内蒙古包头市2015高考英语短文改错一轮优选练习(8)

内蒙古包头市2015高考英语短文改错一轮优选练习（8）及答案

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

请你修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So we had to moved apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.

【参考答案】1

短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As we all know, travelling can be an excited experience. Let me give you some advices that you have to pay attention. You can find out more about your destination by sur f the internet before you set out. You needn’t take too many cash. Since it can be very convenient to pay in cash, using cheques is much more reliable. In additional, it will be wise of you to take an umbrella in case of it should rain. And if you are to t ravel abroad, you’d better understand the cultural diversity. Keep this in mind that being polite in foreign countries can help you had a wonderful trip.

【参考答案】2.改错：

1: excited-exciting 2: advices-advice 3.attention 后面加 to

4: surf-surfing 5.many-much 6. Since—Though

7. additional-addition 8.in case of去掉of 9. this-it 10. had-have

4.短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s

development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.

【参考答案】4.

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5.短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Elli，

I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for

everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

Please give me some advices.

Yours,

Mary

【参考答案】5.

Dear Elli，

I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for

friends with everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

dislikes me. He doesn’t want to ∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

disliked She be

because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

friendly

is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

Or

Please give me some advices.

advice

Yours,

Mary

6.短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

【参考答案】6.

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after

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school. She holds∧view that senior three students have to make fully use of

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every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am

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allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my

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study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really c an’t accept her ideas. eyes

In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.

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Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at

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abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

1.短文改错

Dear Tom,

I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you may often

feel lonely．That's why you are new from here and people don't know about you．But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices below．

First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters．At the same time, never fail to listening to other people's views．Second, you should learn your classmates' likes and dislikes．Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly．Last but not least, I will always be ready to help you．We can take part in some activities together, that I can introduce you to others．As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you．

Best regards．

Peter

【参考答案】1.

Dear Tom,

I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you

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may often feel lonely. That’s why you are new from here and people don’t know

because

about you. But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices

advice

below.

First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own

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opinions about the matters. At the same time, never fail to listening to other

listen

people’s views. Second, you should learn/\ your classmates’ likes and

about

dislikes. Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people

will

and show them that you are actually very friendly. Last but not least, I will

always be ready to help you. We can take part in some activities together, that I where

can introduce you to others.

As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make

With(或者把going改为goes)

friends with you.

Best regards.

Peter

2.文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

Dear Editor,

Recently we have made a discussion about the prevent of global warming in our research group. Everybody has become aware the green-house effect, what has drawn the attention of the world. Many scientists on the summit of COPENHAGEN warned any rise above 2 degrees could lead to a sea level rise threatening islands and coastal cities, kill off many specie of animals and plants. As a result of, every nation should work together to limit the release of carbon dioxide. Everybody should shoulder the responsible to fight against climate change, and a low carbon life is a must.I think fight against global warming is part of environmental protection. If we humans are more friend to nature, nature will be frie ndly, too. It’s time everybody rethink our role in keeping peace with our mother, nature.

Yours sincerely,

Lihua

【参考答案】2.

1. prevent→prevention

2. aware∧ of

3.what → which

4.kill →killing

5.specie →species

6. result of → result

7. responsible →responsibility

8. fight → fighting

9. friend → friendly 10. rethink → rethought