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几乎所有拿高分作文的学生，对于独立写作最基础部分的把握可以说是天衣无缝的。何为最基础的部分?打字。托福写作较于其他三个科目不同，对于打字有着比较高的要求。尤其是独立写作，30分钟的时间需要至少写到300字以上，何况，在考场，环境和平时练习又是不一样的状况，想要在写作中拿到不错的分数，打字这个基本功是绝对不能拖后腿的。一方面，打字的速度要快，通俗说就是手速，需要考生充分熟悉键盘。另一方面，打字的准确性也是需要保证的，换言之，打出的单词要保证基本是无误的才可以，只有速度没有准确性也是不行的。和手写的习惯不同，这要求学生要学会在电脑上迅速反应出自己文章的中是否有错的单词。所以建议一些对打字不熟练或者经常打错单词的同学，平时可以多练习一下打字练习，勤能补拙。

说完基础，接下来我们就从W同学的文章来看一下，她之所以能够拿高分的原因。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend money helping more people access the Internet instead of improving public transportation.

Although, in recent decades, there has been a growing need for Internet access and the government has been strongly advised to increase its budget in this area, I personally think that it is more essential for the government to spend money on the improvement of public transportation than on more access to Internet.

首先，原题中有提到一个非常关键的词instead of，这其实就要求学生在写作时两边进行比较论证。我们可以很清楚的看到W同学对题目的正解，it is more essential…。大家都清楚，对于独立写作，ETS 评分标准第一个就是address the topic and task。那么高分的作文就是effectively address the topic and task。

无一例外，高分文章处理的最漂亮的不是单词用的多么生僻，句子写的多么冗长，而是对文章题目的把握。题目理解错或不到位都会直接影响到接下来的论证，无疑就是“上梁不正下梁歪”。

For one thing, public transportation influences our life in a deeper and wider aspect than it is assumed. In fact, the great impact on the Internet is still not as comparable as public transportation. What is easily recognized is people’s need to commute back and forth between their homes and workplaces, or to travel from one city to another. Convenient public transportation shortens the distance between different locations, makes our traveling experience more acceptable and even enjoyable, and saves us plenty of time for a tasty meal or a good rest instead of wasting a large amount of time on a long tedious journey. What most people may not be easily aware of, on the other hand, is that public transportation also influences the quality of consumer goods

taken from the factories or farmland over a long journey to its target customers. Take the infant formula of milk powder as an example, it is the common wishes of mothers to let their babies enjoy the freshest and highest-quality milk. However, if the production base of milk is a little bit far from the milk origin, the quality of the milk will likely deteriorate if there is no convenient public transportation such as expressways or airlines. Even after the milk power is produced, it may still have a long way to go to reach the babies, and without reliable public transportation, the packaging might easily break up or the products might be moistened due to increased humidity on the way.

这里截取了W同学两个分论点论证的第一个分论点论证。在段落的开始，她直接给出了分论点public transportation influences our life in a deeper and wider aspect than it is assumed. 尤其注意分论点中的deeper and wider，比较级突出了为何更应该投钱在public transportation上，符合总论点所需要回答的理由。也就是说从文章的结构上来看，分论点必须符合两个要求，第一回答总论点，第二总结分论点段的内容。很多同学在写独立写作的时候常常是写完总论点就把总论点要求论证的东西忘了，写完所谓的分论点就把分论点给抛了，之后的论证五花八门。这样一盘散沙式的论证无疑直接降低了拿高分的几率。所以，脑洞大，有想法是好事，但是也要符合“游戏”规则才行。在之后的论证中，我们可以看到W同学，运用了我们所熟悉的说理还有举例论证，层层递进把分论点论证清楚了。

According to the aforementioned discussions, it is apparent that public transportation not only plays an important role in our individual life, but can also contribute to making the earth a greener place. Therefore, the government should spend money on improving public transportation instead of increasing internet access.

关于结尾段的论述，就是对上述分论点的总结并且转述观点，言简意赅，不需要添加新的内容。

所以，不难看出，拿到高分的独立写作，首先保证打字速度和准确度;当然关键还是在于处理文章所给的题目，不偏题不跑题，在论证时，思维严谨，交代清楚细节。最后，语言不宜口语化。

准备：制定整体的计划

对于很多同学来说，备考托福是一个“功到自然成”的事情，也就是说，大家往往都会认为只要不断在做题目，不断在背诵词汇，到了差不多的时间去参加考试，总是没有问题的。但是，时间并不是我们想象中的那么简单。如果凡事没有一个明确的deadline，我们的习惯就是有多少时间就浪费掉多少时间，所以，如果还没有报名的同学首先应该强迫自己报上名，这样对于考试就会有一种紧迫性。

而当自己的时间显得特别紧张的时候，这计划就是显得尤为的重要。而在托福考试的备考中，制定计划的关键是“量身定做，细化步骤”。比如，想要在2-4周内提升自己的托福听力能力，那么，我们就要分清是突击conversation还是lecture，每天练习的时间和相关的题目等等细节问题。

练习：掌握机经的使用

在托福备考练习的时候，机经应该是所有学生都会去关注的焦点问题。同样，还有很多学生会把自己的考试都押注在托福的机经预测上。但是，对于托福考试来说，这也是个很大的误区，机经的定义是前人考过的题目的回忆。既然是回忆，就有不准确的地方。可是很多同学还是把机经等同于答案。新托福考试，

适当的看机经是有用的，最起码会让我们把握最新的考试题型，明白出题者的思路等，但是，备考托福是实力为王。

冲刺：学会使用模考软件

想要让自己快速适应托福考场的考试环境，在托福考试之前，尝试使用托福模考软件是必不可少的。但是，现在市面上的托福模考软件颇多，我们又该如何合理的使用呢?在什么样的时间里使用模考软件才是最佳呢?在这里建议大家，在考前一个月左右练习使用模考软件，是最为合理的时间。而在模考软件的选择中，可以首选delta，之后再使用longman、kaplan、barron。而在最后，我们就可以使用TPO来测试自己的托福真实水平。

总之，对于托福备考来说，除了每天的练习之外，备考计划和备考机经等等都是备考中一些不可忽略的细节，希望以上的内容能为大家的备考带来帮助。

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The government should offer internet access to all of citizens at no cost. 1.Easier attaching to information 2.More convenient for citizens to communicate 3.Decrease burden for poor people Never do topics concerning internet fail to fascinate us under the ever-increasing development of internet nowadays in the modern society. A lot of people believe that internet is to citizens what water is to fish. From my perspective, I support that citizens accessing to internet should be free based on the following reasons. It is obvious that we are now in the new era of global information, so accessing the internet could be really important to us. If the government proposes that the citizens could use the internet for free, we will concerning about the cost no more so that we can check a lot of information posted online which means we are able to attach to information. Or else, citizens will have to choose cheaper but much slower ways to search for information such as going to the library or asking other people. For instance, I have homework to do every day and the teacher usually puts the materials I may need onto schoology—an online application that can store information. So when sometimes when I am outside home, I cannot use it because it will create cost, in this situation I feel it is necessary for the government to let us using the internet for free.