We were singing together while one of my friends were playing the guitar.The next morning, we wake up at about five o'clock.We could not wait to see the sun to come up.After a while, we saw the red color light up the sky gradual.It was so amazing scenery.The beauty in nature impressed me at that moment.

答案：第一句：me后加to

第二句：exciting→excited

第三句：he→they

第四句：that→where

第五句：第二个were→was

第六句：wake→woke

第七句：去掉第二个to

第八句：gradual→gradually

第九句：so→such

第十句：in→of

[十]

Dear David,

I'm so sorry to hear that you catch a cold on your way here. Of course I'd be happy to take you to see doctor of Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM).

Lucky, I happen to know a doctor Mrs Yan, who is fully qualifying and has worked for nearly 30 years in the hospital near my house. She has such much experience that she has a very good knowledge of herbal medicine. I plan to take you directly to visit her. I'm sure she'll be able to help yourself.

TCM doctors don't treat for everyone in the same way. Moreover, TCM can not only produce effective cures and have few side effect.

Seeing you on Monday. I hope you will get well soon.

Yours，

Li Hua

答案：第一句：catch→caught

第二句：see后加a

第三句：Lucky→Luckily; qualifying→qualified

第四句：such→so

第六句：yourself→you

第七句：去掉for

第八句：and→but; effect→effects

第九句：Seeing→See